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1、2023 年新高考英语读后续写提分技能 2.10 续写中的故事冲突的预设与解决 读后续写首先力争读懂原文，找出记叙文的几要素，找到故事情节中到底有什么冲突或问题。然后读懂需要续写的两段的首句，根据首句推测故事发展的走向和两段的大致内容。读后续写的文章属于叙事类文体，大部分故事都是围绕 conflict（冲突）和 solution（问题解决）来运转的，因此矛盾冲突在叙事类读后续写语篇中尤为重要。矛盾冲突的解决能推动故事情节的发展。矛盾冲突分预设与解决技巧，可以帮助学生在基于篇章主题意义下更好地发散思维，做到有话可说，有事可写。同时，在学生创设矛盾冲突进行续写的过程中，可以联系上文已有的故事冲突，
2、提高故事的完整性和连贯性。学生掌握了矛盾冲突的基本写作技巧，有利于在续写的故事创作中打开思路，提高语言的综合运用能力。故事冲突的预设与解决的 7 个技巧 技巧 1：面对问题，人物产生的消极或积极情绪【技巧举例】（2021 年 6 月，浙江高考，Para.1）The pay day arrived at last.I was delighted to finally get the payment after I worked hard for two weeks.On the way home full of excitement,I thought about how to make use
3、 of the“huge”sum of money.“I needed a new football in the future.”I whispered to myself.Approaching my house,I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck of my family,looking sad.It seemed as if something wrong had happened.【分析】续写第一段中的“On the way home full of excitement”表明了故事主人公心情非常好，但是当面对
4、新的问题“my dad and mom standing beside the old truck of my family,looking sad”时，故事主人公内心开始出现冲突与疑问，这就反映在“something wrong”上面。两种心态的冲突描写前后衔接自然、且恰到好处。【用语储备】“感到一阵”：feel a flush of.=feel a wave of.=feel a feeling/sense of.joy(高兴),excitement(兴奋),pride(骄傲),anger(愤怒),rage(狂怒),panic(惊慌),alarm(惊慌),terror(恐惧),horror
5、(恐惧),fear(恐惧),unease(不安),sorrow(悲伤),sadness(悲伤),grief(悲伤),embarrassment(尴尬),disappointment(失望),shame(羞愧),guilt(愧疚)。2 1 例如：She felt a wave of panic,but forced herself to leave the room calmly.她感到一阵惊慌，但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。技巧 2：面对复杂的情境，人物产生急迫/复杂的心理【技巧举例】（2021 年 1 月，浙江高考，Para.2）The video was posted online the
6、 Monday before Halloween.I looked just like a pumpkin head in it.Embarrassed and a little annoyed,I fled to my room,but Mom stopped me.“You havent read the comments yet.”I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween.【分析】续写第二段首句提示语提供了一个新的情境，即“The video was
7、posted online”，这让故事主人公内心冲突加剧（Embarrassed and a little annoyed），但当听力母亲的话之后，主人公开始阅读网上的评论，这又将主人公引向另一情境，结果主人公内心又起了变化（marveled）。情境的不断变换，加剧了故事主人公内心的矛盾冲突的不断变换。【用语储备】（1）心里想：think/say to oneself（2）害怕；恐慌：with fear/panic/terror;tremble;shiver;shake;quake;tremble with fear;be seized with panic;scream with panic
8、/terror;freeze/shake with terror（3）生气；愤怒：with rage;be red-cheeked with rage;tremble/shake with rage;feel like crying with rage;be speechless with rage;be boiling with rage（4）兴奋；激动：with excitement;yell with excitement;jump up and down with excitement;scream with excitement;go wild with excitement（5）悲
9、伤；流泪：Tears blurred ones eyes.泪水模糊了她的双眼。/Ones eyes got misty.一个人的眼睛都模糊了。/Ones eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊。/tears roll down ones eyes/cheeks/face 泪水落下 技巧 3：面对他人的行为或行动，人物展开了新的动作/行为【技巧举例】(2021 年，新高考 I 卷，Para.2）The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw
10、 the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.It was not only the gift,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children could finish cooking a breakfast,which she didn t expect.The children said loudly,“Happy Mother s Day!”Mother hugged the
11、m tightly and kissed them again and again.【分析】续写第二段中，当双胞胎叫醒母亲（woke their mother up）后，母亲的动作首先有“saw”和“was very surprised”，之后在双胞胎发出节日问候“Happy Mothers Day”时，母亲的动作有“hugged”和“kissed”。这种“动作主动应对”模式在休息的故事情节冲突拓展过程中是比较重要的，因为动作上的变化往往承载了人物对情节中的矛盾冲突的回应模式及态度。【用语储备】（1）常用词语：open ones mouth;widen ones eyes;rise to on
12、es feet;jump to ones feet;shout at the top of ones lung;reach out（伸出手）（2）常用句式：如：Having passed the exam,he was so happy that he was at a loss what to do.通过考试后，他非常高兴，不知所措。She opened the gift with her hands shaking slightly.她用轻微颤抖的手打开了礼物。技巧 4：人物沉浸在某一情境中，于是出现了新问题【技巧举例】（2018 年 6 月，浙江高考,Para.1）Suddenly a
13、little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall.Then my dad turned around and shouted,“Hold on!”All of a sudden the horse began to run.My dad tried to keep up behind us.For a few minutes my horse slowed d
