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1、雅思写作范文精讲：在线购物 雅思写作中常常会考到分析利弊的题目，比如在线购物的利弊，你知道该怎么写吗？下面我就共享给大家。 购物与金钱常常运用的英文短语和句型 >> commodity = sth. that can be bought and sold 商品的较正式说法 例句 Fish were a vital commodity in growing townsand cities where food supplies were a constantconcern. 由于食品供应始终令人担忧，在不断发展的城镇中鱼是一种极为重要的商品。 be acquisitive 总想索取的
2、，贪得无厌的 例句 She's an acquisitive person，always wanting to gain and possess new things. 她是一个贪得无厌的人，总是想着去占有新的东西。 常用联想短语或句型 >> vanity = being too interested in someone's own abilities or appearance 虚荣心，自负 例句 Reece wants the job purely for the reason of vanity. 瑞斯纯粹是出于虚荣才想得到那份工作的。 tighten on
3、e's belt 节约开支 例句 Joel had to tighten his belt since he lost his job. 因为丢了工作，乔尔要起先勒紧裤腰带生活了。 常见近义短语或句型 >> do sth. on a shoe string = do sth. using very little money 花很少的钱去做某事 例句 This business is run on a shoestring. 这份生意是在精打细算的条件下完成的。 cannot afford sth. 买不起某物 例句 They can't afford such ex
4、pensive holidays. 他们担当不起如此昂贵的假期旅行。 常用联想短语或句型 >> be beyond sb. 's means = be too expensive for sb. 超过了某人的消费实力 例句 The medical charges are beyond the means of needy families. 对于那些须要帮助的家庭来说，昂贵的医疗费用只能让他们望洋兴叹。 be dirt-cheap 特别便宜的 例句 The hotel we stayed in was dirt-cheap, but our room was very ni
5、ce. 虽然我们入住的酒店非常便宜，但房间环境却特别好。 常见近义短语或句型 >> a bargain = a hover-than-usual price 很便宜的 例句 These shoes are a bargain at just 15 pounds. 这些低价鞋只卖15镑。 常用联想短语或句型 >> be undervalued = be considered to be worth less than sth. really is 价值被低估的 例句 Smell is probably the most undervalued sense in many
6、cultures. 嗅觉也许是在许多文化中最被低估的一种感官。 go on a shopping spree 疯狂购物 例句 Rasie went on a shopping spree this weekend. 露丝这周末去商场大血拼了。 常见反义短语或句型 >> window-shopping = the activity of looking at things in shop windows but not buying anything 只着橱窗但不购买 例句 Window-shopping is fun for some and frustrating for oth
7、ers.光看不买的行为对一些人来说是种乐趣，而对另一些人来说则非常厌烦了。 keep track of sth. 驾驭某事物的动向 例句 Scarlett found it hard to keep track of her expenses. 斯嘉丽发觉要找出她把钱都花在哪儿了可真是一件困难的事。 常见反义短语或句型 >> loss track of sth. = fail to keep track of sth. 失去对某事物动向的了解 例句 Kaya never lost track of her favourite celebrities. 凯亚对她最崇拜的偶像从来都是了
8、如指掌。 fall short 不够，缺少 例句 We tried to raise eighty thousand pounds，but unfortunately we fell short by about tenthousand. 我们安排募集到80,000英镑的款额，但不幸的是，最终我们差了大约10,000镑。 常用联想短语或句型 >> fall short of one's expectations = is disappointing to someone 未能达到某人的期望 例句 He kept falling short of my expectation
9、s. 他总是达不到我对他的期望。 Only. won't balk at this price. 只有.才不会对这种价格望而却步 例句 Only well-heeled business people won't balk at this price, especially when buyers can getjust 3 hours of battery life. 只有(特别富有的人)才不会对这种价格望而却步，尤其是这个产品只有3个小时的电池寿命。 常见近义短语或句型 >> a prohihitive price = a price that is too h
10、igh for the average people 价格过于昂扬的 例句 The price of land in London is prohibtive. 伦敦的地价过于昂扬。 covet sth. 特别希望得到(别人已经拥有的东西) 例句 The laptop looks pretty cool and this is the closest I've ever got to actually coveting a Delllaptop. 这款笔记本电脑看起来特别不错，这回我真是头一次想拥有一台戴尔电脑。 常用联想规语或句型 >> envy sb. = want v
11、ery much to do sth. that sb. else does 艳羡某人 例句 I envy people who are always optimistic. 我很艳羡那些始终保持乐观的人。 financial support 财务上的支持 例句 The UN provided financial support to the refugees. 联合国犯难民供应经济救济。 常见近义短语或句型 >> financial aid = money that an organisation or a government gives to a country or an
12、area 经济救济 例句 Some people believe that the government should spend less on overseas financial aid. 一些人认为政府应当削减在海外救济上的支出。 常用联想短语或句型 >> financial issue = financial subject that people discuss 有关财务或财政的议题 例句 Financial issues are critical to the government. 财政问题对于政府而言很关键。 keep up with the Joneses 与他
13、人去攀比 例句 This society has been having a "keeping up with the Joneses" complex for years and nowit's crashing down around its people. 这个社会始终有着相互攀比的积习，并且现在人们已经在饱尝这种恶习的后果了。 常用联想短语或句型 >> peer pressure = the influence other people of your age have on the way you behave 来自于同辈人的压力 例句 Pee
14、r pressure can be very disorienting for children. 来自于同辈的压力很简单让孩子们迷失方向。 雅思写作真题解析:传统购物和网络购物的优劣对比 一、Traditional shopping way 传统的购物方式 (一)Advantages优势 1. Experience goods in person 亲自感受产品 2. Avoid being defrauded 避开上当 3. Bargain with attendant 和服务员砍价 4. Make decision after comparing goods 在比较过产品后确定购买 5.
