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2、Early tomorrow morning morningBright and warmBright and warm2021/8/9 星期一1I.1990 2003I.1990 2003年高考书面表达题样回顾年高考书面表达题样回顾1.1.从内容和体裁上分从内容和体裁上分体体 裁裁 内内 容容 历年书面表达历年书面表达 应用文应用文 书书 信（便条）信（便条）对对 话话 通通 知（知（口头书面口头书面）请请 柬柬记叙文记叙文说明文说明文介介 绍绍人人 物物事事 件件日日 记记故事或经历故事或经历场场 景景事事 物物95,99,01,02,039491,96200092,98 93,97,04
3、2021/8/9 星期一22.2.从提示形式上分从提示形式上分提示形式提示形式文文字字中中 文文英英 文文历历 年年 书书 面面 表表 达达 表表 格格90,91,9496,2001,200292,93,95,97,98,99,2000图图 画画结结 论：论：从上面两表看出：高考书面表达最常从上面两表看出：高考书面表达最常见的是应用文和记叙文，所写内容都见的是应用文和记叙文，所写内容都与日常生活密切相关。与日常生活密切相关。图文并茂图文并茂 2003,20042021/8/9 星期一3书面表达书面表达(满分满分2525分分)某某中中学学生生英英语语报报社社正正开开展展一一场场题题为为“Youn
4、g“Young teachers teachers or or elderly elderly teachersteachers，which do you prefer?”which do you prefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。老年教师老年教师青年教师青年教师教教学学耐耐心心讲讲解解细细致致经经验验丰丰富富精精力力充充沛沛教教学学活活泼泼勇勇于于创创新新你的观点你的观点?注注意意：1 1词词数数100100左左右右，开开头头语语已已为为你你写写好好，不不计计入入总总数数；2 2短短文必须包含表格的全部
5、内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯。文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯。Opinions are divided on this question.Opinions are divided on this question.2021/8/9 星期一4学生作品学生作品1：Comparewithyoungteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.Theynotonlysparenoeffort
6、toteachthestudents,butalsogiveclassescarefully.Theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,especiallyforusseniorstudents.Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.点评：
7、亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting不足之处：1、个别地方的表达需要改进。2021/8/9 星期一5学生作品学生作品2:Opinions are divided on this question.Some students who like the elderlyteachers more than the young ones think
8、thatthe elderly ones are more patient in teaching,more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience.However,the others have a differentopinion.They think the teachers who areyoung are full of energy.Besides,theirteaching is lively and they dare to bring inthe new ideas.Well,in my opinion,
9、I like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because fromthem we both can learn a lot.点评：点评：亮点：亮点：1、段落清楚，要点齐、段落清楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。活，能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较、过渡词运用也比较熟练。熟练。需要改进的地方：需要改进的地方：1）2)3)4)1)prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones2)with explanations3)the 去掉去掉4)The young te
10、achers2021/8/9 星期一6学生作品学生作品3：Opinions are divided on this question.Some students believe elderly teachers are fairly patient.They can explain something difficult smoothly to the class.Theyve also got much experience which the young teachers are lack of.However,other students prefer the young teacher
11、s to the elderly.They think young teachers are full of energy and they dare to break away from the old methods of teaching,developing some effective ones.Besides,the young teachers can bring their interesting new thoughts to the students and make the classes lively.In my opinion,the young teachers m
12、ay be the better,not just for the reasons mentioned above,but the one that young teachers can get close to the class and hold good communication among the class.Of course,if a teacher can contain the advantages of the elderly and the young teachers,he or she will be the most bine(may be much easier
13、to get along with and communicate with)2021/8/9 星期一7One possible version:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentsmaylikeelderlyteachersteachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations.However,Iprefertobetaughtbyyoungteachers.F
14、irstly,westudentshavemuchincommonwiththem.Sotheyareourfriendsaswellasourteachers.Secondly,theyaremore.energeticandenthusiastic.Usuallytheycanmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.Besides,theyaremorereadytoacceptorcreatenewideas,includingteaching.Thirdly,mostyoungteachersdevotethemselvestotheirwork,ma
