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1、读后续写读后续写:abowlofnoodles Jenny was the only child in her family.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a litt
2、le hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she gave a sigh and had to leave.The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?”“
3、Oh,yes,but I dont have money on me,”she replied.“Thats nothing!Ill treat you today,”said the man.“Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,the smell so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently.“What is it?”asked the man kindly.“Nothing.Actually I was just touched by your kindness!”
4、said Jenny as she wiped her tears.“Even a stranger in the streeet would give me a bowl of noodles while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”Hearing the words,the seller smiled,“Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of
5、 noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;She remembered her mothers familiar face and weathered hands.“Why didn
6、t I think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted.Why havent I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?”On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.What/HowWhen/WhereWhoWhySettingCharacterPlotThemeOn
7、edayWhenwhowherethestreet,JennyshomeJenny(anonlychild)&hermotherNarrator叙事者“third person”perspective 第三人称视角Tense:_SimplepasttenseSettingCharacterCharacter analysisDetails.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed you
8、r gratitude to her?”.Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;She remembered her mothers familiar face and weathered hands.Jenny was the only child in her family.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she
9、thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours.Character analysisBehaviorsHow would the mother react after her daughter rushed out of the house angrily?What would she do next?What will Jennys psychological state be like?What would be the result of the story
10、?Work out the conflict or the climaxBeginningDevelopmentConflictClimax/EndingAnownerofastandsellingnoodlesinthestreettreatedJennywithabowlofnoodlesforfreeandhadabriefchatwithJennyRemembertosolvetheconflict.Jenny,theonlychild,hadaquarrelwithhermotherandranoutthehouseangrily.whattheownerofthestandsell
11、ingnoodlesinthestreetsaidleft/Jenny/numbwithshock.PlotA.a merciless mother.B.a warm-hearted seller.C.a family tragedy.D.a touching mother-daughter story.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her
12、?”Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;clue线索文本解读+主题探究Theme【Paragraph1】Approaching the doorway,.创设情节突出主题Analyze the 2 given sentences and the original passage Add some details by raising questions 根据原文信息：“Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,.”思考：Would Jennys mother be at home
13、?What might she be doing?根据第二自然段首句“A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back”思考：第一自然段应该怎么写？(Paragraph2:)A gentle touch called her mind back.Analyze the 2 given sentences and the original passage Add details by raising questions Whotouchedherhair?Whatwasthemotherlike?WhatwouldshesaytoJenny?Howw
14、ouldJennyresponsetomakeupforherrudenessandfault?创设情节突出主题所见所闻所感所思外貌描写环境描写语言描写动作描写心理描写情感描写所见所做所感Appearance/SurroundingsConversations/LanguagesBehavior/Actions/VerbsEmotions/Feelings通过细节描写呈现出情节的_跌宕起伏UP-DOWN-UPUsethedescriptivetechniquestoenrichthedetails创设情节突出主题 Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a dee
15、p breath.However,she found the door locked.Tired and sad,she sat down in front of the house.“Where might my mother be？”she wondered.“Is she really so angry with me that she doesnt want to show any care for me？”Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mot
16、her,and she just realized that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact(that her mother really cared a lot about her.)Tears rolled down her cheeks.动作描写情绪、感受、心理活动描写情绪、感受、心理活动描写动作描写 【Paragraph 2】A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head to see the familiar face an
17、d the worried eyes.“Here you come!Ive been looking for you，”/came/the tired voice.Jenny couldnt help but throw herself into her mothers arms.“Im sorry and thank you for all(you have done for me.)”She expressed the sincere apology and the great gratitude.Then she felt/the hug/tightened.动作描写故事情境描写情绪、感受、心理活动描写语言/对话描写升华主题THANK YOU!