15、Get goods, receipts, and invoices immediately 可以马上得到货物、收据和发票 6. A good chance for family members to communicate via items 是家庭成员通过货物沟通的一个好机会 7. Bridge generation gap and develop same aesthetic concept 解决代沟并培育相同的审美观点 8. A pastime for us to spend leisure time and ease pressure 可以作为一种消遣来打发闲暇时间而且可以缓解压力 9
16、. An opportunity for parents to teach their children how to be thrifty 父母可以借此机会教孩子怎样省钱 10. An opportunity for children to teach their parents how to be fashionable 孩子可以借此机会教父母怎样时尚 (二)Disadvantages劣势 1. Labor-consuming and time-costing 耗体力、费时间 2. The public tastes and styles are unified 公众的品位与风格统一了 3
17、. Shopping expenses are mainly shouldered by men and they will be confronted with more serious economic burden.男性担当了绝大多数的购物费用，他们要面临更为严峻的经济负担 4. Buying some unnecessary bargains.买一些不须要的东西。 二、 Other means 其它方式 (一)Advantages 优势 1. Effective and convenient 高效率、便利 2. Effortlessly comparable 可以不费劲气的进行比较 3
18、. Extensive choices on intensive platform在密集的平台上选择广泛的货物 4. Make barter dealing available 使得易货贸易成为了可能 5. Enable consumers to purchase items as a package 使得消费者可以一下买齐全部产品 (二)Disadvantages 1. Extra expenses are required 要花额外的费用 2. Incomplete payment system 不完善的支付系统 3. Adulterated goods 参杂使假的货物 4. Unsuit
19、able for consumers to purchase the goods in eager demand 不适合消费者购买急需的产品 5. Offending copy rights and patents 侵扰版权与专利 6. Pirated misconducts can not be effectively avoided 盗版行为无法有效的避开 7. Booking ticket by e-commerce may delay ones scheduling 通过电子商务订票会耽搁人的支配 8. The information filed in e-commerce websi
20、tes may reveal ones privacy 存在电子商务网站的信息会透露隐私 雅思大作文：大家对网上购物的看法 2022年11月11日雅思大作文题目 “ Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development?” 双十一当天的雅思作文问的是大家对网上购物的看法。由于互联网的发展，现在许多人都不去商店而选择在网上购物。那么，这个趋势是好还是坏呢? 本题是2022年11月22日，也就是3年前的原题重现。唐老师已经多次提示各位烤鸭，最近雅
21、思作文对2022年下半年及2022年上半年的原题复现率很高，请大家重点复习。 “有了互联网，我们就可以不(上班，上学，去博物馆，去商店，去旅游.)” 这一类话题，最近频繁出现，9月30日，10月5日，10月28日都与这个话题相关，具体讲解请点击下方链接查看范文及解析。 10月28日雅思大作文真题 | 人们可以在任何地方生活工作，这是好还是坏? 10月5日雅思大作文真题 | 网络时代我们不须要旅游了吗? 9月30日雅思大作文真题 | 网络时代我们不须要上学上班了吗? 回头谈网上购物。其好处当然许多，比如便捷、节约时间、价格便宜，但坏处也是自不待言的，比如看不见实物因此可能买到不适合自己的东西、没
22、有了一家人去商店购物的那种乐趣、网络欺诈等。总体来说，虽然我们不肯定要依靠网上购物，但网上购物的确给我们购物供应了一种可以选择的方式。 老师笔记 01 Shopping at home used to be a dream of ours, but now it has become a reality in our life thanks to the rapid development of the Internet. Many people today prefer online shopping rather than going to stores. 在家购物曾经是我们的幻想，但由于
23、互联网的快速发展，现在它已经成为我们生活中的现实。今日很多人喜爱网上购物，而不是去商店。 解析 (1)本段为引入段，提出网上购物已经成为许多人的选择。 (2)reality 现实 (3)prefer.rather than. 宁愿.而不是. 02 Online shopping has many advantages, especially when it is compared with the store shopping. Sitting comfortably at home, no matter how terrible the weather outside might be, a
24、nd with a few simple clicks on our computer or smart phone screen, we can order almost everything we need from clothes to books and from electric appliances to air tickets. Then what we have to do is wait one or two days for the delivery of your order. The whole process is really easy and simple and
25、 thus can save us a lot of time, not to mention the reduced prices we often enjoy when we shop online. 网上购物有很多优点，尤其是当它与商店购物相比较时。舒舒适服地坐在家里，不管外面的天气有多糟糕，只要简洁地在电脑或智能手机屏幕上敲几下，我们就可以买到我们须要的任何东西，从衣服到书籍，从电器到机票，然后我们要做的就是等一两天后订单交付。整个过程特别简洁简单，因此可以节约我们许多时间，更不用说我们网上购物时还常常享受到降价。 解析 (1)本段论述网上购物的好处，主要论述其简洁简单，节约时间。 (
