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1、书面表达2021/8/9 星期一1 按照以下要点写一篇英语短文 1、独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题。2、合作完成：一起讨论、互相学习。3、我喜欢的方式及理由。注意：词数：100-120审题审题2021/8/9 星期一2 There are basically two ways to get work done.One is to work individually.In this way,people can decide for themselves and how to do it.Whats more,they will be able to learn how to solve pr
2、oblems on their own.(33 words)自行安排、自己解决问题自行安排、自己解决问题加工、添加信息范文分析范文分析2021/8/9 星期一3 People may also choose to work in a team,where they can learn from each other and help each other.Besides,they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.(33 words)一起讨论、互相学习一起讨论、互相学习可以考虑调可以考虑调整信息整信息2021/8/9
3、 星期一4 Personally,I prefer to work in a tea,which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.As the work can be divided among several people,it can be done efficiently.Teamwork is always important.(46 words)开放的思维；巧妙的因果关系表述开放的思维；巧妙的因果关系表述有跟没一样吗？2021/
4、8/9 星期一5 Individuals together make a difference.Individuals together make a difference.（林静）（林静）Working together,individuals make a difference.(Working together,individuals make a difference.(王丽芬王丽芬)Working in a team can improve my social skills Working in a team can improve my social skills very muc
5、hvery much.（陈敏）（陈敏）We can be more sociable.We can be more sociable.（封雅虹）（封雅虹）Exchanging ideas inspires members to come up with new Exchanging ideas inspires members to come up with new and better approaches to solving the problem.and better approaches to solving the problem.（余雪芳）（余雪芳）When discussing
6、 with others,we When discussing with others,we cant help wastingcant help wasting time by time by sayingsaying something unnecessary,which may lead to the failure something unnecessary,which may lead to the failure in finishing the work in time.in finishing the work in time.（陈荣高）（陈荣高）好句赏析好句赏析一句话表述一个
7、核心意思2021/8/9 星期一6 In my opinion,working in a team is the better of the two.As we know,human beings are social animals.We are connected to others whatever we do.Also,working with other people can gain experience.Whats more,they may also pick out our mistakes so that we can get them corrected in time.
8、You see,we live together,and we shall work together.好段赏析好段赏析1有什么问题?指代清楚吗?2021/8/9 星期一7 In my opinion,I prefer the second one.With the help of our workmates,we can solve most of the problems that cant be solved ourselves.Besides,working in a team can improve the friendship among every members in the
9、team.The most important is that it makes me know how to share my ideas with each other.好段赏析好段赏析22021/8/9 星期一8 Working in a team,you can do the things together with your friends.You can discuss the questions together.Everyone makes a difference.Everything will be easier.And during the time,you can le
10、arn good things from each other.Whats more,it can make your friendship better.Youll be happy.The life will be more wonderful.1、句子之间结构松散,层次不够明确问题分析问题分析2021/8/9 星期一92、句子缺乏变化、句子缺乏变化 Working out questions and planning something by yourself are called working individually.Discussing together and learning
11、 from each other are called working in a team.（修改）Working out questions and planning something by yourself are called working individually.Working in a team is another way of working,which means discussing together and learning from each other.2021/8/9 星期一103、句子拖沓、句子拖沓 As we know,we are all a part o
12、f our class or company,when we work in a team,we may make the class or the company better,and we will get more ways to get our work done so that we can choose the best way to get our work done.（修改）As we know,we are all a part of our class or company,and when we work in a team,we may make the class o
13、r the company better.Also we will get more ways to get our work done so that we can choose the best way to get our work done.一句话表述一个核心意思2021/8/9 星期一11 In my opinion,I like working in a team better.Not only because it can succeed more easily and help develop our skills but also can Though thinking in
14、dependently can develop our ability of thinking better,I think that team work is more useful and important today.Because it is a world with fast pace nowadays,collecting information and sharing information with your fellow really increase your working rate and make sure that your work is more possib
