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1、图画作文读图审题漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理，要求根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。在下笔之前要仔细看漫画，弄清漫画的寓意，这是文章切题的保证。此外，Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向，这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。作文的图画选择都含有丰富的寓意。要求：把握寓意、联系现实、深刻思考、丰富表达。第一段 开门见山，简要描述一下漫画内容，并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意，是手段而不是目的，所以描述要简洁明快，一般来说一到两句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是，写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述，因此考生切不
2、可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。第二段:表达对漫画寓意的看法，这是文章的重心所在。写这一段时，考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理，避免空泛的议论。考生可以从2-3个方面对观点开展论述；也可以举出具体的事例论述比较抽象的人生哲理，尽量避免空洞的说教；还可以使用类比论证的方法，即可以通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理；还可以举出统计数字，用具体的研究结果来证明论点。第三段 结论段，建议措施（4句）第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义，或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是，结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析，其主要作用是总结和升华，使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要，点到即止。1.结论句：1句2.针对双方
3、提建议：2句3.包装结尾、展望未来：1句。Only in this way can we solve the problem.It is high time that we solved this problem.1.描述漫画句:1)We can see from the cartoon/picture/drawing that_.2)As is indicated in the cartoon/picture/drawing,_.3)As can be clearly seen from the cartoon,_.下面是一些漫画图表作文的句式下面是一些漫画图表作文的句式2.引出暗含主题的句
4、 型1)We can deduce from these two vivid drawings/pictures/cartoons that_.2)What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society,and it expresses/conveys the symbolic meaning of_.3)The cartoon/picture/drawing reveals that 画面折射出来的现象。3.引出原因句 1)Many reasons/factors contribute to/account for this
5、phenomenon.In the first place,_.In the second place,_.Last but not the least,_.2)There are some possible reasons for this tendency.To begin with,_.Furthermore,_.The most important of all,_./On the one hand,_.On the other hand,_.In addition,_./For one thing,_.For another,_.Whats more,_.4.引出对策句 1)It i
6、s,therefore,necessary that efforts should be made to deal/cope with the problem as early as possible.2)We should take immediate measures,for if the present situation continues as before,serious outcome will come up.3)As far as Im concerned,my suggestions are as follows.Inthecartoon(s)picture(s)/draw
7、ing(s)presentedtous，画面内容进一步阐述画面内容.Obviously,whatthecartoon(s)/picture(s)/drawing(s)symbolicallyillustrate(s)isthat或者thecartoon(s)/picture(s)/drawing(s)reveal(s)that画面折射出来的现象。描述漫画段描述漫画段However/lnfact,画面寓意/观点.或者Infact,manyreasonscontributeto上述现象：Aboveall/Firstofall/Tostartwith/Firstly,论据一原因一.进一步解释论据一或
8、原因一.Whatsmore/Moreover/Then/Secondly，论据二原因二.进一步解释论据二/原因二./Inaddition/Besides/Finally,论据三原因三论证寓论证寓意段意段 However/lnfact，画面寓意/观点.Manyexamplescanbefoundtoprove画面的寓意/观点.Andtheexampleof能说明观点的例子一isatypicalone.对例子的进一步阐述.Foranotherexample,能说明观点的例子二.（举例论证适用）（举例论证适用）Tosumup/Personally/Inmyopinion/lnshort,发表个人意见
9、Foronething，方法建议观点重申一.(11)Foranother,方法建议观点重申二.(12)Onlyinthisway/Allinall，段落总结句总结观点总结观点段段 The Importance of Teamwork In the pictures presented tous,amanfeelsverylaboriouswhenholdingabunchofbricksbyhimself.Comparatively,hefeelsmucheasierwhencarryingmorethandoubletheamountofthebrickswithanotherone.Obv
10、iously,what the cartoon symbolically illustrates is that teamworkcangreatlyimproveworkefficiencyinsomefields.(描述漫画段)Infact,teamworkismoreimportantinthemodernsocietyandteamworkspirithasbecomearequiredqualitybymoreandmorecompanies.To start with,thereislimitationinacertainindividualscapacitywhichwillbe
