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1、张老师作文ppt课件 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望第一部分：认识作文第一部分：认识作文二，评分大法则：二，评分大法则：符合题意是符合题意是前提前提.Notmanymistakes+butallthepointscovered60%2.Aclearstructure(三三段式，干净，工整段式，干净，工整)70%3.Ideas:logic,clear,persuasive,special80%4.Somelongsentences,complicat
2、edstructures.(倒装，虚拟，复合，比较倒装，虚拟，复合，比较)90%第二部分第二部分应对策略应对策略Partone语言能力篇语言能力篇 策略之一策略之一了解错误了解错误减少犯错减少犯错：一一.主谓一致的错误主谓一致的错误1.语法形式一致（语法形式一致（thenumberofanumberof）2.意义上一致：形单意复，意义上一致：形单意复，形复意单。形复意单。（People，police，cattle）3.就近一致就近一致：AorB,eitherAorB,neitherAnorB,notonlyAbutalsoB+谓语动词谓语动词（与（与B一致）一致）戒烟对健康的重要性是毋庸置疑戒
3、烟对健康的重要性是毋庸置疑的。的。Theimportanceofgivingupsmokingtohealthisclear/undoubted/doubtless.全面发展自己和把握有利机会是大学生全面发展自己和把握有利机会是大学生走向成功的两大最重要因素。走向成功的两大最重要因素。Todevelopthemselvesaspossibleasonecanandtotakeallthefavorableopportunitiesarethetwomostimportantfactorstothesuccessofuniversitystudents.二二时态语态错误：避免使用太难时态语态错误
4、：避免使用太难或或拿不准拿不准的结构。的结构。原则：在合乎题目时态前提下，以一原则：在合乎题目时态前提下，以一般现在时为主般现在时为主;以一般将来时为辅；以一般将来时为辅；以一般过去时为补充；以虚拟语气为以一般过去时为补充；以虚拟语气为点缀。（尝试使用现在完成进行时：点缀。（尝试使用现在完成进行时：havebeendoing.）四四.介词搭配错误介词搭配错误:记单词记单词要与介词一起记忆要与介词一起记忆.例子例子:insiston,persistin,assist,resistagainstdifferindifferfrom五五冠词错误冠词错误1.Anessentialpart2.the+n
5、.+of+n.3.the+单数单数=n的复数的复数-表类别。表类别。theunknown(未知世界未知世界)theunemployedthegood,thebeautifulandthetrue.NowIcanseehowseriousaproblemitis.Birdsofafeatherflocktogether.Heisamanofanunyieldingspirit.aburning/newly-risensunafullmoonadark/freeworldtwoscoreofpeoplethreescoreandtenpeoplescores/dozensofpeople六，单词拼
6、写（要准确高效记忆）六，单词拼写（要准确高效记忆）例子：例子：分开，辅助的，夸张，欣分开，辅助的，夸张，欣赏赏策略之二策略之二词汇突破词汇突破1.通用词汇的改善：通用词汇的改善：2.如连接词的运用改善如连接词的运用改善.第第一一,第二第二,第三第三,一方面，一方面，另一方面，等等。另一方面，等等。ThemostimportantfactorwehavetotakeintoconsiderationisthatItisalsoofgreatimportancetoponderoverthatBesideswhatismentionedabove,itisstillofnecessitytopay
7、closeattentiontothatOntheonehand,ontheotherhandSmokingis,ontheonehand,veryharmfultothehealthofthesmokersthemselves;itbringsnegativeinfluenceonthelivingenvironmentaroundthem,ontheother（hand）.又如：又如：but-howeverneverthelessnonetheless；sothereforeinconsequences，consequentlyWhatismore-moreimportantlymostl
8、yTosumuptobeconcludedinconclusion2.各种话题有针对的重点各种话题有针对的重点突破：介绍突破：介绍词汇方法，总词汇方法，总结并高效记忆写作核心词结并高效记忆写作核心词汇。汇。二漂亮句型之模板句：二漂亮句型之模板句：好好背诵一下很有好处！好好背诵一下很有好处！(known/heard/had/read,etc)例句：例句：HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofp
9、rotectingoureyestoomuch.Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwontcreate(produce)anypollution.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.：Sopreciousistime
10、thatwecantaffordtowasteit Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不一点也不Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.n：Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed.nOnnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.nItistimetheauthoritytookproperstepstosolvethet
11、rafficproblems.nThosewhoviolatetrafficregulationsshouldbepunished.nbe+forced/compelled/obliged+to+V（不得不（不得不.）nSincetheexaminationisaroundthecorner,Iamcompelledtogiveupdoingsports.nItisconceivablethat+句子（可想而知的）句子（可想而知的）nItisobviousthat+句子（明显的）句子（明显的）nItisapparentthat+句子（显然的）句子（显然的）nSummerissultry.Tha
