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1、两代关系话题作文写作指导及写作练习 讲义图画作文审题描述图画：孩子痛苦地在跑道上飞驰，父母在100分的终点线上鼓励着他。他努力奔跑的赛道是语文、物理、数学、英语这样的主科，而不曾踏足心理、素质、品德等非主科赛道。反映的问题：反映出望子成龙，望女成凤的父母只重视孩子的主科学习，而忽略了心理、素质、品德等方面的教育。只是一味地为应试教育而学习，会大大限制孩子身心及综合素质的发展。关键词及框架构思关键词：parents父母child孩子final line终点线 full mark满分on the track of.在.的赛道上major subjects主科.be high on the agen
2、da.最为重要turn blind eye to.对.熟视无睹/忽略well-rounded全面发展的pressure压力exam-obsessed痴迷于考试的/应试教育的Reasons abound for sth., but the prime cause of.is.造成某事的原因很多，但最为重要的原因在于.be detrimental to.对.有害的mental health心理健康virtues美德quality-oriented education素质教育future generations后代over-expectation过度/高期待long to see ones chil
3、dren become successful and have a bright future望子成龙，望女成凤构思：第一段：描述图画，点明主题第二段：指出问题，成点列出第三段：表明态度，升华主题第一段：描述图画-万能模版(不良现象)As issarcastically/ironically/satirically illustrated/demonstrated/mirrored.正如图画讽刺地展示.This picture/cartoon/drawing sarcastically/ironically/satirically illustrated/demonstrated/mirror
4、ed.这幅图片讽刺的展示了.The picture/cartoon/drawingmirror/illustrate/demonstrate/portray/reveal/disclose a sarcastically social phenomenon: ., which is all-pervading/extremely prevailing in the field of . 这幅图画反映/描述/揭露了一种讽刺的社会现象，即：., 这在领域非常普及The picture/cartoon/drawingmirror/illustrate/demonstrate/portray/reve
5、al/disclose a sarcastically social phenomenon: ., which is a concerning trend in . 这幅图画反映/描述/揭露了一种讽刺的社会现象，即：., 这是领域中让人担忧的趋势。动手写：参考给出的范文并适当变化，大家可不要都背范文全写成一样的了.As is sarcastically mirrored, on the track of major subjects runs a boy,with pains on his face, dashing to the final line of Full Mark. Althou
6、gh he is physical exhaustion, the teenager has to strain every nerve to finish his destiny, for his parents and grandma stand around and encourage him.参考译文：讽刺的是，在主要科目的跑道上，一个男孩脸上带着痛苦地跑着，冲向最后的满分线。尽管他已经筋疲力尽，这个少年还是要竭尽全力完成自己的使命，因为他的父母和奶奶都站在他身边鼓励他。语言点：on the track of major subjects runs a boy为介词短语引起的倒装句da
7、sh作为动词，表示猛冲full mark表示满分physical exhaustion表示筋疲力尽teenager代替前文的boy，体现词汇丰富性strain every nerve字面上表示绷紧每一个神经。即不遗余力，非常努力的做某事，可以代替spare no effort句中destiny用引号引起来，是燃燃在第四期高分写作逻辑中给大家的tip，让词汇更加突出，吸引眼球for引导原因状语从句第二段：指出并列举问题-万能模版Such a scene/phenomenon can be naturally linked with.这样的场面/现象很自然地和.联系到一起Such a scene/
8、phenomenon shed light on the question of.这样的场面/现象揭示/阐明了.样的问题Such a scene/phenomenon is a mirror/reflection of.这样的场面/现象是.的反映Such a scene/phenomenon usually boils down to/comes down to/be attributed to.这样的场面/现象可以被归结为.Clearly, the cartoonist try to bring/throw/cast.into the spotlight.显然，画的作者试图让.问题引起公众注
9、意 动手写：Such a scene undoubtedly boils down to exam-obsessed education in China. A host of Chinese parents view high scores in math, English, physics and so on as the only ticket to a promising future full of fame, fortune, and status, and totally turn a blind eye to the real need of their poor learni
10、ng machine. 参考译文：这样的场景无疑可以归结为中国的应试教育。许多中国家长认为，数学、英语、物理等方面的高分是通往充满名利、财富、地位的光明未来的唯一门票，却对他们可怜的“学习机器”的真正需求视而不见。语言点：boil down to归结为，归因为exam-obsessed education应试教育(经济学人对双减政策报道中用到的表达)a host of people之前在公众号：燃燃要燃了上分享过，表示“一群人”，可以代替a lot ofticket to sth表示“通往sth的门票”a promising future充满希望的未来full of fame, fortune
11、, and status是介词短语做后置定语修饰futureturn a blind eye to sth对sth视而不见，或者可以用turn a deaf ear to sth对sth置若罔闻learning machine学习机器，用“”表强调若用到之前分享的be high on the agenda则可以改写为，Such a scene undoubtedly boils down to exam-obsessed education in China. The scores in math, English, and physics are high on the parents ag
12、enda. However, a host of Chinese parents totally turn a blind eye to the cultivation of childrens well-roundedness.参考译文：这样的场景无疑可以归结为中国的应试教育。数学、英语和物理的成绩对于家长们来说至关重要，而许多中国家长却忽略对孩子全面发展的培养。语言点：be high on the agenda很重要/紧急。在高分写作逻辑第六期中分享过，大家可以点击跳转详细学习cultivation作为名词，表示“培养”well-roundedness作为名词，表示“全面发展”。well-
13、rounded是形容词，表示“全面发展的”。第三段：表明态度，升华主题-万能模版To sum up/Accordingly/Generally/In general/Overall, it is imperative to reverse this concerning trend. At one extreme,. At the other end of the spectrum. I firmly believe that the coordinated efforts/concerted efforts from the authority and the alike will bene
14、fit sb/be a boon to sb.To sum up/Accordingly/Generally/In general/Overall, it is imperative to reverse this concerning trend. At one extreme,. At the other end of the spectrum. it is advisable for to.动手写：In general, it is imperative to reverse this concerning trend.At one extreme, authorities as a w
15、hole have the obligation to establish a quality-oriented education system, which is conducive to the growth of future generations. At the other end of the spectrum, it is advisable for parents to give kids more freedom and opportunities to develop personal abilities. There is an old saying that the
16、skys the limit. Children should have enjoyed the infinite possibilities, and parents have no right to trap students in a cage of over-expectation. Respecting childrens personal will will be a boon to their mental and physical health.参考译文：总的来说，扭转这种令人担忧的趋势势在必行。一方面，当局作为一个整体有义务建立有利于后代成长的素质教育体系。另一方面，家长应该
17、给予孩子更多的自由和发展个人能力的机会。有句老话说前途不可限量。孩子们本应享受无限的可能性，父母没有权利把学生困在一个“过度期望”的牢笼里。尊重孩子的个人意愿将有利于他们的身心健康。语言点：it is imperative to do sth.做某事很急迫/势在必行reverse the concerning trend扭转令人担忧的局面/趋势establish a quality-oriented education system建立素质教育体系be conducive to. 有利于at one extreme, at the other end of the spectrum一方面.另一方面。是高分写作逻辑第二期的内容，点此详细学习it is advisable to do sth做某事是明智的the skys the limit天空才是极限，表示前途不可限量(经济学人报道的标题，口语中也常用)should have enjoyed虚拟语气，表示本应该享受.infinite possibilities无限的可能trap作为动词，表示限制over-expectation表示过度期待personal will个人意愿boon作为名词，表示有益的事情(经济学人精读分享过)mental and physical health身心健康学科网（北京）股份有限公司