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1、ContinuationWritingpWhopWhenpWherepWhatpWhypHowThestoryisaboutI,mydad,UnclePaul,Tina,RyanandKyleasummerafternoontheWildWest,UnclePaulsfarminPecoswentonavacationStep1Readforthebasicinformationtense(时态时态)?thesimplepasttenseIwantedtotakeahorseride.climaxstory mountainbeginningdevelopmentendingTip1Useas
2、torymountaintounderstandthestorybetter.Step2ReadfortheplotBeginningEndingClimaxexcitedimpressedTheplot&thefeelingsseeingtravelingIntheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,goton
3、ourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Dontbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelate afternoon sun mixed to c
4、reate a magic scene.It looked like a beautifulwoven(编织的编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.ReadfortheplotBeginningEndingClimaxridingexcitedimpressedTip2Feelingschangeasthestorydevelops.relaxedjoyfulFeelings?seeingtravelingjumpingoutgettinglostTheplot&thefeelingsPredictthedevelopmentoftheplotw
5、iththecluesofthegiventextthe2firstsentences10keywords.Step3PredictthedevelopmentPara.1Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Para3Hiswife.MydadandIspentthenight.ofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Para.4.“Dontbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andk
6、eeptothetracksothatyoudontgetlost!”.Clue1:Wehadan_vacationIhaveneverhadbefore.thecluesofthegiventextexciting/unforgettableClue2:Asuggestivemethod：toreturnhome_byridingalongtheriverClue3:Wegotlostbecause_theyrodeoffthetrackPara.1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.wherewhatWhatwastherabbit
7、like?Whatwasmyreactiontotherabbit?Whatwouldweseewhilechasingtherabbit?Whathappenednext?Step3PredictthedevelopmentPara.2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Wegotlost.Howdidwegetlost?HowdidIfeelandwhatdidDadreact?Didwefindthewayout?How?Whomaycometoourrescue?Howaboutthesurroundingsinthedarkness?Tip3:Byr
8、aisingquestionsonyourown,youcanproducemoredetailsofthedevelopmentofthestory.Step3PredictthedevelopmentdadUnclePaulfarmhouseriverfeedsheeplatetrackgotlostsightWho（人物）（人物）When（时间）（时间）Where（地点）（地点）What（行为）（行为）10keywordsdad;UnclePaul;sheepfeed;gotlost;sightfarmhouse;river;tracklateStep3Predictthedevelop
9、ment第五档第五档(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理合理。内内容丰富，容丰富，应用了应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能可能有些错误，有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结续写短文结构紧凑构紧凑。keywordslogicalplotrich,accurate,coherent(连贯的)languageRequirementsforw
10、ritingStep4FinishthestoryThelanguageofthegiventextisA.plainandsimpleB.complicatedC.beautifulD.detailedPossibleversionParagraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.“Whatalovelyrabbit!”Ishoutedwitheyesglitteringwithterrificexcitement.ItwasquitedifferentfromthoseIsawinourcity,thusimmediately
11、stimulatingmyinterest.Dadwasalsostunnedbythisspecialrabbit,gawkingatitmotionlessly.“Dad,letscatchitasourpet!”Isuggested,unexpectedlyreceivinghispromptagreement.EntirelyforgettingwhatUnclePaulhadtoldus,wechasedafterthatprettyrabbit,franticwithrapture.Unfortunately,socleverandswiftwasitthatitdisappear
