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1、读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完 整的短文。When I was a kid about twelve years old, I had a lot of freckles （雀斑）.I had reached the age when I had begun to really look at myself in the mirror, and I was overwhelmed. Apparently my mother was too, because sometimes shed look at me and shake her head.I h
2、ad a cousin whose name was Janette Elizabeth. She looked exactly like her name sounds because she had a flawless peaches-and-cream complexion （肤色）.I couldnt help comparing myself with her and thinking that my life would be a lot different if I had beautiful skin too.And then, in the back pages of Ja
3、nette Elizabeths magazine, I found the answer: an advertisement for freckle-remover cream. I knew that I could afford it if I saved my money, and I did. The ad assured me that the product would work well. For three weeks I went to the mailbox every day precisely at the time the mail was delivered. I
4、 knew that if someone else in my family got the mail, I would never hear the end of it. There was no way that they would let me open the box in private.Three weeks later, my package finally came. I went to my room with it, sat on the edge of my bed, and opened it. I was sure that I was looking at a
5、miracle. When I got up the next morning, I applied the cream all over my body. Then I took my hoe （锄头）and went with my brother and cousins to hoe the field, where I got rid of some tiger lilies （虎百合），seemingly ugly with black and small spots.The sun was so strong that even my face started to burn. B
6、y the end of the day, when I came back to the house, my family, knowing nothing about the freckle-remover cream, began to say things like Tve never seen you with that many freckles before/ When I saw myself in the mirror, I found my freckles even darker and clearer. I dissolvedinto tears and hid in
7、the bathroom.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her. After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroomsdoor. 写作解析前文分析人物 I:a kid about twelve years old had a lot of freckles （雀斑） had begun to really look at myself overwhel med J
8、anette Elizabeth:a cousinlooked exactly like her namesounds (had a beautiful skin) my mother:looked at me and shaked her head主题人与人、人与自我(否定-b肯定，心态的转变)主要情节当我12岁的时候，脸上有很多雀斑，爱美之心已经隐约出现，自己对 雀斑不知所措，妈妈看了也摇头。表妹Janette Elizabeth倒是长的很水灵，非常羡慕，希望有跟她一样好 的皮肤。有一天，在她订阅的杂志最后几页看到了祛斑霜的广告。于是， 我就积攒了足够的钱去买来试试。三周后，祛斑产品终于送
9、到，第二天我 就把祛斑霜把全身擦了个遍，然后就跟着哥哥和表兄弟们下地去了。我把 地里看上去有小的黑斑点的虎百合除掉。太阳很烈，晒的脸都感觉焦了一样。干完活回家，家人们看着我的脸说， 从来没看到过我脸上竟然长了那么多的雀斑。我去照了照镜子，发现确实 这些雀斑比用祛斑霜之前显得更黑更清楚了。瞬间，泪如雨下，我跑进了 洗手间。下文分析续写两段：段1：My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her.段2：After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedroom
10、/s door.续写主线：对脸上的雀斑不能接受，想去改变，改变失败，接受现实两段情节安排段1 ：与开头句衔接，为什么不理睬妈妈，同时要注意场地转换。冲进卧室后，我想了些什么做了些什么。明白雀斑会更明显的原因，然后继续伤心(与段2开头句衔接)。段2：起身开门，虽然不太愿意。开门看到妈妈拿着虎百合进来。妈妈借虎百合说明人生道理。 让我的悲伤之情有所转变，了解了实情后，寻求解决的办法。范文1My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her. Thinking of the ugly face, I fell into complet
11、e collapse, tears coursing down my cheeks again. Dashing into the bedroom, I locked myself in it. Whats wrong? Was the freckle-remover cream fa Ise? Anything I can do to rescue my face? . Puzzles ran around my mind. When I read the instructions of its usage carefully, all came to the light - I shoul
12、dnt have been exposed in the sun immediately after using the cream. So sad was I that I threw myself onto the bed sobbing, not knowing what to do. (91 words)After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedrooms door. Sorrowful as I was, I got out of bed and dragged myself slowly towards
13、 the door. Opening the door, I met my mothers smiling face, a bunch of tiger lilies in her hand. She came over, sat on the bed and handed me the lilies with black small spots, saying the value of different flowers lay in their beauty making a colorful world, though they sometimes seemed a little imp
14、erfect. Mothers warm words relieved my sadness. Analyzing the fact, we eventually found a way out to deal with what I suffered. (91 words)范文2My mother called me to the dinner table, but I ignored her. When she came to the bathroom door and demanded that I come out and have a meal, I burst out of the
15、 door, tears streaming down my cheeks. Before she stopped me, I stormed into my room and slammed the door shut behind me. Looking into the mirror, I saw a girl with more and darker freckles on the face instead of peaches-and-cream complexion. Only then did I realize that the cream had a reverse effe
16、ct when wearing it in the sun. I threw myself down on the bed and sobbed. (91 words)After what seemed a century, I heard a gentle knock on my bedrooms door. Hesitating for a moment, with puffy eyes and still wet cheeks, I shuffled across the room to open the door. At the door stood my mother and Jan
17、ette with a big bunch of tiger lilies, which were covered with black spots but amazingly beautiful. I stared at them in stunned surprise, not knowing what to say. My mother held me in her warm embrace. There are all kinds of flowers, and they are all beautiful and sweet/ said she. Hearing this, and smelling the fragranee of the tiger lilies, the freckles on my face seemed to have magically faded. (99 words)