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1、阅卷老师的评分标准阅卷老师的评分标准 切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖 用词不重复用词不重复 句式变化多句式变化多杜绝中国式的英文杜绝中国式的英文 文章当中的闪光点文章当中的闪光点 卷面的整洁，正确的修改形式卷面的整洁，正确的修改形式阅卷老师的评分标准阅卷老师的评分标准一、切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆一、切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆 盖。盖。What would happen if there were no power?It pays to be honest A letter in reply to a friend Schedule for t
2、he day 二、句式变化多二、句式变化多 (Expressions )v 句子的多样性（简单句，复合句，及省略句子的多样性（简单句，复合句，及省略 句、倒装句句、倒装句 )例例:在简单句当中运用几种结构在简单句当中运用几种结构 :主语主语+谓语谓语+宾语宾语 主语主语+谓语谓语+双宾语（直接宾语，间接宾语）双宾语（直接宾语，间接宾语）主语主语+谓语谓语+宾补宾补 注意运用注意运用There be 的句型的句型One car come,one car go,two car bang bang,one car die.尽量多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语，尽量多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语，用
3、被动代替主动用被动代替主动,丰富文章当中的句式变化。丰富文章当中的句式变化。例：例：He is very interested in pop music.He shows great interests in pop music.Pop music is what he is interested in.Great interests has been shown by him in pop music.六六 大大 从从 句句 的的 运运 用用:宾语从句宾语从句 定语从句定语从句 状语从句状语从句 主语从句主语从句 表语从句表语从句 同位语从句同位语从句 v As far as I am co
4、ncerned I agree with the point that-v It goes without saying that-v As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that-三三、用词不重复、用词不重复 必须要注意写作的具体元素及，用词必须要注意写作的具体元素及，用词切记多余重复切记多余重复(redundancy)一个词一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。同的词来表达。尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的 用用 法法:for example/for instanc
5、e/as an illustration./A case in point is that good/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprising nice/incredible/fabulous/incredible interviewee/job applicant/job hunter/job seeker/the people who are going to find a job.用句子和词组来代替一个词用句子和词组来代替一个词v in the first place,in the second place v There are many people
6、who hold/argue/maintain that-v It goes without saying that-v As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that-四、文章当中的闪光点四、文章当中的闪光点 在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用，增加用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用，增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章中最多不能超过三次，引用的谚文章中最多不能超过三次，引用的谚语也不能太偏。语也不能太偏。Each coin has two sides.A
7、 good beginning is half done.Where there is a will there is a way.“God helps those that help themselves”A little learning is a very dangerous thing.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.五、杜绝中国式的英文 As a proverb says:“America and China not enough.”I saw a breadcar kiss a walkman in the man-line.Lef
8、t see see,right see see.The driver is horse horse tiger tiger.One stop,two see,three across.I will do an honest man.No money,no talk.Dr.Kongs husband MiaoYou no see me,you no go.I no see you,I no go.No see no go.Writing ModelsWriting Models Nowadays/at present,with the development of human civilizat
9、ion,as well as the significant improvement of the science of technology,and due to the rapid changes in our social lives,more and more people are concerning about whether文章主题，As a result,the topic of 把主题改写为被动，is increasingly becoming the most popular controversy recently,which raises many issues in
10、the society.That reminds me of an old Chinese saying which goes:“Each coin has two sides.”Different people hold different kinds of opinions toward it.As a result,the attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person.切题与审题切题与审题四级考试当中对时间和篇幅都有严格的限制，因为考场四级考试当中对时间和篇幅都有严格的限制，因为考场上的气氛比较紧张，作文又是考试的最后一项，
11、所以考上的气氛比较紧张，作文又是考试的最后一项，所以考生一定要注意是在是否你的作文里题目的每一个选项都生一定要注意是在是否你的作文里题目的每一个选项都进行了覆盖，不要漏掉了任何一个段落标题。进行了覆盖，不要漏掉了任何一个段落标题。建议考生在读完题目之后，快速确立自己的观点，把他建议考生在读完题目之后，快速确立自己的观点，把他写在草稿上，或在胸中打一个腹稿，由于试题当中一般写在草稿上，或在胸中打一个腹稿，由于试题当中一般都给出了中文线索，你所列举的理由和例子一定要与他都给出了中文线索，你所列举的理由和例子一定要与他们相一致，千万不要跑题们相一致，千万不要跑题在图表作文当中，不要怕耽误时间，一定要
12、看清并且吃在图表作文当中，不要怕耽误时间，一定要看清并且吃透图表的意思，不要匆忙动笔，避免跑题。注意看清楚透图表的意思，不要匆忙动笔，避免跑题。注意看清楚图表当中的提示和说明。图表当中的提示和说明。考生在修改时的注意事项考生在修改时的注意事项语法，全篇时态是否一致，主谓是否一语法，全篇时态是否一致，主谓是否一致致是否把所有的标题都已经覆盖。是否把所有的标题都已经覆盖。拼写，词组搭配，大小写。拼写，词组搭配，大小写。检查一下句中的句式是否有变化，用词检查一下句中的句式是否有变化，用词是否重复是否重复 在四级考试当中用词的注意现象在四级考试当中用词的注意现象 必须要注意写作的具体元素既，用词切记不
