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1、精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -北京高考作文情形作文近几年的北京高考情形作文以图画式为主;一般由四幅画组成的组图, 同时给出肯定的文字说明.题材主要涉及到同学熟识或经受的日常生活.考查同学对图画内容的观看和懂得,要求同学有条理,有重点,生动精确的把图画内容加工成书面语言.1图画式作文（1）图画式英语作文的写作步骤： 审文字要求（申审题）审内容,审文体,审时态,审人称,审字数要求等.5 审） 审图,列出要点和细节（抓抓要点）题目所给的图画有一幅与多幅之分,但不论几幅,肯定要留意认真观看每幅图画所描画的情形,看懂图画内容,懂得画面意思.列出
2、写作的要点：一般组图的英语作文一幅图要有一个要点.历年NMET图画式作文大都具备4-6 个左右的描述要点.列出支持写作要点的细节：有的图可以粗描,有的图需要细写.一般一幅图可以有一个细节,也可以有多个细节. 扩点成句（扩扩点成句）依据以上所列要点和细节,扩点成句,扩句时考生要留意图画所给的时间背景,正确使用人称、时态和语态. 列出过渡词,连句成文（连连句成文）列出图与图之间的过渡词,以便使图与图之间内容过渡自然,脉络清晰, 层次分明.组句成文时,考生要留意适当的使用一些过渡词,使意思连贯,行文流畅. 结尾（查查错改过誊誊写）在文章结尾时适时、适当的使用一些表示情感因素的句式（如活动后的感想,书
3、信结尾的客套话等等） ,可使文章结尾很出色,显得自然、得体.通过简洁概括我们可以把情形作文的写作步骤简洁的概括为（审抓扩连查誊）写作词组：常用语：1. Last Friday left me a deep impression, which I will never forget.Last week, I / my brother had an unforgettableexperience.2. In order to improve our abilities of facing danger, our school organized an activity.按时间次序描写3. Earl
4、y in the morning, we met at the school gate and went to by bus. One Sunday morning, my classmates and I went to the park for an picnic. 4 After doing, we went to do.5. After having done,we.6. And then, we.结尾语：I was tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - -
5、 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -I have learned a great deal through the activity/ this.It is an unforgettable day / experience评论语 /感叹I think the activity is both necessary and meaningful. It not only makes us aware of the imp
6、ortance of self-protection/helping others/protectingour environment but also develop our abilities of dealing withthings/communicating with others.2.The activity can develop /promote our sense of social responsibility.心情语We were in high spirit.With excitement filling our heart, we said thanks/goodby
7、e to sb. With our hearts filled with excitement, we.To our joy/delight, we saw.景色：1. The view was beautiful.2. The sun was shining.3. Gently came the soft wind.4. The weather was clear , the wind calm and themoon shining考例分析：08 年北京卷假设你是红星中学高三一班的同学李华,为校刊英语园的写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件.请依据以下四幅图的先后次
8、序,表达上周你们班 从预备春游到春游终止的完整过程.留意： 词数不少于 60.提示词：游乐园amusement park垃圾箱bin可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -第一步：审审题理清文字信息：判定文章文体、人称、时态同时留意字数、提示词.即：审文体：记叙文审人称： we 审时态：一般过去式审字数： 60 字以上其次步：抓抓要点确定主要行为
9、：用一两个词或短语写出每副图的要点have a discussionclimb hillspick up litterput the litterinto bin第三步：扩扩展成句（肯定要留意每幅图的细节）依据人称、时态等将要点扩展成句.将句子加上细节扩展成句组.第一幅图： have a discussion:We had a discussion, someone wanted to go to the amusement park,someone wantedtogoboating,someone wantedtoclimb mountains.其次幅图： climb hills ：We
10、climbed the mountains. The sun was shining. Therewere many beautiful flowers on the mountains.第三幅图： pick up litter ：When we got to the top, we found there was a lot of litter on the top. So we began to pick up the litter.第四幅图：putthe litterintobins:Weputthe litterintorecyclingbinornon-recycling bin.W
11、e put different litter into different bins.第四步：连连词成句背景（适当增加时间、的点条件等）、规律关系、开头与结尾、巧用连接词和过渡句.Last week, our class prepared to have a spring outing. Before the spring outing,We had a discussion, someone wanted to go to the amusement park, Someone wanted to go boating, someone wanted to climb mountains.F
12、inally, we decided to climb mountains.The next day, it was a fine day. The sun was shining. We climbed the mountains. The sun was shining.There were many beautiful flowers on the mountains.were surprised toBut .When we got to the top, we found there was a lot of litter on the top. So we began to pic
13、k up the litter.In order to keep the mountains clean.picked up all the litter and.We put the litter into recycling bin or non-recycling bin.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -We were very t
14、ired but we were very happy.第五步：查查错改错要尽量剔除错误,如要点齐全、句法、语法有无问题.特殊是动词的形式、单词拼写、大小写和标点符Our Spring OutingLast week, our class prepared to have a spring outing. Before the spring outing, we had a discussion, someone wanted to go to the amusement park, someone wanted to go boating, someone wanted to climb m