11、compensatedbypartners.Withthehelpoftheteam,theproblemscanbesolvedeasilyandquickly.In addition,teamworkprovidesuswithafriendlyandenjoyableworkenvironment.Finally,throughfrequentcommunicationduringtheteamwork,peoplecanlearnfromeachotherandbeinspiredbyotherscreativeideas.(论证寓意段)In my opinion,theteamwor
12、kisbeneficialtoboththeindividualandthecollectivity.For one thing,itdoesmakeuptheindividualsdefectsandimprovetheefficiency.For another,itreallyprovidesuswithaplatformtoperformbetter.All in all,workingtogethercouldmakelifeeasier.图表作文 第一段：第一段：描述图表，概述图表所揭示的信息描述图表，概述图表所揭示的信息 首段需要通过描述图表中不同信息之间的变化关系揭示出图表中的
13、数据变化反映的事物、现象或趋势，概述图表所揭示的信息（总趋势+极端值+特点，时态）。必须交待三个要素：图标研究的时间段、研究的对象和研究图标研究的时间段、研究的对象和研究所采用数据形式（视具体的数字还是百分比）。所采用数据形式（视具体的数字还是百分比）。需要注意的是，描述图表中的数据时不宜过于详细，而要善于发现规律，有一定的概括性和总结性。第一段常用句型：1)According to/As shown in/As can be seen from the table表格/bar chart柱状图/graph曲线图/,it is quite clear that the(average)numb
14、er of X rose/fell significantly(sharply/greatly/noticeably)from(数量)in the year to(数量)in the year./remained stable/fluctuated between 100 and 200 from 2005 to 2010.(描述数据变化的句式:变化的主体变化的主体+动词动词 （+副词）副词）)2)It can be seen from/We can see from/It is clear/apparent from the table/chart/graph that there was
15、a(sharp/significant/noticeable)rise/decline in the number of.from(数量)in(年份)to(数量)in(年份)。/a fluctuation between 100 to 200 in the number of.from 2005 to 2010.(There be+There be+形容词形容词+名词名词+in+in+变化的主体变化的主体)3)The table/chart/graph/cartoon shows/describes/illustrates/indicates/outlines/summarizes _.4)T
16、his chart/graph/table shows a great/sharp/sudden/slow/rapid increase/drop.第二段：分析图表所反映的问题或趋势产生的原因第二段：分析图表所反映的问题或趋势产生的原因需要注意的是，说明原因或影响时可以列举两到三点，但鉴于文章字数限制，不一定每点都展开论述，可以选其中一到两点稍加展开。分析原因常用句型：分析原因常用句型：1.Thechangeinlargelyresultsfromthefactthat2.Thereareseveralcausesforthissignificantgrowthin.First,.Second
17、,3.Threereasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.Firstandforemost,（阐释具体原因一）.Moreimportantly,（阐释具体原因二）.Lastbutnotleast,（阐述具体的原因三4.Therapidgrowthof.owesmuchto/liein.第三段：展望未来的情况或提出解决问题的办法或建议第三段：展望未来的情况或提出解决问题的办法或建议 最后一段写自己对图表所表现的主题的评论或看法，最后一段写自己对图表所表现的主题的评论或看法，对它的未来趋势进行展望或者阐述其发展方向，对它所存在的问题给出一些措施或建议如果这篇文章讲的是一
18、个令人担忧的问题，那么这一段写解如果这篇文章讲的是一个令人担忧的问题，那么这一段写解决的办法。决的办法。Generally speaking,in order to put an end to this bad momentum势头,some compelling measures should be taken into account.On the one hand,具体措施一.On the other hand,具体措施二.Only if we have taken the above-mentioned measures,can this momentum be curbed抑制eff
19、ectively.如果这篇文章讲的是一个好的变化，那么这一段很可能是两如果这篇文章讲的是一个好的变化，那么这一段很可能是两种情况种情况可能写负面的影响或存在的问题，或者写未来趋势或可能写负面的影响或存在的问题，或者写未来趋势或发展方向。发展方向。To sum up,in order to maintain such a sound momentum（势头）,a number of great efforts should be made to take some effective measures in this regard.On the one hand,具体的措施一.On the ot
20、her hand，具体的措施二.Only in this way can this momentum be kept smoothly.From the statistics(information)given in the table,we can see/From the statistics(information)given in the table,we can see/estimate/conclude thatestimate/conclude that 描述图表段描述图表段Fromtheabovechart/graph/table/picture,wecanseethat总述现
21、象（概括图表所反映的总体现象）图表中数据一图表一Incontrast/However/And，图表中数据二图表二.（描述图表中能体现现象变化的数据，要具有一定的概括性）Accordingtothechart/graph/table/pictureabove,总述图表现象（概括图表所反映的总体现象）.图表中具体细节描述(描述图表中的具体细节数据变化)Obviously/Consequently,thischart/graph/table/picturehasforcefullyprovedthat图表呈现出的结果。(揭示图表所反应出的问题现象趋势)说明原因说明原因/影响段影响段Manyreaso
22、nsaccountfor图表反映的问题./Consequently,manyproblemsrelatedto图表涉及的主体emerge./图表涉及的主体或呈现的结果candolotsofharm/benefits.Firstly/Firstofall，原因一影响一进一步说明原因影响一Furthermore/Secondly,原因二影响二.Thirdly/Besides，原因三影响三(Asaresult，以上原因导致的结果）阐述观点段阐述观点段/说明影响段说明影响段/说明问题段说明问题段Asforme/AsfarasIamconcerned,“我”的态度相关情况或是现象将来的趋势、可能带来的（
