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1、应用文练习写作指导之评论 讲义【题目展示】你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：1音乐会特点；2观看感受；3意见建议。注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。This online concert is absolutely fantastic.写作指导【审题】体裁：留言板评论（非书信）时态：一般现在时、一般过去时人称：第一人称为主交际对象：英国友好学校的学生以及本校师生（广大网友）主题语境：我观看了本校与英国友好学校联合的线上音乐会，准备在线上留言板上发表自己的评论。【要点讲解】1.音乐会特点。特点比如形式多
2、样，有各种音乐体裁；现场互动氛围很好，很活跃；由两所学校共同线上合办的；2.观看感受。一般是从欣赏的角度看待，赞扬音乐会，赞扬表演者，享受其中，十分入迷等。入迷，被吸引住可以用be fascinated by/be captivated by/sth. kept me spellbound/be entranced by等。3.意见建议。建议可以是多个方面的，如音乐会本身可以今后多举办几场，以使得两校联系更紧密、增加一些互动环节（最近黄妈到各地巡演，就请台下观众一起合唱，她绝对是实力女歌手，speak highly of her，当然这里是线上音乐会，可以采取连麦方式）One suggesti
3、on I have for future online concerts is to include more interactive elements, such as a live chat or Q&A session with the performers.、加一些节目单使观众更了解环节It would be great to have a program booklet or digital program notes available for viewers. This would provide more context about the music being perfor
4、med and the performers themselves, enhancing the overall experience for the audience.【下水作文】This online concert is absolutely fantastic. With top-quality sound and video production, it created an immersive and unforgettable viewing experience. What kept me utterly spellbound were the sheer brilliance
5、 of the performers and seamless transition between each song. It is not hard to see that each music piece was carefully selected and each performance was filled with extraordinary/remarkable passion and professionalism. The only drawback is that information about the performers and their backgrounds
6、, particularly for those who are not familiar to the audience, is not provided enough. It would be better to know more about their experiences and how they honed their musical skills to reach this level of excellence, enhancing the audiences appreciation of their artistry.【参考范文】This online concert i
7、s absolutely fantastic. The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was pa
8、rticularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for the students from China and our in
9、ternational friends to learn about and from each other.巩固练假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友Alan写信告知其有意向参加你们学校的音乐艺术节活动。请给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.认可想法；2.介绍活动；3.期盼到来；注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【审题】体裁：告知信（信件格式）时态：一般现在时、将来时交际对象：留学生朋友（亲切、自然）人称：第一人称；第二人称要点：表示欢迎；介绍活动；期望到来。首段：认可对方想要来参加的想法。中段：详细具体地介绍音乐艺术节的活动。隐含介绍活动应写时间、地点，以及其中的表演内容。要
10、以一定的逻辑顺序进行介绍相关活动内容，例如演唱金曲、两人对唱、演凑传统乐器，多人团合唱或者介绍穿插在其中的舞蹈节目。尾端：表达期盼好友的到来，体现深厚友谊。【备用词汇/词组】keep sb. spellbound令某人神魂颠倒/如痴如醉range from.to从到不等fabulous极好的marvelous非凡的a unique perspective一个独特的视角spark/fuel/intrigue/stimulate ones enthusiasm for.激起某人对的热情a loyal fan of. .的忠实粉丝savor the charm of.品味的魅力show sb. a
11、dimension of.给某人关于某事物提供了一个维度have a taste of品味，欣赏be engraved in ones mind刻印在某人的脑海里the essence of. .的本质【参考范文】Dear Alan,Learning that youd like to participate in the Music & Arts Festival held by our school, I highly approve of your idea and am willing to inform you of more details. The activity is sch
12、eduled to be launched in the auditorium next Saturday. Involved in this activity are students, teachers and overseas friends like you, who are keen on music. Besides, various performances will be showcased, ranging from singing hit songs to playing traditional instruments, which is bound to be a feast for ears and eyes.Looking forward to your arrival. May we have a ball in such an appealing activity.Yours,Li Hua学科网（北京）股份有限公司