13、要重复必须要注意写作的具体元素既，用词切记不要重复(redundancy)既一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。既一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法:例：例：for example/for instance/as an illustration./A case in point is that good/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprising/nice incredible/fabulous/incredible interviewee/job hunter/jo
14、b seeker/the people who are going to find a job.Job applicant用句子和词组来代替一个词用法用句子和词组来代替一个词用法v in the first place,in the second place,v There are many people who hold/argue/maintain/that-v As far as I am concerned I agree with the opinion that-v I am in favor of the opinion that-v It goes without saying
15、 that-v As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that-v from my point of view,In the opinion of mine,在四级考试当中句式的运用（在四级考试当中句式的运用（Expressions)v 注意句子的多样性：注意句子的多样性：（简单句，并列句，复合句，省略，六大从句，非谓语结构（简单句，并列句，复合句，省略，六大从句，非谓语结构）例例:在简单句当中运用五种结构在简单句当中运用五种结构:主语主语+谓语谓语 Mr Song is reading 主语主语+谓语谓语+宾语宾语 Mr Song is
16、reading an English book.主语主语+谓语谓语+双宾语（直接宾语，间接宾语）双宾语（直接宾语，间接宾语）Mr song is teaching us English.主语主语+谓语谓语+宾补宾补 Mr Song is teaching us to pass Cet-4.v 注意运用注意运用There be 的句型的句型作文用词当中即不能太浅，太口语化，也不能用怪词作文用词当中即不能太浅，太口语化，也不能用怪词偏词，即太多的专有名词。偏词，即太多的专有名词。例：例：He is very interested in pop music.He shows great intere
17、sts in pop music He expresses the great enthusiasm in pop music.尽量在多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语，用尽量在多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语，用 被动代替主动。丰富文章当中的句式变化。被动代替主动。丰富文章当中的句式变化。Pop music is what he is interested in.Great interests has been shown by him in pop music.高分作文的表达高分作文的表达例例1：John is good at writing in English.Writing in En
18、glish is what John is good at.例例2：It is very important to learn English.To learn English is very important English is of great importance.Great importance should be attached to English.Learning English is very essential.Learning English should be paid much attention.More and more high school student
19、s have the chance to go to university.More and more high school students have the opportunity to attend the university.More and more high school graduates have the opportunity to receive/participate higher education More and more high school graduates have access to higher education.Higher education
20、 becomes accessible to high school graduates.四级作文当中谚语的运用四级作文当中谚语的运用在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用，增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引龙点睛的作用，增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章中最多不能超过三次，引用的谚语不能太偏。用在文章中最多不能超过三次，引用的谚语不能太偏。As a popular saying goes that .As is known to all,“.”As a proverb says,“.”As a popular saying
21、 goes,“.”There is a famous old saying which goes“”That reminds me of an old famous saying which goes,“.”As a popular saying goes,“.”each coin has two sides.一一个个事事情情有有两两个个方面方面 A good beginning is half done 好好的的开开始始是成功的一半。是成功的一半。Knowledge is power 知识就是力量知识就是力量where there is a will there is a way。有有志者事
22、竟成志者事竟成。As a proverb says:opportunity knocks at the door only once 机不可失，失不再来。机不可失，失不再来。As a popular saying goes,“A man is known by the company he keeps.”物物以以类类聚，人以群分聚，人以群分As a popular saying goes,“God helps those that help themselves”上上帝帝帮帮助助那那些些自自救的人。救的人。Early to bed,and early to rise,makes a man h
23、ealthy,wealthy and wise.实实际际的的意意思思是是我我们们应应该该发发奋图强，只争朝夕。奋图强，只争朝夕。What can be done today never put off until tomorrow.今今天天做做的的事事情情应应该该今今天天完完成成，我我们们必必须须只争朝夕。只争朝夕。As is known to all,“no pains,no gains”没没有有耕耕耘耘，就没有收获就没有收获Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。Its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。
24、活到老，学到老。To open a book is always beneficial 意意思思是是我我们们应应该该不断的看书、学习不断的看书、学习/开卷有益。开卷有益。Time and tide wait for no man 时不待我或时不我待时不待我或时不我待A little learning is a dangerous thing一一知知半半解解是是非非常常危险的事危险的事(常常用于图表作文当中常常用于图表作文当中)。More haste,less speed 欲速而不达。说明我们做什么事情都应该循序渐进。欲速而不达。说明我们做什么事情都应该循序渐进。Seeing is believ
