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1、读后续写练习写作指导阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A little boy, Jordan, was born to a wealthy family and his father John was a businessman. While Jordan was two, his mother died; no one watched over him except the servants in their house. And Jordan barely saw his father, who was too busy
2、. Feeling guilty, John tried to make life comfortable for Jordan. He gave whatever Jordan wanted. And Jordan didnt need to do any housework.As Jordan grew older, he became selfish and ungrateful. He didnt respecter appreciate others work and things given to him. He took them for granted. And he didn
3、t consider whether his actions would hurt those people around him; all he cared about was getting enough satisfaction and fun.One morning, the cook at Johns home served Jordan a sandwich he had carefully made. But Jordan said it was bad and he ordered the cook to make another one immediately. The co
4、ok tried to apologize, but Jordan said sharply, “I need a sandwich - not your apology.That evening, after knowing the incident, John felt disappointed and regretted spoiling （宠坏）Jordan. He realized it was high time to let Jordan respect and appreciate others work and things given to him. Then, he wo
5、rked out a plan.The next day, he told Jordan to bring him a vase as a gift for him and asked Jordan to make the vase with his own hands. Jordan nodded but decided to pay a vas maker to make a vase. Later, he went out to find a vase-making store. After making every effort, he found one, which was far
6、 away from his home.Jordan met an excellent vase maker there an paid him for a vase.When the vase was ready, Jordan took it home and presented it to John. After a close examination, John found the vase was perfectly designed and of high quality. He knew the vase was purchased. But he asked, Son, did
7、 you make this vase yourself?Jordan smiled and replied, Sure!” Then, John complained the vase wasnt good enough. And he just dropped the vase on the floor. Immediately, it broke into pieces.Paragraph 1:Disappointed,Jordanreturnedtothevase-makingstore.Paragraph 2:Considering the vase in the store cou
8、ldn 7 satisfy his dad, Jordan agreed to make a vase h i ms e If.试题分析.人物：Dad (John), Son (Jordan), 【the cook, the vase maker.前文情节：Jordan家境不错，爸爸John因生意很忙，基本上照顾不到他，只能交给 家里的仆人照顾Jordan的饮食起居。Jordan想要什么，John就给什么，非 常宠溺。随着Jordan慢慢长大，他变得自私，不懂得感恩，根本不会尊重 他人，也不懂得感谢他人为他所作的一切。有一天早上，家里的厨师为他精心准备了一份三明治，他说太难吃了， 要厨师马上重
9、新做一份。没等厨师道歉完，他就大声呵斥，说：“我要的不 是你的道歉，我要的是二明治。”那天晚上，爸爸知道了具体的情况后，感 觉是时候给Jordan好好上一课了。他就想出一个计划，让Jordan亲手做一 个花瓶作为礼物送给他。Jordan答应了，但他花钱找了一位手艺很好的花 瓶制作师傅，让他做一个花瓶，然后送给了爸爸。爸爸看了那个花瓶后， 感觉确实做的很好，但故意对Jordan说，这个花瓶做的太差了，然后就把 花瓶摔在了地上，碎了 一地。.主题：“人与社会”“人与自我如何做一个让爸爸John满意的花瓶呢？如何教育儿子Jordan懂得尊重他人, 懂得感恩？1 .续写安排：第 段： Disappoi
10、nted, Jordan returned to the vase-making store.（与前文衔接）回到花瓶店里后，Jordan做了些什么？与店主怎么交流 的？Jordan把新买的花瓶送给爸爸后，爸爸做了些什么？（与第二段开头句衔接）爸爸不满意，只能乖乖地回店里去请求店主帮 忙。店主给了什么建议？第二段： Considering the vase in the store couldn 7 satisfy his dad, Jordan agreed to make a vase himself.自己亲手做花瓶把自己亲手做的花瓶送给爸爸，爸爸有什么反应？（点出主题）之前爸爸的计划是为了
11、达到什么效果？下水作文Paragraph 1:Disappointed, Jordan returned to the vase-making store. He urged the vasemaker to choose a better one! Whats wrong with the vase?” the maker had a puzzle about Jordan. “Into pieces! I need a new one!” Paying twice, he excitedly took the new vase to his dad, John. Once again, i
12、t didnt meet his dads satisfaction. Before he could explain something, it went onto the ground without any mercy. Feeling disappointed, Jordan had to go back to the store, apologized for his disrespect and begged the maker for help. Make one by yourself?” (86 words)Paragraph 2:Considering the vase i
13、n the store couldn satisfy his dad, Jordan agreed to make a vase himself. To create a vase satisfying his dad, Jordan began to swallow his rudeness and learn from the maker with respect and modest. They designed the pattern of the vase and then had a good cooperation. With Jordans great effort, a ma
14、rvelous vase came into being. He couldnt wait to present it to his dad. Hearing what had done to the vase, John felt released instead of guilty. His plan did work! Eventually, Jordan deeply understood the reason why his dad had dropped the previous two vases. (86 words)参考范文Disappointed, Jordan retur
15、ned to the vase-making store. He demanded a remake. Soon afterwards, he took a new vase to his dad hopefully and showed it off as his work proudly. Again, John threw it onto the ground. He said, “Sorry, son, you must try again.Jordan was mad at the vase maker. He returned to the store and asked the
16、vase maker what kind of work could satisfy his father. The vase maker said, “Maybe you should try making one all by yourself.Then, he offered to teach Jordan for free. (84 words)Considering the vase in the store couldn satisfy his dad, Jordan agreed to make a vase himself. Jordan was serious about l
17、earning the craft and kept doing his best. Finally, he approached his father with a wonderful vase made by himself. Unexpectedly, John still didnt appreciate his work. Jordan cried and asked why. Then, John explained the reason why he hadnt appreciated the vases from Jordan. He just wanted to teach Jordan a lesson. He wanted Jordan to learn to respect and appreciate others work. From then on, Jordan was grateful to all helping him. (78 words)