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1、2014高考作文新题型高考作文新题型读写任务读写任务读写任务RequirementsFulfillmentHowtosummarizethegivenpassage?Howtopolishyourexpressions?Howtosummarizethegivenpassage?Howtopolishyourexpressions?2014高考作文新题型高考作文新题型读写任务读写任务读写任务RequirementsRequirementsFulfillmentHowtosummarizethegivenpassage?Howtopolishyourexpressions?Comparisono
2、nwritingrequirementsforNMET20132013书面表达要求书面表达要求书面表达要求书面表达要求要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇篇篇篇150150个单词左右的短文。情景包个单词左右的短文。情景包个单词左右的短文。情景包个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的,对象、时间、地点、方位、括目的,对象、时间、地点、方位、括目的,对象、时间、地点、方位、括目的,对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等;提供情景的关系、内容、数据等;提供情景的关系、内容、数据等;提供情景的关系、内容、数据等;提供情景
3、的形式如图画、图表、形式如图画、图表、形式如图画、图表、形式如图画、图表、提纲、信函。考生应能:提纲、信函。考生应能:提纲、信函。考生应能:提纲、信函。考生应能:(1 1)根据特定的语境准确使用英根据特定的语境准确使用英根据特定的语境准确使用英根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法,选用恰当的词汇;语语法,选用恰当的词汇;语语法,选用恰当的词汇;语语法,选用恰当的词汇;(2 2)使用一定的句型、词汇,清)使用一定的句型、词汇,清)使用一定的句型、词汇,清)使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。20142014书面
4、表达要求书面表达要求书面表达要求书面表达要求要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇篇150个单词左右的短文。情景的形个单词左右的短文。情景的形式包括图表、图画、提纲、信函、式包括图表、图画、提纲、信函、短文等。考生应能:短文等。考生应能:(1)根据特定的语境准确使用英)根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法,选用恰当的词汇;语语法,选用恰当的词汇;(2)使用一定的句型、词汇,清)使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一
5、篇150150词左右的英词左右的英词左右的英词左右的英语短文。语短文。语短文。语短文。Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasantTomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant,notnotnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesamemannecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshiswhodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheofficejobinthefactoryorev
6、enintheoffice,mayworkhardatthemayworkhardattheweekendweekend,paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.WhatisthereasonWhatisthereason,then?Inmostcasesthen?Inmostcases,itisbecausetheseitisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivepeoplesimplydonoten
7、joythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasythemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy,likemakinguplikemakingupwoodenboxeswoodenboxes,butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobbutitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargeronewhichisjustasm
8、allpartofamuchlargerone,suchasattachingasuchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthedoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversaycarissosmallthattheycanneversay:Ihavemadesomething!Ihavemadesomething!Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoor
9、dinaryjobssuchasYetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nocleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforematterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeserveso
10、urduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaydeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.withoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.写作内容写作内容写作内容写作内容 1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法,内容包括:(1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛;(2)假如没有清洁工,环境会变得如何?(3)你对平凡工作的看法。写作要求写作要求写作要求写作要求 1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可
11、以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。2014高考作文新题型高考作文新题型读写任务读写任务读写任务RequirementsFulfillmentHowtosummarizeHowtosummarizethegivenpassage?Howtopolishyourexpressions?DefinitionofsummarySummary:ashort,cleardescriptionthatgivesthemainfactsorideasaboutsomething,withoutgivingallthedetails.aneffectivesu
