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1、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Nike was a wheel dog who was directly in front of the sled(雪橇) and take most of theforce. Whether little Nike had been named after the athletic shoe or the Greek goddess of Victory, I would never know.He came into my life due to an injury in one of his legs which

2、 prevented him from making the team for the Trail Sled Dog Race.My lifelong dream was to become a mountain man. So this winter,my wife Cheryl andI headed into the mountains with supplies to live for five months.In January,we had begunpushing east toward an untraveled area of the Yukon River.The trap

3、ping prospects therelooked promising. We returned to our main cabin and made plans for me to use Cherylsdogs, hooking(钩)them together to form a large team. The idea was to bring suppliesseveral miles down the river and establish a permanent camp.That meant Id be traveling alone and driving a sled lo

4、aded with around 300 pounds ofgoods,which meant extra hard work for my wheeler,Nike. The first serious challenge inour trip came where the path went down a steep valley that led to the river.As we started down, I stood on the brake with all of my weight in an attempt to keep balance.But the heavy sl

5、ed began overtaking the dogs, and they picked up their pace to stay ahead of it.The sled became faster and faster until we came to a sharp turn at the bottom of the hill.Eventually,the dogs got entangled (缠结) with each other and the sled got stuck in acrack in the river ice.I emerged from a large sn

6、owdrift and assessed the damage.I expected to find my dogs and a broken sled.But the sled was fine,and the dogs had jumped over each other, freeing themselves from the tangled ropes.Nike emerged from the snow,shook himself off, looked at me with encouraging eyes and made me smile.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.

7、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Now I had to save myself from the icy river.I had begun to accept that this was how I was going to die,but Nike wouldnt have it.中心思想为实现成为“山地猎人(mountain man)”的一生梦想,作者带着以Nike为首的一群雪橇犬在冬季进入大山;虽做了充分的准备,但还是在陡峭的峡谷中遇险。段落大意第一段描写了承重狗(wheel dog)Nike因腿部受伤而走进我的生活,拉雪橇时承担了大部分的重量。第二段叙述了作者一直希望成为一名山

8、地猎人,为此和妻子做了周密的计划。第三段重点描述了作者独自使用狗拉雪橇运送物资,在下山的过程中因速度太快而遇险。第四段讲述了作者和狗侥幸逃过一劫,并无大碍,雪橇也完好无损,却卡在了河冰的裂缝中。文本生词be named after 以.命名prospect n.可能性,希望promising adj.有希望的,有前途的cabin n.小屋be loaded with装载着overtake v. 追上, 赶上并超过pick up their pace加快速度emerge v.出现;显露snowdrift n.雪堆tangle v. 纠结在一起,缠绕续写段落分析续写第一段首句为:Now I had

9、 to save myself from the icy river. 说明作者面临的最大困难是逃离冰冷的河水;另外根据文中第四段雪橇卡在河冰中,还需要把雪橇弄出来;当然,还有收拢松脱的狗。第二段首句:I had begun to accept that this was how I was going to die,but Nike wouldnt have it.根据正向结局的原则可知,本段在作者想要放弃的时候,雪橇犬Nike在救援中起了关键作用。所以两段在内容分配上,第一段可以先确定作者所处险境的位置,再描述试图克服冰冷的河水,从冰缝中拖出雪橇,但没有成功。中间,还可以加上神情、动作和心

10、理描写;另外,由于气候恶劣,为了生动,还可以加上环境描写。续写第二段着重描写,Nike如何竭尽全力帮助作者从冰缝中拉出雪橇。为了和文本衔接,可以利用文本第一段 take most of the force, an injury in one of his legs和第四段的Nike. looked at me with encouraging eyes and made me smile等内容,进行适当发挥。参考范文Now I have to save myself from the icy river, As the sled sank beneath me, I tried to jump

11、 toward the edge of the ice, but failed and I had to prepare myself for a swim, To my astonishment, the water was only up to my knees, and there was very little current, When we finally came to the safety of the river bank, I felt helpless and hopeless. The cold was rapidly deepening into my muscles

12、, and I realized that my chances of survival were slim.I had begun to accept that this was how I was going to die , but Nike wouldnt have it. He ran in front of the sled and wagged his tail, ready to start again, I looked into his eyes and could swear he was smiling. I gathered my courage and tried to start a huge fire. Later as I recalled my experience in the warmth of my sleeping bag, I wondered whether Id have survived if not for Nip taught me that attitude is everything in the game of wilderness survival, And indeed he saved me!学科网(北京)股份有限公司

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