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1、考点20应用文写作:建议信、道歉信(原卷版)【命题解读】书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨询信 以及慰问信等类别。以下对建议信、道歉信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。具体建议及理由希望建议被采纳、盼回复1、学习类:给图书馆建议,提高服务质量;给选修课提建议;给读书节提建议2、环境保护类:给相关部门或报纸提建议限制使用白色塑料袋,节约食物 合理使用共享单车。3、文化自信类():外国留学生,来你们学校学习,给他们的学习生活或学习中文提建议。4、身心健康:给校长写信,关于提高学生身心健康:身体健康,减压等。【布局思维导图】问候、写信背景/原因及
2、写信目的段落要点首段写信目的正文提出建议、说明原因结尾表达期望和祝愿Li Hua篌拨检狈【模拟检测1(2022江苏模拟预测)假定你是李华,得知你的英国好友Jim在国际数学奥林匹克大赛(International Mathematical Olympiad)中失利。请用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.获知消息;2.劝他坦然面对挫折;3.给予鼓励。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【模拟检测2 (2022天津和平一模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,你给已经是大学一年级学生的笔友Chris写信,请对方给你提一些建议。信的内容如下:(1)
3、询问Christ大学生活的状况;(2)询问Christ当初根据什么选择的专业;(3)自己希望选择的专业及原因(如兴趣、父母意愿、就业前景等)。参考词汇:专业major 注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Yours,Li Jin【模拟检测3 (2022辽宁实验中学一模)假定你是希望中学的高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信 询问你打算如何度过高考录取后至上大学前的这段时间。请给Tom回信告诉他你的想法。内容包括: 1.上大学前的准备;2 .业余生活;注意:1.词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文
4、连贯;2.书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom,How is everything going with you?Yours,Li Hua【基本模板】Dear(称谓)You cant imagine how(情感)I am hearing about (写信的原因). Im more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.Firstly, you are supposed to(建议一) Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to(建议 二/理由一).Moreover
5、 (For another reason) ,(建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that (Therefore) (建议四/理由三)I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will(以上建议的好处).I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).Your sincerely,Li Hua【必备词句】I am writing to express my vie
6、ws concerning.我写此信来表达我关于的观点。You have asked me for my advice about., and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.对于你来信 问我关于的事,现提供几条有益的建议。I would like to suggest that.我建议Why not./ Why don*t you. ?为何不?I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could.我认为是个好办法/有利的。Its important to./ It h
7、elps to.It should be a good idea to.很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning.我提出几条有关于的建议。Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks.请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful.希望这些建议对你有帮助。Thank you for your attention.感谢
8、你对此事的关注。【写作实操技巧】假如你是李华,你的外教MrGeller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养,正在书 法、剪纸与象棋中选择,写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:1 .推荐内容及简要原因;2 ,切实可行的学习建议;3 .祝福与希望注意:1.词数:80词左右;4 .内容应包括以上要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;参考词汇:书法:calligraphy 剪纸:paper-cutting象棋:Chinese chess【模板范文】Dear(称谓)You can* imagine how oveijoyed (情感)T am hearing abou
9、t your plan (写信的原因). Im more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.Firstly, you are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because its a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique (建议一).Additionally, aiming at learning it well, it makes sense to devote himself/ herself
10、to long hours of practice (建议二).Moreover, signing up for a calligraphy course (建议三)is also a good choice, which would help he】 study in a systematic way . Do bear in mind that itd also bu beneficial to study and imitate the works of famous calligiaphers (建议四)I am fully convinced that use the tips ab
11、ove and you will gain benefit (以上建议的好处).I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).Your sincerely,Li Hua 【仿写演练】假定你是李华,你朋友张帅在美国学习,你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业,前不久,他来信就 是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。1 .建议他回国。2 .你的理由是国内形势好、学有所用、就业机会多、便于照顾父母、报效祖国等。注意:1 .词数80左右:3 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【模板范文】
12、Dear Zhangshuai (称谓)You cant imagine how ove.oyed (情感)I am hearing about you arc going to graduate (写信的原因).Vmmore than glad to offer my advice for your reference.In my opinion, you are supposed to come back after you 行nish your studies abroad (建议).For one reason, what you are studying is badly neede
13、d nowadays in China and it will be quite easy for you to find a good job (理由 一). For another reason, it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old (理由 二).Therefore, its a good idea fo) you to return.(总结)I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestio
14、ns into account (表达希望接受建议).Your sincerely,Li Hua道歉信【考情分析】活动没有去参加(道歉时,活动已经结束);活动不能去参加(道歉时,活动还没有开始);给别人造成了损失:如把对方东西弄丢;把车给损坏了;答应的事情(或任务)没有按时完成等。【布局思维导图】段落要点首段表表示歉意,道歉的原由正文解释原因,提出弥补措施;结尾再次请求原谅。【基本模板】Dear(称谓)Im terribly sorry to inform you that(写信事由).Thus, 1 am writing to apologize for not keeping my wor
15、d. Something unexpected happened and(失约理由).Shall we fix another time? V 11 be available any time after(补救办法).Will(另约时间)suits your convenience? If its ok, lefs meet at(见面土 也点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment wont put you into much trouble.Keenly anticipate your pr
