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1、 1 初中英语写作指导 一优秀作文的要求 书写工整美观，分段清晰，行文流畅，紧扣主题，立意新颖，句式丰富，升华自然有高度 二考场里如何生成一篇优秀的作文 1.审题三遍：确定人称时态，及写作需要围绕的主题 2.整体布局 1）列提纲：1）确定文章的中心 2）分段-确定各段的主旨句，3）最后需要升华到的点 2）分段：总分总（三段式）句子 3-8-2、3-7-3 第一段：点题说出文中的要点、核心问题。1）使用谚语 2）主题句法 3）定义法 4）提出问题 第二段：围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。叙（角度、人称、时态必须考虑）现象、理由采用一般现在时 经历故事采用过去时 议：老师性，思考性，启迪性 第三段：结尾
2、对全文的总结和概括。提倡、呼吁、号召 3.草稿：1）一气呵成写初稿 2）修改开头段、主旨句及过渡句 3）修改句式：力争句式多样、长短句结合 4）修改全文的人称、时态及其他拼写和名词复数等简单语病。5）抄写：书写端正美观、分段清晰、间距合理 4.时间分配：读题列提纲 5 分钟，打草稿+修改10-15分钟，抄写5 分钟 三细节 1）如何开篇：技巧一：主旨设问更给力 I think its very important for us to do sports.Why?Because its good for our health and study.I think its very importan
3、t for us to protect environment.Why?Because its good for living.I think its very important for us to learn English.Why?Because its the most-widely used language in the world.技巧二：头文字 D-从 D 开始，从我们到我 Different people have different _,but/and I have/prefer _ 2）如何写正文：句式变化 变形原则 1：表达观点要“自我”In my opinion,we
4、 should pay much more attention on the weak subjects!变形原则 2：两句之间要过渡 2 I left my pen at home.What was worse,the drugstore was closed that day.变形原则 3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型！普通级句型 The environment is bad.比较级句型 The environment is getting much worse than before.The environment is getting worse and worse 最高级句型 I hav
5、e never seen a worse environment.变形原则 4：表达作用多用句式 is a way to 阅读能帮助我放松自己。Reading is a good way to relax myself.看电影能帮助我们学习英语。Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English.变形原则 5：增强情感转感叹 阅读对我们很有益.How beneficial it is for us to read！做运动对学生很重要.How important it is for students to do sports.变形原则 6：事情
6、到感情句型 It makes sb.feel that I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.-It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term.变形原则 7：形容词句型升级：it is one of the most It was an unusual experience in my life.-It was one of the most unusual experiences in my life.变形原则 8：活用 there be 结合定从:M
7、any reasons made me like reading.-There are many reasons why I enjoy reading 词汇变化 变化原则 1：make 更有 feel After doing sports,I feel relaxed.-It makes me feel relaxed to do sports.I made progress in English.I feel proud.-It makes me feel proud to make progress in English.变化原则 2：连词不再用 and 增补 not onlybut a
8、lso,as well as 进阶 what s more/worse,furthermore 转折 while,however 变化原则 3：喜欢不再 like，用 be fond of,enjoy,be crazy about I am fond of reading books.变化原则 4：凡是提出措施咱尽量不用 should！用“suppose”、“had better”，“have no choice but”，“its our duty to”3）如何结尾 1.各种号召-事不宜迟 Dont put it off.2.各种越-多多益善 the+比较级+主谓，the+比较级+主谓 越
9、就越 The better we take care of the environment,the more beautiful the world will be.3.名言警句 学习类 Practice makes perfect.运动类 Rome was not built in a day.环保类 Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.爱好类 Interest is the best teacher.没有？编呗！Once there was a great man said“”.四巧用连接词 3 要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词
10、 1.first of all,to begin with,in my opinion,according to,2.first,at first,then,later,in the end,finally,3.but,yet,however,after all,in fact,while,on the contrary,instead of,4.for example,such as,that is,like,as follows,in other words,and so on 5.whats more,whats worse,on one hand,on the other hand,f
11、or one thing.for another,as well,in addition to 6.in short,in a word,in general,in brief,in all,on the whole 五掌握常用句型 1.固定短语 （more and more,as.as 等）2.句式活一些：1）It is+adj.n.for sb.to do 2）It is saidreportedbelieved that.3）祈使句 4)动名词做主语 5)感叹句 6)从句（宾从、定从、if whenas soon as not.until sincebecause）7)谚语 Just a
12、s a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides 9 类过渡词 类别 1：开头常用短语 Its said that.据说As we all know that.我们都知道Its well known that.众所周知As/So far as I know.据我所知It is clear/obvious that.是显而易见的 类别 2：表“结构顺序”first/firstly 第一 first of all 首先 to begin/start with 首先 in the first place 首先second/secondly 第二 nex
