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1、2023年一篇文章的英文审稿意见 No.：MY-24-20 Title：Technology Management of strategies for organic Food Industry Expansion in China Major：Technical Economics and Management Expert No.1 1.Academic evaluation.This paper which tries to put forward Chinese busine model of organic food market, based on referring the bu
2、sine model of organic food industry in America and combined with the analysis of the organic food market in China, then conducted a preliminary qualitative and quantitative analysis of the consumer demand and the target customer group.Overall, although this paper may have some practical significance
3、, but on the whole, there is little contribution for busine model and consumer behavior theory.This paper also lacks literature review and only makes some situational innovation.From the reliability of research, the paper lacks of method introduction chapter, and the methods introduction scattered t
4、hrough chapters.At the same time, the paper also lacks of reliability description of case study and online survey.Such as how to choose a representative case and the sample in quantitative analysis.Which method should select in the data collection.How to determine the sampling range.How to measure n
5、onresponse bias.How to analyze the qualitative data.Conclusion: This paper has some practical innovation, but insufficiency in theoretical innovation, besides should strengthen research methods.2.Limitation of the paper and the recommendations of review experts.Firstly, the research scope is too lar
6、ge, but the depth is not enough.My suggestions on this aspect are select one point of the current works and give detailed research.Then put forward more theoretical problems and give depth study, the framework and implementation of the whole paper should base on the exploratory research.Secondly, th
7、e paper should give literature review on selected direction, summary and evaluation of current theoretical research both of the progre and shortcomings.Thirdly, increase the methods introduction chapter, covering study design, data collection, and introduction of qualitative data technology, how to
8、control the validity and reliability of research methods.Fourthly, According to the research questions, the paper should have a chapter in depth discuion about research found.Fifthly, in the chapter of conclusion, you should summarize the research from both theoretical significance and practical significance, and puts forward the research shortcoming and future research direction. 一篇文章的英文审稿意见 缩写一篇文章 评析一篇文章 一篇文章123 比如写一篇文章 成语积累,一篇文章 最近读了一篇文章 怎样阅读一篇文章 写给女儿的一篇文章 令我感动的一篇文章