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1、第六题读后续写考情今折读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型。读后续写的阅读 材料一般以350词以内的记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主。考生要在此文的后面续写约150词左右的 文字与前文构成一个完整的故事。要求考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。情节曲折 跌宕，线索性和逻辑性较强。其中，段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引 导你的思路向某个方面发展，所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶，要在其基础上 进行拓展发挥。年份体裁话题命题分析及考点考察2021全国I卷记叙文本文以母亲节为线索 展开，讲述了双胞胎 Jenna和Jeff为了献给 母亲一份美味的早餐，
2、自己动手，做起饭餐 来，但是不幸的是，他 们连连失败，后来在父 亲的帮助下，获得成 功，他们把早餐献给亲 爱的母亲，妈妈非常感 动的故事。题材内容贴近生活，关注社会热点，与中 学生的学习、生活密切相关。从试题结构看， 读后续写评价的是书面理解能力和书面表达 能。因此，在写作之前，首先读懂文本，理清 故事情节，然后构思故事的发展和结局。规J答、例题 （2021年全国I卷）A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE Lims help, I managed to carry him to the porch where their car was parked. When we finally
3、managed to get him inside the car, I drove to the hospital.We rushed him to the emergency and casualty ward(临时病室).The doctor on duty informed us that Mr. Lim had suffered a mild stroke. Mr. Lim was admitted to the intensive care unit(ICU) . Mrs. Lim and I looked after him all night long. It was then
4、 that Mrs. Lim asked me to contact her son and convey the news. I never knew (hat Mr. and Mrs. Lim had children. I could not recall a time when they ever mentioned a son. I tried to contact the son al (he given address, but I was told that he had moved (o another (own with his wife and children. I c
5、ould see (he pain in Mrs. Lims face as I told her the news.注意：I .续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As I was driving home, I told myself that I would call my own parentsMr. Lim was discharged(准许离开)from the hospital after (en days六、读后续写()6阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was Hoppys first day at h
6、is new school. He didnt know anyone yet, but he had seen some cool kids at the beach during the summer.Billy, one of the cool kids, sat down next to Hoppy at break and started to have a talk. They discovered they shared the same interest, surfing, but Hobby went to the beach with his dad, instead of
7、 hanging out there with friends, which was laughed at by Billy. He invited Hoppy to the beach with his friends. Hoppy nodded, happy to have a new friend.After school Hoppy met Billy and his three friends at the school gate, one of whom tried to punch Hoppys stomach as a way of “greetings”. While wal
8、king on the street, they met a boy, having trouble with his bike. Billy and his friends started to tease （he boy. The boy looked up uneasily about ihis interest in him and his Hat-tyre.Billy nudged the boy so that he fell on the kerb （侧石）and broke his glasses. Billy and his friends ran off down the
9、street, laughing. However, Hoppy just stood there.The boy, Gerald, sat on the kerb, crying now. He looked up at Hoppy and begged him not to hit him. Hoppy smiled and said, Ive never beaten anyone up. Only bullies （衙凌）and cowards do that. Really strong people keep their fists in their pockets. Thats
10、what my dad says. Gerald seemed relieved. They walked to Geralds house, talking about going to the beach together. Their friendship grew.One Sunday, Hoppy went to the beach with his father. Billy and his friends were there. Billy called out to Hoppy, complaining about helping Gerald. He spoke in an
11、unpleasant tone, saying his dad was his babysitter. Hoppy smiled and ignored him.Gerald arrived to see Hoppy. When he saw the boys, his heart sank. Billy and his gang surrounded him. “Hoppys tricked mc, thought Gerald, and he started to walk away. Billy ran after Gerald and tripped him. Gerald fell
12、onto the sand, but picked himself up and asked them to leave him alone. However, Billy didnt stop and tripped Gerald again.Paragraph 1:This time Gerald managed a brave smile as he gol up and faced the boys.Paragraph 2:Hoppy and his dad came ud beside Gerald、but Gerald said to hem、Why dont you go wit
13、h your fbiends?” 七、读后续写07阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。On a Sunday afternoon, Kiana French was having fun fishing with her father and younger sister, not knowing the next minute, they would struggle not to sink in the freezing water. Their 12-foot boat was taking in water little by little, an
14、d the wind was picking up. Her father, Gary French, hurried to operate the engine, while Kiana J 6, was in the middle with Cierrah, her sister, frightened but still able to keep calm.Kiana asked Cierrah to take off one of her cowboy boots, with which she got some of the water out. Hard as she tried,