15、le to be perfect.4、逻辑错误(主谓；句子之间)2021/8/9 星期一12清楚的逻辑关系才能准确表达思清楚的逻辑关系才能准确表达思想想 As a result of not being able to concentrate my mind when being surrounded by others,working in a team is not so reasonable for me.But working in team is also a good way,it can help you learn from each other.Discussing with
16、 your team member is also very helpful.As a member of a class or a company or the society,you are not alone,you dont have the ability to overcome every difficult facing you.?2021/8/9 星期一13 The other is working in a team,however,its quite different from the first one.(修改)The other is working in a tea
17、m,which is quite different from the first one.One is working individually,the other is working in a team.(修改)One is working individually,and the other is working in a team.连（接）词误用或缺连词5、其他问题?2021/8/9 星期一14 Every student will go to the society,and working in a team can improve your ability of communic
18、ating with others.Whats more,you may feel happier with many friends around you.Comparing the two way,Id prefer the second.In my opinion,firstly,In my opinion,though sometimes I prefer to work alone,I think working in a team is the better way.人称混乱话语重复?2021/8/9 星期一15 We cant plan everything very well
19、without other peoples help.The more people your team has,the more ideas you will have.Though they are opposite opinions on finishing working,they have different characteristics and different advantages.观点太过绝对指代不明确2021/8/9 星期一16课堂小结课堂小结 语言能力语言能力和和思维能力思维能力同步发展。同步发展。用对、用好词；写好句。用对、用好词；写好句。逻辑思维逻辑思维(避免前言不
20、答后语避免前言不答后语)创新思维。（创新思维。（think differently and reasonably）2021/8/9 星期一172021/8/9 星期一189、静夜四无邻，荒居旧业贫。2022/10/172022/10/17Monday,October 17,202210、雨中黄叶树，灯下白头人。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/2022 12:51:30 PM11、以我独沈久，愧君相见频。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/17Oct-2217-Oct-2212、故人江海别，几度隔山川。2022/10/172022/10
21、/172022/10/17Monday,October 17,202213、乍见翻疑梦，相悲各问年。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/202214、他乡生白发，旧国见青山。17 十月 20222022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1715、比不了得就不比，得不到的就不要。十月 222022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/202216、行动出成果，工作出财富。2022/10/172022/10/1717 October 202217、做前，能够环视四周；做时，你只能或者最好沿着以脚为起点的
22、射线向前。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/172022/10/179、没有失败，只有暂时停止成功！。2022/10/172022/10/17Monday,October 17,202210、很多事情努力了未必有结果，但是不努力却什么改变也没有。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/2022 12:51:30 PM11、成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/17Oct-2217-Oct-2212、世间成事，不求其绝对圆满，留一份不足，可得无限完美。2022/10/172022/10
23、/172022/10/17Monday,October 17,202213、不知香积寺，数里入云峰。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/202214、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。17 十月 20222022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1715、楚塞三湘接，荆门九派通。十月 222022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/202216、少年十五二十时，步行夺得胡马骑。2022/10/172022/10/1717 October 202217、空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。2022
24、/10/172022/10/172022/10/172022/10/179、杨柳散和风，青山澹吾虑。2022/10/172022/10/17Monday,October 17,202210、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/2022 12:51:31 PM11、越是没有本领的就越加自命不凡。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/17Oct-2217-Oct-2212、越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人的错儿。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/17Monday,October 17,20
25、2213、知人者智，自知者明。胜人者有力，自胜者强。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/202214、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。17 十月 20222022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1715、最具挑战性的挑战莫过于提升自我。十月 222022/10/172022/10/172022/10/1710/17/202216、业余生活要有意义，不要越轨。2022/10/172022/10/1717 October 202217、一个人即使已登上顶峰，也仍要自强不息。2022/10/172022/10/172022/10/172022/10/17MOMODA POWERPOINTLorem ipsum dolor sit amet,consectetur adipiscing elit.Fusce id urna blandit,eleifend nulla ac,fringilla purus.Nulla iaculis tempor felis ut cursus.感感 谢谢 您您 的的 下下 载载 观观 看看专家告诉2021/8/9 星期一19