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1、中考英语写作技巧指导中考英语写作技巧指导 Lets go for it!英语记叙文的写作的方式英语记叙文的写作的方式BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句结论句Supporting sentence 支持句支持句(例子、实事、数据或引文)(例子、实事、数据或引文)topic sentence 主题句主题句记叙文写作方法:记叙文写作方法:采用采用“总分总分总总”的写作的写作方式方式 即先即先概括总述,概括总述,再分述再分述 最后再总述。最后再总述。总述总述分述分述1 分述分述2 分述分述3总述总述写作注意写作注意“四定四定”1.定内容定内容,不折

2、不扣。不折不扣。2.定时态,定时态,时态前后呼应。记叙文、日时态前后呼应。记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时;说明文、通知、记一般用一般过去时;说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时;计划等布告、介绍等用一般现在时;计划等用般将来时。用般将来时。3.定人称,用第一人称亲近自然;用第定人称,用第一人称亲近自然;用第三人称客观真实。三人称客观真实。4.定句型、定词语;应依据内容。应该定句型、定词语;应依据内容。应该先定句型后定词语。先定句型后定词语。写作注意的几个问题写作注意的几个问题:1.尽量使用简单句,如果复合句用不好尽量使用简单句,如果复合句用不好就不要用,文章算不上完美,但很实就不要用,文章算不

3、上完美,但很实用。要牢记用。要牢记“避繁就简避繁就简”原则。当原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。然长句短句交叉使用最好。2.把握要点,避免遗漏,注意发挥适度把握要点,避免遗漏,注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。既不要多写也不要少写。3.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然,行文连贯,注意适当使用连词,然,行文连贯,注意适当使用连词,例如:例如:and,so,or,but,become,Whats more;What worse,not onlybut also,neithernor 等等。等等。4.再有学生语文水平的滑坡,使得英语再有学生语文水平的滑坡,使得英语老师

4、不得不带领学生完成写作内容的老师不得不带领学生完成写作内容的挖掘。挖掘。写作注意的几个问题写作注意的几个问题:选词:选词:普通的叙述文或短文,应普通的叙述文或短文,应该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化词语,避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄词语,避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄玄虚的词,并尽可能挑选积极的动玄虚的词,并尽可能挑选积极的动词。词。写作注意的几个问题写作注意的几个问题:措辞:措辞:能写出树的具体名称能写出树的具体名称an apple tree,就不要使用就不要使用tree;能说能说清具体数字时,就不要使用清具体数字时,就不要使用some;知道是某种专门的活动,就不要使知道是

5、某种专门的活动,就不要使用用do去描述,词意越具体,越能给去描述,词意越具体,越能给读者鲜明的印象。读者鲜明的印象。写作注意的几个问题写作注意的几个问题:你如何写开头你如何写开头1.开头常用词语:开头常用词语:as far as we know 据我们所知据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知众所周知at present 目前目前 first of all 首先首先 To tell the truth 老实说老实说1.结尾常用词语:结尾常用词语:after all 毕竟毕竟at last 最后最后in a word 总而言之总而言之finally,最后最后we hope t

6、hat 我们希望我们希望 In short 简言之简言之clearly 显然显然你如何写结尾你如何写结尾如何添加过度句、连接词如何添加过度句、连接词补充说明补充说明 for example,besides,In addition(此外),此外),Whats worse!Whats more!Worst of all.转折转折 however,yet,but 原因原因 thanks to,because of结果结果 as result of,so,sothat范文范文2:I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you s

7、ome problems we meet in English study.First,some of us arent interested in English.They think studying English is such a boring thing to do.And then Its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us 作文如何添加过度句、连接词作文如何添加过度句、连接词作文如何添加过度句、连接词作文如何添加过度句、连接词dont have enough confi

8、dence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join in the group discussion.Whats more,there are so many new words we hadnt meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone作文如何添加过度句、连接词作文如何添加过度句、连接词answer the questions about them.But

9、the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Please give us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to me soon.Yours Fang Hua信息点与承接词的关系信息点与承接词的关系信息点是珠子,承接词是线,用线信息点是珠子,承接词是线,用线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独

10、看某一方就优雅华贵的项链。单独看某一方就成为一条破绳子,一堆烂珠子。成为一条破绳子,一堆烂珠子。如何写好好人好事的结尾如何写好好人好事的结尾be proud of speak highly of follow ones example come true你如何写结尾你如何写结尾Which is better?1 1 我们很累。我们很累。A We were very tired.B We were really exhausted.2 2 他们在海滩上听音乐。他们在海滩上听音乐。A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed th

11、e music on the beach.Which is better?3 3 我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.4 4 我们应该努力取得好成绩。我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.Which is better?5 5 我不吃垃圾食品。我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food.B I

12、 stay away from junk food.6 6 他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better?8 8 最后,他的狗得救了,他感到很惊讶。最后,他的狗得救了,他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.7 7 我们在海里游泳,很开心。我们在海里游泳,很开心。A We swam in the se

13、a.We were happy.B We had fun swimming in the sea.Writing skills方法一方法一:善用高级词汇善用高级词汇Which is better?2 2 雨下得很大,所以他没赶上校车。雨下得很大,所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily.So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 1 1 我喜欢轻音乐,它可以使我放松。我喜欢轻音乐,它可以使我放松。A I like qu

