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1、2023 年新高考英语读后续写提分技能 3.01 续写中的问题解决思维 普通高中英语课程标准（2017 年版 2020 年修订）（以下简称课程标准）指出，高考应重点考查学生的英语理解能力和表达能力。其中理解能力包括在特定的情境中，学生对口头和书面语篇的理解能力、对其作出反应的能力以及从中获取信息的能力等；表达能力指学生应用英语进行口头或书面表达的能力，特别是在真实的情境中利用英语传递信息、沟通交际、表达观点与意图、阐释情感的能力等。可见，英语高考考查的重点是学生在真实的问题情境中分析问题和解决问题的能力，以对学生的学科核心素养的发展状况作出客观的评价。问题解决能力指的是学生面临问题情境时，在没
2、有现成、可行的方法能够利用时，学生将已有的知识经验进行重组、加工，找到突破问题的方法与途径，从而将已知情境转为目标情境、直至问题解决的能力。学生问题解决的过程一般包括理解与分析问题、探究与形成方法、制定与实施计划、总结与得出结论、讨论与反思结果等五个阶段。问题解决能力的基本要素包括理解与提炼、分析与表达、推理与实践、总结与反思等四个部分。问题解决能力的提升，需要学生在日常的学习过程中，基于特定的情境，充分体验问题解决的全过程，并将问题解决能力的诸要素，应用到此过程中。课程标准指出，高中英语课程倡导实践英语学习活动观，引导学生通过自主学习、合作学习与探究学习等方式，发展多元思维和批判性思维，进而
3、提高学生的英语学用能力。但是，无论是英语“学”的能力，还是“用”的能力，都需要学生在真实的情境中，在学习了解、应用实践、迁移创新中，学会问题解决，从而能够有效地利用英语获取、阐释和评判语篇意义，达到正确而愉悦地表达观点、意图与情感的目的。问题解决思维触发“问题解决”教学。“问题解决”教学模式是以问题为中心，以学生为主体，教师加以引导的一种教学模式。在“问题解决”的教学模式下，学生将面临一系列未经历过的情境，并在这种情境下探究新的方法以解决困难。此教学模式极大的提高了学生的自主性和创新性，同时也体现了以学生为主导的教学理念。在此模式下，教师采用“问题”或“问题链”模式有助于帮助学生理清文本逻辑，
4、使整篇文章在一条线索的串联下展开。在“问题解决”教学模式下，学生可以更加自主地思考，随心所欲地在小组内交流，并开展有意义、高效的师生合作，从而形成了“自主设计-小组讨论-教师引导”的课堂模式。“问题解决”模式既符合课程标准的理念，同时也培养了学生的英语学 2 1 科核心能力。以海南省 2020 年高考读后续写试题为例，基于问题解决的英语读后续写教学流程如下：1.提出相关问题，梳理原文主线 学生在续写前应该理解原文，将原文情境与自身经历相结合，构建一个新的情境模型，然后再创建内容，以确保续写的文章能在内容与逻辑方面和原文保持连贯。教师在原文分析中指导学生从内容方面解读文本逻辑能够帮助学生准确抓住
5、故事线索。教师可以在原文的基础上提出几个关键问题，学生带着问题去读文章，在此基础上，学生可以根据自己基于“问题解决”模式探索读后续写教学策略思考的答案去分析文章，把握文章线索，概括文章大 意，并理解作者的写作目的。例如，海南省 2020 年高考读后续写的阅读语篇讲述了在经济危机的大环境下，善良的 Meredith 太太和她的三个孩子想方设法帮助一个贫困家庭的小男孩的故事。原文故事到这里戛然而止，留出了续写的思维空间。根据布鲁姆的认知理论，问题链的设计需包含由低阶向高阶的问题。故我们可以设计以下问题链，让学生阅读文章，寻找答案：（1）Who are included in this story？
6、Where did the story happen？When did the story happen？What happened in this story？How did they want to do to solve the problem？此举意在引导学生有目的地了解文章大意，获取文章基本信息，尽量保证续写文章不会出现细节性的错误。细读环节结束后，就文本结构提问，形成如下问题链：（2）How many aspects are included in the story？What are they？此举意在引导学生进一步归纳和整理文本，训练学生内化信息的能力，构建语篇框架。2.自主设
7、计问题，列出写作提纲 语篇连贯体现在两个方面，其一是关联词的连贯，其二是内容与思维方面的连贯，即上句与下句之间是否逻辑清晰，内容合理。要写好逻辑清晰的文章，不仅要关注原文语篇，续写所给出的首句也十分重要。例如，2020 年海南省高考读后续写的第一段所给首句为“When Mrs.Mededith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.”这一句是故事发展的关键，可从 Mrs.Meredith 同意后孩子们是准备如何去帮助 Bernard 来展开。在此，我们可以提出两个关键问题：（3）Did Mrs.Meredith agree
8、with their idea？What did they do to help Bernard？第二段所给首句与前文“Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”呼应，可以从 Bernard 卖出爆米花后的所感以及 Mrs.Meredith 的孩子们帮助 Bernard 后的感受拓展。故我们可以引导学生提出问题（4）How is Bernards new business？Whats the feeling of Bernard？Whats the feeling of those children？学生可以根据问题链自主设计自
9、己的写作提纲，剖析作者的写作思路，形成结构框架。问题链的设计使学生的逻辑层层递进，从而使续写文章的结构紧凑，上下连贯。3.合作解决问题，展示任务成果 建构主义理论认为，知识不仅是个体在与物理环境的交互中建构起来的，而且社会性的交互 (协作)更加重要。我们可以引导组内学生再次围绕文本内容提出一系列有关经验性，评价性的问题，引发学生继续思考，对于存在分歧的地方再次讨论，最终每个小组呈现出一篇完整的构思提纲，使文本理解在这一步继续深入。本环节是对课堂学习成果的潜移与检测，以问题化的框架解决一个新的问题，同时升华主题，激发学生的情感态度价值观。4.总结归纳所得，确保续写成文 梳理归纳出本节课未解决的问
10、题以及新出现的问题，学生尝试在续写的过程中自己思考，不断提出具有创造性、批判性的问题，形成自主解决问题的通路。通过高效合作的课堂不断完善自己的思考，激活其可持续性的学习行为，提升思维品质。在问题链的引导下，学生的续写文章逻辑紧密，文章结构清晰，线索明了，极大的促进了学生思维逻辑的发展。1.（2022湖南岳阳三模）阅读下面材料,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jennie Grant lay on a cot(小床)near the window.She had been lying in that same place for many weeks.One of her legs
11、 was shorter than the other,and the doctor had fastened a heavy weight to it in order to make it grow.But she must be still all the time.Every morning before her father went to work,he moved her cot close to the window so she could look out.There was not much to see,for the buildings were high.But s