12、tisthereasonwhyIdontlikeit.nForthepasttwoyears,Ihavebeenbusypreparingfortheexamination.nItpaysto+V（.是值得的。）是值得的。）n例句：例句：Itpaystohelpothers.nTheprogressofthesocietyisbasedonharmony.nTakingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.n做运动与健康息息相做运动与健康息息相关。关。nWeshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoodhours.nDueto/Owingto/
13、nThanksto+N/Ving,（因为（因为.）n例句：例句：Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydream.nTheconditionofourtrafficleavesmuchtobedesired.(有很多不足有有很多不足有待解决）待解决）nSmokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.nReadingdoesgoodtoourmind.读书对心灵读书对心灵有益。有益。nOverworkdoesharmtohealth.工作过工作过度对健康有害。度对健康有害。nPollutionposesagreatthre
14、attoourexistence.nItisdesiredthatsheshouldcome.(suggested,decided,proposed,ordered,recommended.)n五五.经典疯狂句型专题经典疯狂句型专题n谚语自己积累（如：谚语自己积累（如：fireisagoodservantbutabadmaster.)n疯狂语段背诵（新概念背诵）疯狂语段背诵（新概念背诵）nEnglishmaybethemostimportantfactorindecidingwhichcountriesareleadersinthefuture.nThelanguageofthemostadv
15、ancedmanagementandtechnologyisundoubtedlyEnglish.nBeingabletoabsorbthisinformationisthekeytothenewcentury.n句式总结：句式总结：maybethemostimportantfactorindeciding(who,which)canbesomethingTheoftheisundoubtedlyBeingabletodoisthekeyton例子例子2.Alcoholandcigarettesarethetwogreatestkillersintheworld.nPeoplearemorea
16、ttractedtothingsthatarebadforthemthantheyaretothingsthataregoodforthem.nPeopleknowthattheyarebadforthem,buttheycontinueusingthem.n句式总结：句式总结：andarethetwogreatestintheworld.Peoplearemore.tothingsthatareforthemthantheyaretothingsthatareforthem.nThegovernmentandindividualsoughttounitetheireffortstofight
17、againstenvironmentpollutionnbytakingpowerfulandeffectivemeasuresthroughstrengtheninglegislations.(legislate)nAccordingtothecartoon/thechart,/thebar,/thetable,nBasedonthestatistics/message/informationconveyed/expressedbythepicture.n四级历年真题分析四级历年真题分析n2005，12n1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点（随名校校园正成为旅游新热点（随着文化和教育的发展：着文化和
18、教育的发展：tourismattractions(旅游热点）旅游热点）n2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同法不同（一些人，一些人，（一些人，一些人，n3.我认为我认为（我）（我）nShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?n 20064内容：内容：n1、有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任、有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课老师。（随着教育的发展，课老师。（随着教育的发展，moreandmoreuniversitiesbegintoallowstudentstohaveafreechoiceoftheirteache
19、rsforsomesubjectsn2、学生选择老师时所考虑的主要因素是、学生选择老师时所考虑的主要因素是sowhatarethemainfactorsthatshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwhentheyarechoosingtheirteachers1.2.3n3、学生自选任课老师的益处及可能产生的问、学生自选任课老师的益处及可能产生的问题。题。(benefits,advantages,everycoinhastwosides.bringnegativeinfluenceton(CET42007.)nSpringFestivalGalaonCCTVn1.许多人
20、喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会（随着（随着社会和文化的发展，社会和文化的发展，moreandmorepeopleprefertowatchn2.但是有些人提出取消春节晚会但是有些人提出取消春节晚会(somepeopleholdtheviewthatbutsomeothersholdaverydifferentviewthatthereisnoagreementonwhetherornottheshouldbecancelled)(awasteoftime,awasteofmoneyn3.我的看法我的看法.(asfarasIamconcerned,Istronglymai