14、own to a trot and then stopped beside a river.I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.【分析】续写第一段首句承接源语篇提供了一个新的情境，即“rabbit jumped out”，从而引发了马与人的一系列的避险动作，并且马由于受惊而奔跑起来，最终将主人公带入了另一个困境，即“we were way off the track”。【用语储备】（1）不幸的是 (unfortunately)But bad luck for sb,.但是某人真不走运 She tried her
15、 best,but in vain.她尽力了，但没有成功。（2）某人做了某事，不知道下一步该做什么。Sb did sth,wondering what to do next.Sb did sth,not knowing what to do next.技巧 5：情况好转或情境向好，人物突然有了一个想法【技巧举例】（2020 年 7 月，浙江高考，Para.2）At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved.Elli used pepp
16、er spray again to buy us enough time.But this time the bear became more alert.He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger,so we throw all the food we have.He then turned away and started devouring.As we were climbing the rope ladder,Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of b
17、eing safe and sound.【分析】续写第二段首句预设了一个新的情境“the helicopter arrived”，于是故事主人公的心情好转（My heart leaped with joy），并且当再次遇到熊的攻击时，主人公就又有了新的想法（we throw all the food we have），这将故事的冲突与发展带到另一个情境中；此外，当获救后，主人公又开始感谢（Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound）。可见，用新的想法接续“情况好转”可以充分展现人物对整
18、个事件的回应过程中的特写镜头。【用语储备】“某人突然想到”：It suddenly occurred to sb that.=It hit sb that.=It struck sb that.=It dawned on sb that.技巧 6：面对他人的鼓励/激励/帮助等，人物找到了解决办法【技巧举例】（2017 年 6 月，浙江高考,Para.2）A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.They found the dangerous situation,where three men circled the wolf.Mac
19、s friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf.More and more cars stopped.Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars,and some took out the knives,even the guns towards the wolf.In the meanwhile,the wolf might feel the peoples threats around,so it began to step back s
20、lowly.Soon,it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.【分析】续写第二段首句提示给出了来帮忙的人（the other two cyclists arrived），之后又不断有人加入（Macs friends also jumped off their bicycles/More and more cars stopped），故事中的人物有了一系列与狼对抗的动作，如“circled the wolf”“took out the sticks from the cars”“took out the knives”等，
21、这些将故事中人狼对峙的冲突进一步推向高潮。【用语储备】（1）鼓起勇气 (做某事):take/gather/ones courage(to do sth)（2）毫不犹豫/选择：without a second thought/without delay/without hesitation/having no choice 技巧 7：获得新的成长，人物开始总结、点题并呼应前文【技巧举例】（2022 年 1 月，浙江卷,Para.2）One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.I felt so
22、 sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case.He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits.I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it.We began to work as a fine team and finally fi
23、nished our project on time.Our hard work paid off and Dr.Hendersons was very satisfied with our wonderful findings.From this project,we also learned the significance of teammates.Just as the saying goes,one person can go far,but a group of persons can travel farther.【分析】续写第二段中主人公最后发现能与队友和谐相处并最终完成了项目
24、（We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time），这引发了主人公的反响，并且主人公的这种体验不断地深入（从“we also learned the significance of teammates”到“a group of persons can travel farther”），充分展现了主人公内心的矛盾冲突从不断激化到出现转机、再到一步步迎刃而解的过程。【用语储备】（1）直到 才意识到 倒装句：Not until.did sb realize/notice that.强调句：It was
25、only.that sb realized that.（2）表达经历与教训 What a valuable lesson I have learned from.!我从 中得到了宝贵的教训。What an unforgettable experience!多么难忘的经历啊!（3）结尾点题 God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。Everyone is the architect of his own fate.每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。Life is full of laughter and tears.Only by accepting both
26、 can we enjoy life.生命就是充满欢笑和泪水的。只有同时接受两者，我们才能享受生活。Never underestimate the power of your action.永远不要低估你的行为的力量。1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。In late December,the cow path near our house in Tennessee was still covered with leaves,but I knew snow would be falling soon enough.My younger brother,B
