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1、公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司读后续写：人与动物类读后续写：人与动物类.从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处,要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就
2、是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼 wolf 追赶，脱险经历（追赶，脱险经历（2017 年年 6 月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇 polar bear 追赶的惊险经历（追赶的惊险经历（2020 年年 6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给 Poppy 买一条小狗作伴，帮助买一条小狗作伴，帮助 Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020 年年 1 月浙江高考
3、）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021 年年 3 月临沂市一模）。月临沂市一模）。Part1：经典例文（小狗救人）：经典例文（小狗救人）Just as many families do at a point,Catherine chose to add a new family member2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司by adopting a pet.Shortly after her daughter Kates birth,Cathe
4、rine decided shewanted a close bond with a dog for Kate.Thus,Catherine called the dog shelter closeby to inquire about adoption.After hearing about the available animals,she chose aDoberman Pinscher.Once they signed adoption papers,they named the dog Khan.Catherine was hopeful this would provide val
5、uable lessons for her baby,such assharing,learning to love and responsibility to care foranimals.She was looking forward to having the dogjoin the family.Hearing of Khans rough background,Catherineimmediately loved the dog.She was overjoyed to bringthis special dog back to her family.Of course,shere
6、alized there were risks involved.Well,the obvious risks from bringing a large,potentially dangerous animal to her young baby,Catherine pushed them aside.If shehad not adopted Khan,he would have been killed just a week later.So,this was hisnew life and second chance,and the family was hoping for the
7、best.Everything began smoothly.They trained Khan during the first few days.However,everything changed on that fourth day when the dog acted completely outof character.The fateful day began with the usual playtime in the yard.Although baby Katehad her parents watching from a distance,they did not not
8、ice anything out of theordinary.Kate and the new dog had been making a habit of playing out back like this.However,things were different this day.So what was actually happening out there?The two were not being loud or crazy.They began running through the backyard grass together.Again,Catherine watch
9、edthe two closely.Surprisingly,things had changed within an instant!注意：1.续写词数应为 150 词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden,公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司_Obviously,it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell downwith dying eyes._【参考答案】【参考答案】Khan began acting w
10、ildly all of a sudden.With her mouth wide open,Catherinewatched Khan dragging her child,hoping he would stop.Just as she was wonderinghow he could suddenly become this way,Khan put down Kate outside the yard.Catherine rushed to Kate and carried her to safety while Khan barked towards theyard wildly.
11、Catherine returned,only to find a poisonous snake crawling in the yardand she drove it away.可汗突然开始疯狂地表演起来。凯瑟琳张开嘴，看着汗拖着她的孩子，希望他能停下来。就在她想知道他怎么会突然变成这样的时候，汗把凯特放在院子外面。凯瑟琳冲到凯特身边，把她抱到安全的地方，而汗则疯狂地向院子走去。凯瑟琳回来了，结果发现一条毒蛇在院子里爬行，她把它开走了。Obviously,it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and thencollaps
12、ed with dying eyes.Khan protected Kate from the poisonous creature and wasattacked.Although living with the family for merely four days,he became theprotector as Catherine had hoped.Catherine rushed Khan to the vet.“May God blessyou”,Catherine murmured.The vet tried his best to save him.Eventually,h
13、e made itand Catherine shed a tear of relief.显然，是汗救了她的孩子，但他的吠声很微弱，然后瘫倒了，眼睛垂死了。可汗保护凯特不受有毒生物的伤害，并遭到了袭击。虽然他只和家人一起生活了四天，但他还是像凯瑟琳所希望的那样成为了保护者。凯瑟琳冲着可汗去看兽医。公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司“愿上帝保佑你。”凯瑟琳喃喃地说。兽医尽力去救了它。最后，他成功了，凯瑟琳如释了一口气。Part2：人与动物故事构造两大故事套路套路一：可爱型动物故事情节：人与动物故事构造两大故事套路套路一：可爱型动物故事情节可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者
14、人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。1、外貌、外貌1.a pair of large watery eyes一双水汪汪的大眼睛2.two big round eyes 两只圆溜溜的大眼睛3.beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的 眼睛4.a nose like a small black gem 一颗黑宝石般的鼻子5.long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的
15、 腿6.fur is as white as snow 皮毛像雪一样洁白7.a long little tail 一条长长的小尾巴2、动动作作wag the tail 摇尾巴smell/sniff 嗅bark/yap/yelp 狗吠lick 舔put the ears up 把耳朵竖起来公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司shake the whole body 抖动全身bite the corner of the coat 咬住衣角rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部hold it tightly with t
16、he paws 用爪子紧紧按住fall on its back 摔得四脚朝天run around me 围着我跑keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停挠你raise its whole body on its hind legs 用后腿支起全身leap to its feet 跳起来rest the nose in its paws 把鼻子搁在爪子里keep its fore legs doubled up 保持前腿弯曲3、高兴、高兴1.他们很高兴看到波比恢复了往常的样子，指导小狗每天散步，甚至向它介绍她最喜欢的玩具。They were gl
17、ad to seePoppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到 Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guiding the little dog on daily walksand even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）2.他笑得如此灿烂，大声呼唤他的父母，他们把他拉了进去，给了他一个长时间的拥抱。Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）,he called out to his parents,whotugged him in for a long hug.
