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1、读读后续写后续写-升格升格作文作文Learning aimsLearning aims:1.Learntomaketheplotlogicalandreasonablewiththehelpofthemindmap.2.Learntoimprovethewritingbyusingthespecificverbsinthelanguagesituations.3.Learntoimprovethewritingwithvividanddetaileddescriptions.4.Learntobearesponsiblepeoplebyadmittingandcorrectingthemist
2、akesintime.例题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。续写的词数应为150左右。“Willyoucomewithus,Susan?”criedseveralgirlstoaschoolmate.“Wearegoingtothewoods;docome,too.”“Ishouldliketogowithyouverymuch,”repliedSusan,withasigh,“butIcantfinishthetaskgrandmothersetmetodo.”“Howtiresomeitmustbetostayathometoworkonaholiday!”sai
3、dRose,oneofthegirls,shakingherhead.“Susansgrandmotheristoostrict.”Susanheardtheremark,and,asshebentherhead,shewipedawayatear,andthoughtofthepleasantafternoonthegirlswouldspendgatheringwildflowersinthewoods.Soonshesaidtoherself,“Whatharmcantherebeinmovingthemarkgrandmotherputinthestocking?Thewoodsmus
4、tbeverybeautifultoday,andhowIshouldliketobeinthem!”“Grandmother,”saidshe,afewminutesafterwards,“Imreadynow.”“What,sosoon,Susan?”Hergrandmothertookthework,andlookedatitveryclosely.“True,Susan,”saidshe,layinggreatstressoneachword,“true,Icounttwentyturnsfromthemark;and,asyouhavenevercheatedme,youmaygoa
5、ndamuseyourselfasyouliketherestoftheday.”Susanscheekswerered,andshedidnotsay“Thankyou.”Assheleftthecottage,shewalkedslowlyaway,notsingingasusual.“Why,hereisSusan!”thegirlscried,whenshejoinedtheircompany;“butwhatisthematter?Whyhaveyouleftyourdear,oldgrandmother?”theyasked.“Thereisnothingthematter.”As
6、Susanrepeatedthesewords,shefeltthatshewastryingtocheatherself.Shehadactedalie.Atthesametimesherememberedhergrandmotherswords,“Youhavenevercheatedme.”“Yes,Ihavecheatedher,”saidshetoherself.“Ifsheknewall,shewouldnevertrustmeagain.”例题Paragraph1:Thelittlepartyhadreachedanspaceinthewoods._Paragraph2:“Now
7、,Susan,”saidRose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”_分析Before WritingBefore WritingStep1:ReadforinformationStyle：_Tense：_Thekeyinformation：(Underlinethekeyinformationinthetext)When?_Who?_What?1.thegirls_tothewoodsfortheholiday(gatheringwildflowers)2.receivinghergrandmothersagreementby_3.
8、Susansamusingherselfwitha_feeling分析Before WritingBefore WritingStep1:ReadforinformationStyle：_Tense：_Thekeyinformation：(Underlinethekeyinformationinthetext)When?_Who?_What?1.thegirls_tothewoodsfortheholiday(gatheringwildflowers)2.receivinghergrandmothersagreementby_3.Susansamusingherselfwitha_feelin
9、gThePastTensestory/NarrationonholidaySusan;Rose;thegrandma;othergirlsinvitationcheatingmixed/complicated分析Before WritingBefore WritingStep2:Mindmapforlogicalplot分析Before WritingBefore WritingStep2:MindmapforlogicalplothappyThereasonwhythecrownwasforSusan.Susan分析Before WritingBefore WritingStep2:Mind
10、mapforlogicalplot分析Before WritingBefore WritingStep2:MindmapforlogicalplotrefusedapologizedHergrandmaforgaveherandshelearnedalessonfromit.One possible versionpara.1Thelittlepartyhadreachedanopenspaceinthewoods.Whenhercompanionsranaboutenjoyingthemselves,Susansatonthegrass,andshewasverynervousbecause
11、shecheatedhergrandma.AfterawhileRosesaid,“Letusmakeacrownofflowers,andputitontheheadofthebestgirlhere.”Soonthecrownwasfinished.Allthegirlssaid“Susanisthebestgirlbothinschoolandathomeandshedeservesthecrown.”para.2“Now,Susan,”saidRose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”Asthesewordswerespok
12、en,thecrownwasplacedonherhead.AndSusansaid:“Nocrownforme;Idonotdeserveit.”ThegirlsweresurprisedbySusansreaction.QuicklySusanlefttheothergirls,andwentbackhomeandsaidsorrytohergrandmother.“Susan,”saidhergrandmother,“Iamsohappythatyouhaverealizedyourfault,andyouarestillmyowngoodgirl!”相关表达一笑:beamwithwil
