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1、高考英语写作微技能培养The First Week求助信Monday 满分范文晨诵满分优范本感悟作文并背诵Dear Ms Jenkins,（说明写信目的）Tm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.（说明求助内容）In order to gain some social experience and improve my work ability, Im going to take a parttime job during the summer vacation. So interested in a position in a for
2、eigncaptured company am 1 that Ifve already written an application lDttcr and my resume all in English. However, Im afraid that there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in the materials that I prepared. 引入问题（提出请求）Would you be so kind as to currectthe mistakes and improve the form
3、at of the application and the resume for me ? I wo414l时般淤修森俾赫 j自加u could take my request into consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua（2016新课标全国卷I ）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请和个人简历（resume）, 给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式（format）。注意：1 .词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。仿写再借鉴仿照范本中的句式补充范文并背诵Dear Tom,I feel very depr
4、essed now because there is an annoying thing that discourages me. I have no choice but to （写信问你是否能帮我忙）.There is a new classmate who is very fat coming to my class. Many classmates laugh at him just because of his weight, which makes me angry. In my opinion, looking down upon the newcomer is a foolis
5、h behavior, and it makes themselves look like a fool. As a result, the relationship between classmates must be broken. Unluckily, Ihavenoideahowtosolvetheproblem. （你能给我一些建议吗）? （如果你能帮我摆脱困境我将不胜感激）.Yours，Li Hua（2017邯郸模拟）假定你是李华，你班上最近转来一位身材肥胖的新生，很多同学都嘲笑他。这让你感 到非常气愤，但又无计可施。就此请你用英语写封邮件给你的网友Tom求助，内容要点包括：1 .
6、简略介绍该情况；2 .表达你对该事的看法；3 .征求Tom的建议。注意：1 .词数100左右；4 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Yours,Li HuaTuesday题型素材积累素材1苦恼与求助背满分词汇单词difficulty/trouble n.困难/麻烦；confused 的.困惑的；confusing qc.令人困惑的；upset /不安的；worry n. &v.（使）担忧；anxious 力.焦急的；anxiety n.焦虑；confidence n.信心；bother n. & v.困扰；烦扰短语do sb. a favor 帮忙；have trouble/
7、difficulty in/with 做有困难；turn to . forhelp 向求助;be faced with .面对;lose heart 失去信心背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1. I am a middle school student and I am writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me.我是一名中学生。我写信告诉您一个困扰我的问题。2. Im writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.我写信是想问您能否帮助我。3. My name is Li Hu
8、a and Im writing this letter to seek your help.我是李华，我写信想寻求您的帮助。4. Im sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。5. . I have some difficulty in doing .which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只
9、能向您求助。亮点出彩篇中句1. I seem not to be able to fit in well with others here.在这儿似乎我不能与他人融洽相处。2. I dont feel quite accustomed to the life here.我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活。3. I long to learn English well, but I dont know how, which makes me upset.我渴望学好英语，但我不知道怎么学，这使我很烦恼。4. I cant concentrate on my lessons these days, an
10、d I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。5. I often feel left out in this school, and I dont know how it has come about.在这所学校我经常感到受到冷落，我不知道这是怎么回事。6. Facing/Faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。韵味无穷结尾句1. Im eager to