15、ountains. Finally, we decided to climb mountains.The next day, it was a fine day. The sun was shining. We set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountains,we saw many beautiful flowers. But when we got to the top, we were surprised to find that there were many litter on the top, so we bega
16、n to pick up litter in order to keep the mountains clean. We picked up all the litter and put it into different bins.We were very tired but everybody felt very happy.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_留意事项：124 words可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_第一：开头的句子肯定要不全,即加入考生的感情、评判等,是全剧完整.同时列出自己的观点,让阅卷老师能够较快的读出同学的写作倾向或是思路.其次： 图
17、片中的要点即人物的表情动作,事情进展的时间和的点以及欢迎,影响事情进展的相关情节都需要写清第三： 图与图之间的连接肯定要得体连贯,切忌让整篇文章看起来,你是在单独的描画一幅图有一幅图,句与句, 图与图之间的连贯程度应当是让读者在不看到图片的前提下,也能清晰的明白图片中发生的完整故事.范文例文：2022 北京高考情形作文假设你是红星中学高二1班的同学李华, 利用上周末的时间帮忙祖父母支配了去北戴河的旅行.请依据以下四幅图的先后次序,写一篇英文周记,表达你 从预备到送行的全过程.留意： 1周记的开头已为你写好.2词数不少于 60.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选
18、- - - - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -Lastweekend,Ihelpedmygrandparentspreparetheirtripto Beidaihe.例文：Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as
19、going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litt
20、er here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pickup the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish intothe nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.We were tired but happy.作文分析：今年的情形作文连续了往年四格漫画的形式,对于考生来说应当是得心应手的只要把握好文体（周记） 、人称（第一人称单数） 、时态（一般过去时） ,并突出时间主线进行有条理的表达,就
21、把握住了文章的大方向. 假如说此题有难点,难点就在于这四幅图几乎没有转折、高潮,简洁平铺直叙,使得原本可以在写作部分呈现特长的同学泯然众人.在这种情形下,我的建议是：第一,留意文章的篇章结构安排, 并保证每幅图内得分点不丢失：前三幅图是并列结构, 并且第一、三幅图都给出了较明显的信息点,那么在写作中, 就应当保证用于前三幅图的笔墨要相对均衡,图中给出的信息肯定要显现在文章中,不能遗漏.其次,在描述第四幅图时, 要做适当的发挥和升华： 考生即可以表达送别时的不舍与祝愿,也可以表达独立完成一件事之后的欢乐之情.总之, 要适当发挥想象使文章有亮点,赢得考官称赞.2022 北京高考情形作文假设你是红星
22、中学高三一班的同学李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召, 你班四月十二日去郊区植树,请依据以下四幅图的先后次序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件.留意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区suburbs可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎
23、下载精品_精品资料_例文：Green Action in Our Class可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging hole
24、s. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leavingwe took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our
25、 duty to protect and beautify our environment.作文分析：充分表达了该套试卷 “中规中矩 ”的特点 ,由四幅连环画组成 ,与同学日常生活亲密相关.内容为某学校同学参与植树活动的过程.该题型是传统题型 ,许多同学都曾经练习过类似题目. 只要考生能够把握文章时态 ,包含图中要点 ,规律清晰 , 语句通顺 ,就能拿到不错的分数.2022 北京高考情形作文07北京情形作文假设你是李华,要给英国笔友Harry 写封信,介绍你班两位同学精选班长的过程.请按下图次序描述.留意： 1.信的开头已为你写好.2.词数不少于 60.提示词：竞选班长 monitor ele
26、ctionDear Harry,How are things going.Last Monday.请将情形作文写在答题卡二第一页指定区域内 Best wishes,Li Hua可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 6 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -范文：Dear Harry,How are things going.Last Monday, our class held a m
27、onitor election. This was our first electiong, so everyone was excited. Two of my classmatestook part in the race; Liu Dong and Wang Hong. They each gave a speech telling us what they would do when they wereelected. Then we voted for the monitor.The result was 28 to 15 in Wang Hong s favor.Wang Hong
28、 because our new monitor. The whole class cheered for her, and she promised to do the best she could for us all.Best wishes,Li Hua2022 北京高考情形作文美国中同学 Jeff 将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商支配住在你家.假设你是李华,请给 Jeff 写一封信,依据下图次序介绍他来中国后的生活支配.留意： 1信的开头已为你写好.2词数不少于 60.Dear Jeff,I m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School
29、. I m very happy to learn that you re going to stay with my family while you re in Beijing.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 7 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_范 文 : Dear Jeff,Best wishes, Li Hua可编辑资
30、料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_I m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn thatyou re going to stay with my family while youg. re in BeijinWhile you are here, we ll provyidoeu witha room of your own witha bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You ll also have your own bathroom.