23、好的或坏的）影响或存在的问题.Foronething,理由一/影响一/问题一(持此态度原因一可能带来的影响一存在的问题一).(11)Foranother/Inaddition/Besides,理由二/影响二/问题二(持此态度原因二可能带来的影响二存在的问题二).(12)Inbrief/Toconclude,总结全文(总结全文，重申观点，提出建议或作出展望)The Ways People Spend Their HolidaysFrom the above chart,we can see that the way people spend their holidays has changed
24、from 2005 to 2010.Thenumberoftravelersincreasedby9%from33%to42%duringthefiveyears.In contrast,thenumberofshoppersdeclinedby9%from21%to12%.(描述图表段)Many reasons account for these changes.First of all,alongwiththeimprovementoflivingstandard,an increasing number of peoplecanaffordtravelling.Theyhopetober
25、elaxedthroughtravelling.Furthermore,asanincreasingnumberofshoppingmallshavebeenbuiltaroundtheresidentialareasinrecentyears,itiseasierforthemtogoshoppingwhenevertheywant,somanyofthemsparetheirholidaysdoingsomethingelse.Besides,manypeoplechoosetostayathome,cookingdeliciousfoodorsurfingtheInternet,toha
26、veatotalrelaxation.（说明原因段）Asforme,Itravelalotinmyholidays.For one thing,Icangetrelaxedbytraveling.For another,throughtravelingIcanbroaden my horizon.In brief,whateverwedo,enjoyingthecolorfulholidaysisthemostimportantthing.（阐述观点段）The Tears of A Bird1Describethecartoonanddeducethepurposeofthedraweroft
27、hepicture;2Statetheharmfuleffectsofthephenomenon;3Givesuggestionsastohowtosolvetheproblem.As can be clearly seen from the cartoon,a bird is sitting on the top of a huge ax,with tears streaming from its eyes.Because all the trees are cut down,the bird will have no habitat.The cartoon conveys the mean
28、ing that it is urgent to preserve the woods for the birds and protect the environment for human beings.The cutting of trees,as well as the destruction of our environment,may lead to several harms as follows.In the first place,the trees provide us with many vital things we humans need,such as oxygen,
29、food,shelter and so on.The animals,such as the bird in the picture,also need the trees.In the second place,if trees are cut down,then there will be nothing to retain the rain water,thus floods will happen more often in the future.Last but not least,there is only one earth.If the environment is destr
30、oyed,then we will have no place to live in.Since this phenomenon causes so many harmful effects,we have to come up with some measures to deal with it.First of all,the authorities should adopt the policy of“sustainable development”,just as our government has been doing.Whats more,every citizen should
31、 realize the seriousness of the problem and make concerted efforts to protect our environment.Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsonTechnology and Life.Youshouldwrite
32、atleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.As is vividly showed in the picture above,a young man,with his luggage on hand,happily starts his journey by Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway.Just as the words under the picture says“With Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway,cities far away are just like places n
33、earby”,with the development of technology,the distances between cities are shortened and the traveling to other cities become faster and more convenient.Whether one is willing or not,he can not deny that endless innovations of technology are constantly changing our lives.People use technology to com
34、municate with the outside world,to make new friends,to become informed,and to stay in touch with one another.Modern technology also improves medical conditions and prevents many deaths from occurring.Most importantly,technology improves productivity and efficiency.To the young,the startling advances in application technology enable them to work and live more comfortably.As to children,they benefit most from the boom of information technology.In one word,modern technology has undoubtedly made a serious impact on the world.