25、ing.眼见为实。眼见为实。Well-begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。好的开始是成功的一半。A good beginning is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。好的开始是成功的一半。Honesty is the best policy.诚实是最好的准则。诚实是最好的准则。Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。事实胜于雄辩。The shortest answer is doing.最好的回答就是去做。最好的回答就是去做。Nothing is impossible to a willing heart 心之所愿，无事
26、不成。心之所愿，无事不成。Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者，事尽成。有志者，事尽成。Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。知识就是力量。No pains no gains,pain past is pleasure 不经风雨，不见彩虹。不经风雨，不见彩虹。When in Rome,do as Romens do.入乡随俗。入乡随俗。作文当中的常用的一些套话作文当中的常用的一些套话Broaden my vision/expand my vision 扩展我的视野扩展我的视野 Enlarge my scope of knowledge
27、扩充我的知识扩充我的知识 Purify my soul 净化我的心灵净化我的心灵图表作文的命题形式图表作文的命题形式图表作文的常考题目类型有：图表作文的常考题目类型有：1)用正确的语言分析描述图表的变化用正确的语言分析描述图表的变化2)分析变化的原因分析变化的原因3)你的观点，以及应该采取的措施你的观点，以及应该采取的措施图表作文的注意事项：图表作文的注意事项：图表作文一定要审清图表的对象，看清楚变图表作文一定要审清图表的对象，看清楚变 对象是什么。对象是什么。例题例题 10 8 6 4 2 Jan Mar Feb April May JuneThe graph below shows the
28、 monthly profit of American Auto Co.in the car sales industry for the year(between Jan 1999 and Jun.1999)，write a report to an university teacher to explain the situation given below)Numbers：Profit in million dollars图表常见表示变化的线段图表常见表示变化的线段表示图表变化的句型有表示图表变化的句型有表示上升的句型：一般现在时态表示上升的句型：一般现在时态It rises/sligh
29、tly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/dramatically.It increases/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/sharply.It goes up slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/sharply.There is a slight steady/rapid/significant/dramatical/rise.There is a slow/steady/rapid/significant/increase/.在描述图表当中（过去时）的运用在描述图表当中（过去时
30、）的运用It rose/slightly/steadily/rapidly/significantly.It increased/slowly/steadily/rapidly/dramatically.There was a slight steady/rapid/significant /dramatical/rise.There was a slow/steady/rapid/significant/increase.表示下降的描述表示下降的描述 (一般现在时态）一般现在时态）It drops/slightly/dramatically significantly/rapidly/It
31、goes down/slightly/rapidly/significantly/dramaticallyIt falls/slightly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/dramaticallyIt decreases/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/It declines/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/v There is a slight/slow/rapid/significant/dropv There is a slight/slow/rapid/signifi
32、cant/fallv There is a slight/slow/rapid/significant/decreasevThere is a slight/slow/rapid/decline 表示下降的描述表示下降的描述(一般过去时态）一般过去时态）v It dropped/slightly/dramatically v It fell/slightly steadily/rapidly/significantlyv It decreased/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/v It declined/slowly/steadily/rapidl
33、y/significantly/v There was a slight steady/rapid/dramatical/dropv There was a slow/steady/rapid/significant/decreasev There was a slow/steady/rapid/significant/decline图表当中表示不变和波动的描述图表当中表示不变和波动的描述It stays at the same placeIt remains stable/unchangedIt fluctuates slowlyThere is a slow/slight/dramatic
34、al/fluctuationThere was a slow fluctuation(过）过）in the number of-It fluctuated slightly/slowly/sharply/unexpectedly The same is the case with the former in June and July a steady rise followed a slow fluctuation followed a significant rise followed a rapid decrease come after a slight increase follow
35、ed a dramatical rise came 表示图表当中时间的表达表示图表当中时间的表达从从-到哪一年到哪一年:from-to between-and-in the period of-and-in terms of-in the case of-From June to July between June and/to JulyIn the period of June and JulyIn terms of June and JulyIn the case of June and July表示“大约、差不多”的习语just about/over approximately/prob
36、ably nearly/almost/hardly/scarcelyThe same as the former/latterIt does not make any difference from to-There are not much difference between-and-注意描述当中插入语的运用注意描述当中插入语的运用It goes without saying that-It is obvious that-To our surprise，To our relief，It is so strange that-It is very interesting to note d
37、own that-We are very happy to see that-It is worth noticing that-图表作文的一些模式图表作文的一些模式开头的一些模式：开头的一些模式：As can be seen from the graph/figures/chart/statistics/given above/below,It is a graph of 把题目把题目抄上去，抄的恰倒好处抄上去，抄的恰倒好处注意进行适当改写。注意进行适当改写。图表作文当中的一些模式图表作文当中的一些模式 That reminds me of an old famous saying whic
