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1、考点47 书面表达之叙事描写类叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体：这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，其他各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点：1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要
2、围绕五个W和一个H来展开，分别是why, what, when, where, who及how。2. 突出中心，详略得当在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。3. 用活语言，准确生动记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。1.
3、0;Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind . is the most unforgettable one.2. On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was.First of all. Then . After that. In the end .3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/ experienc
4、ed, I will remember him/her forever.加分句子：1. Sth impressed me greatly.2. What impressed me most is that.经典句型：1. Last Sunday（Saturday.）, it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy） 2. I got up very early （late）. After breakfast
5、;I went to with my friends by bike, bus. 3. We enjoyed ourselves.4. We forgot the time. We didnt come back until 5 oclock. 5. We all felt
6、0;very tired, but we were happy. 6. I thought I would never forget this trip. 7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.
7、60;8. We visited a lot of places of interest. 9. We had a good time there. 10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap. l
8、 人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表现主题，模版如下：开门见山，引出要介绍的人物正文（时间、地点、人物）感想I will never forget my English teacherShe is a beautiful womanIt wasoclock, I didinI realize thatl 叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。l 写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总分总的结构或总分的结构，模版如下：介绍景观介绍旅行经历总结旅行感受 is one of the most beautiful scenery
9、 spots.I volunteered a guide to introduceIt was a busy and tired day but I was very happy.A我们共同经历了一段不平凡的日子，也留下了许多触动心灵的瞬间，他们中有逆行而上的医生，变身主播的老师，为你解决衣食住行的父母近日，某英文报正在举行以“身边的感动”为主题的征文活动。请你结合此主题写一篇英语短文。 提示词语： protect, move, help, proud, hero 提示问题： What did he/she do? What can you learn from him or her? The
10、 fight against the outbreak has lasted for a few months. _ 【答案】例文：The fight against the outbreak has lasted for a few months. During the fight, doctors and nurses are like heroes they protect us and they fight for us. My aunt who is a doctor moved me a lot.For the past years, my aunt was just an ord
11、inary relative for me. But the decision she made on January 23rd changed my thought completelyshe was asked to go to Wuhan to help the patients there. Though her daughter was only three years old, she decided to leave for Wuhan. For her, it was the thing that she must do. I was really moved. I want
12、to tell my aunt that I am proud of her and I think shes a real hero.B假如你是李梅。你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣, 希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画, 给Tom写一封电子邮件, 向他讲述这一经典故事, 并告知其寓意。Sima Guang hit the tank(缸)提示:play hide-and-seek（捉迷藏), be frightened（惊恐的）要求:1. 文章须包括所有图画内容, 可以适当发挥, 使全文连贯;2. 文中不得出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息;3. 90词左右, 邮
13、件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。Dear Tom, Im very happy that you are interested in Chinese traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name "Sima Guang hit the tank". _Im looking forward to hearing from you. YoursLi Mei【答案】例文:Dear Tom, Im very happy that you are interested in Chine
14、se traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”. Once Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell
15、 into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. “Bang! ” The tank broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved. From the story
16、, we know Sima Guang was brave and clever. When meeting danger, we should calm down and try to find ways. Im looking forward to hearing from you. YoursLi MeiC假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述在今年4月20日，复课开学后的第一天，你在学校的生活以及对老师的感谢。（1）我又回到了学校，我很兴奋，早上7:00老师在学校门口等候着我们；（2）进入教室前，老师为我量体温；（3）进入教室后，当我坐下时，发现桌子上有老师为我准
17、备的欢迎卡片；（4）中午，老师把午餐盒放到我的桌子上；（5）放学后，老师给整个教室消毒；（6）老师，您辛苦了要求： 1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。2.词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 书写工整占1分。参考词汇：欢迎卡片 Welcome card 午餐盒 lunch box 给消毒 v. disinfectAfter a long winter holiday on April 20th, I_【答案】例文：After a long winter holiday, on April 20th, I returned to my school again. I was so e
18、xcited to see my teachers and classmates. We didnt see each other for a long time. When I got to school at 7 oclock in the morning, teachers were waiting for us at the school gate. Before I entered the classroom, my teacher took my temperature. After I sat down, I found a Welcome card which my teach
19、er prepared for me on the desk. I was moved deeply. At noon, my teacher put the lunch box on my desk. After school, it was teachers who disinfected the whole classroom. How great they are! Thank youmy dear teachers. You have done a lot for us. We will try our best to study. We promise that we can ma
