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1、大学英语六级考试短文写作一、六级写作评分标准大学英语六级考试作文的目的旨在考核学生英语书面表达的能力。作文考试时间为30分钟，要求写出不少于150个词的短文。六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。对作文的要求是：切题，文理通顺，表达正确，意思连贯，无重大语言错误。下面介绍六级考试作文的评分原则和标准，并通过五份样卷作一个详细说明。（一）作文评分原则1.CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求
2、为准则。2.C E T 作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（Reward Scores）,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0 分，一 名 阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的儿种分数。（二）作文评分标准1.本题满分为15分。2.阅卷标
3、准共分五等:2 分、5 分、8 分、11分 及 14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如 8 分）相似，即定为该分 数（即 8 分），若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即 9 分）或减一分（即 7分），但不得加或减半分。4.评分标准：2 分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8 分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清
4、楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0 分。5.字数不足应酌情扣分累计字数140-149130-139120-129110-119100-10990-9980-89 jogging mountaineering and playing table tennis.5)The best English film in my eyes i sForrest Gump.三、六级写作题型分类(-)对立观点型2000年 6 月Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 min
5、utes to write a composition on the topic Is a Testof Spoken English Necessary?The First sentence has already been written for you.You should write at least 120 words,and you should base your composition on theoutline(given in Chinese)below:1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是 2.也有人持不同意见，3.我的看法和打算1999年 6 月Directio
6、ns:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic ReadingSelectively or Extensively?You should write at least 120 words and you should baseyour composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1.有些人认为读书要有选择2.有些人认为应当博览群书3.我的看法1998年 6 月Directions:For this part,you are al
7、lowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do“Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?You should write at least 120 wordsand you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运2.我认为数字和运气无关 1997年 6 月Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to writ
8、e a composition on the topic My Viewon Job-Hopping,You should write at least 120 words and you should base yourcomposition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1.有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为.2.有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为 3.我的看法1996年 1 月Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the
9、title:Why I Take College English Test Band 6.You should base your composition on thefollowing outline(given in Chinese).1.有些人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试2.我参加CET-6考试的理由1995年 6 月Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic ShouldFirecrackers Be Banned?You should write a
10、t least 120 words and you should baseyour composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1.有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么？2.有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么？3.我的看法1993年 6 月Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic MyView on Opportunity.You must base your composition on the followi
11、ng instructions(given in Chinese):有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。你的看法如何？写出你的理由并且适当举例。在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write it neatly.(-)解决问题型2003年 12月Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled ReduceWaste on
12、Campus.You should write at least 150 words following the outline givenbelow:I.有些大学校园浪费的现象日益严重2.浪费的危害3.杜绝浪费，从我做起2000年 1月Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How IFinance My College Education.You should write at least 120 words,and base yourcompos
13、ition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1.上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种途径解决。2.哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。1998年 1 月Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic MyView on Fake Commodities.You should write at least 120 words,and base yourcomposition on the outline
14、(given in Chinese)below:1.假冒伪劣商品的危害2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品1995年1月Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title:MyView on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements.You should base yourcomposition on the following outline(given in Chinese).1.现在有些不良的商业广告2.这些广告的副作用
15、和危害性3.我对这些广告的态度You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheetand remember to write in readable handwriting.1990年6月Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How toSolve the Housing Problem in Big Cities.Four suggested s
16、olutions to this problemare listed below.You are supposed to write in favor of one suggestion(ONE only)andagainst another(ONE only).You should give your reasons in both cases.You shouldwrite no less than 120 words.Remember to give a short introduction and a briefconclusion.Write your composition cle
17、arly.四种可能解决住房问题的方案：1.多造高层建筑2.向地下发展3.建造卫星城市4.疏散城市人口1990年1月Directions:For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How toSolve the Problem of Heavy Traffic according to the following OUTLINE.Yourcomposition should be no less than 120 words.Remember that the contents of
18、theOUTLINE should ALL be included in your composition.But you are not supposed totranslate the OUTLINE word for word.OUTLINE问题：城市交通拥挤解 决 方 案(solution)1.建造(lay down)更多道路优点：(1)降低街道拥挤程度（2）加速车流（flow of traffic）缺点：占地过多2.开 辟（open up）更多公共汽车线路优点：减少自行车与小汽车缺点：对部分人可能造成不方便结论：两者结合（三）谚语警句型1997年 1月Directions:For t
19、his part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic HasteMakes Waste,You should write at least 120 words and you should base yourcomposition on the outline（given in Chinese）below.1.为什么“欲速则不达”？2.举例说明。（四）图表图画型2003年 9 月2003年 6 月2002年 6 月1996年 6 月1992年 1月1991年 6 月（详 见“九、历年写作真题”部分
20、）（五）应用写作型2004年 6 月2002年 1月2001年 6 月（详 见“九、历年写作真题”部分）四、六级写作分类范文(-)对立观点型1.Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test(CET).Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in Chinabec
21、ause we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning Englishfor over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker.A test of spoken English willbring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English,and will thus help themwith their communic
22、ating skills.On the other hand,some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writingskills will be enough for the English learners.To some extent their opinion derives from the factthat students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework.Another required testwill o
23、nly add to their burden.In my opinion,a test of spoken English will do more good than harm.Since China willcontinue its policy of opening and reform,the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyonewho wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society.Whether I take the test or not,I
24、shallspare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.2.Do Lucky Numbersw Really Bring Good Luck?There are people who believe that some numbers bring good luck,while others bring bad luck.For instance,in China the number eight is thought to be lucky.Turning our at
25、tention to the West,we find that the number seven is considered lucky,but the number 13 is avoided like the plague.In spite of all these claims,most people would agree that there is little evidence that numbershave any influence on our lives.In fact,they say,the reverse seems to be the case.For one
