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1、2020上海中考英语二模作文范文及解析2020闵行二模Write at least 60 words on the topic Ways to improve my online learning”(以“提高我在线学习 效率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)在线学习是当代青少年需要掌握的一项重要技能，请结合居家学习期间自己在线学习中的具 体事例，谈谈你有些哪里提高学习效率的方法。(注意；短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分)审题分析：1. 根据题目要求，本文是一篇针对当年热点话题：在线学习(online learning)展开的论属型作文，要求结
2、合自己在线学习的具体事例，谈谈提高在线学习的方法。2. 本文开头应先引入由于原因，大家都不得不待在家里在线上课。3. 在写具体方法时，要注意分点表达，逻辑清晰。范文点评：Ways to improve my online learningBecause of the novel coronavirus, almost all of the students took online classes during the winter vacation. But the learning effects vary from one to another. Therefore, we should
3、find ways to improve online learning. And I have some pieces of advice about it.First of all, we need a peaceful environment. Online learning takes strong self-discipline. For example, my mom likes to offer me snacks, which sometimes interrupts me. I have asked her to stop doing so. A quiet and peac
4、eful room can help us stay focused. Whats more, we should catch every chance to communicate with our teachers online. Different from school learning, we cant easily find our teachers to ask questions, so we have to solve all our problems during the classes. By doing this, we can have no confusion af
5、ter class.These are my own ways to improve online learning. You can try taking my advice, and get better results in this period of time.作文提纲:句子开头引入内容关键词/句因为 xx 病毒的原因(Because of the novel coronavirus),大 家不得不待在家里上课(took online classes),有一些提高学 习效率的建议(some pieces of advice )2020长宁二模94. Write at least 60
6、 words about the topic Online study makes me（请以“网上学 习使我为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）xx 期间（during the anti-epidemic-period,你不得不在家上网课（have online classes）, 这个特殊 的经历使你在培养独立性、自信心等方面也有所收获。请你结合具体事例谈谈自己某一 方面的收获。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。）审题分析：1 .根据题目要求，这是一篇半命题作文，先要在makes me后面添加一个形容词表达你的 情绪情感。2 .写作背景是x
7、x期间（during the anti-epidemic - period,你不得不在家上网课（have online classes）,具体写作内容是在家上网课给你带来的独立性、自信心或其他方面的收获，然 后结合自己的具体事例描述具体的收获内容即可。3 .注意夹叙夹议，最后要有总结，描写要是真情实感。范文点评:Online study makes me more independentAll students in China, including me, are forced to take online classes, known as the program of “no suspe
8、nsion of classes”, during the anti-epidemic period of coronavirus-2019. This completely different way of learning has many positive effects on me, among which the most far-reaching one is that it makes me more independent.During this time, online courses emerged as a novel learning method. At the ve
9、ry beginning, I failed to follow my teachers since their speed was so fast, making me frustrated and depressed. Whafs worse, there was limited time to think over the knowledge points and take notes. In order to catch up with the progress, I made full preparation and preview on each class in advance,
10、 as well as turned to my teachers for help of missing points after class. Eventually, I came over all the difficulties and all the curriculum were going on as usual.To sum up, whatever the situation is, we are supposed to adjust ourselves to solve the problems actively and independently.作文提纲:句子内容关键词
11、/句开头引入take online classes; no suspension of classes; during the anti-epidemic period给出主题makes me more independent自身事例解释问题At the very beginning, I failed to-*； Whats worse提出解决方法made full preparation and preview； turned to my teachers for help陈述结果Eventually总结经验得出主题To sum up； actively and independently
12、.语言进阶：1 .非限制性定语从句This completely different way of learning has many positive effects on me, among which the most far-reaching one is that it makes me more independent.非限制性定语从句是修饰逗号前面的某个名词或者句子的，此处among which=among many positive effects ”在这些积极影响中” the most far-reaching one is 对我影响最深远的 是”。如果是在这些人中用amon
13、g whom。词典例句： A total of 16 Chinese universities made the top 300 chart this year, among which 8 are from the Chinese mainland.今年排行榜前300名中，中国共有16所大学上榜，其中8所来自中国大陆。 There are many factors influencing the use of modern Chinese, among which context is one of the key factors.现代汉语的运用涉及诸多因素，而语境是其中关键要素之一。练习：