15、kingthemteachcreativelyandeffectively.Inaword,Ipreferyoungteacherstoelderlyteachers.2021/8/9 星期一8如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。要点全词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法多样（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）化（较复杂）连接词2021/8/9 星期一9Some useful suggestions:I.对于英语基础不好的学生，可以这样处理：把所给的材料分为几个点，对于英语基础不好的学生，可以这样处理：把所给的材
16、料分为几个点，每个点用每个点用1-2句简单句表达出来；而对于英语较好的学生，尽可能地运句简单句表达出来；而对于英语较好的学生，尽可能地运用一些高级词汇跟适当地运用一些复合句，关键是要表达准确到位。用一些高级词汇跟适当地运用一些复合句，关键是要表达准确到位。1.重点词汇的处理跟运用重点词汇的处理跟运用 1）Elderly teachers have more patience.They are more patient.2)Elderly teachers always explain things more carefully.They are more careful with explan
17、ations.3)Elderly teachers are rich in teaching experience.They are experienced in teaching.They have more/rich teaching experience.4)Young teachers are full of energy.They have more energy.They are more energetic.5)Young teachers teaching is more lively.They can make their classes lively and interes
18、ting.6)Young teachers like to think up/bring in new ideas.They are more ready to accept or create new ideas.2021/8/9 星期一102.句型的灵活运用句型的灵活运用1）Some students may think old teachers teaching is better.In their opinion,old teachers have more teaching experience and they are very patient.Also,they can expl
19、ain things more carefully.Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because They think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.2)Many young teachers work very hard.So their teaching is becoming better and better.Most young
20、teachers devote themselves to their work,making them teach creatively and effectively.2021/8/9 星期一11II.常用过渡词举例常用过渡词举例1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,nevertheless（然而）（然而）,although,though,or else,otherwise,after
21、all,by the way;4.表示因果表示因果:because,as,since,for,for this reason,so,as a result,thus,therefore,accordingly(因此因此);5.表示条件表示条件:if so,unless,on condition that（如若）（如若）;6.表示对比表示对比:while,whereas,instead,notbut,on the contrary,on one handon the other hand;7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is,th
22、at is to say,in other words;8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,for one thing,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,soon afterwards,since then,from then on,lastly,finally,in the end;9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,furthermore,moreover,whats more,certainly,actually,in fact,as a matter of fact;10.表示结论表示结论:to sum u
23、p,in all,altogether,in a word,in short,generally speaking,as is known to all.2021/8/9 星期一12总结：解题步骤和方法指导1.认真审题认真审题,明确要求。明确要求。2.紧扣文意紧扣文意,组织要点。组织要点。3.选词造句选词造句,准确表达。准确表达。4.整理成篇整理成篇,注意行文连贯。注意行文连贯。5.合理安排时间合理安排时间,认真检查复核。认真检查复核。2021/8/9 星期一132021/8/9 星期一14请根据漫画请根据漫画,以以“What Will the Child Become?”为标题为标题,写一篇
24、短文写一篇短文.要求要求:1.词数约词数约100个个,不包括已给出的开不包括已给出的开 头部分头部分.2.内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看法自己对这一现象的看法.提示提示:电子琴电子琴 electronic piano 画板画板 drawing board What Will the Child Become?Look at this picture.Here is a family of five2021/8/9 星期一15该题要表达的内容是：1.小孩正骑在他爸爸身上小孩正骑在他爸爸身上,看上去多像一个看上去多像一个神气的国王啊神气的国王
25、啊!2.爷爷正撑着伞爷爷正撑着伞,并且为他扇扇子并且为他扇扇子;3.妈妈背着书包及其他东西妈妈背着书包及其他东西;4.奶奶正提着电子琴奶奶正提着电子琴,背着画板背着画板;5.这个孩子将来成为什么样的人这个孩子将来成为什么样的人?作出评作出评 论论2021/8/9 星期一16Lookatthispicture.Hereisafamilyoffive.Theonlychildisridinghis“horse”-hisfather.Whataproud“king”helooks!Hisgrandfatherisholdinganumbrellaoverhimandcoolinghimwithafa
26、n.Hismotheriscarryinghisschoolbagandlotsofotherthingsforhim.Whatishisgrandmotherdoingbehind?Sheisworkinghardcarryinganelectronicpianoandandadrawingboard.Butwhatwillthechildbecomeinthefuture?Hellthinkofhimselfmoreimportantthananyoneelse.Hellbeabletodonothingwithouthelp.Hellbecomenogoodfortheworld.2021/8/9 星期一172021/8/9 星期一182021/8/9 星期一19