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1、WritingTechnique5例：下面的曲线图是我国例：下面的曲线图是我国20062006年不同月份汽车年不同月份汽车事故分布示意图，请以事故分布示意图，请以“ThenumberofcarThenumberofcaraccidentsin2006”accidentsin2006”为题写一篇文章。要求：为题写一篇文章。要求：1.1.描述不同月份汽车事故分布描述不同月份汽车事故分布(distribution)(distribution)及总趋势。及总趋势。2.2.描述汽车事故的可能原因和对策。描述汽车事故的可能原因和对策。3.3.参考词汇：参考词汇：peakpeak顶点，高峰。词数：顶点，高峰
2、。词数：100100120120图表句式1.Accordingtothegraph引出图表的几种说法：Asisshowninthegraph/diagramlinegraph线图piechart饼图barchart横向的柱状图histogram柱状图2.Asisshowninthechart,thepercentageof2.Asisshowninthechart,thepercentageofcollegestudentsusingcreditcardshasrisencollegestudentsusingcreditcardshasrisenmarkedlyinthepastfewyea
3、rs.markedlyinthepastfewyears.3.duringtheperiodbetween2003and2007,3.duringtheperiodbetween2003and2007,piratedsoftwareusersdeclinedabruptlyfrompiratedsoftwareusersdeclinedabruptlyfrom5,000to3,000.5,000to3,000.whilewhileauthorizedusersauthorizedusersincreasedsharplyfrom4,000tomorethanincreasedsharplyfr
4、om4,000tomorethan10,000.10,000.3.fromthechartwecanseeclearlythatthenumberofInternetsurfersinourcountryhasincreasedfrom26.5millioninJuly2005to45.8millioninJuly2006,andthento59.1millioninJanuary2007.itissaid/reportedthat=itoftenmakestheheadlineofnewspapersStatisticsshow2.theriseandfalloftherateofcarac
5、cidentsinWaltonCityvarieswiththeseasons.表示高高低低上上下下的含义的短语：upsanddowns沉浮ebbandflow潮起潮落盛衰vary也可以用fluctuate代替，fluctuate表示波动上下起伏的变化.3.FromJanuarytoMarchlastyearit3.FromJanuarytoMarchlastyearitincreasedby45%,fromincreasedby45%,from（数据法，除了百（数据法，除了百分数和年份以外，其他所有的数据都忌用阿拉分数和年份以外，其他所有的数据都忌用阿拉伯数字）伯数字）4.andfromJu
6、netoAugusttherewasa4.andfromJunetoAugusttherewasasteepriseof50%steepriseof50%SteepSteep陡峭的陡峭的可用以下单词替换：可用以下单词替换：dramaticdrasticsharpsuddenrapiddramaticdrasticsharpsuddenrapid表示上升的词汇：表示上升的词汇：goupclimbgoupclimbjumpriseincreasejumpriseincrease表示下降的词汇：表示下降的词汇：godownfallplungegodownfallplunge5.However,the
7、rewasasteadydecrease,5.However,therewasasteadydecrease,steadysteady稳定的，平缓的稳定的，平缓的：slightgraduate(slightgraduate(逐逐渐的渐的)slow)slow上升growthriseincreaseraiseascendgrowmountleverupshootupGouphillreachapeakbeontherise下降decreasereductiondeclinelessenleverdownsinkshrinktouchthebottomgodownhillbeonthedecline
8、bottomsummitpeakholdremainmaintainhavethelargestpercentage不稳定fluctuationchangefluctuatevaryriseandfullebbandflow第二部分原因论证6.Analystsfrom6.AnalystsfromSASS(ShanghaiSASS(ShanghaiAcademyofAcademyofSocialScience)believethatatleastthreeSocialScience)believethatatleastthreefactorscontributetothisimprovement
9、.factorscontributetothisimprovement.ThefirstandtheforemostreasonofgreatThefirstandtheforemostreasonofgreatimportanceisthatimportanceisthat7.Atrafficsafetycampaignhasmadeallthe7.Atrafficsafetycampaignhasmadeallthelocalpeopleawareofthelocalpeopleawareofthe8.second,morepeopleareusingbicyclesfor8.second
10、,morepeopleareusingbicyclesfortransportation.transportation.表示越来越多的人：表示越来越多的人：agrowingpopulationagrowingpopulation第三段：结论部分第三段：结论部分,总结和展望总结和展望 9.9.So,ISo,IamconfidentthattherewillbefeweramconfidentthattherewillbefewercaraccidentinWaltoninthefuture.caraccidentinWaltoninthefuture.Morethantwothirdsofthe
11、residentsinMorethantwothirdsoftheresidentsinWaltonCity,therefor.,predictwithfullWaltonCity,therefor.,predictwithfullconfidencethatconfidencethat表示在将来表示在将来:inthenearfuture(:inthenearfuture(在不久的将来在不久的将来)Intheforeseeablefuture(Intheforeseeablefuture(在可预见的将来在可预见的将来).WritingWriting（原因分析类）（原因分析类）写作模式写作模式参
12、考范文参考范文 The Changes in Something1.1.简述某一事物的变化情况简述某一事物的变化情况2.2.说明引起变化的原因说明引起变化的原因3.3.分析其影响或走向分析其影响或走向Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide下一页下一页.Writing WritingBack.Writing Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页写作模式（原因分析类）写作模式（原因分析类）1)As can be seen from the graph/table/diagram,there have been
13、drastic/considerable/unfavorable changes in(议论的主题议论的主题)over the past period from _ to _.2)To be concrete,only in _(year)while/whereas the ratio(s)went up toin _(year).(变化概述变化概述)3)These changes are most disturbing,so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them first.(Para.1)Back
14、.Writing Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页 4)Some changes,such as,result from,but many others have much to do with 5)In the first place,mans excessive exploitation of has done a lasting damage to,only to (原因原因分析分析I)I)6)(进一步说明进一步说明)7)In the second,in order to,man has had to overwork,which in turn