14、1. Financial Times has ranked the top 50 women in world business, among 4 are from theChinese mainland.A. that B. whomC. whichD. whereThree plans are put forward, which my favor goes to the last one.A. amongB. with C. between D. on翻译巩固：1 .有很多的景点是我很感兴趣，其中最感兴趣的是大笨钟。2 . 这个团队由33个人组成，其中有9个是教授。2.分词做结果状语I
15、failed to follow my teachers since their speed was so fast, making me frustrated and depressed.此处making me frustrated and depressed,是前面我没能跟上老师的结果状语，分词做结果状 语表示自然而然的结果，如果是意料之外的结果就用不定式tod。词典例句： A disastrous earthquake happened in Wenchuan in 2008, causing many people died.在2008年的汶川发生了灾难性的地震，导致很多人死亡。（ca
16、using表自然结果）He hurried to the station, only to 自nd the train had left.他急匆匆的赶到车站，结果发现车已经走了。（t。find表意料之外的结果） 练习：1. A little plane crashed into a hill,all 5 people in it.A. killedB. to killC. killingD. being killedHe woke up only himself in a hospital.A. to findB. findingC. being find D. finds译巩固:1. 她每天
17、都回来得很晚，这是她爸爸很生气。2. 小男孩把玩具扔在地上，使得玩具摔成了碎片。3. 他试图掩盖真相，结果却欲盖弥彰。2. 让步状语从句之疑问词-everWhatever the situation is, we are supposed to adjust ourselves to solve the problems actively and independentlyWhatever=No matter what+ (n),意思是“无论什么”，做后面句子的名词成分；however=no matter how+ (adj/adv),后面句子主谓宾完整，做方式状语，意思是“无论/多么。词典例
18、句： No matter whatAVhatever I did to the bill, you still wanted it because it did not lose its value.无论我对这张钞票做了什么，你们依然想着要得到它，这是因为它并没有失去价值。(此处whatever做后面从句did后面的宾语)How many hours and how much money do your team devote to this project?你们团队在这个工程上投入了多少时间和金钱？练习：1 .you do, his love never gives up.A. Whatev
19、erB. WheneverC. Whichever D. However2.is worth doing at all is worth doing well.A. No matter what B. However C. Whatever D. No matter how翻译巩固：1 .无论我做什么，没有人愿意原谅我。2 .无论你有多么忙，这段和你一起的时间是你的孩子应得的。3 .不管多么小，我都会为我今天的成功庆功。2020金山二模Write at least 60 words about the topic “My opinion on remote lessons （请以“我对远程课堂
20、的看法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）疫情期间我们开启了一种全新的学习模式-远程课堂（remote lessons） o在此期间你 是如何学习的？请结合你自身经历，谈谈对远程课堂的看法。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表达）because of the virus manage timeself-control effective审题分析：1 .根据题目要求，本文是一篇针对My opinion on remote lessons展开描述的夹叙夹议类作 文，在
21、题目要求中已经明确给出了文章所要包括的内容，第一点是结合自己网络学习的经历 加以描述，第二点是谈一谈对“远程学习”的体会或看法。2 .本文开头应先引入“远程学习”这一话题，然后过渡到自己的观点并结合经历进行描述。3 .文章上语言表达要清晰，事件过程有逻辑性，应用主客观描写，适当地运用动词、副词， 防止单调重复。范文点评：My opinion on remote lessonsThe outbreak of the novel coronavirus in China recently has forced millions of students to have class at home,
22、which students have different attitudes towards. From my point of view, remote lessons produce great effects.I have learned various kinds of school online lessons for several months. There are many advantages of this mode of learning, which make me manage time more effectively and benefit a lot from
23、 self-control. In addition, I am interested in interacting with my teachers and classmates.For my part, the remote lesson is a better choice for us students than traditional lessons, we should take full advantage of it to improve ourselves.作文提纲:句子内容关键词/句开头引入The outbreak of the novel coronavirus in C
24、hina recently has forced millions of students to have class at home.说明观点(2) From my point of view, remote lessons produce great effects.记叙事情have learned various kinds of school online lessons; manage time; benefit a lot from self-control; interacting with总结体会the remote lesson is a better choice; tak
25、e full advantage of it to improve ourselves语言进阶:1 .非限制性定语从句The outbreak of the novel coronavirus in China recently has forced millions of students to have class at home, which students have different attitudes towards.定语从句有限制性和非限制性两种。限制性定语从句是先行词不可缺少的局部，去掉它 主句意思往往不明确；限制性定语从句起补充说明作用，是先行词的附加说明，缺少也不会 影响
26、全句的理解，它与主句往往用逗号隔开。关系词分关系代词和关系副词，关系代词that, which, who, whom, whose在定语从句中充当主语，宾语，表语或者定语，关系副词where, when, why在定语从句中充当地点，时间和原因状语，关系副词可以用介词+which代替。本句为which引导的非限制性定语从句，和主句用逗号隔开，关系which可以代替前 面的名词也可指代整句话,本句中which指代前面一整句话,可以在作文中用来合并简单句。词典例句： Increasing teenagers are now addicted to electronic books, which m
27、akes parents worried.越来越多的青少年沉迷于电子书，这让父母们很担忧。（which指代主句） I have kept the violin for ten years, which was bought by my father as a birthday present.这个小提琴已经跟随我十年了，这是我爸爸作为礼物卖给我的。练习：1. Eric received training in computer for one year,he found a job in a bigcompany.A. after thatB. after whichC. after itD.