27、uddy Earl,and I were on an important mission:Go to Uncle Tommies place and get a goose(鹅).The hiking over Little Mountain and getting there would be worth it.Uncle Tommie raised the best geese around,and hed offered to give us one for Christmas dinner.Uncle Tommie met us at the door.“Im not rushing
28、you boys,”he said,“but as light snow started,youd better get the goose and head home.”It didnt take me long to pick up a goose from his yard.Buddy and I said a quick thank you and goodbye.The snow came down harder,wind blowing every way.3“Im as cold as ice.How about you?”asked Buddy.I tapped the goo
29、ses head.“I wish we had feathers to keep us warm like you,”I said.“Or heavier coats.”“Doug,Im freezing,”Buddy said.I could hardly hear him over the wind and my own chattering teeth.“I think we should go back.”The idea was attractive,but we were closer to home than to Uncle Tommies house.We had to pu
30、sh on.I held the goose closer to my chest.The bird was the only warm thing about me.I stepped in front of my brother.“Buddy,open your coat!”“Are you crazy?”He asked.“Ill lose the little warmth I have.”When he saw I was serious,he slowly unzipped(拉开的拉链)his coat and opened it.I placed the warm goose i
31、nside his coat and zipped it back up.“Make sure you keep the gooses head out so it can breathe.”Buddy sighed happily.My plan was working.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Doug,it is time for you to open your coat.”_ Hearing our surviving experience,my parents hesitated about what to do with th
32、e goose._【参考范文】“Doug,it is time for you to open your coat.”Buddy handed the goose to me.Its feathered body was as warm as angel feathers inside my coat.Putting my freezing hands on its body,I felt a rush of warmth sweeping over me.We passed the goose back and forth between us all the way home,battli
33、ng biting cold.After what seemed like ages,we got home.Upon arrival,we couldnt wait to explain to our parents how the goose had kept us from freezing.(76 words)Hearing our surviving experience,my parents hesitated about what to do with the goose.“What should we have for Christmas dinner?”They looked
34、 at us with a concerned look.“Anything but the goose.He has saved our lives.”Buddy and I exclaimed.Shifting gazes between us and the goose which was honking as if he were pleading too.“Fine.Then well do without it,”my parents announced.“Hooray!”we sprang to our feet.That Christmas,we didnt have a gr
35、and feast,but came upon a hero in our life.(75 words)【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和弟弟巴迪厄尔去汤米叔叔家买只鹅。因为父母要给他们一只做圣诞晚餐。在回家的路上，雪下得更大了，风到处刮。鹅帮助作者他们取暖，回到了家。作者他们迫不及待地向父母解释这只鹅是如何让他们免于冻僵的。最后父母决定不杀他们生命中的一位英雄。的故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“道格，你该把外套打开了。”可知，第一段可描写作者抱着鹅和弟弟一起冒着风雪回家的经过。由第二段首句内容“听到我们幸存的经历，我的父母对如何处理这只鹅犹豫不决。”可知，第二段可描写作者
36、父母决定不杀这只英雄鹅。2.续写线索：冒雪取暖解释决定感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 递过来：deliver/pass/hand over.回家：all the way home/go back home/return home.阻止某人做：keep us from/stop us from/prevent sb(from)情绪类.感谢：showing ones appreciation/show ones gratitude/be grateful.担忧的：concerned/worried【典型句式】句式 1.After what seemed like ages,we got home.（由
37、连接词 what 引导的宾语从句作 after 的宾语）句式 2.Shifting gazes between us and the goose which was honking as if he were pleading too.（运用了非谓语动词，由关系代词 which 引导定语从句和 as if 引导的虚拟语气）2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Coming Clean Derek and Janey were eating in the hall and talking about the jacket of Mr.Such,who was
38、 their teacher.“Theyre so crumpled and baggy,”Derek said.“Like a pair of old dish-cloths.”“He wears them all the time!I really wish hed get some new ones,”Janey sighed.At that moment Mr.Such himself came into the hall.Today he was in a brand new suit,which was white and spotless.Everyone in the hall