12、mmarywriter.Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasantTomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant,notnecessarilynotnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesamemanbecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorwhodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheofficeevenintheoffice,mayworkhardatthew
13、eekendmayworkhardattheweekend,paintingthehouseorpaintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.diggingthegarden.WhatisthereasonWhatisthereason,then?Inmostcasesthen?Inmostcases,itisbecausethesepeoplesimplyitisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealdonotenjoythejobtheyaredoin
14、g.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasysatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy,likemakingupwoodenboxeslikemakingupwoodenboxes,butitisbutitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofaveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargeronemuchlargerone,suchasa
15、ttachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheysuchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversayplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay:IhaveIhavemadesomething!madesomething!YetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningYetinmo
16、dernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinarystreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.ajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourdueresp
17、ect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.Summarizethepassage:Purpose:Purpose:toraisepeoplesawarenessoftheimportanceoftoraisepeoplesawarenessoftheimportanceofordinaryjobs;tocallonpeopletorespectsuchjobsandtheordinary
18、jobs;tocallonpeopletorespectsuchjobsandthepeopleinvolved.peopleinvolved.topic/fact:peopledislikejobsreason/fact:smallboringjobsbringsnosatisfactionauthors comments:ordinaryjobsarenecessaryandimportant;deserverespectTwobasicelementsofasummarySummarythethetopictopicorgeneralorgeneralsubjectmattersubje
19、ctmatterofthetextofthetexttheauthorsmajorcomment,comment,orattitudeorattitudeonthetopicSummaryPair1AManypeoplewhoarelazyfeelunpleasantwiththeirjobs,whichtheydislike.Forthereasonthatjobsarequiteeasybutboring,peoplecouldntbegivenenoughsatisfaction.Theyalwaysholdtheviewthattheyshoulddosomethinguncommon
20、.(43words)BToday,manypeoplethinktheyarenotpleasedwiththeirjobsforthereasonthatthejobisdullandboring.Buttheyplayanimportantroleinourlifeandtheyareworthrespecting.(36words)misunderstanding;missingthekeypoint!SummaryPair2APeoplemayshowgreatinterestintheirjobsaftertheygraduatedfromuniversities.However,a
21、stimeflies,theywillgettiredoftheirjobs.Arethesejobsnotsuitableforthem?Arethesejobssoboring?Maybetheanswersare“No”.(2p./46words)BAsisshowninthepassage,peopleareboredwithordinaryjobsbecausesuchjobsbringnosatisfaction.However,ordinaryjobsalsomatteralotinourdailylife.Thepeopledoingordinaryjobsareworthyt
22、oberespected.(40words)misunderstanding;unnecessarydetailedinformation;missingthekeypoint.SummaryPair3ATosomepeople,theyarenotsatisfiedwiththeirjobsbecausetheythinktheirjobsaretooordinaryforthemtospendtimeon.Yetordinaryjobsarealsoveryimportanttooursocietyandtheydeserveourrespect.(40words)BDoingordina
23、ryjobswhicharecalled“dullandboring”,moreandmorepeoplebecomelessinterested.Whatmakesthemfeelboredisthelackofsatisfaction.(30words)missingthekeypointSummaryPair4AAsisshowninthepassage,manypeopledisliketheirjobsinthefactoryorevenintheoffice.Theythinkalthoughtheirjobsarequiteeasy;theyareveryboring,becau