21、ntainthat)n2007年年6月英语四级作文及范文月英语四级作文及范文n欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部。欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部。n标题：标题：Welcometoourclubn本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞，属于一篇应本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞，属于一篇应用文写作，与用文写作，与04年年6月的导游词类似，笔者认月的导游词类似，笔者认为难度不大，可按照以下提纲书写：为难度不大，可按照以下提纲书写：n1.表达你的欢迎；表达你的欢迎；n2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。(Englishclub)疯狂一下。疯狂一下。n2007年年12月大学英语四级月大学英语四级nDirection
22、s:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofElectivecoursestochoose.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:n1、各大学开设了多种多样的选修课（教育的发、各大学开设了多种多样的选修课（教育的发展。展。n2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课（、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课（sowhatarethereasonsbehindthechoiceofstudentsthemostimportantfacto
23、rn3、以你自己为例、以你自己为例(asfarasIamconcerned.n2008年年6月月21日英语四级作文及范文日英语四级作文及范文nDirections:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheInternet.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:n1.有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率(随着信随着信息科技的发展，息科技的发展，越来越多人开始关注
24、。越来越多人开始关注。Internetismoreandmorewidelyusedbypeopleitcan,directlyandindirectly,influence.duetothefactthat.n2.还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习(someothersholdtheviewthatabandonthemselvesto).(playingcomputersismentallyunhealthyandphysicallyharmful)n3.你对于网络的看法你对于网络的看法n大学生做兼职大学生做兼职n1.如今有很多大学生在大学学习
25、期间做兼职，创业。如今有很多大学生在大学学习期间做兼职，创业。(Nowadays,thereareagreatnumberofuniversitystudentsbegintostarttheirownbusiness/dopart-timejobsduringtheiruniversitylife.)n2.有的人认为这样是不明智的有的人认为这样是不明智的(itisinadvisableforthemtodosoduetothefactthatdoingpart-timejobcan,toalargedegree,bringinfluenceontheirnormalstudy，这样影响学习。
26、，这样影响学习。有的人认为这样可以拓宽学生视野，提高实践能力。有的人认为这样可以拓宽学生视野，提高实践能力。(broadentheirhorizonandenrichtheirknowledge,thusimprovingtheirabilityofpractice)n3.你怎么认为。你怎么认为。n知识与能力知识与能力n1.决定大学生职业生涯的因素有很多，决定大学生职业生涯的因素有很多，(thereareavarietyoffactorsthatdecidethecareerofuniversitystudents)一些人以为大学生择业中知识很重要一些人以为大学生择业中知识很重要(someof
27、themholdtheviewthatknowledgeplaysanessentialroleintheirjob-hunting；一些人认为能力更；一些人认为能力更加重要加重要(abilityis,toalargedegree,moreimportantthanotherfactors)。n2.你怎么认为。你怎么认为。n3.大学生应该怎样面对知识能力的轻重问题，怎样应对。大学生应该怎样面对知识能力的轻重问题，怎样应对。(universitystudentsshould,ontheonehand,paycloseattentiontotheknowledgefromtext;theyough
28、tto,ontheotherhand,moreimportantly,attachgreatimportancetotheroleofability)nThe government and individuals ought to unite their efforts to help/to protect/to fight against 名校头衔名校头衔1.一些公司和用人单位现在越来越不看重大学生的名一些公司和用人单位现在越来越不看重大学生的名校头衔校头衔(anumberofcompaniesare,nowadays,payinglessandlessattentiontothereput
29、ationofuniversities)，认为名校头衔并不能说明问题，认为名校头衔并不能说明问题(andthemaintainthatthetitleofauniversityis,asamatteroffact,noteverything)。2.谈谈名校头衔是否重要。谈谈名校头衔是否重要。(asfarasIamconcerned,thoughitisnicetohaveadiplomaofafamousuniversity,knowledgeandabilityarethemostimportantfactorsindecidingwhocanbesuccessfulinthefuture.