13、t 其次；然后 and then 于是；然后 meanwhile/at the same time 同时 finally/eventually/at last/in the end 最终 类别 3：表“并列补充”also/too/as well 也；同样；而且 both.and.和either.or.要么要么neither.nor.既不也不not only.but also.不但而且besides 除此之外moreover 另外；此外 in addition/additionally 加之；除之外 by the way 顺便；顺便说 whats more 更重要的是；而且；此外 whats w
14、orse 更糟的是 as well as.也；又；和；及 类别 4：表“转折对比”but 但是；而是 however 然而；不过 while 然而 instead 反而 otherwise/or else 否则；不然 on the contrary/in contrast 相反地 in any case/at any rate 无论如何 some.while others.一些人另一些人on one hand.on the other hand.一方面另一方面 类别 5：表“因果关系”because 因为 since 因为；既然 because of 因为 thanks to 多亏了 now
15、that 既然；由于 for this reason 由于这个原因 so 因而；这样；如此 thus 因此 therefore 因此 as a result 结果；因此 so/such.that.如此以至于in order to/so that.为了 类别 6：表“举例说明”like 像；如同 such as 例如；像这样 for example/instance 例如；比如 类别 7：表“特别强调”4 especially 尤其；特别 particularly 特别是 certainly/surely 当然 indeed 确实；的确obviously 显而易见 no doubt/withou
16、t any doubt 毫无疑问 类别 8：表“陈述事实/观点”to be honest/to tell you the truth 说实话 actually/in fact/as a matter of fact 事实上 I think.依我看in my opinion 在我看来 as far as I know 据我所知 Im afraid.我恐怕I hope.我希望 类别 9：表“总结”in a/one word 总而言之；简言之 in general 一般而言；总的来说 in short/brief 简而言之；总之 all in all 总的来说；大体而言 in summary 总之；
17、概括来说 generally speaking 一般来说 by and large 一般来说 to speak frankly 坦白地说 above all 最重要；首先 after all 毕竟；终究 from the above 综上所述 in conclusion 总之，最后 at last 最后 书面表达类型练习 一写人作文 1）外貌：漂亮的 _胖的_ 高的_ 瘦的_ 矮的_ 可爱的_ 健康的_强壮的_ 2）性格：善良的_ 懒的_ 热心的_ 自信的_ 友好的_外向的_ 伶俐的_ 3）句型：他看上去像._ 她的头发又长又黑。_ 她擅长._ 他过去（有）._ 4）万能模板 人物介绍（年龄、
18、外貌、身份、性格等）.is a nine-year-old boy.He is very.and.典型事例（说明性格、品质）He often.人物评价（喜爱、夸赞等）.like him very much.I think he.例文 1：Li Yan,my best friend,is my classmate.She has big eyes.Her long hair is often plained.Sweet smile is often on her face,which makes her more lively.LiYan is very clever.She is good a
19、t her school subjects.She has won the school scholarship twice,I always take her as my model in study.She tells me that we should make good use of time.Li Yan is kind-hearted and is always ready to help others,Any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking her for help.But she doesnt
20、like others to praise her,because she thinks what she does is 5 ordinary.I feel proud to have such a friend.例文 2My English teacher.Ms.Gao，our English teacher，is my favorite person.She is slim and beautiful with long curly hair.She is in her early thirties.She is always full of energy and her lessons
21、 are always well-prepared.All of us like her lessons very much because we can gain much from her lessons.Besides,I admire that she is always friendly and kind so she can make friends easily with us outside the classroom.When we have any difficulties,we all like asking her for help.Ms.Gao is truly a
22、wise teacher.博淋老师中考书面表达训练：name_ 二.叙事作文 1）动词常用的时态：一般过去时 过去进行时 过去完成时 以 work 为例子 _ _ _ 2）常用词汇：表达时间：一天_ 昨天下午_上星期天_ 很久以前_在两点前_ 表达地点：在家_ 在我的学校_ 在农场_ 表达经过：首先_接下来_然后_ 最后_ 表达结果：感到伤心_ 感到高兴_ 感到疲劳_ 3）经典句型：我永远不会忘记那一天。_ 每个人都有一些 难忘的经历，我也是。_ 范文 1：Yesterday morning,I was surprised to hear that my friend Allee had be
23、en hit by a car and was in hospital now.The other day he was going to cross a street.He was very careful and didnt go until he saw the traffic light turn green.But when he got to the middle of the street,he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards him.It was too lat
24、e for Allee to dodge(躲闪).He was hit by the car and thrown a few meters away.He was sent to hospital immediately(立即)and had an operation（手术）.When I went to see him last night,he was out of danger but still looked pale.范文 2：Last Sunday,my mother and I went to Hanzheng Street together.First,we went to
25、the New Century Shopping Center.There were many people.Some were eating.Some were buying clothes.Others were chatting.We had lunch there.After we finished eating lunch,we went to the eighth floor to buy some clothes.There were a lot of attractive clothes and pants.Finally my mother bought a coat and
