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1、【2016年全国卷】Dear Ms Jenkins,I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to do me a favor.To get some working experience（不定式作目的状语）,I plan to find a part-time job in a foreign capital company.I have already finished my job application form and personal resume.Howev
2、er,my English is poor.Worse still（过渡语）,I dont even know much about the word and format of the enclosure.So Im writing you a letter,hoping to get your guide and suggestions（现在分词作状语）.You can correct any mistakes you find in them（省略that/which的定语从句）.Looking forward to your reply.And Id be really thankfu
3、l. 【参考译文】亲爱的詹金斯小姐,我想告诉你一些关于我暑假的计划，我想请你帮我一个忙。为了获得一些工作经验，我打算在一家外资公司找一份兼职工作。我已经完成了我的工作申请表和个人简历。然而，我的英语很差。更糟糕的是，我甚至不知道多少的字和格式的附件。所以我写信给你，希望能得到你的指导和建议。你可以改正任何你发现的错误。期待您的回复。我真的很感激。 【2016年全国卷】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.The t
4、heme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate(who引导定语从句).I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection（and连接并列宾语从句）.I remember you showed
5、me some photos on that theme the last time (宾语从句) you visited our school（定语从句）.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them（不定式作）.If you want to join（不定式）,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow.Hope to hear from you soon.【参考译文】亲爱的彼得,我们学校摄影俱乐部要举办一场国际中学生摄影展。这次展览的主题是环境保护。它将从6月15日开始，持续三周。
6、欢迎任何感兴趣的学生参加。我知道你拍的照片很好，而且你一直想为环境保护做点什么。我记得你上次来我们学校时给我看了一些关于那个主题的照片。这无疑是一个让更多的人看到它们的好机会。如果你想加入，你可以发送你的照片到intlphotoshow。希望很快收到你的来信。【2016年全国卷III】Dear Bob,I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon（that引导宾语从句）.I have just found that I have to attend an important cl
7、ass meeting that afternoon（that引导宾语从句）.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble（that引导宾语从句）.Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books（so that 引导目的状语从句）.If it is convenient for you（固定句式），lets meet at 8:30 outside the scho
8、ol gate. If not（状语从句的省略），let me know what time suits you best（what引导宾语从句）.I should be available any time after school next week. 【参考译文】亲爱的鲍勃,很抱歉，星期五下午我不能和你一起去书店了。我刚发现我那天下午要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这种变化不会给你带来太多的麻烦。我们星期六上午去好吗?我们可以早点出发，这样我们就有更多的时间来读书和选书。如果你方便的话，我们8点半在校门口见。如果不行，请告诉我什么时间对你最合适。下周放学后我随时都有空。 【2016年北京卷】
9、Dear Jim，Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favorite figure in Chinese history（介词短语作状语），it must be Wei Yuan，a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He，in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World)，introduced modern technologies a
10、nd ideas to China.That opened our eyes to the world.In fact，he inspires me to major in English in college (不定式作宾补)，to be a bridge between China and the world（不定式作状语）.Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know. 【参考译文】亲爱的吉姆,很高兴收到你的来信。知道你对中国历史感兴趣，我感到很自豪。至于我在中国历史上最喜欢的人物，一定是清末伟
11、大的思想家魏源。他在世界地图与记录一书中，将现代技术和思想引进中国。这让我们看到了世界。事实上，他激励我在大学主修英语，成为中国和世界之间的桥梁。有兴趣知道更多吗?我可以给你找一些书!让我知道。 【2016年天津卷】Dear friends,How time flies!Two weeks went by,and our exchange activities ended.On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings.As scheduled,we participated in several instructive
12、activities.We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together.We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food,which was very delicious(非限制性定语从句).While visiting the art exhibition（状语从句的省略）,we discussed the great artists works.In my opinion, everyone here is a membe
13、r of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country（名词短语宾补wish sb.sth.）.I hope well get together again next year(宾语从句).Thank you.亲爱的朋友们,时间过得多快!两个星期过去了，我们的交流活动也结束了。我想代表我的学校表达我的感受。我们如期参加了几次教育活动。我们学了许多汉字，一起做了大量的运动。我们去餐馆品尝中国传统食物。食物