12、he loved to watch the swallows against the sky,and there was a flock of doves that often alighted(飞落)on the roof across the way.Still she became very tired with nothing to do and no one to play with.One day Mrs.Brightly came to see if she could help her.On the way home,she was busy thinking about Je
13、nnie.Suddenly she said to herself,“I know what Ill do.There are my two little sisters who have plenty of money and hardly ever think of anyone but themselves,and there are some other little neighbors.We will have a little Sunshine Band and make her happy,and the children will enjoy doing something f
14、or someone who needs help.They will find that it is more blessed to give than to receive.”She wrote notes to the girls,asking them to come to her house Monday afternoon.Then she told them the plan.3 They decided to fill a pretty basket to stand by Jennies bed,and took it to her on her birthday.Every
15、thing was to be put in packages,so her pleasure would last a long time,and everything was to be something for Jennie to do.Week after week they met and worked on the articles for the basket.They enjoyed it so much that they could hardly wait for Jennies birthday to come.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2.续写部分
16、分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:One bright morning when Jennie opened her eyes,she remembered it was her birthday._ Paragraph 2:The girls enjoyed their giving so much that they decided to be“Sunshiners”all the year round and asked Jennie to join._【答案】One bright morning when Jennie opened her eyes,she r
17、emembered it was her birthday.The first thing she saw was a big basket beside her bed,and on top a label that said,“Reach in and take out a package when you dont know what else to do.From The Sunshiners”She put her hand under the cover of the basket and felt the bundles.It was the little box that he
18、ld the doll.Jennie had a delightful time cutting out patterns and making clothes for the doll.She did not open any more of her bundles for a day or two,for she wanted to make them last.The girls enjoyed their giving so much that they decided to be“Sunshiners”all the year round and asked Jennie to jo
19、in.She could quickly think of nice things to do.Months later,when the weight was taken off her foot and she was able to walk,she was always helping those in trouble and give them joy,as every true“Sunshiner”should.The girls also found the changes on their own as they were more optimistic in face of
20、adversity.Although receiving much praise,they thought they just became the person they could be.【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述的是为了让腿生长的珍妮格兰特，在腿上绑着重物，躺在帆布床上，她的父亲上班之前，会把她的床移到靠近窗户的地方，让她可以看见外面，布莱特太太想出方法帮助珍妮，她和其他一些小邻居为珍妮的生日准备一个漂亮的篮子，她们迫不及待地想要珍妮的生日到来给她送礼物。之后她们邀请珍妮加入她们的“阳光者”，去做一些力所能及的事情帮助别人。1.段落续写 由第一段首句内容“一个晴朗的早晨，珍妮
21、睁开眼睛，想起今天是她的生日。”可知，第一段描写在珍妮生日到来这天，收到了布莱特太太和其他小邻居给她准备的礼物，一个大篮子，珍妮收到礼物后非常高兴。由第二段首句内容“女孩们很喜欢她们的付出，她们决定全年都做“阳光者”，并邀请珍妮加入。”可知，女孩们觉得为别人付出是很快乐的，并且邀请珍妮加入，一起做阳光者，所以本段描写邀请珍妮加入之后她们接下来所做的事情，以及带来的快乐和感悟。2.续写线索：珍妮躺卧在家布莱特太太想帮助她想出主意实施计划收到礼物邀请珍妮加入“阳光者”感悟。3.词汇激活 行为类：决定：decide/determine；带来：take/bring；想到：think of/come u
22、p with 情绪类：高兴：delightful/cheerful/joyful；积极：optimistic/positive【典型句式】【句型 1】It was the little box that held the doll.(使用 It wasthat 的强调句式)【句型 2】She did not open any more of her bundles for a day or two,for she wanted to make them last.(使用 for引导原因状语从句)【句型 3】Although receiving much praise,they thought
23、they just became the person they could be.(使用 although引导让步状语从句)2（2022湖北省罗田县第一中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The e-mail request came in to Ekiben restaurant in Baltimore late on a Thursday afternoon in March:tempura broccoli(天妇罗花椰菜).The man who sent the e-mail didnt actually want the fo