11、 get your timely help./Im eager for your timely help.我渴望得到您及时的帮助。2. I would be very grateful if you could help me ./I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and .如果您能帮助我.我会非常感激。3. rd appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account.如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。4. I would be gratefu
12、l if you could really give me a hand.如果您能帮我，我将十分感激。学写满分句1 .我曾试着减肥，但是毫无效果（in vain）,这使我很苦恼。2 .他似乎不能与他人融洽相处，经常感到受到冷落，这令他的父母很着急。Wednesday满分模板巧用题型微攻略考情分析题型解读写作步骤近几年包括2016年全国卷I 连续考查了求助信，在备考 时，应注重写信格式与传统文 化相结合在求助信中应开门见山，直截 了当地把你遇到的难题或者 困惑告诉对方，并向对方求 助。应注意：（1）向别人征求 意见，态度一定要诚恳，语气 委婉；（2）把握时态：应用一 般现在时表明目前自己存在 的
13、困难，用一般将来时描述自 己得到帮助后的进步第一步：询问对方情况，说明 写信目的第二步：说明困难，请对方帮 忙第三步：表达期盼之情【满分巧模板】DearMy name isMy name is；Im writing to ask whether you could do me a点明身份并直接说明写信的求助目的。说明白己存在的困难、困惑并请求对方的 帮助。言辞一定要礼貌得体。情真意切表达期盼之情。fa v。r.（说明自己身份，提出写信目的）I have had much difficulty/trouble in（交代自己面临的困难）.Besides, I m very upset that（
14、提;I；令自己苦恼的问题）.Whatsmore, I don t know（进一步说明自己的困境）.Would you like beso kind as toso that（请求对方帮助）？ In the meantime/At the same time, I beg you toso that（再次请求对方的帮助）.I d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand （表达得到对方帮助的感激）.I m looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【模板示范文】Dear Pete
15、r,How is everything eoinq? I have been in America for two months, but faced with a lot of difficulties in life and study. Im writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.To beein with, I cant adapt to the western diet. So I feel homesick and lonely. To make matters worse, I still find it difficult
16、 t。follow the native speakers though I have been exposed to English for ten years. Besides, Im afraid to answer questions in class for lack of con行deuce. I wonder how to deal with the problems.1 would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful tips. Looking forward to your early
17、 reply.Yours truly,Li Hua 亲爱的彼得：一切好吗？我已在美国两个月了，但在生活和学习中面临许多困难。我写信询问你是否能帮助我。首先，我吃不惯西餐，因此总觉得孤独想家c更糟糕的是，尽管学英语已经10年了，我仍觉得很难 听懂人们说话。另外，由于缺乏自信我上课不敢回答问题。我想知道如何处理这些问题。如果你能给我一些有用的建议我将不胜感谢。盼望着你早日回复。李华Thursday考场作文研析试考场好题假设你是学生李华，你家乡的梨花节负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。 请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封电子邮件求助。内容包括：1 .求助事由；2 .求助内容；
18、3 .表达感激。注意：1.词数120左右；4 .信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Bob,Sincerely yours,Li Hua（请参考素材1苦恼与求助”，素材9“感恩与道谢”）练考场审题第一步认真审题组织要点体裁话题人称时态要点书信请求帮助第一、二人称一般现在时问候对方+说明写信目的说明求助事由和内容表达感激之情第二步遣词造句设计亮点.当我想付诸实践时我发现我的英语远不令人满意。 锤炼词匚： When I put the idea into practice I found my English satisfying. 高 级句式（only 倒装 句）： my English f
19、ar from satisfying.1 .正如我所知，你精通英语，令我印象深刻。锤炼词,匚：, youwritten English. And that impresses me a lot.高级句式（限制性定语从句）:As far as I know, you have such a good command of written English impresses me a lot.第三步 美化成文 誉写清晰Doq上 2ob ,Im writing os 如 do ma otointhe hope that youw汝 be so bindl/Vh。/? it comes to the
20、Ewha Festival,协me is no dontjinj :thot 注oho it bott0r known Hcwov. o叫on app0aL吗 articlo to0】sat 时y Ing.hometown. for a /on time have ben dosir吗 吊。writew/)m I pa 七he idg jrrho yauZVcc didA jar as I know, you have such a good command 0fwyjttm English qsmpresses mo q Lot, Would you be kind0nouh to ho%
21、my dmjt polish0d at your coni/Monce ?I would bevery gratzjuL 夕g could tphe my /夕Lf&Stinto snsidation .Sincer啊 ijours：Li Hua学写满分句满分句 1： When it comes to Ewha Festival, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown.学写句1：说到中国结(Chinese knot),不可否认它在中国负有盛名。1 曲分句 2： I, for a long tim
