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1、热点01 书面表达读后续写【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。2015 年 8 月，在教育部考试中心发布的普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明（高考综合改革试验省份试用）（第一版）中，提出了写作新题型：读后续写或概要写作。【读后续写题型介绍】1.任务要求：提供一段 350 词以内的语言材料，要求学生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写，将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文（150 词左右）。2.考查目标：读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的综合性语言测试。教育部考试中心刘
2、庆思、陈康老师于 2016 年指出，读后续写主要关注学生以下四个方面的能力：把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文表现出来。语言运用的准确性和丰富性。学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构，还能够根据内容需要使用较多、较复杂的词汇和语言结构。对语篇结构的把控能力。学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系，所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性，所续写的短文内语句要连贯、有序。创造性思维能力。学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容，包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。【题型分析】1.在题型设计方面：本题是一个围绕某一具体的主
3、题语境，基于书面语篇记叙文连续性文本的文体形式，在根据语境线索理解语篇内容、分析语篇结构，并续写语篇内容的过程中，运用语言技能获取、梳理、整合语言知识，同时运用所学语言知识创造性地表达意义，并通过运用各种学习策略，提高理解和表达效果的题型。2.在阅卷要求方面，需考虑所续写的内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。3.在评分标准方面，需把握的具体原则为：（1）本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分；（2）评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来
4、衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分；（3）词数少于 130 的，从总分中减去 2 分；（4）拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑；（5）如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。不难看出，该题型在考查学生运用所学语言知识（如语法知识、篇章知识）进行书面语言表达的同时，也在考查学生对书面表达策略的胜任力。可以说，该题型尤其对英语学科核心素养中的“语言能力”和“思维品质”的发展可以起到很好的促进作用。【满分技巧】读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面： 1. 把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力； 2. 语言运用
5、的准确性和丰富性； 3. 对语篇结构的把握能力； 4. 创造性思维能力。【热点话题】假期生活；生活小故事；哲理故事；寓言故事；学生生活。【限时检测】A（2020年 新高考全国卷 山东英语试卷）读后续写（满分25分）话题：帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的故事难度：建议用时：25分钟47.阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their
6、jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had
7、time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her ver
8、y much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him t
9、o earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The oth
10、er children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell
11、it.”注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too._ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business._B（2020广东省调研测试）读后续写（满分25分）话题：急救知识难度：建议用时：25分钟阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Ada! Milk!” Mama called.Milk
12、. It was Adas turn to get it. Ada sighed and shut her first-aid book. Her head hurt from reading in the dim morning light, but how else was she going to learn?Ada tied the cow close to a tree. Somewhere down the mountain, some volunteer doctors were teaching medical skills to village nurses. Ada hea
13、rd Betty drive off hours ago. “She should have taken me with her. She thinks Im too young, but shes wrong. I am already 16!” Ada thought.Ada carried the milk back to Mama, then wandered up the road. Roy, a village boy, had gotten a donkey, and some kids had gathered around to see it. Roy was always
14、doing something to get attention. Like now: he was trying to stand on the animals bare back.“No wonder they dont trust kids with anything important”, Ada thought, sighing. She had just turned away when she heard a thud and a few screams. Roy lay on the ground nearby moaning in pain. The donkey stood
15、 several meters away. “Roy!” The kids nearby ran towards him. “Get Betty,” one said. Ada shook her head. “Bettys gone to the city.” The other kids seemed frozen in place.Ada ran to where Roy was lying. She dropped to her knees on the dusty road. “Roy! Can you hear me?” Roy moaned in agony. Ada saw t
16、hat one of his legs was crooked, bent a little sideways between the knee and the ankle. A broken leg!She remembered what the first-aid book had said about broken legs: if there is no ambulance, straighten the bone before moving the victim. There certainly wouldnt be any ambulance here. Ada looked ba
17、ck up the road. The other kids were still standing there, watching. “Victor!” Ada called to one of the boys. “Go get Roys mama, and find someone with a truck.” She turned to the others. “Give me your shirts. We need something to tie his leg with.”注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ada then fou
18、nd a strong stick, which she would use to keep his leg straight. _The next day, Betty came to Adas home._C（山东省潍坊市2012届高三十月联考）读后续写（满分25分）话题：如何发展一段友谊难度：建议用时：25分钟阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。Fortune Cookie FriendsJenny frowned(皱眉)as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies
19、 in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days.“Moving here was a dumb idea," Jenny complained mostly to herself."What's that?” Her mother asked, opening a box and lifting out
20、several pots."Nothing," Jenny mumbled （咕哝）.The girl had been angry about the move, but her parents had made the decision and were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints.The first few days at her new school hadn't been easy, either. She found it har
