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1、一、阅读下面段文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I peered over my grandmas shoulder as she sewed pieces of cloth together. The two pieces became one faster than Id imagined. The colors, however, looked ugly when put together and none of the patterns matched. All the patches （补丁） on this blanket seemed to disagree.Gr
2、andma, thats the ugliest quilt （棉被）Ive ever seen.”0h, sweetie, its warm and beautiful/ said Grandma, pointing to a pile of crazy patterned shirts and suits. can take these old clothes that Grandpa and I will never wear again and turn them into something useful and good. Its not the quilts appearance
3、 but the love that sews it together that makes it beautiful. This quilt will keep you warm on a cold night like tonight. And I know that for a fact. Grandma put her hand on my shoulder, “Not everyone is as lucky as we are. Here, put on your coat. Well get a second opinion about how ugly my quilts ar
4、e.”Grandma folded a finished quilt and tucked it into a shopping bag. Afterwards, we got in the car and drove downtown. The white snow turned grayer as we got to the city. Eventually, Grandma pulled up at a dark alley （胡同）and we got out of the car. The terrible smell of rotting garbage made me feel
5、sick and pinch my nose shut. Grandma took my hand and led me to the street lamp. I could see the snow shimmering （发出微光）in the light.Grandma paused. zzThere/s usually somebody down this alley. Its quiet and out of the wind-a good place to stay on cold nights. A nice warm quilt might make it even bett
6、er/The dark engulfed （吞没）Grandma and I as we stepped deep into the alley. The pavement was cracked and missing in spots. Chicken bones and stained boxes littered their way. And Grandmas shoes made a loud sound with each step. Feeling frightened, I squeezed Grandmas hand. Grandma squeezed my hand bac
7、k. zzltzs OK she smiled.“Whos there? shouted a voice out of the darkness.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;,7 have a nice warm quilt, if you want/ saidGrandma.Back home, I found a worn-out quilt by accident in a cupboard.分析 主题：爱心 人物:I, Grandma 情节：我看到奶奶缝制了一条带有各种补丁的被子，认为这条被子非常的丑陋。 但是，奶奶却说被子的
8、美不在于它的外表，而在于这条被子是用爱缝制的。之后，奶 奶和作者一起来到城里破旧而又寒冷的胡同。 呼应：与奶奶一起献爱心，帮助困难的人范文 have a nice warm quilt, if you want/7 said Grandma. Silent, but soon came the sound of the footsteps in the darkness, louder and louder, towards us. About two meters ahead of us stood a short thin old man in rags. Hidden behind my
9、 Grandma, I knew all she did! ”The quilt was really for me? asked him in a low voice. Sure!” Grandma opened the shopping bag and pulled out the colorful quilt. /zA.thousand.thanks!,/ I could feel the grateful tears down his cheeks. （76 words）Back home, I found a worn-out quilt by accident in a cupbo
10、ard. Curious, I went to Grandma for the answer, “Why have you kept it? She opened her mouth as if to say something, but choked. A moment of silence, she shared her bitter but warm story. A little girl, she came to the city for a living with her parents, penniless. The quilt was a love from a kind ma
11、n, helping them go through the cold winter. Thats why she kept sending well to those in need years after years. I surely would, too! （83 words）二、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When I was in the first grade, Mom entered me in my first clown （|、丑）contest. The other kids mostly had store-bought costumes
12、 while my consume was made by Mom. I didnt have any confidence in myself.Go up to that clown emcee （主持人）and joke around with him, Mom told me.I wasnt crazy about the idea, but I approached Larry the Emcee and asked, Hey, Big Feet, where do you shop for shoes?A costume store in Kensington, he said ki
13、ndly.Moms trick worked. I won the best personality award, a small trophy（奖杯）with a photo of me and Larry stuck on the back of it.We continued to improve my costume. At a costume store, I found a pair of colorful shoes with white leather stars on each side. I loved them so much that I wore them as ev
14、eryday shoes. The other kids did not respond well. They even wrote a song to laugh at me.Mom defended my shoes when I came home crying. The other kids just dont recognize standout things, she said.If I could not claim close childhood friendships, at least I could boost myself up by winning awards. I
15、 entered a second contest in the third grade and wrote about why I want to be a clown for a day at Ringling Brothers Circus. In this contest, the prize was tickets to the circus for your whole family.Mom and I were in our car when the announcer read my name on air. Todays contest winner is Laura Stu
16、rza. She wrote, You can be unusual at the circus. When everyone laughs at you, it feels great. The audience loves you for being an oddball. Thats why I want to be a clown for a day.1Mom called my teacher and requested her to share the news with the school. I wondered how my classmates would take it.
17、 Its going to be great, Mom promised.The next morning, my schools head teacher announced my success over the public address system.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:To celebrate my success, I wore the colorful shoes to school again that day. Paragraph 2:As time went by, I devel
18、oped a more realistic view of my mothers belief that I can doanything：1故事分析Character: Mom, I (Laura Sturza), kids, the clown emcee, classmates, the teacher, my schools head teacherTheme: confidenceContent:I: (Grade One: no confidenceGrade Three: success.)Mom:( trickdefendedcalled/requestedpromised.)
19、Continuous writing: success / view范文To celebrate my success, I wore the colorful shoes to school again that day. Confidence was apparently on my face. Never did I feel that good. It was Mom that encouraged me constantly to come to the success, which received lots of congratulations from my classmate
20、s and boosted myself up. Even those kids, who had laughed at me by the song, showed their admiration. When walking around the campus, I was often stopped and asked how I had such wonderful thoughts and what inspired me to achieve it. (74 words)As time went by, I developed a more realistic view of my
21、 mother/s belief that z7 can do anything/ The encouragement from Mom drove my enthusiasm to be a real clown in my life. I would make good use of others irony or respond them just by laughing it away. It really worked. What I should do was to have a positive attitude to the life and people around. But the most important was to be unusual, a clown“ at the circus, amusing others and improving myself. zzl can do anything/ became my belief too, which would motivate me to be better. (83 words)