16、ompt reply.Your sincerely,Li Hua 【必备词句】I would like to express my叩ology for对于,我想要表达我的歉意。Will you be good enough to excuse me for./Excuse me for.请原谅我Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for请接受我最真诚的致歉Im terribly sorry to tell you that./ T regret to inform you that很抱歉地告诉你I write to you to exp
17、ress my deep regret.我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。I am writing to apologize to you for.我写信向你致歉,因为Would you mind if I.?你是否介意如果我?To make up my thoughtless behavior, I为了弥补我欠考虑的行为,我I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration.我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的 考虑不周。【写作实操技巧】假定你是李华,你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展,但你
18、因故不能赴 约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1 ,表示歉意;2 .解释原因;3 .补救措施。注意:1.词数80左右;4 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【模板范文】Dear MrSmith (称谓)I fm terribly sony to inform you that I cant accompany you to the International Photography Festival held this Satuiday (写信事由).Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpe
19、cted happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my little brother (失约理由).Shall we fix another time?11 be available any time after this Saturday(补救办法).Will this Sunday(另约 时间)suits your convenience? If its ok, lets meet at our schoo
20、l gate at 8 a.m.(见面地点).If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment wont put you into much trouble.Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.Your sincerely, Li Hua 【仿写演练】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David本周六即将结束在中国的旅行,乘飞机返回英国,你因有事无法 按原定计划取机场为他送行,只好写信向他道歉,内容如下:1 .表达歉意;2.说明不能送行的原因。 注意:1 .词数80左右;2 .可适
21、当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【模板范文】Dear David (称谓)m terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised (写信事由).Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking C
22、ontest to be held this weekend. Actually, I have just been informed of this plan by the schoolmaster. Moreover, as the chairman of the Sludent Union, I feel responsible for this iob. How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent togethe】 before you leave
23、! 佚约理由).I hope the adjustment wont put you into much trouble.Wish you a safe journey.Your sincerely,Li Hua经典好题【真题1(2018全国卷I)假如你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有 关习俗,请你回复邮件,内容包括:到达时间;2 .合适的礼物;3 .餐桌礼仪注意:1 ,词数不少于80; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。【真题2 (2017北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择: “长江之行”或者“泰山之旅,Jim来
24、信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2. 你的理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1 .词数不少于50; 2,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。【真题3】(2019北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津 和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:1 .交通出行;2.必备衣物。注意:1 .词数不少于50; 2,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【真题4 (2017北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中 国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。
25、他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:(1)表示欢迎;(2)推荐他上哪所大学;(3)建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意:(1).词数不少于50; (2).开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【真题5】【2019天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流 活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请 根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;(3)希望从中有何收获。注
26、意:(1)词数不少于100:(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【真题6】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣, 计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:(1)表示欢迎; (2)推荐他上哪所大学;(3)建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:(1).词数不少于50;2 2).开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
27、。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【真题7(2016新课标卷III)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请 给他写封邮件,内容包括:1 .表示歉意;2 .说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1 .词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【真题8】(2014.北京卷)你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括:L你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;2 .由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;3,表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意:1.词数不少于50; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。【真题9(2014.山东卷)假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询 问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件:1.未及时回信的原因;2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)注意:1 .词数:120-150; 2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【真题10 2021年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英 文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:L表达歉意并说明原因;2 .提出建议并给出理由。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,