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1、热点16 献爱心捐赠 献爱心捐赠无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：献爱心捐赠。【预测题目】（一）四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。 要求：文章语言流畅 ，逻辑清晰，用词准确， 80100 字左右；词汇参考：地震 earthquake 悲痛 sorrow 受到感动 be deeply moved 安慰 comfort 重建 rebuild 自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth _【答案】on may 12th, a bi
2、g earthquake happened in wenchun, sichuan. many people lost their relatives and their homes. all the chinese people feel quite sorrow.a lot of people volunteer to help them. some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. thousa
3、nds of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes even foreign friends also give them a hand. Im deeply moved by these people. so i ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. i think all of us should try our best to help them to get out
4、of the trouble together.（二）去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？ _【答案】As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last spring festival. everything was covered with heavy snow. it made the bus
5、es, trains and planes stop. millions of people couldnt go home. many people suffered trouble. there was no food, water or light in some places. our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. as a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. we must study hard at school. we shoul
6、d learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.（一）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数，所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李华，为了帮助洪灾地区的小朋友渡过难关，你们学校上周组织了以“友爱、互助”为主题的献爱心捐赠活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在这次活动中捐赠了什么，为什么捐赠这些物品，以及你的感受。提示词语：donate(捐赠), book, schoolbag, clothes，toy, help, pr
7、oud提示问题： What did you donate? Why did you donate the things? How do you feel?_【答案】At my school, we had a charity sale last weekThe charity sale was held on our school playground last Saturday morning. We prepared many things which were made by hand in our spare time, such as kites, model planes and
8、so on. They looked very beautiful. We also brought old toys and secondhand books to sell on the sale. At 8：30, the activity started. Many students and teachers came to take part in it. Everyone chose their favorite items and paid for them at a much lower price. In the end, the money we made added up
9、 to over 2,000.We sent the money to the community to help children who couldn't attend school and the seniors who needed better care.I had a wonderful experience. I'm proud of what we have done. If everyone makes a contribution to the charity, the world will become much better.（二）假设你是李明，你们学校
10、正在举办主题为“付出既是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。2. 80100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。_【答案】Giving is ReceivingIm a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometim
11、es I help clean up city parks. I go to the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a month. So Im pretty popular there. I often visit the childrens hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I am good with children. I also give money to charities to help
12、people in trouble.I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?（三）假如你叫王雷，是第一中学的学生会主席。在报纸和电视上看到有关报道，由于伊拉克战争，导致许多儿童失学，生活状况窘迫，许多孩子沦为童工，处境很悲惨，所以打算给全校的学生发一份倡议书，号召他们奉献爱心去帮助那些孩子们。提示: warm houses, smile on ones face, community service, go to school, rich, end the wa
13、r, live a happy life, the war on Iraq_【参考范文】Hello, everyone. As we know, Many Iraqis become homeless people because of the war. Some of them are children. Some used to be rich but now they lose warm houses and have not enough food to eat. The children have no chance to go to school. The hard living
14、conditions make the homeless children become child laborers. What do you think of their terrible life?Lets make a wonderful program to help these children live a normal life. I think we should call on (呼吁) ending the war. We support these poor child laborers by raising money. So they can live in war
15、m houses, get good educations and live happy lives. We hope there will be smiles on their faces. If youd like to join the program, please come to our community.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并提示了一些词语。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用
16、连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and以及主从复合句如We hope there will be smiles on their faces.（我们希望他们的脸上会有笑容0。If youd like to join the program, please come to our community. (如果你想参加这个节目，请来到我们的社区)，这些都为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（四）假如你是中学生李兵，上周日你们学校组织（organize）了一次去孤儿院（orphana
17、ge）献爱心的志愿者活动（volunteer activity）。请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，讲述你们当志愿者的故事。内容提示：1.给孩子们送礼物；2.给孩子们唱歌、跳舞、讲故事；3.与孩子们合影留念。要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，可以适当发挥；2. 80词左右。构思提纲引出话题Last Sunday, my school organized a volunteer activity介绍过程We started our trip at After we arrived there ,weThen some of us gave wonderful performancesAfter th
18、at总结感悟Helping others makes me feelAnd I have decided to_【参考范文】Last Sunday, my school organized a volunteer activity .we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts
19、to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the childrens bright smiles, all of us considered the visit t
20、o be well worthwhile. We have brought sunshine to the childrens lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，讲述你们当志愿者的故事。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语
21、的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。1. Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in
22、need and the society. 2. This activity is meaningful and we can learn a lot from it, so I hope you can take part in it.3. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. 4. We can get much happiness by helping others.5. Friends,don
23、9;t grudge your love or help,for helping others is just helping yourselves.6. Finally,helping others is not only a good quality,but also a happy thing.7. One can't do all the jobs and complete all the things by himself.8. Looking back, we can know the history of human beings is a history of help
24、ing each other.9. To help others means to help ourselves.10. We needs a help in order to do the thing well.The topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由
25、一）What is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三).From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other rea
26、sons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .（一）假如你是学校英语广播站的记者，上周六你校组织了一次去养老院为老人 献爱心的公益活动请你根据下面的日程表，用英语写一篇短文，对这次公益 活动予以报道时间活动地点/方式9：00am前往养老院 给老人唱歌、跳舞、讲故事；帮老 人梳头、打扫卫生 帮老人做饭、送老人礼物乘校车10：00am4：00pm养老院4：10pm5：30pm养老院6：30pm返校乘校车参考词汇：梳头 comb one's hair要求：1、短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；2、词
27、数 80 左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear students，We went to an old people's home last Saturday_I hope all of us can learn to care for the old people【参考范文】Dear students，We went to an old people's home last Saturday. We met at the school gate at nine o 'clock in the morning. Then we arrived at the o
28、ld people's home by school bus at ten in the morningWe stayed with the old people from ten o 'clock in the morning to four o 'clock in the afternoonWe sang, danced and told stories to themWe also helped them comb their hair and clean the roomFrom 4：10 to 5：30, we cooked for themFinally,
29、we gave the old people gifts that we made ourselvesAt half past six in the afternoon，we took the school bus back to school I hope all of us can learn to care for the old people【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你去养老院为老人献爱心的公益活动的情况。所提供的材料中列举了时间，活动和地点。主要从时间、相关活动和地点三个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适
30、当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】We stayed with the old people from ten o 'clock in the morning to four o 'clock in the afternoon.我们和老人住在一起，从早上十点到下午四点。本题运用了fromto短语。【高分句型二】Finally, we gave the old people gifts tha
31、t we made ourselves. 最后，我们送给老人我们自己做的礼物。句子that we made ourselves.是由that引导的定语从句。（二）中国自古是礼仪之邦，乐于助人是我们的传统美德。工作、学习和生活中的互帮互助能使我们感觉到温暖，使我们彼此都能更轻松地面对人生的各种难题。请以“帮助他人”为主题写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 简单表达你对这件事的看法。 2. 讲述一个你帮助别人或受到帮助的经历。 3. 帮助人或被帮助后的感受是什么？ 4.呼吁大家传承乐于助人的传统美德。作文要求： 1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。_【参考范文】Be ready to help o