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1、英语写作技巧与写作注意事项(1)第七讲：英语写作二大作文往年试题：Directions:writeacompositionofnolessthan250wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.Sample1MyViewonPlayingComputerGames1.有人以为学生打电脑游戏有利于智力开发。2.有人以为学生打电脑游戏阻碍学习。3.我的观点。Sample2：对贫富差距加大现象谈谈看法评分标准Globalscoringa.Content文档视界2022/a89aaba69cc3d5bbfd0a79563c1ec5da50e2d6aertxllv1rrx
2、t.nguage2分:条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题。表达思想不清，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分：有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中有一些严重错误。11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通畅，连贯性较好，基本上没有语言错误，仅有个别小错。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只要几个独立的词而无法表达思想，给0分。严重错误语法错误Therearemanyreasonscausedtheaccident.Thedriverofthecarnoin.Thelifeisb
3、ecominggooderandgooder.Thatdayrainbigly.ThemanwhothroughthestreetThecarwhichinafastspeedhithim.Thecarwhichinafastspeedhithim.Igottheplacewherehappenedtheaccident.Ourcitywouldhappenmanytraffic.写作注意事项1.审好题，想好再写，不要写了又划掉，也不要写完了发现字数不够有写，这样整篇文章就不联贯了。2.把握好文章的重心，一般“我的观点应该是重心。3.注意写作的格式缩进式或齐头式。4.拿不准的词、短语或用法应避
4、免使用。5.表达要明晰、简洁，不必一味追求构造的复杂而尽可能多的使用从句，这样文章会显得很罗嗦。如：Theeconomyisdevelopingataspeedwhichisveryfast.6.注意用词和搭配。7.检查-s和-ed，尽量避免严重错误。ChoiceofWords1.ThreelevelsofEnglishwordsEnglishnativewords(core)informal(oral)FrenchorSpanishwordsLatinorGreekwords(academicwords)formal(written)ExamplesEnglishFrenchorSpanis
5、hLatinorGreekaskinquireinterrogatebreakseverseparatefireflameconflagrationhouseaboderesidencekinglyroyalregalmanlymalemasculinerisemountascendtimeageepochIknowthatIamawarethatIbelievethatIamconvincedthatIhaveagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurstome.CausegiverisetoEmphasizelayemphasisonBecauseofdueto,owingtoSto
6、p,endcometoastop/endSuddenlyallofasuddenOftenmoreoftenthannot2.ConnotationofWords(Englishexplanation)common,peasant,assassinate,gay,acquire,date,property,enemy,problem,issue3.GeneralVsSpecificterms(overuseofgeneralterms)beautiful,delicious,famous,ChinasEnglish小康社会、缘分、丞相、风水、三个代表孔子、孟子、老子容易用错的词1.词性lack
7、,serve,contact,last,marry,concern,like2.汉语影响moreperfect,veryexcellent,returnback,repeatagain,goodmemorypower,listeningability,highqualitygoodslearntheknowledge常见错误(1)twopredicatesinonesimplesentenceEveryyearlotsoffamilyssitatthefrontofTVwaitthisgameafterhavedeliciousmeal.TherehavemanypeoplelikeSFG.M
8、ymothercooksfoodisverydelicious.(2)OmissionandoveruseofBeNowdaypeopleslifelevelisarise.ManypersonarelikewatchSFGintheeve.SFGwasappearedsince1984.SFGislikedbymanypeople.Howfasttimewasgone!SFGcandivideintoseveralparts.Weverybusy.(3)Comparativedegreemoreandmorebetterbecomegooderandgooder,(4)Conjunction
9、because.soalthough.butWhile(5)IverylikeSFG.Veryhate(6)PartofspeechmostofweChinese,makemesurprise,withthequickdevelopmentofeconomicandsocial,Inmysopinion,IadvicetokeepSFG.eatinggood,drinkinggood,playinggood;goodplays,goodlook,gooduse;Ithinkitduestothedevelopment,Letsanalysisanddiscoverythemainfactors
