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1、读后续写练习写作指导 讲义试题原题读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was somewhere between spring and summer, my mom and I were driving through the countryside. Back then, I was 13 years old, and always felt unhappy withMom. But little did I know that thistripwas going to be a special one. A pot offlowerss
2、at in the back seat, whose heavenly scent filled thecar. Suddenly, in the middle of nowhere, my mom pulled over. “What are you doing?” I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and wed be stuck there, so far from home. But that wasnt the case. My mom hopped out of the car, grabbing the flowers f
3、rom the back seat. “Itll just be a minute,” she called back through the open windows. My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was anursinghome. I looked back to the building, somewhat annoyed, as my mom reappearedempty-handed. Before she star
4、ted the car, curiosity drove me to ask, “Do you know someone there?” She shook her head. “Then what did you do with the flowers?” She smiled slightly, “I gave them to thereceptionist（前台接待员）. ” “What? ”She laughed at myconfusion. “I told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them, es
5、pecially who hasnt gotten any in a while.” I kept silent for a moment. Not long after we continued our driving, I spoke again, “Did you leave your name?” To this she answered instantly, “No. Leaving flowers there for someone who willappreciatethem makes me feel good, which is enough of a thank for m
6、e. ” Suddenly, still thinking about Momsdeeds, I heard something burst loudly. It was our car that broke down! Nothing could be worse, because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it, and we didnt know where thegaragewas. It also seemed impossible to wait for any passer-by, since we had see
7、n so few along the way.注意：1. 所续写的短文的词数应为150 左右；2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。We were worrying about what could be done. .As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. .试题分析1. 人物：Mom:“No. Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good, which is enough of a th
8、ank for me. ”I:Back then, I was 13 years old, and always feltunhappywith Mom.“What are you doing?” Icried, fearing that the car had broken down and wed be stuck there, so far from home.My eyesimpatientlyskimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home.
9、 I looked back to the building, somewhatannoyed, as my mom reappearedempty-handed. Before she started the car,curiositydrove me to ask I keptsilentfor a moment.the receptionist: （没多少文字描述，但可以作为事件转折的一个人物）2. 前文主要情节：13岁那年，我总是对妈妈感到不高兴。那年春夏之交，妈妈带我去了一次特殊的“旅途”。她开车带我到一家养老院，把花交给那里的接待员，让她把花送给需要的人。我对妈妈的举动开始很不理解
10、，但是在听了妈妈对我的“困惑”的解答之后，我终于理解了妈妈。于是，3.主题：“人与社会”“人与自我”对妈妈：unhappycriedimpatientlyannoyedcuriositysilent对自我：从妈妈的小小的善举当中学会做人的道理4.续写安排：第一段：We were worrying about what could be done.（与前文衔接）车出了什么故障？无奈之下，该怎么办？与敬老院的接待员沟通后，她果断帮助我们。在修车的时候，我们在接待员的带领下，去看望收到花的老人们。第二段：As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight
11、 on the road.看到花店，心生一念。准备做什么呢？决定给妈妈送一束花。从这次special的trip中，我悟到了做人的道理。（主题升华）下水文 We were worrying about what could be done. A flat tyre! Misfortunes never came singlyMomsphone was out of power. But the good news was that it wouldnt take long to go back to thenursinghome. Thereceptionistwarmly met us. Af
12、ter knowing what happened to us, she picked up the phone and got through thegarage. During the fixing time of ourcar, she took us to the elderly who received theflowers. Still in high spirit of chatting and laughing, we had our flat tyre fixed. (82 words) As we drove along, a flower shop came into s
13、ight on the road. Gone was myconfusionand a great idea flashed in my mind. I asked Mom to pull over. Before it stopped steadily, I hopped out of the car and dashed into the shop. Inspired by such a small kinddeedof Mom, I decided to send a bunch of flowers to my sweet Mom.Appreciatingthe bouquet, Mo
14、m was moved by my sudden act, tears rolling in the eyes. Moms small “random” act of kindness in such a “special”tripreally taught me a lot. (85 words)参考范文 We were worrying about what could be done. But after waiting in vain for a considerate time, Mom and I decided to walk back down the road to the
15、nursing home and seek help. When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage. There, the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us, talking about how great that day was. It amazed us what random actions of kindness could mean to the people w
16、ho received it. While we were laughing and talking merrily, the garage got our car repaired. (90 words) As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eyes. Having witnessed the effect o
17、f kindness, I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but tears failed her. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. This was the trip of my life. (77 words)学科网（北京）股份有限公司