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1、INTEGRATED TASK本课内容本课内容NOTE-TAKINGNOTE-TAKING12SUMMARIZING SYNTHESIZINGSYNTHESIZING3第1页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK1.NOTE-TAKING:“双栏式”笔记法：2-column way T:R:L:R:123L:123第2页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK讲义第12页，第3题 演示 先画好“双栏”注意阅读信息笔记字数不超过15字 读阅读每一段的 Main point 和 detail/reason第3页/共59页PRIVATE SPACE TRAVELT：privatized space
2、flight industry R:benefits L:第4页/共59页PRIVATE SPACE TRAVEL阅读笔记：R1.Cheaper competition2.discoveries.More scientists sponsors3.Expenses customers,not publicL123第5页/共59页PRIVATE SPACE TRAVEL听力笔记R:123L:1 details:traffic control system safety/tested2 detail:commercial projects,no scientific value3 detail:s
3、pace stations/space airports第6页/共59页SCHOOL UNIFORM T：school uniform R:stress L:第7页/共59页SCHOOL UNIFORM阅读笔记：R1.affordable financial stress2.Discomfort&self-consciousness emotional stress 3.Pick on social stress L123第8页/共59页School uniform听力笔记R:123L:1 costly details:certain select stores after-school cl
4、othes self-conscious detail:some can present themselves in their own ways3 details:stage of life music/backpack 第9页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK2.SUMMARIZINGNOTE-TAKINGNOTE-TAKING12SUMMARIZING SYNTHESIZINGSYNTHESIZING3第10页/共59页INTEGRATED TASKSUMMARIZING 1.eliminate unnecessary information 2.Combine into a se
5、ntence.因果关系第11页/共59页INTEGRATED TASKBecauseSince,As a result ofAnd thus/therefore,;thus/thereforeContribute toLead toTriggerExplainserveBring aboutIfBy doing,When第12页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK展示 SUMMARIZING 通过题目 SCHOOL UNIFORM PRIVATE SPACE TRAVEL第13页/共59页SCHOOL UNIFORM阅读笔记：R1.affordable financial stress2.
6、Discomfort&self-consciousness emotional stress 3.Pick on social stress L123第14页/共59页School uniform听力笔记R:123L:1 costly details:only available from certain select stores after-school clothes when they go to meet friends2 self-conscious detail:some can present themselves in their own ways3 details:stag
7、e of life music/backpack 第15页/共59页School uniform展示 SUMMARIZING 通过 例题 SCHOOL UNIFORM 共6句话第16页/共59页SCHOOL UNIFORM1.If all students wear the same style of uniform,clothing cost will be less.阅读第1 School uniform is expensive/pricy,and students who wear uniform will buy trendy after-school clothes.听力第1第17
8、页/共59页SCHOOL UNIFORM2.With everyone wearing the same uniform,students will not be concerned about whether they are wearing the fashionably-correct clothes.阅读第2 Being made to wear a school uniform makes many students feel more self-conscious,because they can present themselves in a way of making them
9、 comfortable.听力第2第18页/共59页SCHOOL UNIFORM3.Unity in clothing can eliminate discrimination,so teasing and bullying of some students by others will be significantly reduced.阅读第3 It is impossible to eliminate teasing and bullying because they are in that particular stage,also they can pick on other thin
10、gs like music and backpacks.听力第3第19页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK3.SYNTHESIZINGNOTE-TAKINGNOTE-TAKING12SUMMARIZING SYNTHESIZINGSYNTHESIZING3第20页/共59页INTEGRATED TASKSYNTHESIZING 把把 SUMMARIZING的的6句话整理成句话整理成3大段，大段，形成形成 BODY PARTConnect the information from both sources第21页/共59页SYNTHESIZINGAccording to the lectu
11、re,_;this contradicts the points in the reading that_.The professor argues that_.This is different from the reading,which states that_.The teacher says that_.However,this is not what the reading states;it says that_.第22页/共59页SYNTHESIZINGContrary to the belief in the passage that_,the professor asser
12、ts that_.The author of the passage points out that_,while the lecture notes that_.According to the reading,_.The passages point is different from the professor,which states that_.第23页/共59页SYNTHESIZING展示 SYNTHESIZING 通过例题：PRIVATE SPACE FLIGHT第24页/共59页PRIVATE SPACE TRAVEL阅读笔记：R1.Cheaper competition2.d
