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1、2006年北京市海淀区年北京市海淀区高三英语一模优秀作文高三英语一模优秀作文第一部分：情景作文第一部分：情景作文第一部分：情景作文第一部分：情景作文话题：话题：校园生活校园生活文体：文体：应用文（日记）应用文（日记）审题要求：审题要求：文体：文体：记叙文记叙文时态：时态：过去时过去时+现在时现在时人称：人称：第一人称第一人称要点：要点：1.学校门口集合学校门口集合 2.乘车到体育场乘车到体育场 3.热身准备热身准备 4.长跑测试（详写）长跑测试（详写）5.体会感受体会感受看图作文的基本步骤：1.认真审题定格式认真审题定格式2.仔细审图定要点仔细审图定要点3.连句成篇连句成篇4.全面检查免失误全
2、面检查免失误写作要领写作要领1.读图，理解每幅图所表达的意义。读图，理解每幅图所表达的意义。2.为每幅图列出关键词。为每幅图列出关键词。3.行文，使用表示时间顺序的连接词使文行文，使用表示时间顺序的连接词使文章流畅。适当增加与本文有关的内容使章流畅。适当增加与本文有关的内容使文章充实。文章充实。4.最后简谈体会作为结尾。最后简谈体会作为结尾。给分要求：第一档第一档优秀优秀18-20要点齐全，内容充实；用词准要点齐全，内容充实；用词准确，句式丰富；行文连贯，结确，句式丰富；行文连贯，结构紧凑。构紧凑。第二档第二档良好良好15-17要点齐全；用词、句式较丰富；要点齐全；用词、句式较丰富；连接成分使
3、行文连贯。连接成分使行文连贯。第三档第三档及格及格12-14要点全；词汇、句式能满足任要点全；词汇、句式能满足任务要求，可达意。务要求，可达意。第四档第四档不及格不及格6-11缺要点，词汇、句式有限；影缺要点，词汇、句式有限；影响理解响理解优秀作文优秀作文 Early in the morning,we got together at the school gate and headed for Haidian Sport Center by bus.Following the teacher,we walked into the playground.Then we were asked t
4、o do some pre-exercises in order to avoid getting hurt in the test.I was not good at sports so I felt a little nervous.Later,it was my turn to take the 1500-meter running.I took a deep breath and walked towards the start line.Hearing the teachers“Ready,go”,I set out first.During the last 200 meters
5、distance,I felt too tired to move a step.Suddenly,I heard my classmates voices.Their words encouraged me a lot and I used all my strength running towards the end.Happily,I finished my test in six minutes which was the best mark I had ever received.I learned a lot from todays test.The test made my mi
6、nd stronger and I knew that without efforts,nothing can be done.What a meaningful day!(18分）分）Students writing 1:As soon as we got off the bus,I saw Haidian gym.We walked into the gym one by one.I didnt feel nervous until I set foot on the playground.Without thinking,we did some warm exercise followi
7、ng the teacher.It was not long before my turn came.As I stood I on the start line,my legs seemed like stones,I could hardly move one step.Hearing the sound of“Go!”,my classmates did start but me.Even worse,I fell down on the playground.I stood up as soon as I could and set off.When I finished the fi
8、rst circle,I was no longer myself.Remembering the days I trained for the test,I would never give up.Seeing others ran over the line,hearing the shouting“come on”that encouraged me,I achieved my goal at last.From now on,no matter how difficult problems I face,I will never give up,especially after my
9、hard experience of the P.E test.Students writing 2:We came to the Haidian District Physical Education Center by bus on the morning of March 14th.After a brief request given by our P.E teacher,we entered the playground one by one.All of us did physical exercises so that we wont got hurt in the coming
10、 examination.The most important moment came at last,after the judger said:“start!”,everyone began to run as fast as they could.I tried my best to catch the students ahead of me.One by one was left behind from me.Finally,I reached the end line at the first place.What a wonderful day I had!Sample writ
11、ing March 14,2006 Sunny It was a special day because I took the Final P.E Test for Senior Three students.The sun was shining brightly and we reached the stadium by bus.Under the guidance of the teacher,we gathered in groups at the entrance.Before the 1500-metre race,we had a five-minutes warm-up,but
12、 I felt a little nervous because I was not doing well in long-distance running.With the teachers order,we began to run as fast as we could.Towards the end of the race,I was so tired that my pace slowed down and several runners caught up with me.However,encouraged by my classmates,I kept running with
13、 every effort,finally I crossed the finishing line at 540”.To my delight,this is the best result I have gotten in a 1500-meter race.Today I was a success!Not only did I challenge the strength and endurance that a runner needed but also I learned that trying my best would really make a difference.第二部
14、分：开放作文第二部分：开放作文话题：话题：学生生活学生生活审题：审题：谈对父母精心照顾你的感受谈对父母精心照顾你的感受人称：人称：第一人称第一人称时态：时态：现在时现在时写作要领：写作要领：内容充实、具体、形象、生动内容充实、具体、形象、生动要求：要求：观点要健康，积极，向上观点要健康，积极，向上第一档第一档优秀优秀13-15思维活跃，逻辑清晰；内容思维活跃，逻辑清晰；内容充实，交际得体；语言运用充实，交际得体；语言运用能力强能力强第二档第二档良好良好9-12词汇、语法满足要求；错误词汇、语法满足要求；错误不影响理解不影响理解第三档第三档及格及格4-8跑题跑题:词汇有限，不能达意词汇有限，不能
15、达意给分要求：给分要求：优秀作文优秀作文 Above all,I feel I owe so much to my parents.Since I was born,they have tried their best to take care of me.Especially in this period,they devote all their time to ensuring me a good studying environment and expect me to have a bright future.However,as you know,this in fact give
16、s strong stress on me.Wanting to live up to expectations has made me more and more serious about my studying.To some degree,their behavior may do harm to me.For this reason,I want them to care less about me and let me feel relaxed.In my eyes,I am likely to get a better result in the coming examinati
17、ons if I am in a relaxed state.(13分）分）Students writing 1:Maybe you will say that Im lucky enough to own my parents whole attention.But,you know,like a lot of teens today,I need more freedom.Exerting himself to let me feel cooler,my father was sweat all over.Im really concerned for his health.With th
18、eir running around me,I cant fix my attention to study.To make things worse,I cant persuade them to relax themselves,meanwhile give me the freedom.I know they love me and care for me heartedly,but I think it is unwise to treat me as their“God”.Students writing 2:As the college entrance examination i
19、s coming closer and closer,my parents are trying their best to help me.They do everything they could to make me feel more comfortable and concentrate on studying.Such as encouraging me when I failed in an examination or chat with me when I have difficulties in studying or communicating with other pe
20、ople.They are not only my parents but also my best friends.I couldnt imagine the world without my dear parents.They support me so much.I dont know how to express my appreciation and love to my parents.All I could do is studying harder and harder so that I could enter a key university in return.Sampl
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