18、（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）3.她的父母看着他们四处玩耍，欣慰地笑了笑，Poppy 又回到了她那快乐的老样子！Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）Poppy was back to her old cheerful self!（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）3、常见动物、常见动物公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司鹿：鹿：1.一只小鹿躺在干燥的地面上，一只长着一对巨大鹿角的鹿妈妈出现在他面前。Amother deer with a huge pair of deer horns
19、（有一对大的鹿角）appeared in front ofhim,with a baby fawn(幼鹿)lying on the dry ground.2.这个可怜的家伙，显然非常需要水，用它那贝壳般粉色的舌头很快地把它舔掉了。The poor creature,apparently in desperate need of water,licked it up quicklywith its shell-pink tongue（很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.3.母鹿低下头，轻轻地舔了舔我儿子的脸颊，好像表示感谢。The mother deer lowered her head and li
20、cked my boyscheek gently,as if expressing gratitude（低下头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）.马：马：1.在围栏里，Gina 看到了马，它是中等大小，它皮毛细腻柔软，油黑油黑的，有一只白色的脚。At the pen,Gina saw the horse.It was of medium size.It had a fine,soft blackcoat and one white foot（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）.2.它的脸中间有一大片白色的斑点，Gina 对它一见钟情。“哇哦！好一匹马。”There was awid
21、e white patch(斑 纹)that ran down thecenter of its face.Gina fell in love with it at first sight.“Wow!What a horse.”3.马似乎感受到了她的好意，嗅了嗅她。The horse seemed to feel her kindness,sniffing her（闻了闻她）.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司狗：狗：1.他们给了小狗一些她最喜欢的花生酱。他们甚至让她坐在沙发上，但那个老女孩并不像往常那样快乐。They offered the dog someof her favor
22、ite peanut butter treats.They even let her siton the sofa,but the old girl just wasnt her usual cheerfulself（不像往常那么快乐）.（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）2.她把鼻子凑上去。她的尾巴摇得很慢，当她闻到气味时，摇得更快了。She puther nose on it.Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）ever so slowly,thenfaster as she caught the smell.（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）3.Poppy 小心
23、翼翼地靠近，尽量不惊吓小狗。果然，就在片刻之后，皮球才从盒子里抬起头来，来看看它的新家和新朋友。Poppy approached with caution,tryingnot to scare the puppy.Sure enough,it was only moments later that the ball of furlifted its head out of the box（把它的头伸出盒子）to peek at its new home and itsnew friend.（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）4.听到他的行李被卸在车道上，波比竖起耳朵，突然她四肢着地了。那男孩受到
24、一声欢快的尖声吠叫的欢迎。然后前门砰的一声打开了，Poppy 扑到他的怀里，后面跟着那个可爱地舔着他手指的小家伙。Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway,Poppys ears pricked up（竖起耳朵）andsuddenly she was on all fours（四 脚 着 地）.The boy was greeted witha cheerful high-pitched bark.Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted tohis embrace,followed by the
25、 little one who licked his fingers fondly.（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱脱险险的的故故事事情情节节为为主主。1、害害怕怕1.我和艾莉吓坏了，想尽了所有我们知道的防熊行动。Terrified（非常害怕）,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.（2020.7
26、 高考浙江卷）2.看到北极熊逼近，我吓得呆住了，吓得一动也不敢动。Seeing the approach of the polar bear,I froze withterror,too scared to move an inch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）3.我妻子埃利抓住我的衣服，浑身发抖，使劲吞咽。My wife Elli grasped myclothes and trembled,swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）4.突然一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我。A numbing chillgrippe
27、d me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.5.想到狼那血淋淋的嘴，Mac 几乎被吓死。Thinking of the wolfs bloody mouth,Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死）（2017 年 6 月高考浙江卷）6.我被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制，手心冒汗。I was seized by a strong sense ofhorror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）,my palms sweating.2、求求助助与与获获救救1.看到它，Elli 疯狂地挥动双手，尖叫着：“救命啊！”At the sight of it,Elli waved her ha