13、djoyoneseyes/facelightupwithdelight.Seeingthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupherface.二、高兴激动:oneseyestwinkledwithexcitementawildexcitementtookholdofsb.三、伤心痛苦:onesheartached,tearsstreamingdownonescheeks.Feelingasurgeofsadness,onecouldnthelpcryingbitterly.sb.burstintotears.四，羞愧：So ashamedwasshethat shecoul
14、dfeelthebloodrushtoherface.onescheeksturnred.五焦虑，紧张：sb.beseizedbyastrongsenseofanxiety,withthepalmssweatingonesheartbeatwildlysb.pacedbackandforth.五吃惊：onesmouthdropinsurprise.相关表达Useful sentence Useful sentence patternspatterns1.Desperate and hopeless,Janekneltdown,tears streaming down her face.2.On
15、ly bystickingtogetherandnotlosinghopewillwebeabletosurvive.3.The instant/moment/Immediately theysawtheboat,theybegantofeel.4.Seeing theirmotherwavingatthem,theywavedbackwithtearsintheireyes.5.Socomplexweretheirfeelings thattheywereatalossforwords.6.“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedbox
16、with his eyes gleaming.7.It wastheirspiritsofnevergivinguphopeandkeepingcalminfaceofdanger thatsavedtheirlives.Polishthesecondparagraph.Usevividdescriptionstodescribeanger,sadness,excitement and fright.升格作文升格作文Magic 1：Use specific（具体的）（具体的）verbs to replace general verbs,and add adverbs（副词）（副词）if nec
17、essary.para.1Thelittlepartyhadreachedanopenspaceinthewoods.Whenhercompanionsranaboutenjoyingthemselves,Susansatonthegrass,andshewasverynervousbecauseshecheatedhergrandma.Afterawhile,Rose suggested“Letusmakeacrownofflowers,andputitontheheadofthebestgirlhere.”Soonthecrownwasfinished.Allthegirls agreed
18、 Susanwasthebestgirlbothinschoolandathomeandshedeservedthecrown.”para.2“Now,Susan,”said Rose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”Asthesewordswerespoken,thecrownwasplacedonherhead.AndSusancried out:“Nocrownforme;Idonotdeserveit.”Thegirlsweresurprised by Susans reaction.Quickly Susan left t
19、he other girls,and went back home and apologized to hergrandmother.“Susan,”whisperedhergrandmother,“Iamsohappythatyouhaverealizedyourfault,andyouarestillmyowngoodgirl!”升格作文Magic 2：Add action,facial expressions,monologue(独白）独白）or dialogue with advanced sentence patterns原句：Susansatonthegrass,andshewas
20、verynervousbecauseshecheatedhergrandma.升级：Susansatonthegrass,andmontionlesslycrossedherfingersinherknees,wearingsorrowandregretonherface.“WhathaveIdone?”shewastotallylostinthought,murmuring:“Shewonttrustme.ShouldntIgohometotellherthetruth.”原句：AndSusancried:“Nocrownforme;Idonotdeserveit.”Thegirlswere
21、surprisedbySusansreaction.升级：Immediately,she took it off,crying:“No crown for me;I do not deserve it.I have cheated mygrandmother,”tearsflowingdownhercheeks.Thegirlsobservedherwiththeirmouthsopeninsurprise.Paragraph Paragraph 1:1:Thelittlepartyhadreachedanopenspaceinthewoods.Whenhercompanionsranabou
22、tenjoyingthemselves,Susansatonthegrass,andmontionlesslycrossedherfingersinherknees,wearingsorrowandregretonherface.“WhathaveIdone?”shewastotallylostinthought,murmuring:“Shewonttrustme.ShouldntIgohometotellherthetruth.”AfterawhileRosesuggested,“Letusmakeacrownofflowers,andputitontheheadofthebestgirlh
23、ere.”Soonthecrownwasfinished.AllthegirlsagreedSusanwasthebestgirlbothinschoolandathomeandshedeservedthecrown.Paragraph 2:Paragraph 2:“Now,Susan,”saidRose,“Putonthecrownofflowers,foryouaretobeourqueen.”Asthesewordswerespoken,thecrownwasplacedonherhead.Immediately,shetookitoff,crying:“Nocrownforme;Idonotdeserveit.Ihavecheatedmygrandmother,”tearsflowingdownhercheeks.Thegirlsobservedherwiththeirmouthsopeninsurprise.Withouthesitation,Susan,hurryinghome,apologizedtohergrandmother.“Susan,”whisperedhergrandmother,“Iamsohappythatyouhaverealizedyourfault,andyouarestillmyowngoodgirl!”