26、2) click 敲(键盘) (3) appliances 器具(尤其是电器) (4) delivery 交付，发送 (5) process 过程 (6) not to mention. 更不用提. 03 Yet online shopping may create problems, too. First, as we cannot see the transaction going on with our own eyes, we may likely buy something that does not really suit us. We often hear our friends
27、 complain that they have to alter their expensive clothes bought online because it is too long or too short. To make it worse, to return our buy and get a different one is always a long and complicated process, which means we will lose the time we have gained from the online shopping. Secondly, unli
28、ke the store shopping, online shopping deprives us of the opportunities to spend a quality time together with our family members. I can still remember the excitement when my parents decided to take me to the supermarket to do the weekend shopping. 然而网上购物也可能带来问题。首先，由于我们不能亲眼看到交易的进行，我们可能会买一些不适合我们的东西。我们
29、常常听到挚友埋怨他们不得不变更他们在网上购买的昂贵的衣服，因为它们过长或过短。更糟糕的是，退货换货是一个长期而困难的过程，这意味着我们将失去我们在网上购物节约下来的时间。其次，与商店购物不同的是，网上购物剥夺了我们与家人共度一段美妙时间的机会。我还记得以前父母确定带我去超市周末购物时的兴奋心情。 解析 (1)本段论述网上购物可能带来的坏处。首先是可能买到不喜爱的商品，其次是网络购物让我们享受不到一家人外出购物的乐趣。 (2) transaction 交易 (3) alter 变更 (4) buy (n.)所购买的东西 (5) deprive somebody of. 剥夺某人某物 04 To
30、sum up, the Internet does provide us with a new and convenient way of shopping, but we should not completely rely on it. We may opt for online shopping when it is necessary, yet I believe the brick and mortar stores will never be replaced by online stores because of the unique shopping experience th
31、ey offer us. 总之，互联网的确给我们供应了一种新的、便捷的购物方式，但我们不应当完全依靠它。假如有必要，我们可以选择网上购物，但我信任实体商店能够给我们供应独特的购物体验，因此恒久不会被网上商店取代。 解析 (1)本段为结尾段，提出自己的观点：网上购物是一种新的选择，但商店购物可能恒久也不会消逝。 (2)provide 供应 (3)brick and mortar store 实体商店 (4)unique 独特的 雅思写作之购物词汇大全 (一) 购物方式与消费者类型 1. Traditional shopping way 传统购物方式 2. E-commerce 电子商务 3. P
32、urchasing from digital television station/ Internet/ radio/ mobile phone platform 通过电视台/ 因特网/ 广播/ 手机平台进行购买 4. Direct sale 直销 5. Pyramid economy 传销 6. Neighborhood service 小区服务 7. Cyber ordering 网络订购 8. Shopping mania 购物狂 9. Buying in person 亲自购买 10. Buying in group 团购 11. Buying through brokers 通过中介
33、购买 12. Sensible shopper 理智消费者 13. Bargain seeker 特地购买打折产品的人 14. Extravagant buyer 的购物者 15. Window shopper 只逛不买的人 (二) 购物场所与支付方式 1. Stall 摊位 2. Store 商店 3. Boutique 专营店 4. Department store 大商场 5. Shopping centre 购物中心 6. Shopping mall 综合性购物区 7. Fan store 爱好者商店 8. Shopping plaza 购物广场 9. Supermarket 超级市场
34、 10. Superstore 超级商场 11. Flea market 跳蚤市场 12. Fair 集市 13. Pay by cash/ credit card/ debit card/ cash card 通过现金/ 信用卡/借记卡/ 现金卡消费 (三)购物类别 1. Necessity 日常用品 2. Clothing 衣物 3. Accessories 饰品 4. Home appliance 家用电器 5. Cosmetics 化妆品 6. Education products (magazines/ fanzines/ prose/ essay/ novel/ poem/ doc
35、umentary/ travelogue/ reference books/ newspapers/ cassettes/ software) 教化产品(杂志/ 爱好者杂志/ 散文/ 论说文/ 小说/ 诗歌/ 记录片/ 游记/ 参考书/ 报纸/ 磁带/ 软件) 7. Decorations (房间)装饰物 8. Information and games (mobile Phone Musica/ games/ subscribing messages) 信息与嬉戏(手机背景音乐/ 嬉戏/ 订阅短信) 注：在下完材料后，同学们会发觉Musica这个词划了横线，但它的拼法没有任何问题，应当是系统的识别实力问题，另外要留意，这是个专利名词，首字要大写。 9. Sundries 零碎物品 10. Toilet articles 卫生用品 11. Antique 古董 雅思写作范文精讲：在线购物本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第24页 共24页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页第 24 页 共 24 页