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1、读后续写练习指导读后续写材料：I was a single mother in my 20s who lived clown and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat clown in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a
2、 silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.On impulse（冲动）1 determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone hook for the name. I found it immediately a
3、nd called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.Yes, she said in surprise, with extreme excitement, li was my umbrella which had been stolen a year ago.So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with tear
4、y eyes, explaining with choked voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrieving（找回）this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.The following months were hard. I can only obtain
5、temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and
6、 darkness.The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.Thinking of this, I couldnt control my tears on my way front the streetcar to home,
7、but I managed a smile so I could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；Paragraph 1:Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rus
8、hed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.Paragraph 2:Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，上文讲述了单亲妈妈带着女儿艰苦生 活去市区寻找工作，发现了一把精致的雨伞，决定寻找雨伞的主人， 找到主人后，拒绝雨伞主人的答谢。后来妈妈圣诞节前失业，雪上 加霜，穷途末路，伤心绝望，而女儿满心欢喜地期待圣诞礼物，妈 妈却不知所措【情节】续写部分分为两段：第一段开头是：突然，门铃响了，Peggy跑去开门，说这一定是 圣诞老人。
9、所以后文应该是讲述母女俩收到包裹的事情，包裹是给 作者的，作者感到很惊喜。第二段开头是：突然，一个包裹上的一张纸条引起了我的注意。 本段应该写作者知道了寄包裹的人就是之前归还雨伞的主人，在那 个寒冷的圣诞节作者因为她的举动感到异常温暖。【语料库】greet sb heartily：由衷地问候某人cant help clapping ones hands：情不自禁地拍起手来in rapture/ with ecstasy/ with merriment/ with sheer exhilaration ： 欣喜若狂be occupied with loads of ：满是大量的in a conf
10、used/ puzzled tone/ voice：用疑惑的语调/声音be lost in a deep thought： 陷入沉思hold the note tightly：紧紧握着纸条on the verge of tears： 快哭 了with a current of warmth spreading over my body： 一股暖流传遍 全身a freezing cold/bone-chilly Christmas：在寒冷/刺骨的圣诞节 my heart was brimmed with appreciation:我的心充满了 感激 Pray to God/ God heard
11、my benediction ：向上帝祈祷/上帝听到了 我的祈祷a surge of inner peace came flooding me in waves： 一股内心的平 静涌上来淹没了我fuel sb with great hope：使某人充满希望范文Paragraph 1:Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. I heard n man reet Pegay heartily, telling her that there were
12、 several Christmas packages and then hand them to PegHV, who couldnt help clapping her hards in rapture at the news. Apparently, he was a delivery man, his arms occupied with loads of parcels. I said in a confused tore, “Sir, it must be a mistake”, but he checked my name, confirmed it and left immed
13、iately. I was lost in a deep thought, wondering who would deliver me such unexpected Christmas gifts, while Peggy sat down or the floor and began to check the parcels with sheer exhilaration.Paragraph 2:Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. Coming into mv sight were some brief wor
14、ds, savin日，“Thank you for returning my umbrella, which means a lot to me. Merry Christmas!” It was that lady who sent me surprising Rifts. Holding the note tightly, I was or the verge of tears, with a current of warmth spreading over mv bodv.On this freezing cold Christmas, I had no money for rent, with only 15 dollars left in my pocket. But my heart was brimmed with appreciation when I was unwrapping the gifts with merriment. Instead of previous anxiety and terror, a surge of inner peace came flooding me in waves, as if God had heard my benediction, which fueled me with great hope again.