28、 after thisBetween the two parts of the concert is an interval,the audience can buy ice-cream.A. whenB. whereC. thatD. which翻译巩固：1 .我经常忘了带作业，这让老师非常生气。2 .越来越多的中国人能够说英语了，这对于中国的开展来说是一件好事。3 .在上海高峰期的时候经常会有交通堵塞，这给人们的生活带来很多的不便。2. There are many advantages of this mode of learning .There be句型是英语中常用句型，意思是“有表
29、示人或事物的存在”或“某处有某物词典例句： There isnt hami in trying.不妨一试。 There is going to be a meeting tonight.今天晚上有个会议。翻译巩固：1 .碗里有一些苹果。2 .没有必要把这件事告诉他。他已经知道了。具体方式一首先(First of all),我们需要一个安静的环境(we need a peaceful environment.)具体方式二其次(What offer sth to sb:提供某东西给某人；offer sb sth:提供给某人某东西；offer to do sth:主动 提出做某事 3.词典例句： T
30、hey decided to offer the job to Jo. 他们决定把这份工作给乔。 The young man offered the old man his own seat on the bus. 那个年轻人在公共汽车上将自己的座位让给了那个老人。 He offered to drive us to the airport, but we preferred to walk there. 2.听见门铃声，她停下手中的活去开门。s more),我们应该多跟老师交流(we should catch every chance to communicate with our teac
31、hers online.)总结这就是我的方法(my own ways),你门可以采取我的意见 (taking my advice),取得更好的成绩(get better results)语言进阶:1. because of +名词：因为 because+句子：因为词典例句： Many motorists were forced to stop over in that town because of floods.由于发大水，许多开车旅游的人被迫停留在那个镇上了。 The boss discharged her because of her absence.老板因她缺勤而把她解雇了。翻译巩固：
32、1. 这主要是由于我的过错。2. 由于大雪，飞行员只得把飞机降落到另一座城市的一个飞机场。3. 我爱你因为你为我做的事。他主动提出送我们去机场,但我们宁愿走路去。翻译巩固：1 .她提出将自行车借给我。2 .那个公司的老板亲自来向我们抱歉。3 .当我最困难的时候，他提供了帮助给我. stop doing sth：停下正在做的事；stop to do sth:停下去做另外一件事 词典例句： I stopped reading the book when my mother asked me to have supper.当妈妈叫我去吃晚饭时，我停止了读书. I was watching TV ju
33、st now.When I heard my mother came into the room,! stopped to read my book.刚刚我在看电视。当听到妈妈走近房间时,我马上停下来，然后去做作业了.翻译巩固：1.别这样做，否那么你会陷入困境的2020静安二模Write at least 60 words about the topic “My view on online lessons this March(请以“今年三月 的网课之我见”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)(注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。)The fo
34、llowing is for reference only.What is your view?Show us an example or give your reason(s) to support your view.Give at least one suggestion you would like to make to your teacher(s)审题分析：1. 根据题目要求，本文是一篇针对当年热点话题：在线学习(online lesson)展开的论属型作文，要求结合具体事例或者给出理由，谈谈关于网课我们的观点。2. 本文开头应先引入由于疫情原因，大家都不得不待在家里在线上课。3.