10、leadingthechanges.Tomen,womenjustlikedclothes.theylikeitlikemelikeit.twoweekspastchoose,choice,succeed,success,successful,die,dead,death(7)ChoiceofwordsThewholefamilyassembletohaveadinner.congratulateSpringFestival,abolish(stop,giveup)SFG,sitbehindtheTVtolookSFG,ManypeoplefallinlovewithwatchingSFG.W
11、ecanelectotherprogramstosee.celebrateSFGwithbomb,standintheshadow/shademosquitobite/stingItsagaymeeting/party(8)Phrasesinallin;onehand,anotherhand,thirdhand;atonehand,atsecondhand,atlasthand;inonehand,fromotherhand;lastbutnotthelast,lastbutnotmost;onmyopinion;Acoinhastwohands(coins).Everythinghastwo
12、hands(coins).(9)SpellingWecantcansle(cancer,cancle)it.SFGiswatchedbyholeword.happyness,include(ing)SF,EverystudentincludemeenjoysPoorpeoplemaybeveryangry(hungry).eatthesoap(soup);BenefitialDrivedDispiteIwilladopttothecampuslife联贯1.并列：and,aswellasontheonehandontheotherhandforonething.foranotherfirstl
13、y.secondly.thirdlyfinallysubsequently,then,thereafter,afterward,inthefollowingatfirst,initially,originallyatlast,eventually2.递进：Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,AdditionallyWhatismoreBesidesApartfrom3.转折ButYetHoweverNeverthelessWhileWhereasOnthecontraryIncontrast4.结果SoTherefore,ThusHenceAsaresultcons
14、equenceConsequently5.原因Because(of)DuetoOwingtoOntheaccountofInviewofThankstoOnthegroundsthat6.假设If.GiventhatProvidedthatUnlessOntheconditionofAs(so)longas7.其他(1)Sentenceadverbs:absolutely,alternatively,currently,undoubtedly,certainly,consequently,subsequently,obviously(2)PP:ingeneral,onaverage,infac
15、t,ineffect,intheory,inpractice,inreality,inparticular,(3)Advspeaking:generallyspeaking,broadlyspeaking,strictlyspeaking,theoreticallyspeaking(4)preciselybecause,mainlybecause,merelybecause,onlybecause段落用语Beginning:WiththedevelopmentofAsiswellknowntoWeallknowthatAsweallknowAsaproverbsays,Asasayinggoe
16、sAsforsomepeopleholdtheopinionthat.Whileothersargue(maintain)thatEverycoinhastwosides.Ithasmeritsanddemerits.Ithasprosandcons.SupportersandopponentsDevelopmentRecentresearcheshaveproven/shown/indicatedthatMyarguments/reasons/ideaswillbelistedasfollows:Inthefollowingparagraph,IwillFirstly,secondly,an
17、dfinallyWhyisitthat.EndingAllinallInawordInconclusionInshortInsummaryTosumupTosummarizeInbrief其他用语bedeeplyrootedinbeinfavorofbeopposedtoItgoeswithoutsayingthatThepasttwentyyearssaw/witnessChancesareNowonderItislikelythatAstimegoesbyWhenitcomestoAsillustrated/showninthechart/table面试：面试的教授专业领域涵盖所有现有学科
18、人文科学、社会科学、技术科学、自然科学、学生德育五大类,每大类组随机抽取1人,组成一个面试五人小组。面试前,教授们将审阅考生的各种资料,包括考生们所提交的入学申请材料和水平测试成绩等。面试时,由教授对学生一对一面试,每名学生都要“连闯五关,与5位专家面对面交谈,累计面试时间超过1个小时。专家组将从学生博学、社会实践、兴趣、创新能力、时政了解、思想性等多方面考察学生的综合素质,并根据面试结果作出能否录取的建议。英语面试试题2005复旦：根据男女就业表格，给speaker写一份报告。2006复旦：谈谈你所希望的大学生活的一天2006交大：根据twins，identical，doctor，fun编一个故事