28、nds wildly（疯狂地挥手）,screaming,“Help!”（2020.7 高考浙江卷）公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司2.当我们安全地坐上直升机飞向空中时，我惊讶地发现熊终于拆掉了围栏，朝我们留下的食物跑去。When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air,I wasamazed to spot（惊奇地发现）that the bear had finally torn down the fence and rantowards the food we left behind.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）2.Brian 把
29、庞大的尸体从树桩里拉出来后，清洗了伤口，然后仔细地给他治疗。Becky 跪下来，和 Brian 一起照料狼。Having pulled the massive body out of thestump,Brian cleaned the wounds（清洁伤口）and then gave him careful treatment.Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照顾狼）together with Brian.4.我走近那只无辜的小狗，把它握在手里，擦了擦小狗 直到他变干。I wentnear the innocent one and he
30、ld it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗）till he had become dry.5.我用一块石头作为支撑点，解开锁链，把狼放了出来。Using a rock as thesupporting point,I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走这只狼）.3、熊熊：1.当我和埃利做晚饭时，一只正在附近湖里玩耍的年轻雄性北极熊嗅了嗅，闻到了我们的大蒜面包的味道。As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear whowas playing in
31、a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled ourgarlic bread（嗅着，闻着我们的大蒜面包）.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）2.他拉了一下铁丝，咬了一下。他用后腿站立，推着木栅栏柱。He pulled and bitthe wire.He stood on his back legs（用他的后腿站起来）and pushed at the woodenfence posts.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）3.那只熊站了起来，袭击了栅栏，由于那可怕的水花，它甚至想要撕裂我们，公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司怒火在它的眼里燃烧。The bear reared
32、 up,attacked the fence and even desired to teardown us（想要撕裂我们）with flames blazing in its eyes（怒火在他的眼里燃烧）owing to the dreadful spray.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）4.然后它袭击了 Mac 的自行车后部，撕开了他的帐篷包。Then it attacked the backof Macs bike,tearing open his tent bag（撕开他的帐篷袋）.（2017 年 6 月高考浙江卷）5.Mac 的一个朋友挑了一些生肉扔给狼。狼对他得到的很满意，跑进了树
33、林。One of Macs friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf.Satisfiedwith what he got（对他得到的很满意）,the wolf ran into the woods.（2017 年 6月高考浙江卷）4、狼狼：1.淡黄色的眼睛眯了起来。黑色的嘴唇绷紧了。两套两英寸的锋利牙齿暴露出来。狼突然颤抖起来。它的牙齿喀啦一声，从喉咙里发出痛苦的叫声。Pale-yellow eyes narrowed.Black lips tightened.Double sets oftwo-inch sharp t
34、eeth were exposed（露出它那两排两英寸宽的利牙）.Suddenly thewolf trembled.Its teeth clacked,and a painful cry rose from its throat（它的牙齿咔嚓响，从它的喉咙里发出一声痛苦的喊叫）.2 狼的头沉到地上，悲伤的黄色眼睛看着我们。The wolfs head sank to the ground,sad yellow eyes looking at us（黄色的眼睛悲伤地看着我们）.3.那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮，猛烈地敲窗户。So angry was the wolf that itkept ro
35、aring（那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮）and smacking the window violently.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司套路三：主题升华设计套路三：主题升华设计可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。1.Elli 和我吸取了教训:当心一只牙痛的熊。Elli and I learnedour lesson（学到一个教训）:Be aware of a bear with a
36、 toothache.（2020.7 高考浙江卷）2.尽管秋风凛冽，但他们的家里充满了爱与团聚的温暖。Despite the chill autumn wind,their home was filled with thewarmth of love and reunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020 年 1 月高考浙江卷）3.那天下的雨是一场奇迹,拯救我们的农场，就像我儿子拯救了一条生命一样。The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）,saving our farm,just like my boy saved a lif
37、e.4.狼似乎感觉好多了，慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻 Becky 的手，好像在表示感谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！Appearing to be feeling better,the wolf slowly raised his headand gave a gentle kiss to Beckys hand as if to express thanks（好像在表达感谢）.What a warm scene!Part3：人与动物场景素材积累：人与动物场景素材积累(01)Paragraph 1:Harry turned and ran from the pond.“Wait for me!It won
38、t be long,”heexclaimed to me.Desperate and hopeless,I closed my eyes,praying this was all adream.And even worse,the water was so cold it felt like millions of needles were公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司stabbing me.How I wished that I could fly out of the icy water like a bird!After whatseemed to be ages,Harr
