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1、Unit1 WritingA letter of adviceI.RequirementsII.StructureStucture of a letter of advice Para.1(3句)1.2.3.Para.2(6句)1.2.3.Para3.(1句)1.dategreetingBody(正文)CloseSignature我知道你的问题是什么我知道你的问题是什么我理解你的感受我理解你的感受我想给你一些建议我想给你一些建议建议1+原因建议2+原因建议3+原因我希望/我相信我的建议会对你有帮助III.FormatDear.Im glad to receive your letter ask
2、ing for my advice on.I understand your feeling.Here are a few suggestions.First,why not.?If you do this,.Second,you should/can.because.Third,it would be a good idea if.By doing this,.I hope you will find these proposals useful.Best wishes./All the best.(XXX)Here are suggestions:First Second Last but
3、 not leastFirst of all Then Besides/In addition/Whats more建议1:Reason:建议2:Reason:建议3:Reason:IV.OutlineFirst of all,Why not join a volunteer group that helps other people?This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.It will also help you realize that you are not alone in having problems,to
4、o.Helping other people also makes us feel better.Then,I recommend that you should connect with your parents online.Just because your parents are far away,it doesnt mean you cant talk to them.Whats more,if I were you,I would keep a pet for company.Im sure that a lovely pet could bring you happiness a
5、nd drive away your loneliness.Dear Xu Ting,You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city.I understand exactly how you feel.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to feel lonely when they live far away from their parents.So Im writing to give
6、 you my advice.First of all,why not join a volunteer group that helps other people?This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.It will also help you realize that you are not alone in having problems,too.Helping other people also makes us feel better.Then,I recommend that you should conn
7、ect with your parents online.Just because your parents are far away,it doesnt mean you cant talk to them.Whats more,if I were you,I would keep a pet for company,like a dog.Im sure that a lovely pet could bring you happiness and drive away your loneliness.I sincerely hope that youll find my suggestio
8、ns beneficial.All the best.Susan LuoV.Useful ExpressionsPara.1句子句子1：我知道你的问题是什么：我知道你的问题是什么1.我很遗憾听到你在.方面有问题。_2.了解到.我想要给你一些建议。_3.你向我征求关于的意见，我将试着给你提供建议。_Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in doing sth.Knowing that+句子，句子，Ilike to give some suggestions.You have asked me for a
9、dvice with regard to/concerning,and I will try to give you my suggestions.V.Useful Expressions句子句子2：我理解你的感受：我理解你的感受我十分了解你.的感受。_句子句子3：我想给你一些建议：我想给你一些建议1.我写信是想谈谈我对这个问题的看法，希望对你有用。_2.以下是我的建议。_I understand quite well that/I know exactly how you feel.Im writing to share my views on this problem,which I ho
10、pe may be helpful to you.Here/The following are my suggestions.V.Useful ExpressionsPara.2句子句子1-6：3个建议个建议+3个原因个原因1.为什么不.?_2.我强烈建议你.以便._3.我的建议是.这样，.对你来说会更容易。_4.如果我是你，我会._5.我认为.会是一个更好的/有用的/明智的主意_6.你有没有考虑过.?_Why not?/Why dont you?I strongly advice you to so thatMy advice/suggestions is that and in this
11、way,it will be much easier for you toIf I were you,I wouldI think it would be a better/useful/wise idea to Have you considered doing?V.Useful ExpressionsPara3.句子句子1.我希望我希望/相信我的建议会对你有帮助相信我的建议会对你有帮助1.我希望/相信我的建议对你有用。_2.如果你能考虑我的建议，我会很高兴的。_I hope/am sure that my advice will be helpful to you.I would appr
12、eciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.VI.Writing 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应假设你是李华，你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信。主要新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信。主要内容包括：内容包括：1.不过分焦虑；不过分焦虑；2.制定合理的学习计划；制定合理的学习计划；3.多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。注意：注意：1.词数词数80词左右；词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以
13、使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。VI.Writing-Outline 建议建议1.不过分焦虑不过分焦虑(_)Reason:_建议建议2.制定合理的学习计划；制定合理的学习计划；(_)Reason/Result/Example:_建议建议3.多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。(_)Reason/Result/Example:_First,youd better not worry about it too much.Too much anxiety is bad for your health,and it would not be good for you t
14、o adapt to the new environment.Second,I strongly advice you to make a proper schedule,so that you can focus on improving your study.As a teenager,it is our responsibility to study well.Last,my advice/suggestions is that you sign up for extra-curricular activities and in this way,it will be much easi
15、er for you to make more new friends.VI.Writing 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应假设你是李华，你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信。主要新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信。主要内容包括：内容包括：1.不过分焦虑；不过分焦虑；2.制定合理的学习计划；制定合理的学习计划；3.多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。多参加集体活动，结交新朋友。注意：注意：1.词数词数80词左右；词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
16、。档次档次得分得分评分分标准准第五档14-151.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档11-131.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。第
17、三档8-101.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档5-71.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档1-41.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容
18、，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。高考写作评分标准高考写作评分标准建建议信信写作写作模板模板Dear.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.I understand your feeling.Here are a few suggestions.First,why not.?If you do this,.Second,you should/can.because.Third,it would be a good idea if.By doing this,.I hope you will find these proposals useful.Yours sincerely,(XXX)