20、ke progress. Please believe us.D一场突如其来的、肆虐的新冠使我们过了一个超长的寒假。特殊的寒假你是怎样度过的？经过全国人民共克疫情，我们重返校园。“经一事长一智”，作为一名中学生，我们今后如何去做？假如你是王华请根据你的经历给你的笔友王辉写一封信。内容包括：1、下表中已出示的内容。2、补充上相关内容。My experienceOur longholiday1. What did we do toprotect ourselves？1. Stayed at home and dont go out unless necessary.2. Wore protecti
21、ve masks (口罩) outdoors.3. Washed hands as often as possible.2. How to make ourholiday meaningful and colorful?1. Developed new hobbies.2. Kept studying.3. Spent more time with family.Back toschoolWhat will I do?要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；3. 80-100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Wang
22、 Hui,Over the past months, the COVID-19 (新冠病毒) has made its way around China. It has a strong impact on our life and study. We middle school students had the longest winter holiday. What did we do in the holiday? _Whats your experience? I am looking forward to your reply.Best wishes. Yours, Wang Hua
23、【答案】例文Dear Wang Hui,Over the past months, the COVID-19 (新冠病毒) has made its way around China. It has a strong impact on our life and study. We middle school students had the longest winter holiday. What did we do in the holiday?First, we stayed at home and didnt go out unless it is necessary. Secondl
24、y, we wore protective masks outdoors when we went out. Whats more, we washed hands as often as possible to keep ourselves away from the virus. It seemed everyone was stressed out during this special holiday. However, in order to make our holiday meaningful and colorful, we did something wonderful as
25、 well. We developed new hobbies, kept studying and spent more time with family instead of going out. I think I had a busy and interesting holiday. After we go back to school, I will pay more attention to physical health care and do more sports. Whats your experience? I am looking forward to your rep
26、ly.Best wishes.Yours,Wang HuaE一个人可以非常清贫、困顿、低微，但是不可以没有梦想。只要梦想一天，只要梦想存在一天， 就可以改变自己的处境。奥普拉初中三年，你一定遇到过很多困难，但最终梦想给了你勇气，帮助你战胜了困难。某英文报社以“梦想的力量”为话题展开征文活动。请你用英文写篇短文给报社投稿，谈谈你在梦想的力量下战胜困难的一次经历，以及你的收获感受。 提示词语： dream, power, remember, defeat, proud提示问题：What was your dream?How did your dream help you to overcome a
27、 difficulty?What have you learnt from the experience?Everybody has a big dream. _【答案】例文Everybody has a big dream. A life without a dream is a life without a sun. Therefore, in no circumstances can we give up our dream. Unquestionably, dreams are of great importance. My dream is to be a reporter. To
28、achieve my dream, I have to work hard to enter the best high school in my town. I still remember when I failed my math exam last month, I was so sad and upset that I was ready to give up my math. In my mind, I was a stupid girl who wasnt good at it, it was so difficult for me to work out the problem
29、s. Luckily, my dream encouraged me to walk further and cheered me up. It is like a good friend and always gives me a lot of energy and power to defeat the failure. I realize no matter how difficult the road is, I should try my best to keep walking to reach the end of the road. And my dream is always
30、 guiding me correctly.A【2020 黔南州】61.一场新冠病毒疫情在全世界蔓延，对各行各业影响很大，使人们对未来的工作选择有了新的认识和思考。请你以"What is my dream job?"为题，用英语写一篇短文，发表在学校英语手抄报上，谈谈你对未来职业选择的想法。内容：1. 疫情前的职业梦想和原因（2点）；2. 疫情后的梦想职业和原因（2点）；3. 现阶段应该怎么做（2点）。要求：1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、学校名等信息；3. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：scient
31、ist, engineer, policeman/policewoman, teacher, doctorWhat is my dream job?I have manydreams._I will be a goodstudent._【写作思路】这篇短文要求以What is my dream job?为题，介绍一下自己理想的工作。审题可知，文章中应包括以下内容：首先介绍疫情之前自己理想的工作以及原因；然后介绍发生疫情之后，自己理想的工作发生了变化以及原因；最后简述一下现阶段应该怎样做来实现自己的理想。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主叙述，人称是第一人称或第三人称。【参考范文】What is
32、 my dream job?I have many dreams. I wanted to be a scientist because scientists can invent many high-tech products to make our life more convenient. I also wanted to be a teacher because I like to get along with children and it is a respectable job. But at the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out s
33、uddenly and my dream has changed since then. Now I want to be a doctor because I want to help people in need. When our country and people are in trouble, doctors and nurses devote themselves to saving peoples lives. They are heroes.I will be a good student in order to make my dream come true. I will
34、 study hard from now on and go to a medical college. I hope I can realize my dream one day.B【2020 青海省】61.人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2019年新型冠状病毒在中国和全球蔓延，我们见证了全国人民居家隔离，医务人员驰援武汉，学生停课不停学等战“疫”行动，这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。请以“A Life Lesson I Learned"为题，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.观点明确，内容完整，逻辑清晰，书写规范；2.词数100左右。A Life Lesson I Learned_【
35、写作思路】本题属于话题作文。要求以“A Life Lesson I Learned”为题，结合新型冠状病毒肺炎在中国和全球的蔓延这一事件，写一篇短文谈谈自己的思考和启发。写作时要紧扣题目要求并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。【参考范文】A Life Lesson I LearnedAll of us joined together to fight against the disease when COVID-19 hit the whole world in a sudden early this year.It was a big challenge to everyone, but no one held back. Many people devoted themselves to fighting against it. The government advised us to stay at home and avoid going to the public places if possible. Doctors and nurse