14、非常美味。参观美术展览时，我们讨论了伟大艺术家的作品。在我看来，这里的每个人都是我们大家庭的一员，我们互相学习。最后，我衷心祝愿你们回国旅途愉快。我希望明年我们能再相聚。谢谢你！【参考译文】【2016年浙江卷】Planning Is Good,But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do（as引导原因状语从句）.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out（-ing被动式作介
15、宾）.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps（现在分词短语作定语）.After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced （三个动词过去时作并列谓语）its d
16、elivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.【参考译文】 做比说好 计划是好的，因为它详细地决定了我们如何做我们想做的事情。然而，一个计划如果不付诸实施，就不会有结果。我去年10月的英语演讲比赛就是一个很好的例子。活动前一个月，我花了几个小时制定了一个时间表，列出了我的目标和实际步骤。在那之后，我开始广泛阅读一个鼓舞人心的话题，写了一篇演讲，并练习它的美丽的发音和良好的公共演讲技巧。我最终
17、以第一名的成绩结束了比赛。【2016年四川卷】The Season I Like Best Summer is my favorite season of the year.The reasons are as follows.Firstly,there is plenty of fun for teenagers in summer, including going camping,going to the beach, going swimming at public pools and travelling locally with friends（并列介词短语作状语）. Secondl
18、y,summer vacation is the longest of the year.As far as Im concerned（插入语）, every summer I stay at my uncles house in the country for three weeks and enjoy a wonderful life there.I can also catch worms that are not found in winter（that引导宾语从句）.In addition（插入语）,I can see different kinds of beautiful bir
19、ds.I think summer is certainly more fun than the other three seasons（宾语从句放比较级.I like summer best.【参考译文】我最喜欢的季节我知道我是如何获得成功的。它来自良好的计划和更好的结合。夏天是我一年中最喜欢的季节。原因如下。首先，青少年在夏天有很多乐趣，包括去露营，去海滩，去公共游泳池游泳，和朋友在当地旅游。其次，暑假是一年中最长的。就我而言，每年夏天我都会在乡下叔叔家呆上三周，在那里享受美好的生活。我还能捉到冬天找不到的虫子。此外，我可以看到各种美丽的鸟。我认为夏天肯定比其他三个季节更有趣。我最喜欢夏天
20、。【2016年江苏卷】On-line voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma （while 连接并列句表转折）over whether to vote or not（whether to do不定式作宾语）.In my opinion，on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern li
21、fe and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.（since引导原因状语从句）It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports.（in which引导定语从句）In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient（形容词短语作宾补），re
22、gardless of time and space.Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.To be honest（插入语），voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.（not.but.连接原因状语）Things will turn for the better if we can work out some
23、 participation rules for people to obey（if引导条件状语从句）.Therefore，I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.【参考译文】网上投票变得越来越流行，许多竞赛让人们参与其中。这对一些人来说是有益的，但却让另一些人陷入了是否投票的两难境地。在我看来，网上投票是现代生活不可分割的一部分，应该受到欢迎，因为它只不过是参与公共生活的一种方式。它与普通的投票活动没有区别，在普通的投票活动中，候选人四处寻求支持。此外，互联网使调查和投票变得简单和方便，无论时间和空间。此外，网上投票使即时反馈成为可
24、能。说实话，选民有时会感到恼火，不是因为他们讨厌投票，而是因为他们在情感和公平之间有分歧。如果我们能制定出一些让人们遵守的参与规则，事情就会变得更好。因此，我对网上投票持积极态度。(150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays.Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting，although some are quite happy with it，and active in doing it(althoug
25、h引导让步状语从句).In my opinion，internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.Firstly，people may feel forced when asked to do things(when引导让步状语从句) that they dont want to.Secondly，voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors，but rather on how man
26、y social-networking resources they have(not.but.引导并列谓语，how many 引导宾语从句).Thirdly，the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted.Therefore，
27、rules should be worked out and strictly observed.Everyone in our society should help those in need，but it is more important to be sincere and earnest(it 作形式主语，不定式作主语).【参考译文】现在网上投票很流行。许多人对投票的负面影响感到困惑，尽管有些人对此很满意，并积极参与其中。在我看来，网络投票已经开始显示出它对人们和社会的负面影响。首先，当人们被要求做他们不想做的事情时，他们可能会感到被迫。其次，这类投票并不取决于竞争对手的强项，而是取决于他们拥有多少社交网络资源。第三，在许多情况下，投票者甚至竞争者都可能被组织者利用来达到商业目的。简而言之，网络投票在某种程度上是不公平的，如果不是不道德的，也不能被信任。因此，应该制定规则并严格遵守。在我们的社会里，每个人都应该帮助那些需要帮助的人，但是更重要的是真诚和认真。(150 words)