26、thing,we might expect calculators to break down every time they note the number 13,and for another,although every week has seven days we know that not every week is lucky for us.Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments,I am inclined to agree with the latter point ofview.It is obvious that there
27、 is no scientific basis for the belief that there is a connection betweenluck and numbers.All in all,it seems to me to be superstition.3.My View on Job-HoppingJob-hopping,or frequent change of jobs,is becoming increasingly common in China today.Asthe economy grows,more opportunities for employment a
28、re appearing than before.The result isthat people,especially young people,are tempted to change jobs frequently,seeking higher salariesor more interesting positions.Nevertheless,many people prefer to stay in their old jobs.This is partly because they feelloyal to their work units,and partly because
29、they dislike the idea of having to spend much timetraining for a new job.In addition,although a new job may offer higher pay or more opportunitiesfor promotion,it may be located far from home and be inconvenient to reach.I think it is a good thing for the workforce to be flexible,so that new demands
30、 for personnelcan be satisfied quickly.However,if a person changes jobs too often,he or she will cause losses tothe employing units.Moreover,frequent job-hopping prevents a person from gaining valuable jobexperience and developing good work habits.4.Why I Take College English Test Band 6(a)Some peop
31、le consider that it is unnecessary to take College English Test Band 6(CET-6).Onereason they cite is that most schools set CET4 as the main requirement.Another reason is that theythink that CET-6 is simply too difficult for them.I,however,have decided to accept the challenge of CET-6.The preparation
32、 for this test willforce me to raise the level of my English ability.Besides,I regard CET-6 as a stepping-stone tofurther qualifications in English which will help me in my future career.All in all,taking CET-6 is advantageous for both a students studies and his personaldevelopment.The first advanta
33、ge is that he will improve his English skills in an all-round way.Thesecond is that he will strengthen his character by continuing his English studies when other peoplehave been lazy and stopped.(b)When it comes to College English Test Band 6(CET-6),opinions differ from person to person.Some hold th
34、e positive view.They believe that taking CET-6 is advantageous for both a studentsstudies and his personal development.The first advantage is that he will improve his English skillsin an all-round way.The second is that he will strengthen his character by continuing his Englishstudies when other peo
35、ple have been lazy and stopped.Others,however,hold the opposite view.They maintain that it is unnecessary to take CollegeEnglish Test Band 6(CET-6).One reason they cite is that most schools set CE4 as the mainrequirement.Another reason is that they think that CET-6 is simply too difficult for them.P
36、ersonally,I have decided to accept the challenge of CEP6.The preparation for this test willforce me to raise the level of my English ability.Besides,I regard CET-6 as a stepping-stone tofurther qualifications in English which will help me in my future career.5.Should Firecrackers Be Banned?(a)Some p
37、eople think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing.They say that it is an ancientChinese custom which should be preserved.They also claim that firecrackers make festivals andholiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.On the other hand,there are many people w
38、ho say that firecrackers should be banned.Theypoint out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property,and for injuries sufferedboth by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.They also say that firecrackers area waste of money and resources.My own point of view is
39、 that we should preserve the old custom of letting off firecrackers,while at the same time making them harmless.We can do this by banning firecrackers from publicplaces.In addition,we should restrict the setting off of firecrackers to festival days.(b)There is no denying he fact that setting off fir
40、ecrackers has been a hotly debated topic inChina.Peoples opinions differ sharply on this issue.Some hold the positive view.They say that itis an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved.They also claim that firecrackers makefestivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for b
41、oth adults and children.Withoutfirecrackers,festivals would become dull and cheerless.Others,however,hold the opposite view.They maintain that firecrackers should be banned.They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires,which destroy,property,and for injuriessuffered both by the people w
42、ho set them off and by innocent bystanders.They also argue thatfirecrackers are a waste of money and resources.Personally,I believe that we should not go to extremes.On the one hand,we should preservethe old custom of letting off firecrackers;on the other hand,we should make it harmless.This canbe d
43、one by banning firecrackers from public places.In addition,the setting off of firecrackersshould be restricted to festival days.(c)There has bean much controversy over setting off firecrackers in the past years,with eachparty owning convincing evidences.Those who are in favor of setting firecrackers
44、 claim that it isan ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved.They also argue that firecrackers makefestivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.Withoutfirecrackers,festivals would become cold and cheerless.On the other hand,there are many people
45、who are of the opinion Ihat firecrackers should bebanned.They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property,and forinjuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.Besides,theymaintain that firecrackers lead to a waste of money and resou
46、rces.Personally,I think that both sides have something right.Actually,firecrackers should beviewed as a two-edged sword,which presents us with both benefits and troubles.But we should notgive up eating for fear of choking.The best policy,as I see it,is to maximize their advantages andminimize their
47、unhealthy influence,so that they can benefit us in a better way.6.My View on OpportunityThere is no consensus of opinion in society about opportunities.There are some who think thatopportunities come only rarely,and only to lucky people.Others argue that opportunities come toeveryone from time to ti
48、me.Personally,I agree with the latter opinion.It seems to me that various kinds of opportunitiesare all around us all the time.The secret is to recognize opportunities and to grasp them in time,because they will not come to you of their own accord.For example,my classmates once refused toenter a nat
49、ional chemistry competition,because they thought that they had no chance of winning.But I took this opportunity,and by preparing well I managed to win the first prize.Now my motto is:Watch out for opportunities,and at all times prepare yourself to takeadvantage of them.(-)解决问题型7.Reduce Waste on Camp
50、us(a)Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that wasting has become a grave problem in manycampuses.In the dining hall,much food are left in the plates and dumped into the trash can.In theclassroom,blank or half blank pieces of paper are left on the desks.In the dorm building,taps areleft open