24、sethejobsaretooordinary.(37words)BManypeopledisliketheirjobsinthattheythinktheirjobsaretooboringtomakesomethinggreat.However,theseordinaryjobsplayanimportantroleinmakingsocietyabetterplacetoliveinandtheyshouldberespected.(40words)notbrief;missingthekeypoint.SummaryPair5AAccordingtothereport,wecanach
25、ieveainformationthatmanypeoplenotworkhard.Mostofthemdisliketheirjobsinthefactoryorevenintheofficebecausethesepeoplesimplydontenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Thereportalsotellussocietycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.(62words)BWhatthetexttalksaboutisordinaryjobs.Manypeopledislikesuchjobs
26、becausetheyaretooboringtobringpeoplesatisfaction.However,the“dullandboring”jobshavegreatvalueinoursociety.(37words)toolong;manyspellingandgrammarmistakes;copying;SummaryPair6AConsideredas“dullandboring”,ordinaryworkmaymakepeopleunpleasant.Whatcontributesmostlytothephenomenonisthesepeopleslackofsatis
27、faction.However,nomatter,itisvitalthatweshouldrespectourjobsnomatterhowordinarytheyare.(47words)BAsisshowninthisarticle,manypeopledontlikeanordinaryjobintheirlife.Theyalwaysthinktheirjobscannotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.However,Ithinktheirattitudeaboutjobsareveryridiculous.(40words)missingthekeypoi
28、nt;givingpersonalviewsSummaryforreferenceThoughmanypeoplefindtheirjobboring,smallandunsatisfying,ordinaryjobslikecleaningstreetsarenecessaryandimportantinmodernsociety.Andthesejobsareworthrespecting.(28words)Tipsforsummarizing Questions:Questions:1)Whatsthetopicandthemainideaforeachparagraph?2)Whats
29、theauthorsattitude?3)Whatstheauthorspurpose?(toinformortopersuade,etc.)Attention:Attention:Omitspecificdetails,suchasillustrations,descriptions,anddetailedexplanations;Eliminateallunnecessarywordsandrepetitions;Eliminateallyourpersonalideas;Setalimittothenumberofyourwords.2014高考作文新题型高考作文新题型读写任务读写任务读
30、写任务RequirementsFulfillmentHowto summarizethegivenpassage?HowHowtotopolishpolishyourexpressions?AppreciationAppreciationSomeofyourfantasticexpressionsSomeofyourfantasticexpressions:aboutthehardshipNomatterhowbadtheweatheris,theyhavetosticktotheirpost,cleaningthestreets.Tiredandbored,theonlythingtheyc
31、andoiscleanthestreets.Someofyourfantasticexpressions:abouttheimportanceWeretherenocleaners,disgustingsmellwouldsurroundus.Weretherenocleaners,ourstreetswouldbeinamess.Chancesarethattheriverswillbepollutedandfullofrubbish.Withadirtyenvironment,viruscanspreadeasily.Itisthesesimplejobsthatprovideuswith
32、aharmonioussociety.Someofyourfantasticexpressions:aboutyourpersonalviewsInconclusion,ordinaryjobsplayimportantrolesinoursocietyanddeserveourrespect.Itsimportantforustoreflectonourattitudetoordinaryjobs.Ordinaryjobscanprovideuswithjoy.Itsourattitudetojobsthatreallycounts.AsfarasIamconcerned,boringast
33、hejobsare,oursocietycouldntfunctionwellwithoutthem.Undernocircumstancesshouldwediscriminatethepeoplewhotakeonordinaryjobs.Theirjobsareholy.Whatweneedtodoistorespectthemandtheirjobs.Someofyourfantasticexpressions:aboutyourpersonalviewsIfwelikeourjobs,ordinaryjobscanbringushappinessaswell.Onlyinthisma
34、nnercanourworldbecomeincreasinglybeautiful!Iholdthebeliefthateachkindofjobisofimportancetomakeoursocietyfunctionwell.Wearesupposedtorespectthosewhodotheirjobswhole-heartedly.Atthesametime,weshouldenjoyourownjobsevenifitisanordinaryone.ImprovementImprovementTrytocorrectandimproveyourexpressionsSomeex