35、 在写自己的观点时，要注意分点表达，逻辑清晰。范文点评：My view on online lessons this MarchBecause of the novel coronavirus, we had to stay at home to take online lessons. Online lesson is a new experience for all of us, and different people have different opinions about it. As far as I am concerned, I think the advantages of
36、 online lessons far outweigh its disadvantages.First, taking online lessons can save us lots of time. I dont need to take nearly an hour to go to school by bus like before. Now, all I have to do is to sit in front of the computer in my room, so I can have enough time to preview the lesson before cla
37、ss. Whats more, unlike school lessons, many online lessons can be recorded and we can review them by watching the replay. If I forget or feel confused about some important points,! will check the replay, which enables me to study more efficiently.I like online lessons, but there is also a problem th
38、at staring at the computer for a long time can do harm to our eyes. Therefore, I hope our teachers can lead us to do eye exercises during the break time, which can protect our eyes from becoming nearsighted.Whether we take lessons at school or online, we should take it seriously and try our best to
39、achieve better results.作文提纲:句子内容关键词/句开头引入因为 xx 病毒的原因(Because of the novel coronavirus)，大 家不得不待在家里上课(took online lessons),在我看来(As far as I am concerned),线上课优点大于缺点(the advantages of online lessons outweigh its disadvantages.)观点一首先(First),线上课能节约时间(can save us lots of time)观点二其次(Whats more),线上课可以被记录下来看回
40、放(can be recorded, and watch the replay)总结无论在家还是学校(whether we take lesson at school or online),都应该认真对待(take it seriously),努力取得 好成绩(achieve better results)语言进阶:1. As far as I am concerned = in my opinion词典例句： As far as I am concerned, I think books are a Treasury of all knowledge accumulated over tho
41、usands of years.我认为，书本就是人类通过几千年世界积累的知识宝库。 In my opinion, ideal is a wish for you to live better.在我看来，理想就是你想让生活变得美好的愿望。翻译巩固：4. 在我看来，这是向前迈出的一大步。5. 我的看法是，上面提到的长处超过短处6. 在我看来，我已经在过着我真正的生活。2. enable sb to do sth词典例句： The software enables you to access the Internet in seconds.这种软件使你在几秒钟内便可访问互联网。 The new pr
42、ogramme enables older people to study at college新计划使老年人有机会在大学学习。翻译巩固：4. 他这次考试的失败将会激励他努力学习。5. 阅读让我认识世界。6. 方便的交通让我能够在半小时内到达学校。3. protect (sb) from doing:保护某人免受于.词典例句： The numerous holes in the front protect from the summer heat.在前挡板上大量的洞孔保护车手不用忍受夏日的炎热。 They huddled together to protect themselves from
43、the wind.他们挤在一起，免受风吹。翻译巩固：3 .你最好戴上太阳镜来保护眼睛免受太阳(伤害)4 .法律会保护我们免受伤害。5 .你应该防范孩子们感冒2020青浦二模情景提不：在本学期居家学习期间，你是如何开展学习的？有什么收获？请结合你的学习经历和体验谈 一谈。（除诗歌外文体不限。）Expressions for references:take online courses, watch video lectures, organize Wechat groups, share the experience follow the advice, the self-learning ab
44、ility审题分析：1 .根据题目要求，本文是一篇针对XX期间居家学习所展开描述的生活类作文，要求讲述 自己在XX期间如何开展，所得收获进行书写2 .本文需要结合自身经验，并不是单纯的议论文，因此注意主语需要第一人称3 .本文开头应先引入此次寒假与之前不一样，然后过渡到自身的情况介绍。4 .在内容较多的局部要注意层次和连词。范文点评：This is a special festival, a different winter holiday, for every student, which is also a test, a test of self-control.Since the ou
45、tbreak of the disease, I have been staying at home and online courses become the first choice during this special period. Our school has also launched online courses for us, using an application called DingDing, through which the teachers broadcast lectures and give us assignments. Whats more, not o
46、nly do I insist on online courses, but also I take exercise every day to keep healthy.Actually, different people have different feelings about online classes, but for me, I think, we should be responsible for ourselves. Learning is our own business. We cant rely on others. We must be highly self-con
47、scious and self-discipline. Only in this way can we have efficient learning and harvest efficient knowledge and skills.作文提纲:句子内容关键词/句开头引入a special festival, a different holiday如何开展学习online courses, DingDing, give us assignments花钱感受be responsible for ourselves, highly self-conscious语言进阶：1 .非限制性定语从句Th
48、is is a special festival, a different winter, holiday, for every student, which is also a test, a test of self-control.定语从句有限制性和非限制性两种。定语从句的关系词分关系代词和关系副词，关系代 词that, which, who, whom, whose在定语从句中充当主语，宾语，表语或者定语，关系 副词where, when, why在定语从句中充当地点，时间和原因状语，关系副词可以用介词 +which 代替。词典例句： 他在一些不重要的事情上花费时间太多，这导致了整个计划的失败。He s