13、iscoveries.More scientists sponsors3.Expenses customers,not publicL123第25页/共59页PRIVATE SPACE TRAVEL听力笔记R:123L:1 details:traffic control system safety/tested2 detail:commercial projects,no scientific value3 detail:space stations/space airports第26页/共59页SYNTHESIZING1.According to the lecture,the costs
14、of creating and running traffic control system,and of testing new space ship will make space flight expensive.This contradicts the points made in the reading that competition in the private space flight industry quickly reduce costs.第27页/共59页SYNTHESIZING2.The professor asserts that private space tra
15、vel is likely to prevent or even delay scientific innovations by luring top scientists away from serious researches to commercial projects.Contrary to what the belief in the passage that privatization of space flight will speed up by increasing the number of scientists working in the area of spacefl
16、ight.第28页/共59页SYNTHESIZING3.The lecture notes that the taxpaying public will end up subsidizing space station,and so on,because the private invest(customers)can not cover the cost.While the author of the passage points out that the costs paid by customers of private space flight industry will signif
17、icantly reduce the financial burden on public.第29页/共59页INTEGRATED TASKNOTE-TAKINGNOTE-TAKING12SUMMARIZING SYNTHESIZINGSYNTHESIZING3第30页/共59页例题：CHARITABLE GIVINGT：charitable giving R:decline L:第31页/共59页CHARITABLE GIVING阅读笔记：R1.Less need government 2.Managers huge salaries3.Fraudulent solicitations/ch
18、arity fraudL123第32页/共59页CHARITABLE GIVING听力笔记R:123L:1 details:elderly&retired 2 detail:reform/resign,regain confidence3 detail:careful,(1)refuse via telephone (2)receive proof/docmentation.第33页/共59页CHARITABLE GIVING2-min drill写出BODY PART 的第一段：2个句子：阅读一句话+听力一句话第34页/共59页CHARITABLE GIVING1.The teacher s
19、ays that charitable giving will rise in the future,as the growing costs of public services from increasing elderly and retired people create need for private funding.This is not what the reading states,it is said that charitable giving will decline substantially,because government can cover most of
20、charity.第35页/共59页CHARITABLE GIVING2.The talk says that the mismanagement in charities has been reformed,by forcing the corrupted managers to resign,which gives donors more confidence.In the reading,however,it is argued that disclosures of mismanagement of the charity will lead to a permanent decline
21、 in charitable giving.第36页/共59页CHARITABLE GIVING3.According to the lecture,people are learning how to avoid fraudulent giving in charities by receiving documents before donation,by turning down donation via telephone.The professors point is different from the reading.The reading states that people a
22、re unwilling to donate due to the charity fraud.第37页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK科学性文章 READING:设想 LISTENING 反 1 事实，解释 驳：解释 2 事实，解释 3事实，解释 第38页/共59页Easter Island T:Easter Island culture decline R:invasion L:internal causes R:1 No trees 2 Statues stopped3 Religion changedL:1 build statues need tree logs to tra
23、nsport2.No fish,hard life,no logs to transport3.Lost confidence in old gods第39页/共59页Easter Island p16T:Easter Island culture decline R:invasion L:internal causes R:1 No trees 2 Statues stopped3 Religion changedL:1.2.3.第40页/共59页Easter Island1.The teacher says that the deforestation of Easter Island i
24、s the most plausibly explained by over logging by the native population who use the logs to transport the giant statues.This is not what the reading states,it is said that Easter Island was deforested by invaders who were unconcerned about natural resources.第41页/共59页Easter Island3.According to the l
25、ecture,It is likely that Easter Islanders adopted a new religion because they lost faith in their old gods.The professors point is different from the reading,adopting a new religion called Birdman Worship of Easter Island was introduced by a foreign invasion.第42页/共59页Easter Island2.The talk says tha