15、 that little effort would not help stop the boat sinking. Moments later, the unthinkable happened. The boat was full of water and (hen it flipped over. Kiana and her sister were dumped in (he waler. Their father, who had had a surgery six months ago, managed no( (o be thrown into (he water but seeme
16、d to have great pain in the chest due to the sudden change.Kiana quickly put on her life jacket and saw Cierrahs and her father,s life jackets floating away. She reacted quickly to get them back and held her sister onto the boat. They were so far out in the middle of the lake that they could not see
17、 the shore clearly. Whats worsc.it was getting harder to stay above the waves. Their father swam over and hugged his two girls. Cierrah crying silently. Kiana heard her beloved sister murmur, cant feel my feet?Kiana knew the only thing to do was to get to shore herself and find help. She looked up a
18、t her father, exchanging a concerned glance, turned round and swam as hard as she could towards the shoreFighting against the strong currents and cold wind, she screamed for help at the top of her lungs every three minutes or so. A strong wind blew, and she looked back only to see her sisters and fa
19、thers heads bobbing(浮动)in the water. She burst into tears, thinking her sister and dad were dead, because she was taking too long.注意：1.续写词数应为15。左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on itOnce rescued, they were rushed to shore, where a concern
20、ed group waited for their arrival.令关注有礼令学科网中小学资源库扫码关注可免费领取180套PPT教学模版令海量教育资源一触即达令新鲜活动资讯即时上线学学科网The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning fbr Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make
21、French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came a( last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil (he porridge first. They pul
22、some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French (oast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put (wo slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner (o heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smo
23、othly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid
24、 starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touche
25、d the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had (urned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.T
26、he twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Fathers appearing was like a savior to （he two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made
27、 the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this lime. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and pe
28、rfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didnt expect. The children said loudly, *ilappy Mothers Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and
29、kissed them again and again.【解析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手， 做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母 亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。【段落续写】 由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父 亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到 孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。【点睛】 高分句型!. Father helped them adjus
30、t the fire, which was the key to success, （which 引导的非限制性定语从句）I 高分句型 2. it was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.（使用 not only.but （also）句型及强调句型）2 三热点题型专练一、读后续写()1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Last week I was in the supermarket. I got to the f
31、ront of the queue and put my groceries through the checkout.When it was time to pay, I realized that I left my bank card at home, and I didnt have enough money with me. All I had was a ten-dollar bill and some coins in my wallet. I was short by at least five dollars, but I needed to buy most of the
32、items.I started to apologize to the checkout assistant. uFm sorry/I said. uCan I put these things back? And then I think ril just take these. Oh no, I need that. Rather put this through.”A lady was standing behind me, next in the queue. Excuse me, sir, she said.“Oh, Im so sorry,“ I replied. t4I am h
33、olding you up. ”“Of course not. I know how you feel. This happens to all of us at some point. Now let me just use my card to pay the balance for you and you can be on your way. ”I was surprised by her kindness, embarrassed though. No matter how much I insisted otherwise, she was determined to help m
34、e. Afterward, I thanked her and asked for her telephone number to get in touch and pay her back.“No, she said. Td rather you paid it forward.”“Pay it forward* means to do a good deed fbr the next person in need. In the Italian city of Naples, for example, (here is a long tradition of paying for a co
