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1、书面表达,考 纲 解 读,书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。该题要求考生根据所给提纲，应用所学知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅通、语言得体的文章。它不但要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且要有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，是一种复合型的题型。,命 题 分 析,要写出一篇好的文章，考生不仅要精确地表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，要有自己独到的见解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。,理念：今年的学业水平考试书面表达仍会体现新课改的理念 ,体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应 用 性，提
2、高考生的综合语言运用能力的要求。依然会沿袭以往的风格，强调写作话题真实，让同学们有话可写。符合学生们认知水平和日常生活经历；题目设计关注同学们成长，注意培养同学们良好的道德品质和健全的人格，富有时代特色，能唤起同学们强烈的主人翁意识和责任感，贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性、关注环境等的设题理念仍将是近几年学业水平考试书面表达的基本思路。即源于生活。,应 试 点 睛,火眼金睛细审题 审题是高质量书面表达的前提。所以要求 考生在开始构思之前，一定要认真阅读写 作要求中的所有信息，确定好基本时态。 特别要注意人称的使用。 列出要点免遗漏 注重表达要点的用词。用词要生动具体形象；用最普通词表达意境。,妙
3、笔生花连成篇 一篇好的Writing，不仅要要点完整，表达规范，还需要有把这些内容有机联系起来 的语篇衔接手段，即我们常说的关联词、连接性副词、以及一些介词和短语。这些 往往是好的Writing出彩的部分。因为这样的衔接才能使句子之间、段落之间有连贯 性和整体性。,书面表达简单模式,三段式写作法。 第一段开门见山直奔主题，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者交代清楚时间、地点、人物、事件。 第二段摆出事实，该部分条理要清楚，过渡要自然。最后一段，得出结论。可以有三种方式：,得出结论的三种方式,重复主题，回到文章开头提出的中心思想 或主题上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。引用。用格言或名人名言总结全文，既言
4、 简意赅，又有较强的说服力。得出结论。文章最后用几句话概括全文内 容，并进一步肯定或提升文章的中心思想或作者观点。,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,1、Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性;暗示性2、Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3、Ending 小结；呼应主题,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,Writing skillssix steps,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意:
5、 80词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇: make good use of, interest groupssocial activities, do sports, net bar,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息,具体做法：用笔勾画,第一步：审清题意,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：,注意: 80词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数,主题,体裁,人称,结构,时
6、态,字数,已知信息,未知信息,以一般现在时为主,第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点,Introduction Main body Conclusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Write an outline,花太多时间在兴趣爱好上 迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏 -,-,合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 -,Problemsbe crazy about play computer gameswatch too much TV spend too much time on their hobbies refuse to do homew
7、ork spend - on Opinionsnot good for our health and study focus on Pay more attention to Suggestionsplan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework,第三步：抓住要点，列关键词,Make sentences with th
8、e keywords about problems. Sentences: _ _2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: _ _3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _ _,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and cant finish their homework on time.,I dont think its good for our st
9、udy and health.,第四步：连词成句,并列句,复合句结果状语从句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on time,Some students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish t
10、heir homework on time,变换句式,There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. We can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time,
11、 we should help parents do some housework.,However, how can we make better use of our spare time?,we,第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.Nowadays, we students have much more free time than be
12、fore. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We d
13、ont think its good for their study and health.However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of in
14、terest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!,范文展示,书面表达（15分） 微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报以“Smiles”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文。内
15、容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事给予你的启示。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计人总词数。,Smiles A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually bri
16、ngs good luck. Whats more, smiles can give us confidence. When I was young, I was shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frightened that I did badly at the beginning, But when I was saw a big smile on my teachers face, I got more and mor
17、e confident. Finally I made it. Smiles are very helpful in our lives and they are so important to our life. We should often keep smiles on our faces. If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Lets smile to life. If we smile to life, life will smile back to us.,书面表达的要求
18、,云南省对初中学业水平考试书面表达要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇60个单词左右的短文。本部分满分15 分，预计所需时间约为25分钟,提高写作能力的秘诀是：“读、背、写” 读美文：他山之石可以攻玉 背美文：借他人体式，写自己文章 写短文：先仿，后写，多修改,一篇好文章包含：1. 含盖所有信息2. 表达通顺、流畅3. 行文连贯、逻辑性强4. 用词地道、老练5. 句型丰富、多变,影响得分的几个方面,盲目照搬照抄试卷上的完型或阅读材料 全班乃至全校统一用同一篇范文 字迹潦草 ,字迹不清。卷面不整洁，句子开头不大写，标点符号不正确，主谓不一致,时态不一致,词性变化不正确,单词拼写错误等 词汇堆砌(整篇几乎无完整句子,一塌糊涂,某个词汇过频重复使用 心胸狭窄，格调低沉,中考英语写作高分技巧,审题是关键，重点要明确，要点要全面，格式要正确，语言要地道，行文要流畅，字迹要工整，卷面要漂亮。,Thank you,