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1、英语写作讲解英语写作讲解美丽的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面作文的卷面Which composition feels more attractive,why?影响给分的因素之二：影响给分的因素之二：文中所接受的语言材料文中所接受的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择敏捷新颖，稀奇制胜；B.句型结构运用敏捷多变;PracticeFind some similar words or phrases of the followings1.good2.think3.clever perfect excellent outstanding pleasant w
2、onderful favorable magnificent in ones opinion/viewhold the view that it is widely shared that wise bright smart intelligent cute影响给分的因素之三：影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅行文的流畅 上下贯穿、一挥而就正确而奇妙地运用好连接词and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.1.1.表递进表递进.表转折表转折.表因果表因果.表目的表目的.表归纳表归纳b
3、ut,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand.because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in general,in brief,in short,in conclusio
4、n,in a word,on the whole.高考作文类型：高考作文类型：A.A.数据说明类文章数据说明类文章B.B.提示争论文类文章提示争论文类文章C.C.看图说话类文章看图说话类文章影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素因素1.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否运用高级词汇是否运用高级词汇4.是否运用困难句是否运用困难句5.卷面整齐卷面整齐,书写工整书写工整写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：细致审题，列举大纲。细致审题，列举大纲。围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。添加过度，确保连贯。添加
5、过度，确保连贯。先求正确，再求敏捷。先求正确，再求敏捷。细致眷写，卷面整齐。细致眷写，卷面整齐。现在正是春暖花开的春游季节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游季节。你校学生以“高三高三学生要不要参与春游活动学生要不要参与春游活动”绽开了探讨。请依据以绽开了探讨。请依据以下探讨结果，写一篇短文。下探讨结果，写一篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健吸新鲜空气，有利健康康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学大脑休息，有利于学习习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习In
6、troduction(topic)Body(supporting ideas)ConclusionThe outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph:Introduction paragraph:Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 2Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）探讨（discussion）2.bod
7、y(supporting ideas):接触自然（be close to nature）呼吸簇新空气（breathe some fresh air）精神放松（relax themselves）大脑休息（rest their brains）高考接近（with college entrance examination drawing near）没心情玩（dont feel like going）耽搁学习(waste the time)3.conclusion:in my opinionKey words:中学生middle school students身体差in a poor state of
8、healthIn bad condition足够的睡眠enough sleep加强熬炼，增加户外活动take more exercise and do more outdoor activities定时吃饭少吃零食have three meals regularly,eat less non-staplefood.讲卫生Form/develop the habit of hygiene主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开宗明义，句式力争多样性开宗明义，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you star
9、t you passage?问句：问句：从句：从句：Introduction:（sample）Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question.The body partPoint1:65%的人认为应当春游（亮明观点）Se
10、ntence pattern:Most of us(about 65%)hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸簇新空：接触大自然，呼吸簇新空气，有利健康气，有利健康Sentence pattern:They think it good to do sth/sth do good to s
11、th In their opinion,it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习息，有利于学习（留意：两个观点之间的连接）递进whats more；besides;moreover;in addition；furthermoreEg:they can relax themselves for a while and re
12、st their brains so that they will be more energetic.Conclusion:Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应明观点，前后呼应。Eg:They think it will do good to their students.Point 2:的学生认为不应当春游（亮明观点）留意：运用过渡句，自然连接句子和段落（承上启下）Sentence pattern:However,others prefer toSome others have just the opposite opinion.On the othe
13、r hand.Eg:On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.Reason 1:Reason 1:高考接近，没有心情玩高考接近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern:Sentence pattern:They say/believe/hold the They say/believe/hold the opinion that.opinion that.Eg:They say that with college Eg:They say that with college entrance examination d
14、rawing entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like near,they dont feel like going anywhere.going anywhere.Reason 2:春游耽搁学习（留意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studie
15、s Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air
16、 and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going
17、 anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起:Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different/opposite opinions.People have taken/a
18、dopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一:of them hold the opinion that.of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think C.表达不同观点之间的连接表达不同观点之间的连接:However,of them hold a different
19、view./of them hold the opposite opinion.People who are against it dont think so.However,every coin has two sides.Different from those.,people think.On the other hand,people think.D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语:In my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,Whether or not should Senior 3
20、 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax t
21、hemselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think goi
22、ng spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the idea.表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Fir
23、st of all/To begin with,.Secondly ThirdlyIn the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/Last but not least/,.表示递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词.Besides/Apart from/Whats more/In addition/Furthermore/Moreover/worse still/to make matters worse Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring ou
24、ting?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while
25、and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will
26、take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the idea.whats more,BesidesA A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副
27、词、增加形容词或副词C C、敏捷运用各种句型、敏捷运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be clo
28、se to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination
29、 drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfreshHomework:Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.