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2、entb. Languuage 2分: 条理不清清，思路紊紊乱，语言言支离破碎碎或大部分分句子均有有错误，且且多数为严严重错误。5分：基本本切题。表表达思想不不清，连贯贯性差。有有较多的严严重语言错错误。8分：有些些地方表达达思想不够够清楚，文文字勉强连连贯；语言言错误较多多，其中有有一些严重重错误。11分：切切题。表达达思想清楚楚，文字连连贯，但有有少量语言言错误14分：切切题。表达达思想清楚楚，文字通通顺，连贯贯性较好，基基本上没有有语言错误误，仅有个个别小错。注：白卷，作作文与题目目毫不相关关，或只有有几个独立立的词而无无法表达思思想，给00分。严重错误语法错错误Theree aree
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