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1、Avoid Chinglish第1页/共21页1.the misuse of words1.I forgot my pen in the classroom.I left my pen in the classroom.2.Alcoholic drinks are harmful to your body.Alcoholic drinks are harmful to your health.3.My car tire was broken on the highway.I got a flat tire on the highway.4.The old man made a living b
2、y catching fish.The old man made a living by fishing.第2页/共21页2.the misuse of collocations1.Learn knowledgeAcquire,obtain,get knowledge2.Raise flowers and raise a catGrow flowers and keep a cat3.Make dinnerCook or prepare dinner4.the note writesThe note reads第3页/共21页3.redundancy1.we should further im
3、prove Sino-US relations.We should improve Sino-US relations.2.such practices must be firmly banned.Such practices must be banned.3.it is a great event with historical significance.It is a historic event.第4页/共21页4.my mum went to the shops to buy things for me yesterday.My mum went shopping for me yes
4、terday.第5页/共21页4.Improper grammar1.Because it was very late,so they had to go home.Because it was very late,they had to go home.2.Looking from the mountaintop,the city appears very beautiful.Seen from the mountaintop,the city appears very beautiful.第6页/共21页3.If I have wings,I will fly back to my hom
5、etown.If I had wings,I would fly back to my hometown.4.There are more than 200 guests took part in their party.More than 200 guests attended their party.第7页/共21页5.Cultural differences1.Dont be as timid as a mouse.Dont be chicken-hearted.2.Children should not watch yellow books.Children should not re
6、ad porn books.3.He was caught in the pouring rain and returned home as wet as a drowned chicken.He was caught in the pouring rain and returned home as wet as a drowned rat.第8页/共21页4.Have you eaten?Where have you been?These sentences are used as forms of greeting.How are you?How are you doing?How are
7、 things?第9页/共21页6.Differences between Chinese and English modes of thinking1.The clock on the wall is not correct.The clock on the wall does not keep good time.2.Our university library has a lot of books on arts and humanities.There are a lot of books on arts and humanities in our university library
8、.第10页/共21页At the turn of the century,Chinas economy got a substantial development.The turn of the century witnessed a substantial development in Chinas economy.第11页/共21页Improve the following Chinglish sentences1.My home has a dog.2.If I do not study hard,I would be backward.3.Never learn from me,sin
9、ce you are not so strong as I am.4.We played very happily last night.5.We will study to swim next week.6.His age is very young.第12页/共21页7.My exam didnt pass.8.He said only a few sentences and then left.9.Watching TV can widen our eyesight.第13页/共21页10.Dear Mike,I havent received your letter for a lon
10、g time.How is your condition?Is your work busy?Please reply me early.Here life is very nervous because we have to do many things.The teachers give us too many exercises,so we cannot read when class is over.We have no method.Maybe the teachers can change the situation.第14页/共21页1.My home has a dog.We
11、keep a dog at home.2.If I do not study hard,I would be backward.If I do not study hard,I would not be able to catch up with others.3.Never learn from me,since you are not so strong as I am.Never follow my example,since you are not so strong as I am.第15页/共21页4.We played very happily last night.We had
12、 a very good time last night.5.We will study to swim next week.We will learn to swim next week.6.His age is very young.He is very young.第16页/共21页7.My exam didnt pass.I didnt pass my exam.8.He said only a few sentences and then left.He said only a few words and then left.9.Watching TV can widen our e
13、yesight.Watching TV can broaden our vision.horizon第17页/共21页10.Dear Mike,I havent received your letter for a long time.I havent heard from you for a long time.How is your condition?Is your work busy?How are things with you?Are you busy with your work?第18页/共21页Please reply me early.Here life is very n
14、ervous because we have to do many things.Please write to me as soon as possible.第19页/共21页The teachers give us too many exercises,so we cannot read when class is over.We have no method.Maybe the teachers can change the situation.Here we are under great pressure because we have to do many things.The teachers give us too many exercises,so we cannot do much after-class reading.We have no way out.Maybe the teachers can do something about it.第20页/共21页感谢您的观看！第21页/共21页