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1、变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分英语写作讲解英语写作讲解变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面作文的卷面变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Which composition feels more attractive,
2、why?变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分影响给分的因素之二：影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分PracticeFind some similar words or phrases of the followings good2. think3.clev
3、er perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in ones opinion/viewhold the view that it is widely shared that wise bright smart intelligent cute变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分影响给分的因素之三：影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词变电站电气主接线
4、是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.1.1.表递进表递进. .表转折表转折. .表因果表因果. .表目的表目的. .表归纳表归纳but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand. because,since,therefo
5、re,so,hence,thus,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分高考作文类型：高考作文类型：A. A.
6、 数据说明类文章数据说明类文章B. B. 提示议论文类文章提示议论文类文章C. C. 看图说话类文章看图说话类文章变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素因素1.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句是否使用复杂句5 .卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整书写工整变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而
7、完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。 围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。 添加过度，确保连贯。添加过度，确保连贯。 先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。.认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结
8、果，写一展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健吸新鲜空气，有利健康康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学大脑休息，有利于学习习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Conclusion变电站电气主接线是
9、指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph: Introduction paragraph: Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 2变电站电气主接线是指变电站的
10、变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）精神放松（relax themselves ）大脑休息（rest their brains ）高考临近（ with college entranc
11、e examination drawing near ）没心情玩（dont feel like going ）耽误学习(waste the time)3.conclusion: in my opinion变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Key words:中学生middle school students 身体差in a poor state of health In bad condition 充足的睡眠enough sleep 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 take more exercis
12、e and do more outdoor activities 定时吃饭少吃零食 have three meals regularly,eat less non-staple food. 讲卫生变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Form/develop the habit of hygiene变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简
13、洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you start you passage?问句：问句： 从句：从句： Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑
14、巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question. 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分The body partPoint1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）点）Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that,since it
15、 tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康气，有利健康Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth/ sth do goo
16、d to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习息，有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whats more ；besides
17、; moreover ; in addition；furthermoreEg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Conclusion: Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应明观点，前后呼应。 Eg: They think it will do good to th
18、eir students.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Point 2:的学生认为不应该的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）春游（亮明观点） 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）（承上启下） Sentence pattern: However, others prefer to Some others have just the opposite opinion. On the other hand. Eg: On the other hand
19、, about 35% students are against the idea.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Reason 1:Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hold the opinion that. Eg: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going
20、anywhere. 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Reason 2:春游耽误学习春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies变电站电气主接线是指变电
21、站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for
22、their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with
23、college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组
24、成部分 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起: Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一: of them hold t
25、he opinion that . of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so.
26、 However, every coin has two sides. Different from those., people think .On the other hand, people think .D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语: In my opinion/Personally, As far as Im concerned, In short/ in brief/ in a word, 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Whether or not should Senior
27、 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they ca
28、n relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Beside
29、s, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.变电站电气主接
30、线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly Thirdly In the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/ Last but not least/, .表示递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词 . Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Fur
31、thermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that
32、Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other
33、hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studie
34、s.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.whats more,Besides变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分A A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨
35、亮点点拨变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They th
36、ink it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. The
37、y say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Homework: Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.