26、 a pair of shoes for me.And I bought a woolen sweater for her.I felt very happy because I bought new clothes!It was a great day.6 三评论类作文 常用词汇 递进：此外，另外 besides 而且 Whats more 另外，加之，此外 in addition 转折：然而 yet 但是 but 可是，然而，不过 however 尽管，虽然 in spite of 尽管，虽然 although 总结：最后 finally 简而言之 in a word 总之,简而言之 in
27、 short 总的说来 all in all 经典句型 随着.的发展，越来越多的.Along with the development of.,more and more.在过去的几年内，.有着明显增长 In the past few years,there has been a sharp growth in.与.相比，.更.Compared to.,.are more.万能模板 铺垫背景 Nowadays,there is.（现在，有.）引出评论的主题 In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages.(事实上，既有优点，又有缺点)提出
28、自己的观点 I think In my opinion.is good bad helpful for.（我认为，在我看来.是好的坏的有帮助的）列举论据 There are several reasons behind my ideas.First.Second.Finally.（还有以下原因能陈述我的观点。第一，第二，最后）强调自己的观点或发出呼吁 In a word,I believe.Lets.（总之，我相信.让我们.）评论类作文扣空 此外，另外 _ 而且_ 另外，加之，此外_然而_ 但是_可是，然而，不过_尽管，虽然_尽管，虽然_ 最后_ 简而言之_总之_ 总的说来_ 经典句型 随着.
29、的发展，越来越多的._ 在过去的几年内，.有着明显增长_ 与.相比，.更._ 现在，有._ 事实上，既有优点，又有缺点_ 7 我认为，在我看来.是好的坏的有帮助的 _ 还有以下原因能陈述我的观点。第一，第二，最后 _ 总之，我相信.让我们._ 例题：随着科技的发展，网课越来越流行了，请根据提示谈谈网课的利与弊，并谈谈你自己的看法。advantages disadvantages 1.便利只要我们能联网，就可以在任何地方任何时候学习 convenient ,connected to the internet 2.省时节省去学校的时间,可以多做很多事 save time 3.不会的知识点可反复观看
30、 1.学生容易分心 be distracted 2.长时间看电脑对眼睛和脖子有害 be harmful to 结构参考短语和词汇：1.With the fast development of.随着.的快速发展 2.As we all know,every coin has two sides.正如我们所知，凡事都有两面性。3.For one thing,.For another,.一方面，.另一方面.4.On the one hand,.On the other hand,.一方面，.另一方面.5.Besides,Whats more Moreover 此外，而且 6.Last but not
31、 least,.最后不能不提的是，最后但同样重要的是 7.All in all 总之 8.As far as I know As far as I am concerned In my opinion 就我所知，在我看来，以我的观点来看 例文：With the rapid fast development of science and technology,online learning has been popular.online learning has sped up in our country.As long as we have a computer connected to t
32、he internet,we can have the courses anywhere at any time.So its more convenient for learners.We neednt go to a real school so that we can save much time.We can do more other things.If we dont understand some points,we can find the videos and then study them again.(We can find the videos which we don
33、t understand and then study again.)If the learners can not control themselves well,they will not benefit from online learning.8(Learners are easier to be distracted注意力分散的 by other things)Spending too much time on computers is harmful to our eyes and necks.Online learning actually provides convenienc
34、e of learning for us.Online learning is conveniet to our study and life.We should encourage the public to enjoy the advantages of online learning.四介绍场所 常用词汇 位置：在里面_ 在上面_ 在下面_ 在前面_ 面貌：旧的_ 新的_ 脏的_ 整洁的_ 大小：大的_ 小的_ 大的_ 中等的_ 物产：生产 produce 鱼_ 花_ 水果_ 美食：美味的 delicious 甜的 sweet 味道不错 taste good 经典句型.是.的首都省会.i
35、s the capital of.是.的一部分.is a part of.它位于.的西部。It lies is in the west of.它占地.平方千米。It covers an area of.square kilometers.它有.人口。It has a population of.出产许多种.produces many kinds of.我希望有一天去参观.I hope I can visit.one day.万能模板 引出地点 你知道.？它是.的最大的城市。Do you know.?It is the biggest city in.介绍地点 它位于.的南部。它占地面积有.平方
36、公里。It lies in the south of.It covers an area of.square kilometers.总体评价 它既不.也不.It is neither too.nor too.发出邀请 欢迎来到.我确信你会喜欢它的。Welcome to.Im sure youll like it.介绍场所 扣空.是.的首都省会_.是.的一部分_ 9 它位于.的西部。_ 它占地.平方千米。_ 它有.人口。_ .出产许多种._ 我希望有一天去参观._ 你知道.？它是.的最大的城市。_ 它位于.的南部。它占地面积有.平方公里。_ 它既不.也不._ 欢迎来到.我确信你会喜欢它的。_ M
37、y hometown，Changchun Changchun City，my hometown，is the capital of Jilin Province.It lies in northeast China and covers an area of more than 20,000 square kilometers.Although Changchun is a new city with only about 200 years of history，it is colorful in many ways.It has many kinds of delicious foods,
