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1、建议信一.写作标准信:具体内容信息点无一遗漏,写信的目的,理解安慰并提出建议达:语气真诚友善,给出的建议充分合理篇章结构篇章结构及内容:首段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。(注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。)首段常用语I feel sorry about your suffering at the moment.I am gald that you ask me for advice.Thank you for your
2、 trust on me提升Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.Im very glad to receive your letter and its a pleasure to tell you something aboutAfter I read your letter,I am sorry to know thatYou asked me for my advice on and I will try to make some suggestions.你询问我关于的意见,我试着给一些建议。Thanks for t
3、rusting me.Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice.中间段My suggestions for you are as follows.Maybe(副词)some of my tips are useful for you.It is advisable(可建议的)to do.(主语)Try to.and youll find it beneficial.(宾语补足语)If you do.you will be better at.It is highly recommended that.One thing thats
4、necessary to do is that.(完整的句子)提升Why not do.?Why dont you do.?Shall we do?我们干某事好吗?Would you like something/to do sth.?你想要什么吗?你想要干吗?What(How)about doing?干某事怎么样?祈使句Lets do 让我们干某事吧。用Dont.来表示建议,通常用于祈使句的否定形式中。如:Dont play in the street.Dont throw it like that.Please.一首先,你应该另外,我建议最后,同等重要的是你最好In the first p
5、lace.Are supposed/expected to do sth.Also.Last but not least.二First of all.(重要建议)As is known to all.(次要建议)Whats more.(次要建议)Last but not least,(总结观点)结尾I hope my suggestions will bring you some new understanding.With my advice,I hope things will be much easier for you.The above mentioned are my tips f
6、or you.Life will get better with a clear picture of what to do in your mind.Please take my advice into careful consideration.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into con siderati on.I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/us
7、eful.Don hesitate to ask me if you have any other questions.真题例文(2019年浙江省新高考名校联考信息优选卷)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack写邮件向你请教猪年的意义,并想买一些具有猪年特色的礼物。请根据下列提示用英文给他写一封邮件1.猪年的美好寓意温和、福气、财富等;2.特色礼物推荐猪年纪念币、邮票等;3.如有问题,愿意提供帮助。注意1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇commemorative纪念的题目分析讲解:首先,我们可以确定这是一篇明显的建议信。其次,题中的细节比较详细,我 们可以直接根据细节
8、进行写作。最后,进行细节处理。第一段:简单提及题中的细节。由于这是一封回信,也可以向Jack表示已收到 来信。如:Ive received your email that you are interested in.第二段:这是这篇文章的重点部分,需要包含题中1.2.3点内容。为了让文章 更丰富,我们可以使用不同的句型。适当也可以加入从句、非谓语、强调句等语 法点。第三度:结束语,表达希望喜欢,期待收到来信。例文欣赏参考范文(102):Dear Jack,Im delighted to receive your e-mail.Hearing that you are interested in
9、 the“PigYear,Im more than flattered to cast some light on it.Pigs are distinguished(区分)for their gentle characteristic in China.They are regarded as a symbol of good fortune and wealth so we decorate the images of the pig on a varietyof stuff.Consequently,if you want to buy some specific gifts about
10、 pigs,there areample things,such as commemorative coins of the“Pig Yearand commemorativestamps.To sum up,Im eager to offer any help if you have other questions.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua课后作业假如你是李华,擅长中国国画,正在美国一所高中交流学习。老师Amy邀请你给同学们上一节课,简单介绍中国国画。请你给她回封邮件,要点如下:1.接受邀请;2.介绍上课计划;3.建议学
11、生做课前准备。注意:1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。提示:提示:本文可以看作是一封介绍信,也可以看作是一份建议信。这儿我们当作建议信来写。具体内容为:1.接受邀请,可以表示感谢;2.介绍课程计划以及给学生的一些建议;3.结束语。答案Dear Amy,I feel greatly honored to be invited to give a traditional Chinese painting lesson.Im writing to express my gratitude and offer my arrangements for this class.Init
12、ially,Ill show some paintings to arouse studentscuriosity and help themdistinguish different painting styles.Afterwards,Ill present some basic techniquesabout how to create a simple work.Then theyll have adequate hands-on opportunities.At the same time,Ill coach them and give timely help.By the way,please remind thestudents to make preparations in advance which involve brushes,paper and ink.Let me know if you come up with any good idea.Yours,Li Hua