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1、To stand by a tree stump waiting for a rabbit There was once a farmer worked very hard 1._ every day.One day when he was hoeing(锄草)in the2._ sunshine,he suddenly listened a low sound 3._ “Peng!”.He turned and hurried to the tree.He found a rabbit dying.He took held of the 4._ rabbit and was exciting
2、.“What a rabbit!Ill 5._ have it to dinner!”Then he had a good idea,6._ “Why cant I wait for more rabbits here?Its cool under the tree.”So he dropped off his hoe and wait there.But day after day,there 7._ had no more rabbits coming.What was worse,8 _ all the his crops were dead.The story tells 9._ us
3、 that you want to get something,you must 10._ work hard for it.Remember,“No pains,no gains!”who heardholdexcitedforwaitedweretheifCorrect one students compositionHow to make progress in proof-reading 近五年浙江省高考短文改错测试内容一览表近五年浙江省高考短文改错测试内容一览表 主要包括两类错误：动词的主要包括两类错误：动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误，以及错误，以及主、主、谓不一致谓不一致的错误。例
4、如：的错误。例如：NMET2000：Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library.NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads itto the class.Of course,when my mother was asked,“Have you”_are _readwas 指指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。例如：将名词复数写成单数。例如：NMET2001：so that Ill get good marks in all my subje
5、ct.NMET2003:Their word were a great encouragement to me._ subjects words常考的错误形式有：常考的错误形式有：连词连词butbut，and and，or or和和soso的用的用法错误，以及法错误，以及冠词冠词的用法错误等。例如：的用法错误等。例如：NMET2000：She was smiling but nodding at me NMET2001：It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.NMET2001：We may be one famil
6、y and live under a same roof.and orthe短文改错对冠词的考查主要涉及冠词的短文改错对冠词的考查主要涉及冠词的误加和漏用误加和漏用，有时，有时也考查也考查不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词的用法区别的用法区别(包括包括 a a 与与 an an 的区别的区别)。其中，涉及最多的是，。其中，涉及最多的是，当一个单数可数名词当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时，其前漏用不定冠词表示泛指时，其前漏用不定冠词；另外，冠词在一些习语；另外，冠词在一些习语中的用法也是一个重要考点中的用法也是一个重要考点 (1)After a hour or so we bega
7、n to feel very(2)frightened.(3)(2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were.(4)(3)Some people read the books or watch television(5)while others have sports.(4)Good health is persons most valuable possession.anaa 注意注意形容词和副词以及比较级和最高级的用法形容词和副词以及比较级和最高级的用法在句在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考子中的作用和具体用法。这也
8、是高考短文改错题的常考点。例如：点。例如：NMET 2004:I would describe myself as shy and quietly._NMET 2005:He asked angry if we had finished the work._ quietangrilyNMET2001：My parents love me and will do all they can make sure NMET 2002:We fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories._NMET 2003:Soon I began to enjoy tal
9、k to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English._ 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、现在分词、过去分词，动名词过去分词，动名词和和不定式不定式错误。例如：错误。例如：tovisitedtalking 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误多词、少词和搭配错误。例如：。例如：NMET2000:Suddenly,I caught a sight of my
10、 English teacher._NMET2003:My teacher advised me to keep diary._aa 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：NMET 2004:I dont know that they dont like to talk with me._NMET 1997：I live in Beijing，where is the capital of
11、China._ whywhich NMET 1995:The Greens did his best to make me feel at home._NMET 1998:He drove too fast,and the police stopped her._their 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误，是这类错误的考查对象。位等方面的错误，是这类错误的考查对象。him动词动词形形，名词名词数数还要注意还要注意形和副形和副非谓
12、语非谓语，细领悟，细领悟习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住 Summary冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾逻辑错误逻辑错误须关注须关注At Christmas Eve,Jim went with hisfather to choose a Christmas tree.They choose a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sittingroom.Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light.The sitting room
13、 lookedreally beautifully at the moment.There was a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmastree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his1._father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose 2._a big one.
