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1、No.48 Middle School,HefeiNo.48 Middle School,Hefeia d fgst oyl p zec m hxb j niwrte kawritestory about an accidentexpected/unexpected Two weeks ago,a plane took off from Chongqing as usual.While the plane was flying,Liu Chuanjian,the captain of the plane,heard a loud noise.When he looked over,he saw
2、 a window on the right was gone.Suddenly the co-pilot was sucked halfway out of the window.Liu kept calm and tried his best to pull the pilot back inside the plane.As he pulled the pilot back,he took control.While the temperature was dropping fast,Liu decided to make an emergency landing at once.In
3、the end,he safely landed the plane in Chengdu and none of the passengers were hurt.One day,when Susie was getting dinner ready for animals at a zoo,her hand began to hurt .What do we know?What do we still want to know?A few days ago,when she was washing vegetables near a lake in the zoo,she heard a
4、strange noise.again One day,when a woman was getting dinner ready for animals at a zoo,her hand began to hurt again.A few days ago,when she was washing vegetables near a lake in the zoo,she heard a strange noise._.Check and improve Items content1.Is the story complete?2.Is there a logical relationsh
5、ip between the events?3.Is the story moving?language 1.Does it use correct tense?2.Does it use any adverbial clauses of time?self-editingShare my story One day,when a woman was getting dinner ready for animals at a zoo,her hand began to hurt again.A few days ago,when she was washing vegetables near
6、a lake in the zoo,she heard a strange noise.She looked for where the noise came from and noticed a baby bird lying in the grass.The baby bird fell off the tree and was badly hurt.As soon as she reached out her hand,the mother bird scratched her hand with anger.She felt hurt but she didnt stop.She cl
7、eaned the wound for the baby bird at once and bound it carefully.While the mother bird was watching that,it kept silent and became gentle.Even the animals can catch the kindness.Share your story What do we learn from the stories about accidents?Homework:1.Summarize how to write a story by making your own mind map;2.Improving the writing.