12、edintheforestbeforelong.Notuntilthendidwerealizethatthelastrayoftwilightwasquicklydisappearingamongthenumeroustreesandwecouldntfindourtrackatall!Wedidgetlost.PossibleversionParagraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thebone-chillingwindhowledfiercelylikeawolf,makingthedarknessevenmoresuffoc
13、ating.“Dad,whatcanwedo?”Ithrewmyarmsaroundhimtightly,quiveringandseizedbystarkhorror.“Allisgoingwell!”Dadansweredinagentlevoice,calmandmollified.Wewanderedinthescaryforestanddidntknowwhathorriblethingswouldhappentous,hopingtofindthewayback.Suddenly,weheardthesoundofwaterrollingdowntheriver.Wewereove
14、rthemoonanddecidedtofollowtheriver.Afterawhile,weheardthefamiliarsoundofsheepandthencaughtsightofthefarmhouse.Thefamilywerewaitingforusinthedistance.Seeingthis,aradiantsmilelitupbothofourfaces.评点：光线的消退暗示了时间的流逝和黑夜的到来，推动了故事情节的 发 展，与 下 文 的 getting dark衔 接；bone-chilling,scary,horrible词的运用以及比喻修辞的运用，渲染了阴森
15、恐怖的气氛，也烘托了主人公内心的害怕、恐惧；同时，河流和羊的声音也为故事的结局提供了线索和出路，给故事画上了圆满的句号。语言语言：准确准确、丰富丰富u语言风格要与原文的风格相一致语言风格要与原文的风格相一致u通过通过细节描写细节描写使续写具有画面感使续写具有画面感uHowtoenlivenyourwritingandenvisionyoursituation?如何添加细节描写（情绪表达）读后续写微技能指导读后续写微技能指导他很高他很高兴兴。Hewasveryhappy/excited/ecstatic.DiscussionDiscussionDiscussionDiscussion一个人高兴（
16、兴奋）一个人高兴（兴奋）会体现在哪些方面会体现在哪些方面呢？从自身到周围呢？从自身到周围环境进行思考。环境进行思考。他很高他很高兴兴。Hissmilebroadenedfromeartoear.(表情之面部表情之面部)Heclappedhishandstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.（动作）（动作）Hegiggledandsquealedwithexcitement.（语言声音）（语言声音）(1)看到眼前可爱的小兔子，我兴奋极了。Seeingthelovelyrabbit,Ifelt_.眼睛因兴奋而闪烁。Seeingthelovelyrabbit,myeye
17、s_withexcitement.激动得心砰砰跳Seeingthelovelyrabbit,myheartwas_withexcitement.激动得大喊“Whatalovelyrabbit!”Ishoutedwitheyesglitteringwithterrificexcitement.表示表示兴奋的心的心理理excited/thrilledshone/twinkled/sparkled/gleamedthumping/pounding（2）当当Tom紧紧拥抱紧紧拥抱Jane时，她开心极了。时，她开心极了。WhenTomheldhertightly,Janewas_.非常幸福;心满意足Wh
18、enTomheldhertightly,itseemedasifJanewereon_oftheworld.眉开眼笑；笑容照亮天空WhenTomheldhertightly,herface_andherbrightsmile_thesky.欢欣雀跃WhenTomheldhertightly,hereyes_withjoyandsweetness.表示表示开心开心的心的心理理happy/delighted/fullofjoytoplitupbeameddanced(3)当看到那只凶恶的狼逼近时，Mac感到很害怕。Atthesightofthefiercewolfapproaching,Macfe
19、ltvery_.,Mac感到很害怕，嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。Atthesightofthefiercewolfapproaching,Macfeltsoscaredthathisthroatwas_andhiskneesfelt_.,Mac吓呆了，不敢动弹。Atthesightofthefiercewolfapproaching,Mac_withterror,tooscaredto_aninch.,Mac被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Macwas_byastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmswere_表示表示害怕害怕的心的心理
20、理scared/frightenedtightenedweakfrozemoveseizedsweating(4)意识到不得不再过一夜，Jane悲伤不已。Realizingshehadtostayaloneforanothernight,shefeltextremely_.心痛，眼泪直流。Realizingshehadtostayaloneforanothernight,herheart_,tears_downhercheeks.悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话Realizingshehadtostayaloneforanothernight,she,numbwith_,hadtroublespe
21、aking.被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣Realizingshehadtostayaloneforanothernight,shefeltseizedbyaburstof_andcouldnthelpcrying_.表示表示悲悲伤的心的心理理achedstreamingsadnessgriefbitterlysadThe_(甜蜜的)fragranceofflowers,thefaint_(嗡嗡声)ofinsectsaswellasthegentletouchofthe_(微风)broughtbackmemoriesofthebygonedayssharedwithTom,hottearsal