35、pressionstobeimproved:aboutthehardshipWhenwearehavinglessons,heiscleaningthetoiletalone.Andwhenweareenjoyingourselves,hesatonthefloorandsmoking.Improved:hesatonthefloor,smoking.Somepeoplemaylookdownuponthecleaners,buthavetheyeverimaginedhowourcitywillbewithoutcleaners?Improved:howthecitywouldbelikew
36、ithoutcleaners?Someexpressionstobeimproved:abouttheimportanceJustbecauseoftheseordinaryworkers,wecanenjoyourlives.Improved:Thankstotheseordinaryworkers,weThankstotheseordinaryworkers,weEverybeautifulcitymayloseitsgoodappearanceandtheenvironmentbecomenotfitpeopletolive.Improved:andtheenvironmentwontb
37、esuitableforandtheenvironmentwontbesuitableforpeopletolivein.peopletolivein.Iftherewerenocleaners,Icannotimaginewhatourenvironmentwillbe.Improved:IcannotimaginewhatourenvironmentIcannotimaginewhatourenvironmentwouldbelike.wouldbelike.Iftherewerenocleaners,ourworldwouldbefilledwiththingsabandoned,sme
38、llbad.Improved:,ourworldwouldbefilledwiththingsourworldwouldbefilledwiththingsabandoned,smellingbad.abandoned,smellingbad.Someexpressionstobeimproved:aboutyourpersonalviewIbelievethatmoreandmorepeoplearecontenttodoordinaryjobsandmoreandmoreharmonioustheworldwillbe.Improved:Ibelievethemorepeopleareco
39、ntentIbelievethemorepeoplearecontenttodoordinaryjobs,themoreharmoniousthetodoordinaryjobs,themoreharmoniousthewouldbe.wouldbe.Whatweneedtodoistorespectalldevotetheireffortstoordinaryjobs.Improved:(1)WhatweneedtodoisrespectallWhatweneedtodoisrespectalldevotingtheireffortstoordinaryjobs.devotingtheire
40、ffortstoordinaryjobs.(1)respectalldevotedtoordinaryjobs.(1)respectalldevotedtoordinaryjobs.Someexpressionstobeimproved:aboutyourpersonalviewMorethanksshouldwegivethemfortheirdevotiontoourearth.Improved:(1)Morethanksshouldbegiventothemfortheirdevotiontoourenvironment.(2)Wecannotthankthemtoomuchforthe
41、irdevotiontoourearth.TipsforbetteringexpressionsPolishourexpressionsby:Polishourexpressionsby:Using“withn.doing/done/adj.”Using“itis/wasthat”Usinginversionlike“undernocircumstances,only+adverbial,”Usingnon-finiteverblike“doing;done;todo”Usingsubjunctivemood,like“ifdid/were,would/could”Usingfixedphra
42、seslike“stickto;reflecton;providewith;chancesarethat”Usingcomplexsentences,includingnounclause,attributiveclauseandadverbialclause.AversionforyourreferenceThoughmanypeoplefindtheirjobsboring,smallandunsatisfying,ordinaryjobslikecleaningstreetsarenecessaryandimportantinmodernsociety.Andthesejobsarewo
43、rthrespecting.Astheauthormentionedinthepassage,cleaningthestreetsisakindofordinaryjob.Itis,tobehonest,prettyhard.Tobeginwith,thecleanershavetostartthecleaningearlyinthemorning,evenbeforethesunrise,tobringupacleansurroundingforthelocalcitizens.Besides,therubbishesandwastestheyhavetodealwithareusually
44、ofunpleasantsmells.Lastbutnotleast,seldomdopeopleshowrespectstothemandvaluetheirhardwork.Pleaseimagineaworldwithoutcleaners.Whatwoulditbe?Itwouldbeaplacecrowdedwithrubbishesandwastes.Itwouldbeaplacefilledwithunpleasantsmells.Anditwouldbeaplaceoccupiedbymiceandbugs.Howterribleitwouldbe!Takingalltheab
45、oveintoconsideration,Iaminfavoroftheideathatordinaryjobsplayimportantpartsinoursociety.Andthereisnodenyingthattheyshouldbeequallyrespected.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietydevelopsoundly,continuouslyandharmoniously.SummaryforthisclassFacedwithanewtest-writingafterreading,wetalkedabouthowtowriteasummaryandhowtobetterourexpressions.Tohaveagoodsummary,weshouldcatchthekeypointsandwritebriefly.Tobetterourexpressions,weareexpectedtouseadvancedpatters,likeinversion,emphasis,complexsentences,non-finiteverb,unrealconditionalsoon.