14、iet music.It can make me relaxed.B I prefer gentle music that can make me relaxed.preferthatWhich is better?3 3 她还小,搬不动这么重的箱子。她还小,搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.4 4 我们必须采取措施来拯救地球,这样才能我们必须采取措施来拯救地球,这样才能过上更好的生活。过上更好的生活。A We must do

15、something to help save the earth.Then we will have a better life.B The more we do to help save our planet,the better life we will have.tootoThe morethe betterWhich is better?5 5 我认为学英语很有趣。我认为学英语很有趣。A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English.6 6 我们应该在英语课上记笔记。我们应

16、该在英语课上记笔记。A We should take notes in English classes.B Taking notes in English classes is necessary.find it toTakingnecessaryWhich is better?7 7 小组合作学习可以帮助你学得更好。小组合作学习可以帮助你学得更好。A Working in groups can help you learn better.B Work in groups,and you will learn better.8 8 我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should p

17、rotect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.Work and方法二方法二:活用多种句型活用多种句型Writing skills健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织

18、写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork牛刀小试牛刀小试如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。简单的句子列出文章的要点。A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people v

19、isit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列列(list)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people w

20、ork.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.(the ending)加加(add)加首尾加首尾,使结构完整。可以采取总分总总分总结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,a lot of people travel.And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Inte

21、rnet.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)方法三方法三:妙用关联词妙用关联词Writing skills1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,how

22、ever,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin

23、with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short关联词关联词(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt g

24、o to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastHow do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,a lot o

25、f people travel.And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)美美(beautify)We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and

26、 here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work

27、.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.美美(beautify)According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.However,a few people have to work.A

28、s the saying goes,“All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify)And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.Proverb(谚语)(谚语)方法四方法四:妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子Writing skillswriting steps审审列列加加连连美美首首尾尾necessaryIf possible加谚语加谚语(Prover

29、b)锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate o

30、n our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as

31、the Romans do.7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.9.All roads lead to Rome.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。覆水难收。覆水难收。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果,一天一个苹果,医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a

32、 will,there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.加例

33、子加例子加例子加例子在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.结尾提出倡议或号召结尾提出倡议或号召As students,we should start from ourselves.Dont wait.Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!

34、How amazing!I cant wait!Save animals!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!Dont hesitate(犹豫犹豫).It will be great fun!技技巧巧1.1.善用高级词汇善用高级词汇2.2.活用多种句型活用多种句型3.3.巧用巧用关联词关联词4.4.妙用引妙用引文和例子文和例子 Dear Mr Know,I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study.First,som

35、e of us arent interested in English.We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing.And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats more,there are so

36、many new words we havent meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone(更不更不用说用说)answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Plea

37、segive us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to me soon.Lets go for it!Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body First,some of us arent interested in English.We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us

38、 dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats more,there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone(更不用说更不用说)answer the questions about them.

39、But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.Lets go for it!123465 Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.Yours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can

40、join the English club to practice English.You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!Your turn t

41、o go for it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.Yours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.You k

42、now,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenYour turn to go for it!123 The Life as a Grade 9

43、 Student How time flies!Now Im in Grade Nine.Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.Now Im as busy as a bee.Theres a lot of homework and exams.The only feeling I have is:The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging!Theres an old saying:He who fails to plan pl

44、ans to fail.I dont want to fail,so I create a plan for the following days.Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it,I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.Ill spend the rest time efficiently.As theres no elevator to success,Ill try my best todo everythi

45、ng step by step!I believe that I can do it!Its your turn!随着人口的增多,人类不仅需要越来越多的地随着人口的增多,人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住,而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森方居住,而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地;新的城市和道路占据了动物的林变成了耕地;新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地;许多动物遭到猎杀栖息地;许多动物遭到猎杀所有所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友,我们有责任去保护他动物是我们人类的朋友,我们有责任去保护他们,而不是伤害或猎杀它们。们,

46、而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于请根据上述内容写一篇不少于8080词的英语短文。词的英语短文。要求:要求:1.1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整;语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整;2.2.提示的内容要全部用上。提示的内容要全部用上。Its your turn!LetsHelpOurFriendsWiththeincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebu

47、iltonanimalshabitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonly

48、toseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Dontyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No”.Soitsourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Dontputitoff!Letstryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!Your turn to go for it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:写作技巧写作技巧审审列列加加连连美美首首尾尾巧用关联词巧用关联词善善用用高高级级

49、词词汇汇活活用用多多种种句句型型necessaryIf possible妙妙用用引引文文和和例例子子Summary仔细检查,认真抄写仔细检查,认真抄写抓住主题,描写细节抓住主题,描写细节开门见山开门见山发表己见,画龙点睛发表己见,画龙点睛收集信息,列出提纲结尾有力结尾有力The writing strategies on composition Practice makes perfect外教外教JoyceJoyce刚到你们学校不久,感觉紧张。请你根据上述情况以刚到你们学校不久,感觉紧张。请你根据上述情况以“How can she be healthyHow can she be health

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