31、Our school isquite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon weat the school dining hall.I m sureyou lllike the deliciousChinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other stud
32、ents in playing ball games or swimming. Itbe a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.2022 北京高考情形作文假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中 文,来信请你在学校邻近为他找一套住房.请依据图画供应的信息, 写信介绍住房的情形,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租
33、500元.留意： 1词数： 100左右： 2参考词汇：房租 Tentn.范文一：可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 8 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -Dear Bob,I mvery happy to receive your letter, and I mglad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here
34、. Ihave already found a fiatforyou. Itis o n Fangcao Street, whichis notfar fromJianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 ca n take you there, and itis one stop before the Chinese School. The flatis on the thirdfloorwith3 rooms, one of whichis bedroom, the other twoare bat hroom and kitchen. There are a bed
35、, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metressmallfiat,and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish,but I ltlrymybest to meet your needs. Ifiti s not suitable enough, writeto me and Iwilllookforanother better place.Hope you willcome here soon. Allthe be
36、st.Yours,LiHua满分理由： 本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然.作者在写作过程中留意长短句并用,仍使用了以which,引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作.范文二：Dear Bob,Welcome to China. You wrote to me to finda place foryou.I have foundan apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It ison the thirdfloorand there rtheree rooms init:a bedr
37、oom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair inthe bedroom. T he house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Alsofromthis house you can get toyour school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in frontof the building.It is onlyone stop. Atlast,
38、 wi llyou please tellme the time you arrive. Then I Ube able to meet you at the airport,see you.Best wishes .可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_范文三：Yours, LiHua可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_满分理由： 本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清晰,连接紧密流畅,时态语态使用精确,特殊是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合规律,成为本文与众不同的亮点.Dear Bob,可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - -
39、 - - - - - -第 9 页,共 17 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -How are you these days.I mso glad to know that youllcome to our cityto learn Chinese. You a sked me to finda place foryou. NowI vefound one whichIthinkis pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Str
40、eet whichis near the No.11 bus stop. It sjust one stop away fromJianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it i s not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the r ent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you lllike it. If not, I l
41、tlry to find another place foryou.Yours,LiHua满分理由： 本文内在规律性很强,由远及近.由外及内,层次分明,错落有致.同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再就结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备.范文四：Dear Bob,I mso glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I vealready foun d you a house near our school. I dliketo tellyou something about it.You may get on No.ll bus
42、at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Ji an Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square m etres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a t able near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two o
43、ther rooms connecting the bedroom. The leftone is a bathroom and the rightone is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.Hope youllenjoy staying here.Yours,LiHua满分理由： 本文内容详细,详略得当,表述方式很有制造力和新意,长短句并用,语言结构富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,特殊是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少.范文五：Dear Bob,I mglad to hear fromyou.Welcome to our cityinseptember. I