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1、专题09材料作文（原卷版）目录一、崇明区二、虹口区三、静安区八、六、七、长宁区、普陀区青浦区金山区（一模）四、闵行区五、浦东新区一、崇明区94. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic Online leaming （请以在线学习”为题，写一篇不 少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：由于新冠病毒（novel coronavirus）,前段时间我们只能在家里通过网络进行学习，有人认为很新鲜效果好, 也有人觉得效果一般。请从以上两个观点中，选择一个角度，并结合自己网络学习的经历，谈谈你对“在线学 习”的体会或看法，并给出理由。（注
2、意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。）Online learning3 .高分亮点：短语：in order to； stop from； are expected to； at any time ; do exercises ;in my opinion; be combined together;communicate witho句型：because引导的原因状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；and表示并列的句子,which引导的定语从句。十二、闵行区69. Write at least 60 words on the topic Ways to improve
3、my online leaming （以“提高我在线学习效 率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在线学习是当代青少年需要掌握的一项 重要技能，请结合居家学习期间自己在线学习中的具体事例，谈谈你有些哪里提高学习效率的方法。（注意；短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分）69. Ways to improve my online learningBecause of the coronavirus （新冠病毒）,almost all of the students took online classes during the winter vacati
4、on. But the learning effects vary from one to another. Therefore, we should find ways to improve online learning. And I have some pieces of advice about it.First of all, we need a peaceful environment. Online learning takes strong self-discipline （自 律）.For example, my mom likes to offer me snacks, w
5、hich sometimes interrupts me. I have aksed her to stop doing so. A quiet and peaceful room can help us stay focused. Whafs more, we should catch every chance to communicate with our teachers online. Different from school learning, we cant easily find our teachers to ask questions, so we have to solv
6、e all our problems during the classes. By doing this, we can have no confusion after class.These are my own ways to improve online learning. You can try taking my advice, and get better results in this period of time.【解析】题干分析：根据题干分析，这是一篇讨论型文章。讨论的是在线学习如何提高学习效率，文章分为三段， 第一段是因为疫情的原因，我们在家上网课，第二段是提高学习效率的具
7、体方法，第三段是一个总结。这 类文章一般以一般现在时为主。例文分析：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题所给的任务，符合英语语言语境。例文层次清晰，第 一段指明原由，第二段运用多个连接词，使文章更加连贯，第三段总结，构成一篇完整的文章。同时例文 有些亮点词句，增强了逻辑关系，句子通顺，用词准确，行文流畅。亮点词句：短语：because of.的原因；from one to another 从一个到另一个；first of all 首先;for example 例如;have to do sth不得不做某事；句型：（1） Because of the coronavirus （新冠病毒），alm
8、ost all of the students took online classes during the winter vacation.因为新冠病毒，几乎所有学生这个寒假都在上网课。Because of.的原因；during the winter vacation 在寒假期间；（2） You can try taking my advice, and get better results in this period of time.你可以试着接受我的 建议，在这段时间得到更好的结果。try doing sth尝试做某事；in this period of time在这段时间。十三、浦东
9、新区69. Write at least 60 words on the topic A letter to My Hero（es）我们的心中都住着英雄，他（们）也许是救死扶伤的医生，是勇夺金牌的冠军，是飞身火海的消防员， 是见义勇为的路人，还也许是默默付出的亲人、伙伴请写一封信给你心中的英雄，表达你的敬意，聊 聊他（们）的事（举动）对你的影响.A letter to My Hero（es）69 .例文A letter to My Hero(es)Since the epidemic broke out in Wuhan in December, the number of people in
10、fected and patients who have died keep climbing. In this epidemic, a number of doctors and nurses rushed to the front line to fight the epidemic. They used their professional knowledge to let us know about the virus and build up our confidence to defeat it. They deserve all the respect and love! The
11、ir behaviors deeply affect me. They are my role models. I will learn from their spirit of responsibility and selfless and study hard. I will try my best to be a better person and make contribution to my homeland.【解析】L题干解读：这篇作文要求给自己心中的英雄写一封信，致敬英雄，阐述他们对自己的影响。这是一篇话 题作文，题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，指给出了文章的主题，具体的细节信息
12、需要学生们发挥想象 力进行补充，这是写作的一个难点。首先学生们可以联系自己的日常生活，想想自己身边的英雄，他们做 了哪些事，对你有什么影响。如学生们可以2020年初爆发的新冠疫情中出现的英雄为模本，表达自己对英 雄的敬意。审题可知，这篇作文应以第三人称和第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主表达。2 .例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者向奋战在抗疫一线的医生和护士们表达了自己的敬意。首先 文章选题新颖，内容也非常详细，表达清晰、完整，各层次之间安排合理。文章中先表达了新冠疫情爆发 后医生和护士们奋战一线、无私奉献的精神，然后阐述了他们的行为对自己的影响，表达了自己对英雄的 敬意。其次短文中使
13、用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确；句式结构完整，长短句结合，简单句、 并列句以及各种从句及语法结构的使用，展现了作者良好的语言表达能力。3 .高分亮点：短语：break out； the number of； a number of； know about； build up； learn from句型：Since the epidemic broke out in Wuhan in December, the number of people infected and patients who have died keep climbing.；They used their prof
14、essional knowledge to let us know about the virus and build up our confidence to defeat it.； I will try my best to be a better person and make contribution to my homeland.十四、普陀区69. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My harvest in spring（以春天的收获”为题，写一篇不少于 60词的短文，标点符号不占格)提示：前段时间，大家在家学习，不少同学在这段时间内不仅培