39、 stopped eating and stared at him in amazement.“Wow!”said Derek,leaning across his plate.“Mr.Such,you look so different today!I like your suit!”Thank you,Derek.Its for Parents meeting.”said Mr.Such,a bit red in the face.“But thats not till Monday,Mr.Such,”Janey said.I know that,Janey.Im just getting
40、 used to it.”The last lesson of the day was art.In case his new jacket got dirty,before his teaching.Mr.Such took it off and hang it on the cupboard door.However,probably because he hadnt got used to the new jacket,he forgot to take it back with him.All the students left except Derek and Janey,who w
41、ere still busy with their painting.Derek mixed up too much green paints and got his hand very dirty.He reached behind him and rubbed his hands on the towel on the cupboard door.Except that it wasnt the towel.“Oh,”he said quietly.“What have I done!”Turing around,he found he had wiped his hands on Mr.
42、Suchs new jacket!Janey wanted to help,so she quickly grabbed some paper and rubbed at the green marks.“Oh no!”Derek cried in agony,“Youre making them worse.Theyre twice as big now.”Janey felt sorry and thought hard,and finally she came up with an idea.“He was still in the office,so we still have tim
43、e.Theres only one thing for it now,”she said with determination and pointed to the sink outside the classroom.Desperate as Derek was,he took some soaps and fetched the jacket secretly to the sink with Janey.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 They darted over to the sink and turned on the tap._“O
44、h dear,the green stuff was still there.”Janey sighed.“I think we have to tell the truth.”_【参考范文】They darted over to the sink and turned on the tap.The water running,they quickly threw the jacket into the sink.With his heart beating wildly,Derek rubbed the green marks with the soaps，and washed/scrubb
45、ed them carefully.The water soon formed into a pile of bubbles.After washing away the bubbles and squeezing the water out,they couldnt wait to turn it over.To their disappointment,the green marks were still there!Dereks heart sank.“Oh dear,the green stuff was still there.”Janey sighed,“I think we ha
46、ve to tell the truth.”Gathering up his courage,Derek headed to the office with Janey.Derek told Mr.Such everything and apologized to him,“I am sorry I ruined your jacket.”However,Mr.Such said gently,“Anyway I really appreciate your courage to admit your mistake.”Surprised,Derek and Janey asked anxio
47、usly,“But what about the Parents meeting?”Mr.Such put on his old jacket and replied,“This one just suits me better.”With laughter lingering in the office,they all felt a warm current welling up in their hearts.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了德里克和詹尼的老师萨奇先生为了这次家长会准备了一件新外套，在最后一节艺术课后，萨奇忘了把外套带回去，结果德里克不小心将外套当成毛巾擦手，他和
48、詹尼一起洗还是没洗掉最后坦诚相告的故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他们冲到水池边，打开水龙头。”可知，第一段可描写他们试图通过肥皂能洗掉污渍。由第二段首句内容“哦，天哪，绿色的东西还在。”詹尼叹了口气。“我认为我们必须说出真相。”可知，第二段可描写詹尼和德里克与老师坦诚相告。2.续写线索：帮忙无果说明真相道歉欣赏感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类.去：head to/go/leave/apart from.道歉：apologize/make an apology 情绪类.温柔地：gently/softly/tenderly.焦急地：anxiously/in anxiety/nervously【典
49、型句式】句式 1.Gathering up his courage,Derek headed to the office with Janey.（这句话运用了动词现在分词作状语）句式 2.With laughter lingering in the office,they all felt a warm current welling up in their hearts.（这句话运用了现在分词作宾语补足语和现在分词作后置定语）3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A long time ago,there was a country where the
50、people would change a king every year.The person who would become the king had to sign a contract that he would be sent to an island after one year.One king finished his term and it was time for him to go to the island.The people dressed him up in expensive clothes and put him on an elephant and too