22、e, have been desiring to write an appealing article to make it better known. 学写句2：我一直渴望向你介绍我的家乡以使它为你所知。Friday新鲜作文集训假如你是李华，最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了，现在写邮件给外教Miss Wang请求帮助。邮件内容包含:Writing 1请求外教帮助2017 绵阳一模1.吵架的原因；2 .吵架后的心情；3.请求Miss Wang给出解决办法。注意：1 .词数100左右；2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 .邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Miss Wang,Best
23、 wishes!Yours,Li Hua（请参考素材1“苦恼与求助”，素材9“感恩与道谢”，话题一“人际关系”）Writing 2委托好友买礼物送妈妈2017 .湖北重点中学联考假定你是李华，你的美国好友Alice将近期来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写信，告诉她你愿意为她安 排住宿及旅游行程。同时，委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包，你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。注意：1 .词数10。左右；4 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；5 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Alice,Yours sincerely, Li HuaWeekend 循序写作训练从写对句子开始（一）记写作公式常
24、见的系动词：1）匕动词, look, feel, sound taste, smell 等， become, get, turn, grow 等，keep, remain 等。表语由名词、形容词、分词、不定 式、介词短语或从句充当。写作公式1主语十系动词+表语（形容词、名词、分词等）（十状语）（天津卷写作）Living in Tianjin is very agreeable.生活在天津很惬意。 系动词 标 一在语一（安徽卷写作）The following suggestions are of much help.下面的建议很有帮助。 史语系商词介词短语My opinion is that b
25、eing sincere is the most important.我认为真诚最重要。五语一系可词语从句谓语是不及物动词（词组），其后 不接宾语，也不能用于被动语态。常见不及物动词（词组）：appear, exist, happen, last, work. come true 等。谓语是不及物动词（词组），其后 不接宾语，也不能用于被动语态。常见不及物动词（词组）：appear, exist, happen, last, work. come true 等。写作公式2主语+谓语（不及物动词）（+状语）Your attitude towards it really matters.重要的是你
26、对它的态度。Make use of the opportunity, and you will succeed.利用这次机会你终会成功。 祈使句罚-练写作技能I .以往考生典型病句诊断1. Go to English corners is great help.2. I felt happily to receive your letter.3. . Keep confidence and patience, and your English will become well.4. I worked hardly in order to catch up with others.5. . My
27、 friend Dick now studying abroad.6. My home village has taken place great changes in the past few years.II.根据上面句子的正确表达进行一对一再练习1 .大声朗读英语很有益。2 .听到这个消息，我感到难过。3 ,保持活跃而友好，你就会变得更受人欢迎。4 .我们必须努力学习以实现梦想。5 .师生们在新的环境中愉快地生活并努力地工作着。6 .近两年来，我们的学校发生了巨大变化。111 .用“主系表”和“主谓”句式补充下面的求助信，并背诵成文Dear Mike,Im writing to ask
28、you if you could lend me a hand.(我努力学习而且学得很好，主+谓)，but I feel it very hard to get along well with the others. Besides,(我很害羞，主 + 系 + 表)so I dare not express myself and communicate with my teachers. Apart from that, the minute I have a chance to talk with my teacher, (我就变成结巴 (stammer),主 + 系 + 表),which
29、makes me feel ashamed. Worse still, I dont know how to make friends with my classmates, but Im expecting to fit in with them. (我觉得又苦恼又恼火，主+系+表).What can I do?(我将十分感激， 主 + 系 + 表)if you could really offer your help.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 补充练一点用动词的正确形式补全下面的求助信，并背诵成文Dear Miss Green,Im writing this e-ma
30、il to ask you for some advice. As an English song lover, Id like to take part in the English Song Contest (hold) in our city next month. The song Ive decided to sing is Skyfall”. (sing) this song better, I am wondering if you could tell me something about how the song (3)(compose). What*s more important, could you spare some time (listen) to my singing the song and give me some advice? Since you (be) a native English speaker and expert in singing, I sincerely hope you can give me a hand.I would appreciate it if you could send me a reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Li Hua