30、Thewaytobesuccessfulisundoubtedlytoenrichourknowledgeandability.不要疯狂太多噢，够了不要疯狂太多噢，够了)n大学生健康大学生健康n1.大学生的健康状况令人担忧（大学生的健康状况令人担忧（nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsocietyandtheincreaseofpollution,thehealthofuniversitystudentsaregoingfrombadtoworse)，校园酗酒抽烟的现象时有发生，校园酗酒抽烟的现象时有发生(thereareoftenanumberofphenomenat
31、hatmanystudentsbecomeaddictedtoalcoholandcigarettes)。n2.指出这一现象的危害。指出这一现象的危害。(thereisnodoubtinsayingthatsmokinganddrinking,toalargedegree,bringnegativeinfluenceonthelifeofstudents.Itismentallyunhealthyandphysicallyharmfulforstudentstoabandonthemselvestosmokingandcigarettes)n3.提出应对和解决措施。提出应对和解决措施。(the
32、governmentandindividualsoughttounitetheireffortstopreventstudentsfrombecomingaddictedtosmokingand)n六级作文分析六级作文分析n2005年年12月月24日英语六级考试作文日英语六级考试作文nAletterofdecliningajoboffern1、对公司提供的职位表示感谢、对公司提供的职位表示感谢(Iamwritingtoyoutoexpressmysincerethanks/gratitudetoyourofferofthepostn2、解释为何不能接受提供职位的原因、解释为何不能接受提供职位的
33、原因(123,time,money,interests)n3，希望予以谅解，并表达公司良好的祝愿，希望予以谅解，并表达公司良好的祝愿Iwishyouagreatsuccessandabrightfuturen2006年年12月六级真题月六级真题nDirections:For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Celebration of Western Festivals.n 1.现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节些节日日(with文化，文化，globa
34、lizationmoreandmoreandChinesepeoplebegintocelebratethewesternfestivals2.产生这种现象的原因产生这种现象的原因(sowhatarethereasonsbehindthephenomenon,123.)3.这种现象可能带这种现象可能带来的影响来的影响（sowhatarethepossibletendencyorinfluenceofthecelebrationofwesternfestivalsinChina?.)nCET62007nnTheImportanceofReadingClassicsn1.阅读经典著作对人的成长至关
35、重要阅读经典著作对人的成长至关重要(withthedevelopmentofuniversityeducation,moreandmoreattentionispaidtotheimportanceofreadingclassics.Andreadingclassicsmaybeoneofthemostimportantfactorsindecidingthegrowthofuniversitystudents)(再疯狂一次）再疯狂一次）n2.现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作，原因是现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作，原因是（lessandlesspeoplearepayingattentionto.t
36、ime,interestsn3.作为大学生，你应该怎么做作为大学生，你应该怎么做(asuniversitystudents,itisimportantthatweshouldpaycloseattentiontoreadingclassicsandspendmoretimeonclassics)n2007年年12月六级作文真题及范文月六级作文真题及范文1.如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用（nowadays,withthedevelopmentofinformationtechnology,digitalproductsarebecomingincreasin
37、glypopularandwidelyused,suchas.，例如，例如2.数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响生的影响(thereisnodoubtthatdigitalproductshave,asamatteroffact,directlyandindirectly,bringgreatinfluenceonourstudyandlife.digitalproducts,toaverylargedegree,improvetheefficiencyofourworkandlife)nn2008年年6月大学英语六级月大学英语六级作文作文