38、h goes“a little learning is a dangerous thing.”It would be imperative for us to investigate it intensively.From my point of view,I strongly argue that the more we understand the figures/graph,the better we can manage to improve ourselves to solve the related problems.With the development of human ci
39、vilization and science and technology,As long as we try to be persistent,I am confident of the fact that a bright future is awaiting us.we are working on it to get ourselves well-prepared to face up to all kinds of challenges in the society.(108 words)I am firmly in favor of the opinion that the inf
40、ormation does not give us reasons for this moving trend,therefore,It would be not interesting but worthwhile for us to go into it intensively.From my point of view,I strongly argue that the significant growth/change in terms of 图图 表表 主主 题题 can be attributed to the following factors,including:-或者用或者用
41、such as,或或 a case in point is that-如何开头如何开头：As can be seen from the graph given below,It is the graph of the profit of An Automobile Co in the car sales industry in the United States from the year between Jan and June 1999.It can be clearly seen that 对图表的变化进对图表的变化进行描述注意语言不要重复行描述注意语言不要重复,动词动词+副词和副词和t
42、here be结构的互换。结构的互换。2002.6 For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:Student Use of Computer.You should write at least 120 words,and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:1.上图所示为上图所示为1990年、年、1995年、年、2000年某大学生使用计算机年某大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化：的情况
43、，请描述其变化：2.请说明发生这些变化的原因请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）：社会发展等方面加以说明）：3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。20161814 2 4 6 81012199019952000Average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week范文：范文：As can be seen from the graph/table/chart given above.It is th
44、e chart of Average number of hours a student spending on the computer every week from 1990 to 2000,the average hour a student spent on computer was about two hours per week in 1990,it is easy to see that compared with the former,the number of hours rose steadily to nearly four hours every week in 19
45、95.However,It is worth noticing that there was a significant increase in the number of hours in 2000 by students per week.That reminds me of an old famous saying which goes“a little learning is a dangerous thing.”It would be imperative for us to investigate it intensively.From my point of view,I str
46、ongly argue that the more we understand the figures/graph,the better we can manage to improve ourselves to solve the related problems.As far as I know,this significant growth in the use of computers by students from year 1990 to 2000 can be attributed to several factors given below including compute
47、r widespread usage,lower prices,and social development.With the development of human civilization and science and technology,more and more people are likely to use computers as their ways of communication and entertainment including sending E-mail and playing computer games.As a proverb says:“each c
48、oin has two sides.”on the other hand,the use of computer can also lead to some problems,a case in point is that some students spend day and night on the internet without going to school or proper rest.It will not only interfere with our health but also our study.I am in favor of the opinion that we
49、should take the matter objectively,that is to say,with a matter of-fact attitude and make good use of computers,trying to let it benefit us rather than harm on us.The bar chart below shows the number of overseas students enrolled in the courses at Chinese Colleges and Universities from 1980 to 2000.1、上图所示为、上图所示为1980年、年、1990年、年、2000年外国年外国 留学生在华学习人数，请描述其变化。留学生在华学习人数，请描述其变化。2、请说明这些变化的原因（从改革开放，、请说明这些变化的原因（从改革开放，文化背景、名胜古迹等方面加以说明）文化背景、名胜古迹等方面加以说明）198019902000Oversea students studying in china(numbers in millions)8 2 4 610