39、y returned to the pond,with a long oak branch in his hand.As I grabbed hold of one end of the branch,my brother started to drag the other withevery last ounce of his strength.Thank goodness,Iwas able to climb out of the ice hole and then wegalloped home.Paragraph 2:The moment I crashed through the k
40、itchendoor,sobbing,mum rushed over.“Oh,my God!Where have you been?”she said insurprise.“Youre completely wet.”“Its Harrys fault!”I complained to her throughmy chattering teeth.When I told her what had happened to me,her eyes were widewith horror.All of a sudden,she took my arm,pulled me into the bat
41、hroom and thengave me a warm bath.After that,mum dressed me in a warm coat,wrapped me in ablanket and poured me a cup of hot milk.She sat next to me,smiling,relieved that Iwas all right.Sure enough,my brother was criticized by mum for his lack of safetyawareness.(02)Paragraph 1：Sam arrived very earl
42、y the next morning.He rang the doorbell and politelywaited for Mrs.Proudfoot to answer.Then he could hear Roland barking and whininginside,frantic to get out.Sam stood by the door,debating with himself whether towalk the unfriendly dog to help his best friend.After a while,the door flung open andMrs
43、.Proudfoot came out,greeting him with a beaming smile.Surprisingly,the lazydog grinned up at him and wagged his tail,eager to go out with him.Mrs.Proudfootput a leash on the dog,stroked his glossy head and said,“Have a good time,dear!”Without saying goodbye,Sam and the dog danced around and then das
44、hed out of thehouse.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司Paragraph 2：A month later,Mrs.Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.Obviously,Sams efforts paid offRoland was healthy and active.But what pleasedher most was that Sam,together with the other kids,would stay with her on weekends,chatting an
45、d laughing.Besides,they would help her clean up the yard.From then on,laughter filled her house and she no longer felt lonely.Then came the moment Samhad been looking forward tothe day he was paid for his work.What a big surprise!Tears of gratitude welled up in Barrys eyes as he knew what Sam had do
46、ne for him.Sam just stood there,smiling,glad that he could wholeheartedly support his friendwhen he was in trouble.(03)Paragraph 1:All of a sudden,Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot.What wasthat?She wondered.A sea fish?Before she could get on the surfboard,it bumped herin the foot
47、once again.She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish,biggerthan her,was circling around her.A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought ofthe joke Uncle Mark played on her.And then Betty saw it:a gray triangle fin stickingup through the water,heading right for her.It was a shark,a mas
48、sive shark that wasswimming around,not far away from her.For a split second,her heart practicallyskipped a beat.Paragraph 2:“Help!Help!”Betty screamed in horror.Hearing the terrible scream for help,Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening.Without thinking,he swam as quickly as
49、he could towards Betty and yelled,“Get out!.”But Bettyseemed stuck,too scared to move.At the very moment,the sharks jaws opened wide,showing rows of razor-sharp teeth.With all his might,Uncle Mark stabbed it in themouth with his surfboard,scaring the monster away.And then he grabbed hold ofBettys ar
50、m and dragged her to the beach.All this took only a few minutes,but Betty公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司would never forget the frightening experience.(04)Paragraph 1:He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena(竞技场).The terrifyingday finally arrived.All the people in the city went there to see t