15、 has accelerated (原因原因分析分析II)II)8)In the third,mans blind application of has caused permanent changes in(原因原因分析分析III)III)9)Among these changes are.(进一步说明进一步说明)(Para.2)Back.Writing Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页 10)The list of causes could go on,but they are already enough to indicate that the
16、se changes are producing more and more negative effects on the world.11)These changes not only,but also(分析分析)12)If allowed to run its course,I firmly believe/I am afraid,this trend will certainly bring more harm/threats to our society/life.(结结论句论句)(Para.3)Back.Writing Writing The Changes in Great Na
17、tural Disasters Worldwide 1.简述所给图表中的变化。简述所给图表中的变化。2.说明引起变化的主要原因。说明引起变化的主要原因。3.分析这些变化对全球的影响。分析这些变化对全球的影响。下一页下一页上一页上一页Back 1)As can be seen from the graph,there have been rapid changes in the great natural disasters worldwide over the past period from 1960s to 1990s.2)To be concrete,there were only 16
18、 terrible natural disasters,causing 300,000 deaths in 1960s while the ratios went up respectively to 131 and 1,100,000 in 1990s.3)The changes are disturbing,so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them first.Writing Writing下一页下一页上一页上一页Back 4)Some changes,such as those in eart
19、hquakes and volcanic eruptions,result from the movement of plates along the weaknesses in the earths crust,but many others have much to do with mans activities.5)In the first place,mans mindless and excessive exploitation of natural resources has done a lasting damage to the ecosystem,only to invite
20、 more floods,landslides and mud-rock flows.6)The rare flood to which China was subjected in 1998 is typical of the evil seeds man had sowed for himself.7)In the second,in order to feed their more and larger.Writing Writing上一页上一页下一页下一页Backfamilies,people from all over the world have had to overwork t
21、heir farming land as well as their grassland,which in turn has accelerated the desertification of the land on which they have been relying for existence.8)In the third,mans blind application of scientific findings has caused unfavorable and permanent changes in the global living environment.9)Among
22、these changes are the depletion of ozone layer,the worsening of greenhouse effect,the recurrence of hurricanes and the extinction of more species.Writing Writing上一页上一页下一页下一页Back 10)The list of causes could go on,but they are already enough to indicate that these changes are producing more and more n
23、egative effects on the world.11)They have not only made it impossible for the natural systems to recover their balance but also made it harder for man to ensure his better survival.12)If allowed to run its course,I am afraid,this trend will certainly bring more serious threats to all the living thin
24、gs on the Earth,mankind included.VI.VI.Writing Writing上一页上一页THE ENDTHE END练习Diretions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTravelingAbroad.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:题目：国外旅游1。近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游2。出现这种现象的原因3。这种现象可能产生的影响表格：1995200020051万人近4万12万以上范文
25、Fromthetable,wecanseethatinthepast10years,thenumberofpeopleinagivencitywhohavegonetravelingabroadhasincreasedconsiderably.Especiallyintherecent5years,thefigurehasbeenmorethantripled,surgingfrom40,000to120,000.Thereareseveralreasonsforthechange.Firstly,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorepeoplebec
26、omebetteroff.Andtheirabilitytofinancetheirtripabroadisgrowing.Secondly,tourismhasgreatlydevelopedoverthedecade.Travelagenciesoffernotonlydomesticpackagesbutalsotravelspecialsabroad.Inaddition,individualstodayareexpectedandencouragedtogooutsidetowidentheirhorizonandtofacetherealworldofglobalization.I
27、nthiswaytheyhopetokeepthemselvesinformedofwhatisgoingonaroundtheworld.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabroad,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatitbringswin-wineffectsonpeopleslife.Ontheonehand,tripsabroadmaywidentheirhorizons.Inotherwords,peoplehavemoreopportunitiestotouchvariousfields,andlearnsomethingnew.Ontheotherhand,touringdoesprovidechancesofpostsorbusiness.Tosumup,thereislittledoubtthatfurtherattentionwillbepaidtothisissue.国外旅游国外旅游者数量的快速增加可能最终会导致当地旅游业的衰败。Thefastriseinnumberofforeigntouristsmayeventuallyleadtothedeclineoflocaltourism.