24、od itself.He was writing on behalf of his mother-in-law,who adored the dish.He went on to explain that she was now in the final stages of lung cancer at her home in Vermont and that he was hoping to get the recipe to make it for her there.Steve Chu,one of the Asian restaurants co-owners,read the e-m
25、ail and quickly replied with an alternative suggestion.Thanks for reaching out.he wrote.Wed like to meet you in Vermont and make it fresh for you.Brandon Jones,the son-in-law,was shocked.He e-mailed back,saying,You do know that this is Vermont were talking about,right?said Brandon.But Steve responde
26、d,No problem.You tell us the date,time,and location and well be there.For the past six years,every time Brandons mother-in-law visited Baltimore,the first place she wanted to go was Ekiben so she could have that broccoli.I really wanted her to have it one more time,Brandon said.She had always told u
27、s,When Im on my deathbed,I want to have that broccoli,recalled Brandons wife.Rina Jones.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 词左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:That Friday after work,a day after receiving Brandons e-mail,Chu and his team were ready to set off._ Paragraph 2:As soon as the door was opened,the mother r
28、ecognized the amazing smell as well as Chu and his coworkers._【答案】That Friday after work,a day after receiving Brandons e-mail,Chu and his team were ready to set off.They loaded his truck with a hot plate and a cooler filled with ingredients and then headed for Vermont.They stayed overnight in a hot
29、el and drove the next day to the apartment where Rinas mother lived.As soon as Chu and his team pulled into the parking lot,they got to work.They pulled down the gate of the truck,hooked the hot plate to the trucks power port,and started cooking and deep-frying.In addition to tempura broccoli,they m
30、ade tofu with peanut sauce and some steamed rice.After neatly boxing everything up,they knocked on their customers door.As soon as the door was opened,the mother recognized the amazing smell as well as Chu and his coworkers.She was so happy and touched that tears welled up in her eyes.She kept sayin
31、g,I dont understand.You drove all the way up here to cook for me?I couldnt believe it!It is an honor to help fulfill your wishes,Chu said,there is a lot of good,positive energy in doing this.Rina was happy that her mother was able to enjoy her beloved broccoli one last time.My mom cried later about
32、their generosity,and so did I,Rina said,Ill always carry that positive 【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了餐厅老板朱和他的团队收到布兰登的求助邮件后驱车前往佛蒙特州为他身患癌症的岳母制作她最爱吃的天妇罗花椰菜的暖心故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“周五下班后，在收到布兰登的电子邮件一天后，朱和他的团队准备出发。”可知，第一段可描写朱和他的团队做好准备工作后驱车前往佛蒙特州、找到丽娜母亲的住处并为她制作她最爱吃的天妇罗花椰菜以及其他食物。由第二段首句内容“门一打开，这位母亲就闻出了那股神奇的气味，也认出了朱和他的同事
33、们。”可知，第二段可描写丽娜和母亲看到朱和他的同事们的反应以及对他们的感谢并决定将这份善意传递下去。2.续写线索：做好准备找到丽娜母亲的住处制作美食闻出气味并认出朱既高兴又感动感谢决定传递善意 3.词汇激活 行为类：出发：set off/set out；前往：head for/leave for；认出：recognize/identify 情绪类：高兴的：happy/delighted；感动的：touched/moved【典型句式】句型 1.As soon as Chu and his team pulled into the parking lot,they got to work.（运用了
34、 as soon as 引导的时间状语从句）句型 2.It is an honor to help fulfill your wishes,Chu said,（运用了 it 作形式主语）3（2022辽宁东北育才学校二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 词左右 One day when I was 5 years old,my dad headed for work while my mum drove me to the town for shopping.Soon we got to a supermarket.While m
