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1、第二节 段首提示句决定情节走向确定了故事的“负”（矛盾）和“正”（结局）后，我们就可以大体勾勒出“负一转一正”的情节轮廓。就像是定好了旅行的起点和终点，但是从起点到终点，可以有各种各样的路径。续写中给出的两个段首提示句，就是起到了限定情节走向的作用，某种程度上限定了中间路径的可选范围。相对而言，第二个段首提示句会更有价值，因为第一个段首提示句一般影响第一段的续写，而第二个段首句提示则对上下两段续写都有影响。例1 “女儿的老人朋友”【2021江苏省南京大学附属中学高三上学期期中】They chatted for a few minutes, he wished her a happy birth
2、day, and we went our separate ways. A few minutes later, she turned to me and asked, “Can I take a picture with the old man for my birthday?” It was the cutest thing ever, and although I wasnt sure if hed be willing to, I told her wed certainly ask.Paragraph 1: We found the man a couple of aisles ov
3、er, and I approached him.错误示例：“Excuse me, sir? This is Norah, and shed like to know if youd take a picture with her for her birthday.” His expression changed from confusion to surprise to delight. “A picture? With me?” he asked. “Yes, for my birthday!” Norah pleaded. And he agreed.本题在所给短文中，Norah明明已经
4、和老人聊过天了，而且也明确告诉了对方今天是自己的生日。续写第一段的段首句中的“the man”中的“the”是定冠词，指代前文中已经提及的人，“We found the man”指的不可能是另一个陌生的老人，故可以推测就是指Norah的老人朋友。做题时如果没有注意到这点，就很容易像上面这个“错误示例”一样，在情节上彻底走偏！例2 “南瓜套头”【2021浙江卷】所给短文部分情节：南瓜雕刻是万圣节的传统。我为了证明我选的南瓜是最大的，把自己的头套了进去，结果拔不出来了。.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chose
5、n by my 14-year-old brother.Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside
6、 the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “Im going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when
7、I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I cant get it
8、out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.Paragraph 1: It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Paragraph 2: The video was posted the Monday before Halloween.第二个段首句“这段视频是在万圣节前夕前的那个星期一发布的”和所给短文中“我把头卡在南瓜里”形成了情节上的突变，改变了情节的走向，对上下两段续写都会造成影响。由其可推测上文（第一段）需要叙述“视频
9、是如何拍摄的”。下文（第二段）需要叙述“视频发布后发生了什么”。例3 “监守自盗”【2021江苏省南通市高二上学期期中】所给短文部分情节：银行职员Jack, 因妻子出车祸急需手术费，而利用职权之便盗窃工作银行的故事。文章写到他成功抢走一大袋钱之后，出现了续写的两个段首句：Paragraph 1: After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring.Paragraph 2: But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank, an old
10、man.第一个段首句“Jack离开银行一段时间后，警报响了起来”限定了续写的第一段应该交代“抢劫之后发生的事情”。而第二个段首句“但最倒霉的是银行经理”则同时对上下文都造成影响，据其可推测上文（第一段）讲述“倒霉的除了银行经理还有谁”，下文（第二段）讲述“这位银行经理遭遇了什么倒霉事”。例4 “公益公路之旅”【2020山东省滕州一中高三4月份线上模拟】所给短文部分情节：我们在“公益公路之旅”中因为缺钱制订了两个目标：对陌生人微笑传播快乐与善意，以及通过街头表演至少筹集80美元。很顺利地，我们的第一个目标实现了。Paragraph 1: We sat down to watch a musici
11、an play the guitar while we thought about our second goal.Paragraph 2: Our little band of five attracted a large audience.第一个段首句“我们在思考第二个目标”限定了后文应该围绕第二个目标的内容，即“街头表演”来展开。而第二个段首句“我们的五人小乐队吸引了大批观众”则同时对上下文都造成影响，据其可推测上文（第一段）需要讲述“五人小乐队是如何组成的”，下文（第二段）需要讲述“乐队吸引观众后发生了什么”例5 “海上遇险”【2020山东省泰安市高二上学期期末】所给短文部分情节：我们
12、全家去海滩玩，我不会游泳，就去划一条小渔船，突然海浪袭来Paragraph 1: My boat was pulled towards the deeper part.Paragraph 2: When I came to life, I was lying in hospital.第一个段首句“我的船被（海浪）拉向更深的地方”限定了后文应该围绕“遇险求救”来展开。而第二个段首句“当我醒过来的时候，我躺在医院里”则同时对上下文都造成影响，据其可推测在上文（第一段）段尾“我应该失去了意识”，下文（第二段）需要讲述“我是如何获救的”例6 “防空壕遇蛇”【2020山东省潍坊市部分学校高三在线考试】所
13、给短文部分情节：Rebecca和Pa在种树苗的时候看到一个防空壕，又在防空壕前碰到了一条眼镜蛇。Paragraph 1: “Get ready to run, William,” she said, keeping an eye on the motionless snake.Paragraph 2: “Are you OK?” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded.第一个段首句“准备跑吧，William。她说，盯着那条一动不动的蛇”限定了后文应该围绕“两人如何脱险”来展开。而第二个段首句“你没事吧？他喘着粗气问道。Rebecca点点头。”则同
14、时对上下文都造成影响，据其可推测上文（第一段）讲述“两人脱险的过程”，下文（第二段）讲述“脱险之后发生了什么”例7 “离家出走”【2020湖南省街阳市八中高二月考】所给短文部分情节：Jenny和母亲争吵后离家出走，偶遇好心的面馆老板请她吃了一碗面，经过老板的开导，Jenny决定回家和母亲道款。Paragraph 1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.Paragraph 2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.第一个段首句“Jenny走到门边，深深地吸了一口气”限定了后文应该围绕“回家后发生了什么”来展开。而第二个段首句“有人温柔地触碰了她的头发，把她从思绪中拉了回来”则同时对上下文都造成影响，限定了上一段需要讲述“Jenny陷入了思考”，甚至可以猜测在第一段“Jenny没有见到母亲”，而其中的“有人”则指的是母亲，下文（第二段）应讲述“Jenny和母亲两人的互动”学科网（北京）股份有限公司