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1、书面表达书面表达 期末复习宝典期末复习宝典9AUnit1 Wise Man in History 话题话题作文作文你的网友 Peter 对中国三国时期的历史很感兴趣，请你给他介绍蜀国杰出的军事家、政治家，发明家诸葛亮。内容提示：1诸葛亮（181-234），刘备有名的谋士，蜀国杰出的军事家、政治家。2他帮助刘备打了一系列的战争，建立了蜀国。3诸葛亮还发明或改造了一些运输工具和传统兵器，是一位出色的发明家。4.你对诸葛亮的看法。要求1.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，逻辑严谨;2.100 词左右;可适当扩展。参考词汇军事家 military strategist,政治家 statesman
2、，谋士 adviser，蜀国 the Shu Kingdom，三国时期 the Three Kingdoms period,兵器 weapon，审题定位审题定位1.体裁和主题：人物介绍中国历史名人2.人称：he3.时态：历史人物一般过去时，个人看法一般现在时4.段落：三段5.Beginning：人物简介生平，身份（Who was he?）6.Body:个人主要成就。What did he do?/What was his contribution?7.Ending：对诸葛亮的看法 What do you think of him?B Beginning:eginning:Who was he?
3、诸葛亮是一名三国时期杰出的军事家,政治家。Zhuge Liang was an outstanding military strategist and statesman in the Three Kingdoms period.生平他生于 181 年，卒于 234 年，是刘备有名的谋士。(be famous/well-known as.)_B Body:ody:个人主要成就。What did he do?/What was his contribution?按要点写作按要点写作并适当拓展并适当拓展：1.他帮助刘备进行了一系列的战争，建立了蜀国。(a series of./found)_2.2
4、.诸葛亮还发明或改造了一些运输工具和传统兵器。（invent,improve,transportation tools）_要点拓展要点拓展:他的空城计大获全胜。(be successful/be a great success)_8.Ending：对诸葛亮的看法 What do you think of him?中国人民认为诸葛亮是智慧的化身，他的传奇故事至今广为流传。（be regarded as,be widelyknown,legendary stories）_他的忠诚和奉献精神给我留下深刻的印象。（loyalty,dedication,be impressed by）_在我心里，他不仅
5、是一名有智慧的人，还是一名英雄。（in ones mind,not only.but also.）_高分要领：高分要领：1.尝试使用复合句；2.使用非谓语动词；3.使用被动语态表达1.使用定语从句：Zhuge Liang,who was born in 181 and died in 234,was an outstanding military strategistand statesman in the Three Kingdoms period.He invented some transportation tools and improved traditional weapons,w
6、hich made him anexcellent inventor.2.使用非谓语动词：Being Liu Beis adviser,he was well-known for his wisdom and loyalty.His plan,later known as the Empty Fort Strategy,was a great success.3.使用被动语态：As we all know,legendary stories about him are still widely known.A number of traditionalChinese idioms are re
7、lated to him.I was deeply impressed by his loyalty and dedication.标准版标准版Zhuge Lliang was an outstanding military strategist and statesman in the Three Kingdomsperiod.He was born in 181 and died in 234.He was famous as Liu Beis adviser.As a military strategist,he helped Liu Bei fight a series of wars
8、 and founded the ShuKingdom.His plan,later known as the Empty Fort Strategy,was a great success.Besides,he wasa celebrated inventor.He invented some transportation tools and improved traditional weapons.Zhuge Liang is regarded as a man of great wisdom by the Chinese and legendary storiesabout him ar
9、e still widely known.In my mind,he is not only a wise man,but also a hero.高分版高分版Zhuge Liang,who was born in 181 and died in 234,was an outstanding military strategistand statesman in the Three Kingdoms period.Being Liu Beis adviser,he was well-known for hiswisdom and loyalty.He assisted Liu Bei in f
10、ighting a series of wars and founding of the Shu Kingdom,he tookcharge of government affairs,military affairs,which were highly praised.His plan,later known asthe Empty Fort Strategy,was a great success.He invented some transportation tools and improvedtraditional weapons,which made him an excellent
11、 inventor.Zhuge Liang is regarded as a man ofgreat wisdom by the Chinese.As we all know,legendary stories about him are still widespread.Anumber of traditional Chinese idioms are related to him.Till today,We can still read Northern Expedition Memorial written by Zhuge Liang in ourChinese textbooks.I was deeply impressed by his loyalty and dedication.In my mind,he is notonly a man of great wisdom,but also a hero with great responsibility.