38、such as gongbao chicken and tofu.Whats more,Yangge Dance and Errenzhuan are very popular and beautiful.In addition,the weather here is neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.Im proud of it not only because the environment here is beautiful and clean,but also because it is known for its car
39、s,forests,films and culture.I love her so much that I will try my best to make her more beautiful!Welcome to Changchun,I am sure you will love it.五写景作文 写景作文 常用词汇 描写山水：漂亮的_ 清澈的_ 绿色的_ 大的_ 描写花鸟：甜美的_ 聪明的_ 大树和鲜花_ 开放_ 充满鲜花的味道_ 描写鱼虫：伶俐的_ 可爱的_丑陋的_ 慢慢地爬_ 黑白相间的_安静的_ 经典句型 我最喜欢的.是._ 它看上去._ 公园里有许多._ 它既不太.也不太._ 1
40、 0 它多么漂亮啊！._ 我非常喜欢._ 如果你去.你会玩得非常开心。._ 万能模板 介绍景物-上周我和.去._ 描写景物-有一些.在.里。一些.，其它的._ 评价景物-它多漂亮啊！看到.我真的很开心。_ 中考作文常用句子积累（按题型分类）一、写人叙事类 好句积累 【开头句】1.Today I am glad to introduce a teenager.His name is Cheng Xin.2.Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself.3.There is always something unfor
41、gettable in my life,especially the story between my friend and me.4.My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways.Now let me tell you something about him.5.I visited Hong Kong last summer holiday.Its a beautiful city and I had a wonderful time there.6.This is a photo that is very special to me.7
42、.How time flies!Three years has passed.I will graduate from junior high school.8.I still remember what happened between my best friend Lin Tao and me.【中间句】1.He is a helpful boy who often helps people around him.2.He is very popular in our school because he is polite to everyone.3.As for my dream，I w
43、ant to be a teacher，Ill make friends with my kids.4.Like many other boys，I enjoy doing sports，but maths and science are my favorite.5.My favorite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he tries to let me find my own way,even though his heart breaks in silence wh
44、en I get hurt.6.Though she is busy,she studies hard and gets good grades.7.I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome.8.Although I wasnt willing to do it,I still lent it to him because he was my best friend.9.The next morning,I found a piece of paper.It said,“Never give up,d
45、ear.I am proud of you!”【结尾句】1.I would be very thankful if you could give me the chance.1 1 2.I am sure that I can be a good volunteer at the International Dragon Competition.3.After reading so many books,I get a lot of knowledge and also feel relaxed.4.As a student,I think I should always try my bes
46、t to work for our school.5.This is my best dad.I love him and Im so proud of him.6.I had great fun in my last summer vacation.7.Although I am not the best now，I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me.8.She is great.Lets wish her a better future.9.I am lo
47、oking forward to seeing her/him!10.Because I thought nothing was important than friendship.Whats more,I became very happy after I forgave him.11.How lucky I am to be his daughter!范文精选 I am very grateful to my mom because she has done much for me.I think words cant show my thanks to her.She helped me
48、 in time though she was too tired at night,and I was so thankful at that time.So my eyes were filled with tears.I would never forget it.From my mom,I got not only help but also the deep love.Thank you,my dear mom.Whats more,she is always ready to help others.Everyone likes her because of her kindnes
49、s.In our eyes,she always faces difficulties bravely.No matter how hard the life is,she never gives up.二、事物介绍类 好句积累 【开头句】旅游篇 1.Im glad to hear that youre planning to travel around China during the summer vacation.Id like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.2.You asked me about festivals i
50、n China.Let me introduce some important ones to you.3.Id like to tell you something about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival and how I spent it this year.阅读 1.Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us.2.Of all the suggested books,I have decided to choose Secrets of English Words and