38、nWillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks?1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；(Itisknowntousallthat,withthedevelopmentofinformationtechnology,e-booksareplayinganimportant/essentialroleinourlife)n2.有人认为电子图书将会取代传统图书，理由是有人认为电子图书将会取代传统图书，理由是(somepeopleholdtheviewthate-booksmay,foronereasonoranother因为某种原因，
39、因为某种原因，replacetraditionalbooksduetothefactthate-booksarecheaperandmoreavailable.Whatismoreimportant,theymaintainthate-bookscanbringusconveniencewhenweareseekinginformation)3.我的看法。我的看法。n2008年年12月英语六级作文真题月英语六级作文真题nHowtoImproveStudentsMentalHealthn1.大学生心理健康很重要大学生心理健康很重要(withthedevelopmentofsocietyandun
40、iversityeducation,moreandmorestudentsfeelthepressurefromstudyandlife.Itisimportantthatstudentsliveaphysicallyhealthylife/mentalhealthmaybethemostimportantfactorindecidingthesuccessofacademicstudies)n2.为此，学校可以为此，学校可以(inordertoimprovethementalhealthofuniversitystudents,schoolsshouldtrytheirbesttohelps
41、tudentsliveaneasierlife)n3.我们自己应该我们自己应该n考试之预测考试之预测n1.表格与数据显示英语或中文学习人数增加之趋表格与数据显示英语或中文学习人数增加之趋势。势。-文化交流与语言交流。文化交流与语言交流。(accordingtothestatisticsfromthechart,itisnothardtounderstandthatanincreasingnumberofpeopleovertheworldarepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoEnglishlearning/ChineselearningAndthereisatenden
42、cythatmoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtolearnChinese)(Englishlearningmaybethemostimportantfactorindecidingcross-culturalcommunication)(itisadvisabletoencouragemoreandmorepeopletopaycloseattentiontoChineselanguageandculture)n4.和谐社会主题，和谐社会主题，尊老尊老爱幼，街坊互助，交通问爱幼，街坊互助，交通问题。题。HarmonyharmonioussocietymaybenThe
43、governmentandindividualsoughtto.n5.野生动物保护问题。野生动物保护问题。Withthedevelopmentofindustrializationthegovernmentand分析角度：分析角度：n社会，个人，政府。社会，个人，政府。n小作文类型小作文类型 n虽然小作文不一定考，但还是要稍微注意一下。n1.询问信询问信nIamwritingthelettertoobtaindetailedinformationaboutnItwouldbegreatlyappreciatedifyoucouldfurnishmewithsomerelevantmateria
44、lsregardingthefollowingaspectsnIwouldliketohavemoredetailsaboutnIwonderifthereisnMyutmostconcernisnThankyouforyourassistanceandIamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconveniencen2.求职（学）信求职（学）信nI am writing the letter to apply for the position of,which you advertised in yesterdays China DailynIamw
45、ritingtoyoutoexploretheopportunity/possibilityofworkinginyourcompany,/studyinginyourschool,informingyouofmybasicbackgroundandqualifications.nDearSir,Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandanimmediatereplywillbeverymuchappreciated.n3.建议投诉信建议投诉信 nI am writing the letter to complain about nIn order to solve th
46、e problem,it is advisable for you to take some effective measures before things get worse.nI am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.nIstronglysuggestthatimmediatemeasuresbetakentosolvethisproblem,inthatthedelayofsolvingtheproblemmayresultinunfavorableconsequences.n4.道歉解释信道歉解释信
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