21、d to talk to people she didn't know, and it seemed like the students hadn't even noticed her. Jenny sighed and got back to washing dishes.On the day of the grand opening, Jenny's parents were all smiles, welcoming customers into the restaurant, brightly decorated in gold and red. Even Je
22、nny was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water. This was a big day for her family.At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Jenny's age. As she filled their glasses, Jenny realized the twins were in her
23、class. Jenny ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face, and she turned away from the table.Jenny's mother found her soon after, in the kitchen loading the dishwasher."Honey, what are you doing back here? We need you out front with the customers.""Mom, I don't want
24、 to be out there. There are kids from school!""So?" her mother asked. "That's good! Go to take them some fortune cookies and say hello!" She said to Jenny, pointing at the fortune cookies paper which read: “Many friends are found with a single”.注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右：2.请按照如下格
25、式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Jenny absently read the fortune cookie paper. She placed the cookies down, and bravely looked the girls in the eyes. . .D（山东省邹城市2021届高三十一月调研考试）读后续写（满分25分）话题：一场舞蹈竞赛 难度：建议用时：30分钟阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mary waited anxiously for her turn in the empty dressing room. Never had s
26、he been so nervous before. This competition was of vital importance to her comeback(复出）。“If I can win today," she said to herself, “I can dance on the national stage next month.” Three months ago, her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident. After the medical treatment, she began to re
27、cover slowly. She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing skills.“Hi, Mary,” in rushed her friend Jessica. “How is your arm? Is it going to influence your performance?”I guess it can be tolerated for I am to win the match, "said Mary with a determined look.“Admirable! But I
28、 hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong. She can be your real well-matched competitor. Come on!”After Jessica left, Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin. “If I don't try harder, I won't grasp this chance. "She thought. But her arm began to hurt, making her
29、 worried. "Mary, what makes you think you have a chance tonight? " she said to herself. After the pain was gone, she continued to warm up.A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair. Then, she took out her dance dress quickly and put it on skillfully. Seeing Mary, she
30、 smiled politely and said "Hi, I'm Linda. I am the next one!" Mary nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable." This is just my competitor. Because of her, I may lose tonight. "Her mind was wandering when Linda let out a scream, "Oh, God, I can't find my music tape!"
31、; Linda searched her bag but in vain. "It may be missing on the way." With these words, she then rushed out.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag. . . . .Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with
32、 her heart beating faster and faster. . . .E（山东省德州市2021届高三十月调研测试）读后续写（满分25分）话题：Roman在家发现一条蛇的故事 难度：建议用时：30分钟阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。'Usual boring day!' This would be the answer from Roman if somebody asked him how his day was. These days he found everything boring, n
33、othing excited him.One day he was lying in his room as usual. Suddenly light went off. His room was rather hot without an air conditioner. Though he did not want to leave his room, he had to. Unwillingly, he left his room and came to living room. Living room was slightly cool as it had two huge wind
34、ows.His young brother was playing with his friend. They were rolling on the floor. He was looking out for the TV remote, but couldn't find. He got up and searched it everywhere, but remote was nowhere. He looked at his brother who was still lying on the floor playing.He asked him, "Where is
35、 the remote?""Under the Sofa," his brother yelled.He tried to look through, but it was dark. He put his hand under the sofa. He touched something, grabbed it and took his hand out. OMG! It was a snake in his hand!After seeing that his brother started to yell, “Snake, snake!” Mom came
36、as soon as she heard their shouting. She too was horrified to see a snake. She was so scared that she even couldnt speak a word. Two kids were trying to hide into each other's back. “What an old trick!” Roman thought and threw it over kids.As the snake landed on the floor near to the kids, it st
37、arted moving from left side to the right. Only then did Roman realize that the snake was real, not a toy. He threw the snake over kids because he thought it was a fake snake and kids were playing some tricks.This time Mom almost got heart attack. Now he was scared too. The snake was only 10 meters a
38、way from kids and was staring at kids. They even couldnt call a rescue team. There might be some deadly damage before their arrival. There was not much time to think. It was the time for a quick action.Paragraph 1：As Roman was farther from the snake, he jumped to the window and grabbed the curtain._