15、养了自主学习能力还学习了不少其他本 领，收获颇丰。请结合具体事例谈谈自己某方面的收获以及从中获得的感悟。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。）69 .例文：My harvest in springA period of time ago, each student learnt at home because of the disease. Many of students not only developed the ability to learn alone but also learnt other skills.As for me, I often s
16、pent some time learning to cook food after I finished my homework. In this way, I can offer help to my parents, which allows them to have more time to relax. I think that the skills I have learnt will help me improve myself.【解析】.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，根据提示内容谈谈自己的收获以及自己的感悟。1 .例文点评：例文采用两段式结构，第一段表达了同学们在家学习，不
17、少同学还学到了其他本领；第二段介 绍了作者学到的技能和收获，同时提出了自己的感悟。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第 一人称和第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。2 ,高分亮点：短语:because of； not only.but also.； spend time doing sth.； allow sb. to do sth.； help sb. do sth.o 句型：In this way, I can offer help to my parents, which allows them to have more time to relax, which 弓| 导
18、的三郎艮 制性定语从句；I think that the skills I have learnt will help me improve myself, that 引导的宾语从句。十五、青浦区69. Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation.情景提示：在本学期居家学习期间，你是如何开展学习的？有什么收获？请结合你的学习经历和体验谈一谈。（除 诗歌外文体不限。）Expressions for references:take online courses, watch video lectures
19、, organize Wechat groups, share the experiencefollow the advice, the self-learning ability69. During this term, we mainly study at home because of the epidemic. We take online courses and watch video lectures to gain the knowledge. Besides, our teachers organize Wechat groups to help us discuss the
20、problems and answer our questions. Through the way, we students can share the experience and follow the advice. I think this is very hard for me because it requires a strong self-learning ability which I desperately lack. So it is also an opportunity for me to improve myself.【解析】.题干解读：本文要求写自己居家学习期间的
21、学习方式以及收获。材料给出了相关的内容，学生需要把这些 内容整合到一起即可，注意要符合逻辑。1 .例文点评：例文采用一段式，主要用一般现在时进行描述。前半局部描述上课方式，以及老师的帮助等。 后半局部描述自己的收获。文章行文通顺，符合逻辑。2 ,高分亮点：短语：because of； help sb. do； self-learning abilityo句型：because引导原因状语从句，which引导定语从句；it is adj. for sb. to do sth.。二、虹口区69. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
22、 “Kindness Everywhere”.（以善意无处不在“为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示： 阅读 D 篇提至三种善意：interpersonal kindness, environmental kindness, personal kindness.请你从中选择比拟有感触的一种，结合具体事例，谈谈你的想法。三、静安区69. Write at least 60 words about the topic My view on online lessons this March(请以今年三月的网课之我见”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） （注意：
23、文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。The following is for reference only.(以下内容)What is your view?Show us an example or give your reascm(s.) to support your view.Give at least one suggestion you would like to make to your teacher(s).四、闵行区69. Write at least 60 words on the topic Ways to improve my online lea
24、rning” （以“提高我在线学习效 率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在线学习是当代青少年需要掌握的一项 重要技能，请结合居家学习期间自己在线学习中的具体事例，谈谈你有些哪里提高学习效率的方法。（注意；短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分）五、浦东新区69. Write at least 60 words on the topic A letter to My Hero（es）”我们的心中都住着英雄，他（们）也许是救死扶伤的医生，是勇夺金牌的冠军，是飞身火海的消防员, 是见义勇为的路人，还也许是默默付出的亲人、伙伴请写一封信给你心中的英雄，表
25、达你的敬意，聊 聊他（们）的事（举动）对你的影响.A letter to My Hero（es）六、普陀区69. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My harvest in spring（以春天的收获”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：前段时间，大家在家学习，不少同学在这段时间内不仅培养了自主学习能力还学习了不少其他本 领，收获颇丰。请结合具体事例谈谈自己某方面的收获以及从中获得的感悟。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。）七、青浦区69. Write a passage of at least 6
26、0 words according to the given situation.情景提示：在本学期居家学习期间，你是如何开展学习的？有什么收获？请结合你的学习经历和体验谈一谈。（除 诗歌外文体不限。）Expressions for references:take online courses, watch video lectures, organize Wechat groups, share the experiencefollow the advice, the self-learning ability八、长宁区、金山区（一模）69. Writing （作文）Write at lea
27、st 60 words about the topic “My new way（s） to （请以“我 的新方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在你的日常的学习生活中，你习惯于老方法做某事。有一天你尝试使用新方法，结果发现效果更好。请 你举例简单表达使用什么新方法、做了什么事、介绍新方法的优点以及谈谈给你的感想。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。）专题09材料作文（解析版）目录九、崇明区十、虹口区卜一、静安区十四、普陀区十五、青浦区十六、长宁区、金山区（一模）十二、闵行区十三、浦东新区九、崇明区94.Write a passage of