26、t the making of giant statues stopped because economic difficulties(the lack of fish to eat)left islanders without any energy to make them,and also it because there were no logs to transport them.In the reading,however,it is argued that this traditional culture practice of Easter Island was destruct
27、ed by invasion.第43页/共59页开头段 划去BODY PART只看开头段 模板第44页/共59页Modular template开头段：In the lecture,the professor made several points about_.The professor argues that_.However,the reading contends that_.The lecture contradicts the reading regarding several points 第45页/共59页Firstly,the lecturer points out that
28、_ which differs from the reading in that the reading states_.The professor proves his idea with an example/a reason that _.The point made by the professor casts doubt on the reading.第46页/共59页Secondly,contrary to the belief in the passage that_,the professor claims that _ by showing that_.The point u
29、ndermines the claim made in the reading.第47页/共59页Finally,the professor states that _.This is contrary to the claim that _.Also the professor exemplifies his/her opinion by showing that_.This directly challenges what the reading passage indicates.In conclusion,the points made in the lecture contrast
30、with the reading.第48页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK1.NOTE-TAKING:“双栏式”笔记法：2-column way T:R:L:R:123L:123第49页/共59页ALTRUISMOG p282R:1.donors gain nothing2.Sentinel meerkats food in guarding3.sen.meer.In danger from predatorsL:1.Donors gain appreciation from society2.sen.Meer.Eat b4 other meers.3.sen.The 1st to e
31、scape from predators.第50页/共59页 ALTRUISM 的范文Introduction ParagraphThe topic for the lecture and the reading passage is _.The professor argues that_ _while the reading contends that_ _ _ _.The lecture contradicts the reading regarding several points.altruismpeople and animals actually benefit from so-
32、called altruism actsaltruism is a kind of unselfish behavior which is quite common among people and animals第51页/共59页Body Paragraph 1Firstly,the lecturer points out that_ which differs from the reading in that the reading states_.In other words,_.The point made by the professor casts doubt on the rea
33、ding.sentinel meerkats actually eat before the other meerkatsthey go without food to stand guardsentinel meerkats have a full stomach as they work according to recent studies第52页/共59页Body Paragraph 2Secondly,contrary to the belief in the passage that _ _,the professor claims that _ _ _ by showing th
34、at _ _.The point undermines the claim made in the reading.sentinel meerkats place themselves in danger from predators the alarm sentinels give off can draw away the attention from the predators and the sentinel meerkats stand near the burrow they are actually the first to escape 第53页/共59页Body Paragr
35、aph 3Finally,the professor states that_ _ _.This is contrary to the claim in the passage that _ _.Also the professor illustrates his opinion by showing that _ _.This directly contradicts what the reading passage indicates.human organ donors receive appreciation and approval from the rest of societyt
36、he donors gain nothing from their action such non-material rewards are more important than materialistic gains第54页/共59页Concluding ParagraphIn conclusion,the points made in the lecture challenge the readings claim.第55页/共59页INTEGRATED TASK1.NOTE-TAKING:“双栏式”笔记法：2-column way T:R:L:R:123L:123第56页/共59页Sc
37、hool-year vacation T:school-year vacation R:valuable L:R:1.New places and culture meeting people 2.Benefits continue enthusiasm 3.Good for teachers lesson planL:1.Play catch-up catch up missed learning 2.Enthusiasm downside hard to fit back3.Interfere with less time for other ss.第57页/共59页External v.
38、s.internal hiring T:hiring an outsider R:advantage L:1.New perspective diversity of ideas 2.Less cost no spending time and money in training3.Bring contacts valuable asset1.disagreement/conflict company has tradition 2.Additional costmore time personal relationship and settling-in period 3.Best employees will leave.第58页/共59页感谢您的观看！第59页/共59页