14、It was almost as taller as the room!3._They put them in the corner of the sitting4._On_chose_tall_it动词形动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副还要注意形和副逻辑关系须关注逻辑关系须关注room.Kate was covered it with a lot of5._Christmas light.The sitting room looked6._really beautifully at the moment.There was 7._a fire
15、burning in the fire place,but the Christmas8._tree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and his9._parents singing and dancing happily.10._was_lights_beautiful_andwere动词形动词形还要注意形和副还要注意形和副动词形动词形名词数名词数冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾 改错类型统计表改错类型统计表“1126”“1126”原则原则“1225”“1225”原则原则“1117”“1117”原则原则01-21-28-61.Error word(1.Err
16、or word(错词错词)：（1 1）名词，动词，形容词和副词的形态错误。）名词，动词，形容词和副词的形态错误。（2 2）冠词，介词，代词，连词和动词等用法上）冠词，介词，代词，连词和动词等用法上 的错误。的错误。（3 3）逻辑关系方面的错误。）逻辑关系方面的错误。（4 4）句子结构的错误。）句子结构的错误。2.Unnecessary word(2.Unnecessary word(多词多词)：（1 1）抽象名词物质名词泛指前多加冠词。）抽象名词物质名词泛指前多加冠词。（2 2）定语从句中多了与关系代词相当的代词或名词。）定语从句中多了与关系代词相当的代词或名词。（3 3）形容词或副词的比较结
17、构中多词。）形容词或副词的比较结构中多词。（4 4）受母语影响及物动词后加了不该加的词。）受母语影响及物动词后加了不该加的词。（5 5）不带）不带toto的不定式的不定式 作宾补时带了作宾补时带了toto（6 6）某些时间状语丛句多了介词。）某些时间状语丛句多了介词。（7 7）固定搭配有画蛇添足的现象。）固定搭配有画蛇添足的现象。3.Missing word(3.Missing word(缺词缺词)：（1 1）动词不定式少了符号）动词不定式少了符号toto（2 2）单数名词泛指时缺不定冠词）单数名词泛指时缺不定冠词a a或或an.an.（3 3）动词后少了介词或副词等小品词。）动词后少了介词或
18、副词等小品词。（4 4）习惯表达或固定短语中缺词。）习惯表达或固定短语中缺词。（5 5）受母语影响将形容词或介词作动词而）受母语影响将形容词或介词作动词而使句子缺少谓语动词。使句子缺少谓语动词。注意解题规范注意解题规范 严严格格按按照照示示范范规规定定的的符符号号改改错错，在在原原文文错错误误的的地地方方增增加加、删删除除或或修修改改某某个个词词。“”、“”、“”、分分别别代代表表错错词词纠纠正正、缺缺词词填填补补、多多词词删删除除，切切忌忌用用文文字字说说明或用箭头表示。明或用箭头表示。错误类型：多词，缺词，错词错误类型：多词，缺词，错词 Competition Rules:Each gro
19、up has the right to choose one number.The group who can correct all the mistakes withinthe shortest time will be the winner.As a team member,if you know the answer,just speak it out as aloud as possible.Which one would you like to choose?(1)(2)(3)(4)多词多词1.Great changes have been taken place in our h
20、ometown.2.My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant.3.He has made a great progress in his English study.4.Now let me to introduce our school to you.5.A great many of students like singing.6.He married with a beautiful girl.缺词缺词1.Our flight to Paris was delayed because the heavy
21、frog.2.The press conference is be held tomorrow.3.Ill unable to control myself and forget all about my study.4.His daughter plays piano very well.oftobethe5.I found strange that she had not come yet.6.They eager to know everything about China.areit I love camping.Its my favorite way to spent the sum
22、mer vacation.Last year,my family and I went camping in the countryside.It was one of the most excited experiences I had never had.We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day.We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully.For a whole week,I saw lovely mountain views or breathed f
23、resh air.At night I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree,and I felt so peaceful.It doesnt costmany to camp,and what I believe its the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.spendexcitingevercookedwonderfulandtreesmuchto1.They dont want me to do any work at family.2.For the most part,
24、students working to earn money For the most part,students working to earn money for their own use.for their own use.3.He collected some informations about computers.4.Earning their money allow them to spend 5.I will never forget the day when we spent together.6.He as well as his sister are a League
25、Member.homeworkinformationwhich错词错词allowsis6 tips that you should pay attention to标点符号不改标点符号不改.大小写不改大小写不改.词序错误不改词序错误不改.在纲外生词不改在纲外生词不改(带汉语注释的词带汉语注释的词).).每处错误及修改均仅限一词每处错误及修改均仅限一词.只允许修改只允许修改1010处，多者（从第处，多者（从第11 11处起）不计分处起）不计分Last winter vacation,some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends
26、,while I chose to take part-time jobto gain experience and earn some money.I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after studentswith good handwriting to write addresses on envelope.The pay were 10 cents per envelope.I headed for the company,feeling sure I would easy finish 300 e
27、nvelopes in five hours and to earn the money.Actually,I only finished 200.now,I fully understand how hard is to earn money.Getting outof the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.08 浙江高考浙江高考decidedaforwaseasilyitusenvelpoesChallenge yourself Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
28、Mountain in Sichuan.What everyone knows,its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the w
29、ay up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came down.We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.Challenge yourselfAsawhenvisitedpicturespassedbutus动词动词形形，名词名词数数还要注意还要注意形和副形和副非谓语非谓语，细领悟，细领悟习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住 Summary冠词连词冠词连词常光顾常光顾逻辑错误逻辑错误须关注须关注 HomeworkFinish the exercises on the paper.Practice makes perfect.谚谚 熟能生巧熟能生巧Which one would you like to choose?1 2 34