35、 flee fbr another person. There, wealthier people pay a 4icafle sospesoXsuspended coffee) fbr others, which is then given by the waiter to the next person who cannot a ft ord a cup of coffee. Also, someone who experiences good luck buys two cups but only receives one. The other goes to another perso
36、n who needs it. This, according to Benjamin Franklin, is “a trick of mine fbr doing a deal of good with a little money.”The next day, I saw two firefighters eating at the restaurant where I worked as a waiter. They seemed to have just finished a tough job because they both looked very exhausted and
37、hungry.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I recalled the ladys words.A few days later, I got a surprise.二、读后续写02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Tiki!” I yelled desperately.Our dog. Tiki, had slipped out the door earlier that evening. Now I was searching the neighborhood trying to find him. M
38、y seven-year-old son, Jordan, was following behind.I was worried about Jordan. He had lost so much already. The Iasi few months had been difficult. After getting divorced, I could no longer afford our house in Indianapolis. Jordan and I moved in with my parents in northern Indiana. Jordan missed his
39、 friends and his old school. Losing his childhood dog was the last thing he needed.We called out Tilkis name until it was completely dark. Wc were forced to return home, empty-handed.“Mom, its all new here. What if Tiki cant find Grandmas housc? asked Jordan. Its okay,“ 1 said. Hes wearing his colla
40、r and dog tag （标牌）It was at that moment that I realized Tiki,s tag listed our address and phone number in Indianapolis. If someone found him, theyd have no way to reach me. I felt sick to my stomach.The next day, I kept asking around to see if anyone had spotted him. But after two weeks, I began to
41、lose hope.One afternoon, I found Jordan crying in his room. At school, we had to write about our wishes,“ he said. I wrote, 41 wish my dog would come home/ Mrs. Rush hung our papers in the hallway. Every time I see my paper, I feel sad.” My heart broke for him.So later that week, when he put on a st
42、ained shirt from his old school back in Indianapolis, I just let it slide. If it helped him get through the school day, that was more important than looking put-together.When he got home that afternoon, he told me the school custodian （管理员）had asked him about his shirt. “I told him we just moved her
43、e from Indianapolis/ said Jordan.The next day, I got a call from Mrs. Rush. Tm calling on behalf of our school custodian,“ she began. uHis grown daughter found a dog a few weeks ago, and he thinks it might be yours.”注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有卜划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：3 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你
44、所使用的关键词语。Paragraph I:Mrs. Rush didnt know the details, but she passed on the daughters phone number.Paragraph2:“Whal made your dad think the dog was ours? I asked curiously.三、读后续写03阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。As Christmas decorations appeared in town, our parents called my two younger broth
45、ers and me together. At first, I thought someone had died, because I had never seen my parents look so sad. My brothers and I stood waiting for the awful news.Mom hugged me as she murmured, “Christmas is going to be different this year. We wont be having a tree or presents. Wc can barely afford fbod
46、/Dad, resting on the couch, beckoned （招手示意）the hoys into hisarms.vvThings will change when I get back to work.”My family was poorer than dirt. Dad, the only bread-earner in our family, worked in a coal mine. However, soon after returning to work at the end of a long strike, Dad was hurt in a rock fa
47、ll that broke bones in his foot. Lying on the couch with the swollen foot high on pillows, he didnt talk or smile much. There was little to smile about. No work, no income.A( nine years old, I mothered my younger brothers: Rodney, aged six, and Stevie, three. We shared a small bedroom. That night, a
48、fter our parents , announcement, we talked.Rodney began. 44Em, did you see how sad Mommy and Daddy looked? I thought Mommy was gonna cry.“Me, too. Daddys fbots . this big whispered Stevie, holding out his arms.uYcah.Wcrc in hard times,1 I said.“It makes Mommy and Daddy sad.“But we dont have to be sad, I added, hoping to brighten the mood.“Since there are still several weeks to go, maybe wc can do something to cheer them up, I said with overdone enthusiasm. The boys proposed, 4AVe can take the money from our piggy bank.earn some more.and surprise them with gifts!“I can run errands(跑腿)for Au