28、at least 60 words on the topic Online leaming （请以“在线学习”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：由于新冠病毒（novel coronavirus）,前段时间我们只能在家里通过网络进行学习，有人认为很新鲜效果好, 也有人觉得效果一般。请从以上两个观点中，选择一个角度，并结合自己网络学习的经历，谈谈你对“在线学 习”的体会或看法，并给出理由。（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。）Online learning94.例文:Online learningThis spring our new ter
29、m dont come on time because the epidemic broke out. We have to learn online at home. We have lessons from Monday to Friday. Every day class starts at 7:30 and finishes at 4 oclock. We study Maths, English, Chinese, Physics and PE. During the online learning, there are many problems.Some students thi
30、nk that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning. If they meet problems in learning, they can ask the teacher for help in time. But some other students think its not good because they cant concentrate on learning and they can not study as carefully as i
31、n class. When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.As for me, I like learning at home because I neednt get up early. I have more sleep time. I wont hurry to school. But I miss my school my teachers and my classmate. I look forward to meeting them soon.【解析】.题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要以“Onli
32、ne learning”为主题展开描写，文章主要以疫情期间的网络 课程为背景描写上网课的一些情况，有认同这种方式的，也有不认同这种方式的，都要写出来，同时还要 写出自己的观点和体会。要注意语言的应用要合理。1 .例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段写疫情期间开始了网课以及上课的情况，总的引出有一些问题；第 二段分别从认同与不认同两个方面详细的介绍不同的意见，第三段以个人的观点总结文章。整个文章结构 完整思路清晰，语言表达准确无误，用词恰当。2 .高分亮点：短语：break out； from . to .； in time； concentrate on； as . as； get up； hur
33、ry to； look forward too 句型：because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；when引导的时间状语 从句。十、虹口区69. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic Kindness Everywhere”.（以“善意无处不在为 题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示： 阅读 D 篇提至U三种善意：interpersonal kindness, environmental kindness, personal kindness.请你从中选择比拟有感触的一种
34、，结合具体事例，谈谈你的想法。69.例文：Kindness EverywhereIf the world is a cup, kindness is like coffee, which makes the world meaningful.I think rose presented, smell remained*1 is the best description to show our kindness. Yesterday, I went to the bookstore to buy some books by bus. When the bus stopped at a bus s
35、top. There came an old woman with a bag in her hand. I stood up, walked up to her. I carried the bag for her and led her to my seat. She sat down and said to me, “Good boy! Thank you so much”. I felt so happy. Helping others is the traditional for our Chinese, we should carry it out any time when so
36、meone is in need.Kindness can make the world more beautiful and more lovable. If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.【解析】.题干解读：本篇话题作文要求阅读D篇提到三种善意：interpersonal kindness, environmental kindness, personal kindness,以“善意无处不在”为题，从中选择比拟有感触的一种，结合具体事例，谈谈自己的想法; 书写时要求文句通顺，内容完整。1 .
37、例文点评：本例文结构严谨，以自己在公交车上帮助老人的亲身经历阐述了善意的意义，文章陈述的中心 突出，层次之间有机联系，能正确地把握话题范围。2 .高分亮点：本篇运用的短语 walk up to； feel so happy； help others； carry out； in need； be full of 等。 高分句型：条件状语从句、定语从句 If the world is a cup, kindness is like coffee, which makes the world meaningful； 宾语从句 I think rose presented, smell remain
38、ed1 is the best description to show our kindness； 时间 状语从句 we should carry it out any time when someone is in need.卜一、静安区69. Write at least 60 words about the topic “My view on online lessons this March（请以今年三月的网课之我见”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。The following is for refe
39、rence only.（以卜内容）What is your view?Show us an example or give your reason（s.） to support your view.Give at least one suggestion you would like to make to your teacher（s）.69.例文：My view on online lessons this MarchIn order to stop coronavirus from spreading this March, students in China are expected t
40、o study at home and have online lessons. I like this pattern of learning.I think I can plan my own time and subjects and its very convenient fbr me because I can study my lessons on computers or phones at any time or any place. I can watch the videos more than once. Also if I cant understand some pr
41、oblems, I can find answers online. However, I had to read and do exercises on a computer screen, which hurts my eyes.In my opinion, both online lessons and traditional lessons are necessary. They can be combined together to make our study more effective. I suggest teachers should remind students to do eye exercises and offer psychological guidance. They should communicate with students much more to solve their confusion and problems online.【解析】.题干解读：该题目属于话题写作。在写作时根据题目要求发表对于三月份网课学习的看法，给出论据来证 明自己的观点同时给老师一些建议。1 .例文点评：例文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍网课的优势及列举论据讲述细致且条 理清晰。