35、y mum was picking up vegetables,I spotted some attractive apples,which looked big and red and smelt pleasant.All of a sudden I had the desire to eat apples.I begged my mum to buy some and she agreed.After getting all the groceries,we went for a walk in a park in the town and didnt return until it wa
36、s close to noon.Upon arriving home,my mum left the bag of apples in the sitting room and went to prepare the lunch in the kitchen.Right there and then I could hardly wait to taste the apples,so I took one and had a big bite even without washing it.However,to my disappointment,it wasnt as sweet as ex
37、pected.Luckily,when I tried another,it was satisfying this time.When I was enjoying it,my mum called me to give some apples to our neighbour.Julie,an old lady living close to our home.Julie lived by herself.She was a kind lady and treated me very well.When my parents had no time to look after me,I w
38、ould go to hers and she would help take care of me.And she liked chatting and even playing with me.So when my mum asked me to deliver some apples to her,I was very glad to do that.I found a plastic bag in which to put some apples.But I hesitated just before picking them up.“Some apples are not that
39、delicious.I should send some good ones to Grandma Julie.”I thought.But how could I tell the sweet ones from the rest?I wondered because I had no idea how to find it out just by their appearance.Paragraph 1:Then all at once,a clever idea hit me._ Paragraph 2:Returning home from Julies home.I told my
40、mum what I had done with the apples._【答案】Then all at once,a clever idea hit me.I could distinguish the delicious ones from the not so delicious ones by having a bite of each apple.Then I grabbed every apple,had a small bite and divided them into two bags.No sooner had I finished tasting all the appl
41、es than I took the ones tasting good to Julies house.She thanked me heartfeltly when I handed the apples to her.I could feel her suspicion when she saw the bitten apples,but she said nothing.Proudly,I went home.Returning home from Julies home.I told my mum what I had done with the apples.With pride
42、in mind,I heard my mom laughing loudly.Failing to hold back her laughing,she tapped my shoulder and said,“My dear,lets go to Julies home to have an explanation.”After Mom explained the whole thing to Julie,Julie burst out laughing as well,praising me at the same time.She understood my behavior and t
43、hought highly of my thoughtfulness.My mom didnt blame me,protecting my naivete as a child.Until now,I have still felt amused about my behavior every time I had apples.【写作解析】本文为一篇说明文。讲述了作者小时候的一次经历。和妈妈去逛街回来，买了一兜苹果，妈妈让我给邻居送去，我为了给邻居送更甜的苹果，我将每个苹果都尝了一口。这次经历让我到现在都觉得好笑。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“立刻，我就想到了一个好主意”可知，本段可以写
44、“我”为了区分苹果味道的好坏，将每个苹果都尝了一口，然后将尝起来比较甜的苹果给邻居 Julie 送了过去。由第二段首句内容“我一从 Julie 家回来，就将我如何区分苹果的方法告诉了妈妈。”可知，本段可以写妈妈听到我的方法后，忍不住大笑起来，然后妈妈带着我去 Julie 家解释。妈妈为了保持我的纯真，并没有责备我，但是我直到现在，一吃苹果，就会想到小时候那次有趣的经历。2.续写线索：想到好主意将每个苹果咬一口，尝味道将更甜的苹果给 Julie 送去告诉妈妈我的方法妈妈带我去解释至今想起来还觉得好笑 3.词汇积累：行为类：（1）区分：distinguishtell apart；（2）控制：hol
45、d backcontrol/contain；（3）责备：blamereprove 情绪类：（1）由衷地：heartfeltlyfrom the bottom of heart；（2）体贴：thoughtfulnessconsideration；（3）笑的：amusedcomical/ridiculous【典型句式】【句型 1】Failing to hold back her laughing,she tapped my shoulder and said,“My dear,lets go to Julies home to have an explanation.(运用了现在分词作状语)【句型 2】No sooner had I finished tasting all the apples than I took the ones tasting good to Julies house.(运用了部分倒装)