22、most_(涌出)upinher_(变红)eyes.sweetbuzzingbreezewellingreddened情景交融情景交融表示表示悲悲伤的心的心理理Thewindwas_dreadfullyandtherainwas_fromtheheaven,_againstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwas_withaseaofdarkness.howlingpouringwhippingburdened/loaded表示表示悲悲伤、害怕害怕的心的心理理Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromth
23、eheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.A：A sense of horror crept up on me.B：A flood of fear washed over me.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtothrowmyarmsarounddadtightly景情过渡景情过渡(5)看到学生们拙劣的书写，Mr.Yang感到非常生气。Whenseeingpupilspoorhandwriting,Mr.Yangfeltvery_.充满愤怒,紧握拳头
24、，身体僵硬了一会，说不出话。然后慢慢向前走去，教室里的温度似乎都降低了许多，没有人敢抬头。突然，他冲出了教室，狠狠摔门。Boiling/Filledwith_,Mr.Yangclenchedhisfists,_forseconds,unabletoutterasingleword.Thenhe_hisfeetforward.Thetemperatureintheclassroomseemedtohavedropped,andnobodydaredtolookathim.Suddenly,he_outoftheclassroom,_thedoorfuriouslybehindhim.表示表示生气
25、生气的心的心理理angrystormedrage/furystiffeningshuffledslammingAngeladraggedherlegsandmovedoutofthetestcenter,herheaddropped.Anairofsorrowanddepressioncouldbesensedtenyardsaway.Soon,hereyesbegantowater.Shewouldfailthemathexam,definitely!Disappointmentcameinwavesandatlength,tearsstreameddownherface.Theonlyth
26、ingshewaseagertodowasrushbackhomeanddropherselfontotheshabbylittlecouchandweep,wildly!How？1.夯实课本知识，做好积累夯实课本知识，做好积累2.关注练习，注重积累关注练习，注重积累3.阅读课外小说，丰富积累阅读课外小说，丰富积累4.学习他人作品，学习他人作品，补充积累补充积累PracticeChooseoneofthetopictowriteashortpassagetodescribewhatyouwouldsee,hearorthinkandhowyouwouldfeelifyouwereinsucha
27、situation.1.Itwaspitchdarkonenightandyouhappenedtobeinaforestalone.Whenyouwerecontrolledbypanicyousawdimlightinthedistance.2.Oneafternoon,youstayedhomealone.Therewasasuddenpowerfailurewhenarainstormcame.Youfeltsoscaredthatyoudidntknowwhattodo.Onepossibleversion1.Itwaspitchdarkonenightandyouhappenedt
28、obeinaforestalone.Whenyouwerecontrolledbypanicyousawdimlightinthedistance.Itwaspitchdarkintheforest.Hearingtheweirdnoises,Ifeltmyskincrawling.Thewindhowledaroundtrees,likechildrenlostinthenightandcryingfortheirmother.Click,click,click.Itwasmyteeth,chattering.Suddenly,Isawabeamoflightglowing in the d
29、istance.I went rushing towards it.Then Ijammedonthebrakes.MyspinefeltlikeabigiciclewhenIfiguredoutwhatitwas.Withoutthinking,Iranlikeahuntedanimal,bashingintobushes,fallingdown,staggeringtomyfeetandrunningon.Onepossibleversion2.Oneafternoon,youstayedhomealone.Therewasasuddenpowerfailurewhenarainstorm
30、came.Youfeltsoscaredthatyoudidntknowwhattodo.Therewasasuddenpowerfailure.Ipartedmybedroomcurtainsatinycrack.Itwasdarkerthandarknessoutside.Thelightningwasflashingintheskywhilethethunderwasroaring,whichmademefeelsickandshivery.Iyankedthecurtainsshut,curleduponthebed.However,itcouldntpreventpaniccreepingintomybones.Straightaway,mystomachclencheduptight.Mybrainwaslikeascribble.BeforeIcouldthinkstraight,thedoorwaspushedopen.SeeingMomcomingback,Isobbedwithrelief.THANKSTHANKS